Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Carrying December’s Feast
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some lovely lines and imagery, pleasure to read
August 12th, 2025 01:03
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some lovely lines and imagery, pleasure to read
August 12th, 2025 01:03
Carrying December’s Feast
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life and we too oblivious of our fate rest in present peace before the slaughter. Very nicely written and a fave with all its imagery as well as metaphoric message
August 11th, 2025 19:10
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life and we too oblivious of our fate rest in present peace before the slaughter. Very nicely written and a fave with all its imagery as well as metaphoric message
August 11th, 2025 19:10
The Breath of Morning
jarcher54 said:
So specific and so universal... a real treat!
August 10th, 2025 17:31
jarcher54 said:
So specific and so universal... a real treat!
August 10th, 2025 17:31
The Breath of Morning
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, giving beautiful image of the place, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 08:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, giving beautiful image of the place, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 08:32
The Breath of Morning
sorenbarrett said:
I feel it, smell it, see it and hear it. What else could be asked? A lovely write and a fave
August 8th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
I feel it, smell it, see it and hear it. What else could be asked? A lovely write and a fave
August 8th, 2025 08:13
Breath of Heaven
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful, vivid description of a cloud descended to earth. I\'ve seen this a few times on an early morning walk, and I share your enamor of it. Lovely write!
August 7th, 2025 16:17
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful, vivid description of a cloud descended to earth. I\'ve seen this a few times on an early morning walk, and I share your enamor of it. Lovely write!
August 7th, 2025 16:17
Breath of Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
So beautiful, wo identifiable, I look out my mountain cabin window to see the same. The breathing of nature on a mountain side. Loved it
August 6th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
So beautiful, wo identifiable, I look out my mountain cabin window to see the same. The breathing of nature on a mountain side. Loved it
August 6th, 2025 14:59
Living Water Poured Down
2781 said:
Amen. We just had a good drop of rain, creeks and the river are fresh. I was amazed by the amount of water, coming off the rocks, on the top of the hills!
A man after my own heart,
Forgive me.
August 5th, 2025 08:57
2781 said:
Amen. We just had a good drop of rain, creeks and the river are fresh. I was amazed by the amount of water, coming off the rocks, on the top of the hills!
A man after my own heart,
Forgive me.
August 5th, 2025 08:57
Living Water Poured Down
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful account in poetic form of that life giving and taking substance and force. Nicely done my friend
August 5th, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful account in poetic form of that life giving and taking substance and force. Nicely done my friend
August 5th, 2025 07:54
A Noiseless, Patient Vulture
Soman Ragavan said:
There are striking similarities between vultures and humans. Some humans, too, wait for their prey to go weak or careless and then move in. Whereas vultures wait for death, humans go for it while the prey is still alive. Vultures are the cleaning agents of nature. They feed on the dead, on carcasses. There are cases where they sit on a nearby tree waiting for the right moment to swoop in for lunch. Their anatomy is suited for digesting rotting animals.
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August 2nd, 2025 22:47
Soman Ragavan said:
There are striking similarities between vultures and humans. Some humans, too, wait for their prey to go weak or careless and then move in. Whereas vultures wait for death, humans go for it while the prey is still alive. Vultures are the cleaning agents of nature. They feed on the dead, on carcasses. There are cases where they sit on a nearby tree waiting for the right moment to swoop in for lunch. Their anatomy is suited for digesting rotting animals.
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August 2nd, 2025 22:47
A Noiseless, Patient Vulture
rrodriguez said:
Soren, I appreciate your words. They do encourage you to write more. I\'m working on writing more about my environment. As you know, I live in a wooded area. Nature is all around me. I tried to be more realistic about my environment and not embellish it with unnecessary words. However, I look to be descriptive and to give a sense of feel. Anyway, thank you for your comment. Be blessed!
August 2nd, 2025 09:31
rrodriguez said:
Soren, I appreciate your words. They do encourage you to write more. I\'m working on writing more about my environment. As you know, I live in a wooded area. Nature is all around me. I tried to be more realistic about my environment and not embellish it with unnecessary words. However, I look to be descriptive and to give a sense of feel. Anyway, thank you for your comment. Be blessed!
August 2nd, 2025 09:31
A Noiseless, Patient Vulture
sorenbarrett said:
I see them all the time and have too written a poem about them. Magnificent birds often reviled and not given proper tribute. Nicely written my friend
August 2nd, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
I see them all the time and have too written a poem about them. Magnificent birds often reviled and not given proper tribute. Nicely written my friend
August 2nd, 2025 08:42
Solmonet
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. How wonderfully delicious, loaded with exquisite details, unfolding the glorious experience you\'ve translated to words, sharing the vision so sweetly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a sweetly haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 31st, 2025 01:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. How wonderfully delicious, loaded with exquisite details, unfolding the glorious experience you\'ve translated to words, sharing the vision so sweetly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a sweetly haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 31st, 2025 01:19
Solmonet
Poetic Licence said:
It sounds like a picture of natural beauty, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 21:22
Poetic Licence said:
It sounds like a picture of natural beauty, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 21:22
Solmonet
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful picture you paint in these words. Just lovely
July 30th, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful picture you paint in these words. Just lovely
July 30th, 2025 20:45
Where Are You, My Love?
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the search to find that one true love, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 23:46
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the search to find that one true love, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 23:46
Where Are You, My Love?
sorenbarrett said:
A lost love poem that sings for the one loved. Very nicely done it is difficult to translate a poem and keep the feel it originally had. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lost love poem that sings for the one loved. Very nicely done it is difficult to translate a poem and keep the feel it originally had. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 20:03
It Rains
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome refreshing rain poem with sights and sounds depicted so creatively it delighted my poetic senses thoroughly!
July 26th, 2025 15:12
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome refreshing rain poem with sights and sounds depicted so creatively it delighted my poetic senses thoroughly!
July 26th, 2025 15:12
It Rains
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful cascade of stanzas each giving life to a new vision. Most lovely and a fave
July 24th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful cascade of stanzas each giving life to a new vision. Most lovely and a fave
July 24th, 2025 20:42
When Death Comes
sorenbarrett said:
Death but a parting, a brief separation in the vast sea of time. For love is a force that no space separates another dimension that knows neither and obeys not temporal corruption. A lovely write.
July 23rd, 2025 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
Death but a parting, a brief separation in the vast sea of time. For love is a force that no space separates another dimension that knows neither and obeys not temporal corruption. A lovely write.
July 23rd, 2025 20:31
Atop the Mountain
Bella Shepard said:
The imagery of this poem is so palpable, that as I read I feel myself along for the walk. You are indeed fortunate to reside in such beautiful place of peace and beauty, and I thank you for sharing it!
July 11th, 2025 08:52
Bella Shepard said:
The imagery of this poem is so palpable, that as I read I feel myself along for the walk. You are indeed fortunate to reside in such beautiful place of peace and beauty, and I thank you for sharing it!
July 11th, 2025 08:52
Atop the Mountain
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like a beautiful place to live, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:13
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like a beautiful place to live, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:13
Atop the Mountain
sorenbarrett said:
I too live in the mountains and appreciate the beauty that this poem paints. Lovely images and I know what it is to be caressed by clouds. Lovely
July 10th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
I too live in the mountains and appreciate the beauty that this poem paints. Lovely images and I know what it is to be caressed by clouds. Lovely
July 10th, 2025 20:46
Be Still, My Soul (A Meditation on Waiting)
sorenbarrett said:
A call to patience. Now days no one has patience with everything on fast mode be it traffic or food even fun where if there is not major action in the first two minutes of a movie or two pages of a novel no one is interested. What am I saying no one reads anymore they can\'t find the time. Patience indeed it is a virtue. Lovely
July 10th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A call to patience. Now days no one has patience with everything on fast mode be it traffic or food even fun where if there is not major action in the first two minutes of a movie or two pages of a novel no one is interested. What am I saying no one reads anymore they can\'t find the time. Patience indeed it is a virtue. Lovely
July 10th, 2025 03:48
Like Watercolor Bleeding
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a very beautiful picture, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:36
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a very beautiful picture, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:36
Like Watercolor Bleeding
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its imagery, wonderous in metaphor it speaks to the reader. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its imagery, wonderous in metaphor it speaks to the reader. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 09:52
The Blessing I Have Known
NafisaSB said:
wow, and wow again. you have indeed lived a full life, and enjoyed it
hope others are inspired by you
June 29th, 2025 10:15
NafisaSB said:
wow, and wow again. you have indeed lived a full life, and enjoyed it
hope others are inspired by you
June 29th, 2025 10:15
Blessing the Caribbean Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Impressive visuals in the imagery set the scene with sound implanted then the finale the touch that makes all things real. Lovely
June 29th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
Impressive visuals in the imagery set the scene with sound implanted then the finale the touch that makes all things real. Lovely
June 29th, 2025 07:04
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