Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Ma Jolie
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that starts with a mystery of who this person is a Picasso painting or a more recent song or just someone known. The imagery is stunning and the thought echoes in the mind. Then the decent back to the real world or maybe back to the fake world from the real. Nicely done my friend
September 20th, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that starts with a mystery of who this person is a Picasso painting or a more recent song or just someone known. The imagery is stunning and the thought echoes in the mind. Then the decent back to the real world or maybe back to the fake world from the real. Nicely done my friend
September 20th, 2026 07:32
A Breath of Light
sorenbarrett said:
A poet ever ready to capture beauty on a page. A lovely write my friend
September 19th, 2026 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poet ever ready to capture beauty on a page. A lovely write my friend
September 19th, 2026 06:18
The Dawn of Creation
sorenbarrett said:
Almost biblical it rings or Geneses. Nicely imaged and well written Rodriguez
September 18th, 2026 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
Almost biblical it rings or Geneses. Nicely imaged and well written Rodriguez
September 18th, 2026 19:25
Beloved
rrodriguez said:
I wrote this poem five years ago while I was working as a flight attendant. I found it in my list of poems and I edited it.
September 5th, 2026 12:21
rrodriguez said:
I wrote this poem five years ago while I was working as a flight attendant. I found it in my list of poems and I edited it.
September 5th, 2026 12:21
Beloved
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of which the last two lines \"when you sigh and gently close your eyes…only your dream remains.\" struck me and took my thoughts to another place of reflection. How poignant they are and what power they contain. Whether you believe in an afterlife or not they hold the same force. So peaceful and majestic. Simply lovely my friend and a fave
September 5th, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of which the last two lines \"when you sigh and gently close your eyes…only your dream remains.\" struck me and took my thoughts to another place of reflection. How poignant they are and what power they contain. Whether you believe in an afterlife or not they hold the same force. So peaceful and majestic. Simply lovely my friend and a fave
September 5th, 2026 12:18
A Road, a Hand, and a Leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely this poem speaks from great images and presents its message in metaphor. Well done
August 30th, 2026 19:47
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely this poem speaks from great images and presents its message in metaphor. Well done
August 30th, 2026 19:47
A Boy’s Summer Escapade
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like nature and cold spring water when hot to drink. A lovely and nostalgic write.
August 29th, 2026 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like nature and cold spring water when hot to drink. A lovely and nostalgic write.
August 29th, 2026 16:43
The Language of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Water the secret to life expressed poetically in this poem as tears and rainbows bringing new life to a world. Well written
August 26th, 2026 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
Water the secret to life expressed poetically in this poem as tears and rainbows bringing new life to a world. Well written
August 26th, 2026 20:01
The Little Bee
arqios said:
Pumpkin flowers I’ve had in salads and soup! They have a special fragrance that to me is connected with vegetable gardens and childhood. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 23rd, 2026 05:24
arqios said:
Pumpkin flowers I’ve had in salads and soup! They have a special fragrance that to me is connected with vegetable gardens and childhood. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 23rd, 2026 05:24
The Little Bee
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the narrator becomes like the bee. Well written never give up.
August 22nd, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the narrator becomes like the bee. Well written never give up.
August 22nd, 2026 20:11
Quiet Hope Among Ruin
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow awesome, begins on desolation and dreary scenes but ends on hope snd renewal, inspiring! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow awesome, begins on desolation and dreary scenes but ends on hope snd renewal, inspiring! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:35
Quiet Hope Among Ruin
sorenbarrett said:
This definitely has literal meaning in regard to keeping the environment but may have metaphoric meaning as well ghosts of the past litter our present. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
This definitely has literal meaning in regard to keeping the environment but may have metaphoric meaning as well ghosts of the past litter our present. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:37
A Night That Was Not Real
sorenbarrett said:
The author\'s note makes sense of this surreal poem that reflects a substance altered reality. Very nicely done
October 18th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
The author\'s note makes sense of this surreal poem that reflects a substance altered reality. Very nicely done
October 18th, 2025 03:51
Carrying December’s Feast
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some lovely lines and imagery, pleasure to read
August 12th, 2025 01:03
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some lovely lines and imagery, pleasure to read
August 12th, 2025 01:03
Carrying December’s Feast
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life and we too oblivious of our fate rest in present peace before the slaughter. Very nicely written and a fave with all its imagery as well as metaphoric message
August 11th, 2025 19:10
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life and we too oblivious of our fate rest in present peace before the slaughter. Very nicely written and a fave with all its imagery as well as metaphoric message
August 11th, 2025 19:10
The Breath of Morning
jarcher54 said:
So specific and so universal... a real treat!
August 10th, 2025 17:31
jarcher54 said:
So specific and so universal... a real treat!
August 10th, 2025 17:31
The Breath of Morning
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, giving beautiful image of the place, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 08:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, giving beautiful image of the place, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 08:32
The Breath of Morning
sorenbarrett said:
I feel it, smell it, see it and hear it. What else could be asked? A lovely write and a fave
August 8th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
I feel it, smell it, see it and hear it. What else could be asked? A lovely write and a fave
August 8th, 2025 08:13
Breath of Heaven
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful, vivid description of a cloud descended to earth. I\'ve seen this a few times on an early morning walk, and I share your enamor of it. Lovely write!
August 7th, 2025 16:17
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful, vivid description of a cloud descended to earth. I\'ve seen this a few times on an early morning walk, and I share your enamor of it. Lovely write!
August 7th, 2025 16:17
Breath of Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
So beautiful, wo identifiable, I look out my mountain cabin window to see the same. The breathing of nature on a mountain side. Loved it
August 6th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
So beautiful, wo identifiable, I look out my mountain cabin window to see the same. The breathing of nature on a mountain side. Loved it
August 6th, 2025 14:59
Living Water Poured Down
2781 said:
Amen. We just had a good drop of rain, creeks and the river are fresh. I was amazed by the amount of water, coming off the rocks, on the top of the hills!
A man after my own heart,
Forgive me.
August 5th, 2025 08:57
2781 said:
Amen. We just had a good drop of rain, creeks and the river are fresh. I was amazed by the amount of water, coming off the rocks, on the top of the hills!
A man after my own heart,
Forgive me.
August 5th, 2025 08:57
Living Water Poured Down
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful account in poetic form of that life giving and taking substance and force. Nicely done my friend
August 5th, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful account in poetic form of that life giving and taking substance and force. Nicely done my friend
August 5th, 2025 07:54
A Noiseless, Patient Vulture
Soman Ragavan said:
There are striking similarities between vultures and humans. Some humans, too, wait for their prey to go weak or careless and then move in. Whereas vultures wait for death, humans go for it while the prey is still alive. Vultures are the cleaning agents of nature. They feed on the dead, on carcasses. There are cases where they sit on a nearby tree waiting for the right moment to swoop in for lunch. Their anatomy is suited for digesting rotting animals.
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August 2nd, 2025 22:47
Soman Ragavan said:
There are striking similarities between vultures and humans. Some humans, too, wait for their prey to go weak or careless and then move in. Whereas vultures wait for death, humans go for it while the prey is still alive. Vultures are the cleaning agents of nature. They feed on the dead, on carcasses. There are cases where they sit on a nearby tree waiting for the right moment to swoop in for lunch. Their anatomy is suited for digesting rotting animals.
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August 2nd, 2025 22:47
A Noiseless, Patient Vulture
rrodriguez said:
Soren, I appreciate your words. They do encourage you to write more. I\'m working on writing more about my environment. As you know, I live in a wooded area. Nature is all around me. I tried to be more realistic about my environment and not embellish it with unnecessary words. However, I look to be descriptive and to give a sense of feel. Anyway, thank you for your comment. Be blessed!
August 2nd, 2025 09:31
rrodriguez said:
Soren, I appreciate your words. They do encourage you to write more. I\'m working on writing more about my environment. As you know, I live in a wooded area. Nature is all around me. I tried to be more realistic about my environment and not embellish it with unnecessary words. However, I look to be descriptive and to give a sense of feel. Anyway, thank you for your comment. Be blessed!
August 2nd, 2025 09:31
A Noiseless, Patient Vulture
sorenbarrett said:
I see them all the time and have too written a poem about them. Magnificent birds often reviled and not given proper tribute. Nicely written my friend
August 2nd, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
I see them all the time and have too written a poem about them. Magnificent birds often reviled and not given proper tribute. Nicely written my friend
August 2nd, 2025 08:42
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