Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Darkness
dusk arising said:
Wasting your time praying, it doesn\'t work.... checkout those who prayed yet experienced disaster... or are you a special case LOL.
Virus virulent here but the sunshine is lovely and it\'s time to do stuff around the home or your hobby. I\'ve got 12 weeks of enforced isolation in my home and not tearing my hair out... what\'s the problem? Write more poetry, with time on your hands there\'s time to perfect it...... encouragement!
March 26th, 2020 13:14
dusk arising said:
Wasting your time praying, it doesn\'t work.... checkout those who prayed yet experienced disaster... or are you a special case LOL.
Virus virulent here but the sunshine is lovely and it\'s time to do stuff around the home or your hobby. I\'ve got 12 weeks of enforced isolation in my home and not tearing my hair out... what\'s the problem? Write more poetry, with time on your hands there\'s time to perfect it...... encouragement!
March 26th, 2020 13:14
What Happened to my Dream?
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for reading my poem and for commenting on it. This poem is an adaptation of Langston Hughes A Dream Deferred. I invite you to read it.
February 14th, 2020 09:48
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for reading my poem and for commenting on it. This poem is an adaptation of Langston Hughes A Dream Deferred. I invite you to read it.
February 14th, 2020 09:48
What Happened to my Dream?
dusk arising said:
Is this in ernest or tongue in cheek? All around us is the beautiful world. It\'s there for us all if we can see it. But we have to believe there is something worth seeing to appreciate it.
February 14th, 2020 01:15
dusk arising said:
Is this in ernest or tongue in cheek? All around us is the beautiful world. It\'s there for us all if we can see it. But we have to believe there is something worth seeing to appreciate it.
February 14th, 2020 01:15
I Bid You Adieu
rrodriguez said:
Yes, she did. Thank you for your comments and for reading my poem.
January 2nd, 2020 13:46
rrodriguez said:
Yes, she did. Thank you for your comments and for reading my poem.
January 2nd, 2020 13:46
I Bid You Adieu
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I am sure she appreciated your words.
December 31st, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I am sure she appreciated your words.
December 31st, 2019 01:19
I Bid You Adieu
Nemo said:
A beautiful poem made me quite emotional, my gramps passed away because of cancer, so I found this very relatable. 🙏
December 30th, 2019 13:12
Nemo said:
A beautiful poem made me quite emotional, my gramps passed away because of cancer, so I found this very relatable. 🙏
December 30th, 2019 13:12
Resolutions
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey will be filled with joy and wonder.
December 30th, 2019 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey will be filled with joy and wonder.
December 30th, 2019 01:51
The Moon Combs her Hair
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So beautiful
November 14th, 2019 08:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So beautiful
November 14th, 2019 08:21
The Moon Combs her Hair
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for reading my poem and commenting on it.
October 20th, 2019 13:56
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for reading my poem and commenting on it.
October 20th, 2019 13:56
The Moon Combs her Hair
Goldfinch60 said:
The feeling we get from the moon are so wonderfully meaningful.
October 20th, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
The feeling we get from the moon are so wonderfully meaningful.
October 20th, 2019 00:40
Our Rocky
Goldfinch60 said:
May her dancing continue for a very long time.
September 26th, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May her dancing continue for a very long time.
September 26th, 2019 00:26
David
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to both the man and the new baby.
September 4th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to both the man and the new baby.
September 4th, 2019 01:37
David
Clara said:
Capturing the real emotion of a name sake... Not just the simple exercise of tradition. I enjoyed reading this!
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 13:31
Clara said:
Capturing the real emotion of a name sake... Not just the simple exercise of tradition. I enjoyed reading this!
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 13:31
David
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully caring tribute which will be treasured not only by the said baby David but by whole family - thank you for sharing it with us dear poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2019 13:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully caring tribute which will be treasured not only by the said baby David but by whole family - thank you for sharing it with us dear poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2019 13:30
Night Rhythms
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow of night\'s rhythm comes over so well in this poetic description of a forest when sun sets..... a great read and thank you
August 14th, 2019 02:30
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow of night\'s rhythm comes over so well in this poetic description of a forest when sun sets..... a great read and thank you
August 14th, 2019 02:30
Night Rhythms
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write showing the pull of nature\'s glory.
August 14th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write showing the pull of nature\'s glory.
August 14th, 2019 00:52
Night Rhythms
Christina8 said:
This was so descriptive and full of grand metaphors I felt like I was there and could feel the night time forest. Thank you for sharing!
August 13th, 2019 23:55
Christina8 said:
This was so descriptive and full of grand metaphors I felt like I was there and could feel the night time forest. Thank you for sharing!
August 13th, 2019 23:55
You chose to end the life inside of you
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad emotive write, well written.
February 10th, 2019 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad emotive write, well written.
February 10th, 2019 01:52
Your Hand
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerfully emotive write rr, beautifully written.
February 6th, 2019 15:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerfully emotive write rr, beautifully written.
February 6th, 2019 15:52
Your Hand
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful scene your words set when time of death draws near to a loved one. A touching read rrodriguez.
February 6th, 2019 14:56
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful scene your words set when time of death draws near to a loved one. A touching read rrodriguez.
February 6th, 2019 14:56
I Can\'t Believe My Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
We cannot let it win, my father and my two brothers-in-law died from the Big C.
September 18th, 2018 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
We cannot let it win, my father and my two brothers-in-law died from the Big C.
September 18th, 2018 01:12
I Am From
Michael Edwards said:
You evoke great visions of an ideal childhood - super work.
September 17th, 2018 01:15
Michael Edwards said:
You evoke great visions of an ideal childhood - super work.
September 17th, 2018 01:15
I Am From
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moments have served you well in your life.
September 17th, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moments have served you well in your life.
September 17th, 2018 00:35
My Love, My World, My LIfe
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, may that life together go on to eternity.
September 14th, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, may that life together go on to eternity.
September 14th, 2018 00:49
My Love, My World, My LIfe
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful tribute to unconditional love and its power.. You use words of value like trust and hope in this ode to care my friend and thank you for sharing it.
September 13th, 2018 13:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful tribute to unconditional love and its power.. You use words of value like trust and hope in this ode to care my friend and thank you for sharing it.
September 13th, 2018 13:06
The Ceiba Tree
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, if those trees could talk what wonderful stories they could tell us.
September 10th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, if those trees could talk what wonderful stories they could tell us.
September 10th, 2018 01:16
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