Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
How Love Found Us (Etheree poem)
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for introducing me to the Etheree rrodriguez. A wonderful reflection on young love. You captured a precious and unforgettabje moment for your readers. Beautiful.
September 19th, 2024 08:09
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for introducing me to the Etheree rrodriguez. A wonderful reflection on young love. You captured a precious and unforgettabje moment for your readers. Beautiful.
September 19th, 2024 08:09
Puerto Rico
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture you pain and a love for the land that I can feel. Maybe because I live in places that sound so similar butIcan feel your love for this place.
September 19th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture you pain and a love for the land that I can feel. Maybe because I live in places that sound so similar butIcan feel your love for this place.
September 19th, 2024 04:35
Puerto Rico
Cassie58 said:
How fortunate you are to live in such beautiful surroundings. You took me there in thought flight. Wonderful description. A poem much enjoyed. Thank you.
September 18th, 2024 22:16
Cassie58 said:
How fortunate you are to live in such beautiful surroundings. You took me there in thought flight. Wonderful description. A poem much enjoyed. Thank you.
September 18th, 2024 22:16
Reflections From My Boyhood
sorenbarrett said:
I love the pairing of shiver with courage it is unexpected and usually paired with the feeling of fear. Leaving what you have long feared a vague mystery is a nice touch. Although you said that you wrote this based on boyhood memories it serves well as a metaphor as well. Very nice
September 18th, 2024 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
I love the pairing of shiver with courage it is unexpected and usually paired with the feeling of fear. Leaving what you have long feared a vague mystery is a nice touch. Although you said that you wrote this based on boyhood memories it serves well as a metaphor as well. Very nice
September 18th, 2024 04:16
Longing (Senryu)
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for your observation. Haiku deals with nature and senryu deals with human nature. I\'ll correct it.
September 8th, 2024 16:22
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for your observation. Haiku deals with nature and senryu deals with human nature. I\'ll correct it.
September 8th, 2024 16:22
Longing (Senryu)
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks the definition is senryu, sister to the haiku, but with a different set of topics which this beauty seems to fit beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 15:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks the definition is senryu, sister to the haiku, but with a different set of topics which this beauty seems to fit beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 15:24
At Church
sorenbarrett said:
One should always go to where one finds peace. Whether this is a church or in one zone hot in a forest Grove or in bed, peace is the answer.
September 5th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
One should always go to where one finds peace. Whether this is a church or in one zone hot in a forest Grove or in bed, peace is the answer.
September 5th, 2024 06:30
At Church
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely, beautifully detailed to effect, lightly poignant and evocative. Thank you very much for sharing!
September 4th, 2024 20:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely, beautifully detailed to effect, lightly poignant and evocative. Thank you very much for sharing!
September 4th, 2024 20:33
Journey Through the Night
Cheeky Missy said:
I like it! Chock full of details until I\'m vicariously alongside you numbly watching in almost a daze, waiting for the happier ending just out of sight. Awesome!
September 1st, 2024 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
I like it! Chock full of details until I\'m vicariously alongside you numbly watching in almost a daze, waiting for the happier ending just out of sight. Awesome!
September 1st, 2024 19:53
I am in Love
sorenbarrett said:
I see you love blue and so do I. Since you were playing with colors humor me if you would. I see the blues merging with the yellow of the sun producing the green of the trees and metaphorically the warmth of love mixed with the cool color blue (loneliness) makes for the green growth of renewal or birth of a relationship. Very nice
August 29th, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
I see you love blue and so do I. Since you were playing with colors humor me if you would. I see the blues merging with the yellow of the sun producing the green of the trees and metaphorically the warmth of love mixed with the cool color blue (loneliness) makes for the green growth of renewal or birth of a relationship. Very nice
August 29th, 2024 05:12
War
Doggerel Dave said:
You might have a pleasant night now you got that out of your system - but I have to cope with mine.
Rich but unsettling poetry.
August 27th, 2024 23:21
Doggerel Dave said:
You might have a pleasant night now you got that out of your system - but I have to cope with mine.
Rich but unsettling poetry.
August 27th, 2024 23:21
War
MendedFences27 said:
The harshness of the moment softened by notes from a \"little boy\'s flute.\" You describe the state of the world brilliantly. From the \"battlefield\" to a \"moment of delight.\" the tension among peoples is felt in reading your poem. The fourth stanza I enjoyed most, the phrase \"Life\'s precarious dance.\" Just great. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2024 18:56
MendedFences27 said:
The harshness of the moment softened by notes from a \"little boy\'s flute.\" You describe the state of the world brilliantly. From the \"battlefield\" to a \"moment of delight.\" the tension among peoples is felt in reading your poem. The fourth stanza I enjoyed most, the phrase \"Life\'s precarious dance.\" Just great. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2024 18:56
War
sorenbarrett said:
Cataclysmic and with no one really noticing how there needs to be no apocalypses no ragnarok it is the end of our times and the beginning of another
August 27th, 2024 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
Cataclysmic and with no one really noticing how there needs to be no apocalypses no ragnarok it is the end of our times and the beginning of another
August 27th, 2024 08:27
Memories of Autumn
sorenbarrett said:
You have painted a picture of fall indeed. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
You have painted a picture of fall indeed. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:25
Why?
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t delude yourself into expecting answers - just keep digging...
Questions well posed, though.
August 22nd, 2024 08:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t delude yourself into expecting answers - just keep digging...
Questions well posed, though.
August 22nd, 2024 08:21
Why?
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for reading my poem. I was musing about different things, and I started to write, and this came up. Thank you for reading it and commenting, my friend.
August 21st, 2024 19:41
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for reading my poem. I was musing about different things, and I started to write, and this came up. Thank you for reading it and commenting, my friend.
August 21st, 2024 19:41
Why?
sorenbarrett said:
The answer to one question always leads to another. Well written
August 21st, 2024 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
The answer to one question always leads to another. Well written
August 21st, 2024 18:41
Ennui
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth in this poem that speaks to the heart of the matter.
August 20th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth in this poem that speaks to the heart of the matter.
August 20th, 2024 05:04
The Flamboyant Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Nature sings and speaks in a language that only the truly interested can understand. Beautiful images and a wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nature sings and speaks in a language that only the truly interested can understand. Beautiful images and a wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 05:51
Harmony Lost, Hope Restored
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I love it. Sometimes it requires a few years of thought to complete the poem. I certainly have found that to be true.
Your poem recreates the Genisis of man, between his banishment and his redemption. It relates the story in a very direct way, no frills, just truth. I enjoyed reading it very much. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2024 10:15
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I love it. Sometimes it requires a few years of thought to complete the poem. I certainly have found that to be true.
Your poem recreates the Genisis of man, between his banishment and his redemption. It relates the story in a very direct way, no frills, just truth. I enjoyed reading it very much. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2024 10:15
Harmony Lost, Hope Restored
sorenbarrett said:
An epic poem about creation and redemption from the fall. Nicely written
August 7th, 2024 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
An epic poem about creation and redemption from the fall. Nicely written
August 7th, 2024 20:45
Urayoan, Towering Mountain
sorenbarrett said:
Scenic, vivid imagery that takes one on a trip. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:33
sorenbarrett said:
Scenic, vivid imagery that takes one on a trip. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:33
With Wings of Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely state call for freedom. Well done
August 1st, 2024 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely state call for freedom. Well done
August 1st, 2024 19:25
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