Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
After throwing a smooth pebble in the lake
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem fantastic to read in jaunty rocking tune and flow. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem fantastic to read in jaunty rocking tune and flow. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:17
After throwing a smooth pebble in the lake
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for your kind comments. I labored quite a bit to put it together.
November 28th, 2022 22:53
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for your kind comments. I labored quite a bit to put it together.
November 28th, 2022 22:53
After throwing a smooth pebble in the lake
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Rodriguez, absolutely beautiful
November 28th, 2022 22:09
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Rodriguez, absolutely beautiful
November 28th, 2022 22:09
Winters too my dad got up early
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Burrrrrr. You did a great job on this and I really felt the hardwhip. Kudos to your Dad!
September 19th, 2022 17:16
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Burrrrrr. You did a great job on this and I really felt the hardwhip. Kudos to your Dad!
September 19th, 2022 17:16
Please don\'t stop the rain
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wonderful rrodriguez! Such visual verses :) This is a pleasure to read. Thanks for mentioning it.
September 17th, 2022 09:44
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wonderful rrodriguez! Such visual verses :) This is a pleasure to read. Thanks for mentioning it.
September 17th, 2022 09:44
Come with Me
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Lovely picture and verse. Good to read you again! WriteBeLight
September 14th, 2022 17:29
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Lovely picture and verse. Good to read you again! WriteBeLight
September 14th, 2022 17:29
A Dusty Blue Dress
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw what a charming poem in which all pales before the love eh wow! Kudos for this one.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw what a charming poem in which all pales before the love eh wow! Kudos for this one.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:25
A Dusty Blue Dress
Goldfinch60 said:
The future will bring glory and love rr.
Andy
September 5th, 2022 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The future will bring glory and love rr.
Andy
September 5th, 2022 00:27
Winters too my dad got up early
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words rr of the hard times of the past.
Andy
May 14th, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words rr of the hard times of the past.
Andy
May 14th, 2022 00:58
Winters too my dad got up early
Rozina said:
What a fantastic story. A wonderful father, ensuring the family is comfortable. Our parents\' actions speak louder than their words very often. Thank you for sharing.
May 13th, 2022 21:09
Rozina said:
What a fantastic story. A wonderful father, ensuring the family is comfortable. Our parents\' actions speak louder than their words very often. Thank you for sharing.
May 13th, 2022 21:09
Winters too my dad got up early
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully written for the father who did not think of his discomfort, but the comfort and well being of his family. I see in your words the recognition that comes with age, of the sacrifices those who loved us made, but we were too young to realize. You truly touched my heart with this one.
May 13th, 2022 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully written for the father who did not think of his discomfort, but the comfort and well being of his family. I see in your words the recognition that comes with age, of the sacrifices those who loved us made, but we were too young to realize. You truly touched my heart with this one.
May 13th, 2022 13:53
Ode to the Ukrainian Sunflower
Dahlia said:
So incredibly expressed & truthful
May peace reign over the Ukraine soon!
enjoyed through through
Dahlia
April 11th, 2022 18:19
Dahlia said:
So incredibly expressed & truthful
May peace reign over the Ukraine soon!
enjoyed through through
Dahlia
April 11th, 2022 18:19
I remember the day
Elizabeth Vitale Stories said:
I spent some time in the Bronx when young. A lot of fun :)
March 29th, 2022 12:28
Elizabeth Vitale Stories said:
I spent some time in the Bronx when young. A lot of fun :)
March 29th, 2022 12:28
The World Cries
Paul Bell said:
The tide is turning, Ukraine is winning this war, Putin is looking for a way out now.
March 26th, 2022 04:56
Paul Bell said:
The tide is turning, Ukraine is winning this war, Putin is looking for a way out now.
March 26th, 2022 04:56
The World Cries
Crowns4Christ said:
A very emotional piece, especially now, thinking rubyrae
March 24th, 2022 17:55
Crowns4Christ said:
A very emotional piece, especially now, thinking rubyrae
March 24th, 2022 17:55
The World Cries
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliantly acute, emotive
and vivid, poetic representation
of our collective, despair..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
and inspiring my little scribbled reply
forgive me
if you find my self indulgent rudeness, offensive
I truly mean no disrespect)
\'sometimes, in the rain
I stretch out my hands
beyond my umbrella\'s
or double glazed window\'s
and feel, those pinprick
sharp burst\'s, thudding
on my, tiny
calloused palm
and indulge, in a little
meditative cleansing
with a deep, elongated
sigh
my cheeks, momentarily
puffed-up
with self importance
deflate, so willingly
as I recall, acceptance within forgiveness
to forget, circumstance...\'
yes, we humanity are fallible
yes, we can be warped into something like
unfathomable destruction, incarnate
but, also
yes, in each of us
exists
humane - potential, enough
to undo
all our mistakes, in just
One, humble
generation\'s, realisation
of sustained, empathetic
Oneness
with each other and Nature!
all this defeatist, Nihilism
in fear of that seemingly, impending
Nuclear warfare, horror
can be Overcome
by one Speech
to infuse, our hearts
with an indelible Dream
so we just need to find
that next, heroin or warrior
of Peace and Love
to stand up! and state
\'I, too
have a dream
that One day...\'
March 24th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliantly acute, emotive
and vivid, poetic representation
of our collective, despair..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
and inspiring my little scribbled reply
forgive me
if you find my self indulgent rudeness, offensive
I truly mean no disrespect)
\'sometimes, in the rain
I stretch out my hands
beyond my umbrella\'s
or double glazed window\'s
and feel, those pinprick
sharp burst\'s, thudding
on my, tiny
calloused palm
and indulge, in a little
meditative cleansing
with a deep, elongated
sigh
my cheeks, momentarily
puffed-up
with self importance
deflate, so willingly
as I recall, acceptance within forgiveness
to forget, circumstance...\'
yes, we humanity are fallible
yes, we can be warped into something like
unfathomable destruction, incarnate
but, also
yes, in each of us
exists
humane - potential, enough
to undo
all our mistakes, in just
One, humble
generation\'s, realisation
of sustained, empathetic
Oneness
with each other and Nature!
all this defeatist, Nihilism
in fear of that seemingly, impending
Nuclear warfare, horror
can be Overcome
by one Speech
to infuse, our hearts
with an indelible Dream
so we just need to find
that next, heroin or warrior
of Peace and Love
to stand up! and state
\'I, too
have a dream
that One day...\'
March 24th, 2022 05:09
The World Cries
Michael Edwards said:
A truly emotive write and reflection of a sad world - super work.
March 24th, 2022 02:19
Michael Edwards said:
A truly emotive write and reflection of a sad world - super work.
March 24th, 2022 02:19
The World Cries
Goldfinch60 said:
I too hope the end is nigh, this world deserves love for all.
Andy
March 24th, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I too hope the end is nigh, this world deserves love for all.
Andy
March 24th, 2022 01:51
I remember you
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds so beautiful,and smells delicious,you paint a very beautiful and mouth watering picture my friend
March 22nd, 2022 13:59
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds so beautiful,and smells delicious,you paint a very beautiful and mouth watering picture my friend
March 22nd, 2022 13:59
I remember you
rrodriguez said:
Bella, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Hey, I would\'ve liked my granddaughter to be named Bella, but she was named Aria. LOL
I wrote a poem for my little Aria, A rose in bloom. I invite you to read it.
March 22nd, 2022 13:20
rrodriguez said:
Bella, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Hey, I would\'ve liked my granddaughter to be named Bella, but she was named Aria. LOL
I wrote a poem for my little Aria, A rose in bloom. I invite you to read it.
March 22nd, 2022 13:20
I remember you
Bella Shepard said:
Your vivid description of the beauty of your homeland makes me feel like I\"m there, tasting it, seeing it, feeling it. It is a treat for the senses.
March 22nd, 2022 12:21
Bella Shepard said:
Your vivid description of the beauty of your homeland makes me feel like I\"m there, tasting it, seeing it, feeling it. It is a treat for the senses.
March 22nd, 2022 12:21
I Remember...
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem comes to life with such wonderful visual imagery. As I read I\'m back in childhood, a snow day from school, sledding down a hill just as you describe. I love the picture that you chose to accompany it, especially the pink coated child making a snow angel. It\'s all perfect!
March 20th, 2022 05:57
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem comes to life with such wonderful visual imagery. As I read I\'m back in childhood, a snow day from school, sledding down a hill just as you describe. I love the picture that you chose to accompany it, especially the pink coated child making a snow angel. It\'s all perfect!
March 20th, 2022 05:57
Please don\'t stop the rain
Bella Shepard said:
I love this beautiful, lyrical poem! Since I was a child I\'ve loved rainy days; watching it, hearing it, sometimes going for a walk in it. Thank you for this special piece.
March 20th, 2022 05:50
Bella Shepard said:
I love this beautiful, lyrical poem! Since I was a child I\'ve loved rainy days; watching it, hearing it, sometimes going for a walk in it. Thank you for this special piece.
March 20th, 2022 05:50
I’ll be your little warrior
rrodriguez said:
Thank you blue. Your comment is greatly appreciated.
March 18th, 2022 19:39
rrodriguez said:
Thank you blue. Your comment is greatly appreciated.
March 18th, 2022 19:39
I’ll be your little warrior
Crowns4Christ said:
Still, though staged, powerful image and message,sad yet triumphant, great piece Rodriguez
March 18th, 2022 19:35
Crowns4Christ said:
Still, though staged, powerful image and message,sad yet triumphant, great piece Rodriguez
March 18th, 2022 19:35
I’ll be your little warrior
Bella Shepard said:
Passionate words befitting all those who are willing to give up everything for love of country, family, heritage, young and old alike.
March 18th, 2022 12:48
Bella Shepard said:
Passionate words befitting all those who are willing to give up everything for love of country, family, heritage, young and old alike.
March 18th, 2022 12:48
Hacked
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sincere words rr, if only it would stop and love would fill the world it would be wonderful.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sincere words rr, if only it would stop and love would fill the world it would be wonderful.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:44
Hacked
Crowns4Christ said:
This is very powerful,you captured the devastation and wickedness that these poor people have to endure
March 17th, 2022 18:06
Crowns4Christ said:
This is very powerful,you captured the devastation and wickedness that these poor people have to endure
March 17th, 2022 18:06
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