Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Another Beautiful Day
Accidental Poet said:
aah, but the night too has so much to be thankful for. Great write my friend. ; ) AP
May 3rd, 2021 20:02
Accidental Poet said:
aah, but the night too has so much to be thankful for. Great write my friend. ; ) AP
May 3rd, 2021 20:02
Tiny Star
Fay Slimm. said:
Starlight is humbling yet helps us to see that being light-bearers is who we really are - - thank you my poet-friend for these worthy reminders.
March 18th, 2021 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Starlight is humbling yet helps us to see that being light-bearers is who we really are - - thank you my poet-friend for these worthy reminders.
March 18th, 2021 03:30
Tiny Star
Goldfinch60 said:
May that star shine forever as do your words rr.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that star shine forever as do your words rr.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:36
Let me tell you how the rain falls
aDarkerMind said:
a very enjoyable picture rrodriguez. beautifully written.
March 15th, 2021 13:13
aDarkerMind said:
a very enjoyable picture rrodriguez. beautifully written.
March 15th, 2021 13:13
Let me tell you how the rain falls
dusk arising said:
Yes, your post reminded me of the young joy of running in summer rain carefree. Glorious memory.
March 13th, 2021 14:19
dusk arising said:
Yes, your post reminded me of the young joy of running in summer rain carefree. Glorious memory.
March 13th, 2021 14:19
Let me tell you how the rain falls
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write rr.
Rain is the lifeblood of our world.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write rr.
Rain is the lifeblood of our world.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:23
El Yunque
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words upon nature rr. We have red-tailed kite flying over the place where I play croquet.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words upon nature rr. We have red-tailed kite flying over the place where I play croquet.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 02:53
You can go there from here
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words took me to a wonderful place rr.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words took me to a wonderful place rr.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:56
You can go there from here
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sitting here in the Northern Cold, and suddenly along comes your poem and takes to the beauty and the warmth of your tropical isle. \"Everywhere you go, will be somewhere, \" caught my attention immediately. I then started on that journey and stopped to see the \"aqua-blue water\", the butter-gold beaches, the blue lagoon and cascading waters, and by then I was mesmerized. MY mind and I thank you for bringing us this quiet respite on a cold day. I\'m saving this for future use> - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 17:15
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sitting here in the Northern Cold, and suddenly along comes your poem and takes to the beauty and the warmth of your tropical isle. \"Everywhere you go, will be somewhere, \" caught my attention immediately. I then started on that journey and stopped to see the \"aqua-blue water\", the butter-gold beaches, the blue lagoon and cascading waters, and by then I was mesmerized. MY mind and I thank you for bringing us this quiet respite on a cold day. I\'m saving this for future use> - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 17:15
Shall we together walk and live our dream?
L. B. Mek said:
a laudable attempt, not merely in your execution but that openness to self-betterment you exemplify in your comments,
an enjoyable read, but that 3rd verse should introduce a solution or juxtaposing sentiment\'s, to the arguments laid out in verses 1 and 2, if you choose to follow this format of delivery for your poetic thought\'s,
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:54
L. B. Mek said:
a laudable attempt, not merely in your execution but that openness to self-betterment you exemplify in your comments,
an enjoyable read, but that 3rd verse should introduce a solution or juxtaposing sentiment\'s, to the arguments laid out in verses 1 and 2, if you choose to follow this format of delivery for your poetic thought\'s,
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:54
Shall we together walk and live our dream?
Goldfinch60 said:
The last two lines say it all to me rr.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
The last two lines say it all to me rr.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:46
Shall we together walk and live our dream?
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Good go at a Shakespearean sonnet. Second line doesn\'t scan: suggest \"Our love will be more deep along the way.\" Suggest \"And often it\'s the second hand that broke\". - \"The kind of love is never dead—is oak.\". Suggest \"you spoke\" or \"I spoke\" or something. - \"youngling come somedays\" - this makes no sense to me.
I try to make some meaningful response to poems on MyPoeticSide. Anything but \"good write\". You\'re more than welcome to tie into my poems.
January 7th, 2021 19:32
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Good go at a Shakespearean sonnet. Second line doesn\'t scan: suggest \"Our love will be more deep along the way.\" Suggest \"And often it\'s the second hand that broke\". - \"The kind of love is never dead—is oak.\". Suggest \"you spoke\" or \"I spoke\" or something. - \"youngling come somedays\" - this makes no sense to me.
I try to make some meaningful response to poems on MyPoeticSide. Anything but \"good write\". You\'re more than welcome to tie into my poems.
January 7th, 2021 19:32
Leaping Lilies
Jerry Reynolds said:
You hit your goals here for sure. Good poem. Thanks for sharing.
January 6th, 2021 09:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
You hit your goals here for sure. Good poem. Thanks for sharing.
January 6th, 2021 09:08
Let\'s Grow Old Together
Christina8 said:
This is really a beautiful work, rr! Love the sentiment and the rhymes. Awesome
January 6th, 2021 07:54
Christina8 said:
This is really a beautiful work, rr! Love the sentiment and the rhymes. Awesome
January 6th, 2021 07:54
Let\'s Grow Old Together
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write rr, my wife and I did grow old together but she passed a year ago so now she is waiting for me.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write rr, my wife and I did grow old together but she passed a year ago so now she is waiting for me.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:49
I couldn\'t stop thinking about the girl
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write RR about a beautiful little girl.
It is good to see you back.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write RR about a beautiful little girl.
It is good to see you back.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:15
Chéri amour
dusk arising said:
Lovely poem sir. You are indeed a lucky man to enjoy such inspiration.
April 22nd, 2020 19:14
dusk arising said:
Lovely poem sir. You are indeed a lucky man to enjoy such inspiration.
April 22nd, 2020 19:14
Grandpa Came Over Today
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, only seen my children and grandchildren via the web over the last few weeks so this is very relatable to me.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, only seen my children and grandchildren via the web over the last few weeks so this is very relatable to me.
Andy
April 22nd, 2020 00:25
Then how everything changes when I apologize
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly does rr, we must apologise for our inherent faults.
Andy
April 19th, 2020 15:15
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly does rr, we must apologise for our inherent faults.
Andy
April 19th, 2020 15:15
A rose in bloom
Goldfinch60 said:
That rose will bloom into a wonder in your life and her life will be filled with love and caring. Congratulations.
Andy
April 17th, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That rose will bloom into a wonder in your life and her life will be filled with love and caring. Congratulations.
Andy
April 17th, 2020 00:46
A rose in bloom
FredPeyer said:
rr, in this beautiful poem I can feel the love for this as yet unborn girl. You and your daughter are very lucky and I wish you all the BEST! After two boys, we had a girl and even though it was a long time ago, she is still my \"rose\"!
April 16th, 2020 11:53
FredPeyer said:
rr, in this beautiful poem I can feel the love for this as yet unborn girl. You and your daughter are very lucky and I wish you all the BEST! After two boys, we had a girl and even though it was a long time ago, she is still my \"rose\"!
April 16th, 2020 11:53
A rose in bloom
dusk arising said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful time in the lives of you and your family.
In the years to come may looking back upon such words bring the joys of this time back to your hearts.
April 16th, 2020 08:10
dusk arising said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful time in the lives of you and your family.
In the years to come may looking back upon such words bring the joys of this time back to your hearts.
April 16th, 2020 08:10
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