Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
The Breath of the Earth
sorenbarrett said:
Again you paint a beautiful picture of nature at her best. Very nicely done
May 27th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Again you paint a beautiful picture of nature at her best. Very nicely done
May 27th, 2025 16:11
The Breath of the Earth
Cheeky Missy said:
Rendering that exquisite experience isn\'t easy by any means, but you\'ve pulled it off with excellent details. Beautifully rendered with awesome imagery and a twinkling, titillating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 27th, 2025 15:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Rendering that exquisite experience isn\'t easy by any means, but you\'ve pulled it off with excellent details. Beautifully rendered with awesome imagery and a twinkling, titillating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 27th, 2025 15:46
A Rhythm in the Hush
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks to me as I love the sound of the frogs be they in the pond, stream or trees. Periodically I have one that resides in my bathroom and sings from time to time. They are a familiar voice and the chorus from the pond below sing in harmony some like drums, other tenor and yet others soprano. Great write
May 26th, 2025 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks to me as I love the sound of the frogs be they in the pond, stream or trees. Periodically I have one that resides in my bathroom and sings from time to time. They are a familiar voice and the chorus from the pond below sing in harmony some like drums, other tenor and yet others soprano. Great write
May 26th, 2025 18:31
The Hurricane’s Breath
arqios said:
The sheer power of nature\'s forces. Prayers lifted up🙏🏻🕊️
May 25th, 2025 18:45
arqios said:
The sheer power of nature\'s forces. Prayers lifted up🙏🏻🕊️
May 25th, 2025 18:45
The Hurricane’s Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Having been through several I can say that this a most wonderful poetic depiction of natures gasps and blasts that shake foundations. I don\'t fear but respect her force it is the tornados inside that I fear. They are the rage that kills. Lovely poem
May 25th, 2025 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
Having been through several I can say that this a most wonderful poetic depiction of natures gasps and blasts that shake foundations. I don\'t fear but respect her force it is the tornados inside that I fear. They are the rage that kills. Lovely poem
May 25th, 2025 18:17
The Whisper and the Roar
arqios said:
So beautiful! Takes me back to my ancestral homelands.🙏🏻🕊️
May 25th, 2025 05:13
arqios said:
So beautiful! Takes me back to my ancestral homelands.🙏🏻🕊️
May 25th, 2025 05:13
The Whisper and the Roar
Poetic Licence said:
A Lovely write of nature and its mystery. Depending on the mood the wind is in, determines how it blows, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 03:03
Poetic Licence said:
A Lovely write of nature and its mystery. Depending on the mood the wind is in, determines how it blows, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 03:03
The Whisper and the Roar
Soman Ragavan said:
The wind indeed displays many marvels. From a gentle breeze to unchained fury that devastates all in its path. It can uproot trees in seconds. At sea, it can propel sailing ships on their journey, but also wreck them and sink them when it unleashes hell. (It can also sink steel ships, of course). After doing so, it resumes its cool Air like nothing happened… Anyway, we think that what we post on the Internet will remain forever. But, what provisions are there for the database to be preserved when the site will close down ?...
All might be Gone With The Wind…
That’s why I publish my books in hard copies and give some copies to universities and public libraries to be kept as archives. Soman Ragavan. 25.5.2025
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May 24th, 2025 22:47
Soman Ragavan said:
The wind indeed displays many marvels. From a gentle breeze to unchained fury that devastates all in its path. It can uproot trees in seconds. At sea, it can propel sailing ships on their journey, but also wreck them and sink them when it unleashes hell. (It can also sink steel ships, of course). After doing so, it resumes its cool Air like nothing happened… Anyway, we think that what we post on the Internet will remain forever. But, what provisions are there for the database to be preserved when the site will close down ?...
All might be Gone With The Wind…
That’s why I publish my books in hard copies and give some copies to universities and public libraries to be kept as archives. Soman Ragavan. 25.5.2025
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May 24th, 2025 22:47
The Whisper and the Roar
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of nature and all its majesty. Wind that they call Mariah that blows across all the earth from pole to pole knows no boundaries over prairies , mountains, seas and canyons. A beautiful work.
May 24th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of nature and all its majesty. Wind that they call Mariah that blows across all the earth from pole to pole knows no boundaries over prairies , mountains, seas and canyons. A beautiful work.
May 24th, 2025 18:39
The River Thinks for Me
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the metaphor in this poem. A lovely image penned
May 24th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the metaphor in this poem. A lovely image penned
May 24th, 2025 04:15
The River Thinks for Me
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I think in many ways the rivers of the world shape and impact our life\'s, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 02:36
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I think in many ways the rivers of the world shape and impact our life\'s, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 02:36
The River Thinks for Me
Soman Ragavan said:
This poem anthropomorphizes the river, giving it human-like abilities. There are terrific lessons to be learned from a river. Water on its own is soft, it will give way when you pass anything through it. But it still packs in big power. While big boats float on it, it can still smash them when it rises as a destructive force.
The same river that flows serenely can gather force when full and sweep everything ahead of it. It can break its banks, chart out new paths, etc. Its quietness is deceptive.
However, its rule ends when it meets the sea. It enters the sea meekly, having lost its power at that point. It has been said “The sea refuses no river.”
From the book “3000 PROVERBS” by Sam Phillips. New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House. (Year probably around 2017). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and other rights-holders.
At that junction, the fresh water of the river becomes salty, like the sea.
Soman Ragavan. 24.5.2025
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May 23rd, 2025 21:07
Soman Ragavan said:
This poem anthropomorphizes the river, giving it human-like abilities. There are terrific lessons to be learned from a river. Water on its own is soft, it will give way when you pass anything through it. But it still packs in big power. While big boats float on it, it can still smash them when it rises as a destructive force.
The same river that flows serenely can gather force when full and sweep everything ahead of it. It can break its banks, chart out new paths, etc. Its quietness is deceptive.
However, its rule ends when it meets the sea. It enters the sea meekly, having lost its power at that point. It has been said “The sea refuses no river.”
From the book “3000 PROVERBS” by Sam Phillips. New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House. (Year probably around 2017). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and other rights-holders.
At that junction, the fresh water of the river becomes salty, like the sea.
Soman Ragavan. 24.5.2025
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May 23rd, 2025 21:07
A Doll Named Hope
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad write, but also positive that she had something from her children to hold in her darker moments, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:18
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad write, but also positive that she had something from her children to hold in her darker moments, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:18
A Doll Named Hope
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt, tender and sad it speaks to faith and hope. Lovely
May 22nd, 2025 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt, tender and sad it speaks to faith and hope. Lovely
May 22nd, 2025 19:28
Lost, Then Found: A Journey to a New Beginning
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of not giving up and always searching for that new journey, enjoyed the read
May 22nd, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of not giving up and always searching for that new journey, enjoyed the read
May 22nd, 2025 02:19
Lost, Then Found: A Journey to a New Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of encouragement to find oneself and empowerment and hope when lost. Lovely
May 21st, 2025 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of encouragement to find oneself and empowerment and hope when lost. Lovely
May 21st, 2025 20:31
The Eternal Fountain
arqios said:
There something about water as a receptacle of both life and death, of living and of dying.🙏🏻
May 19th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
There something about water as a receptacle of both life and death, of living and of dying.🙏🏻
May 19th, 2025 05:46
The Eternal Fountain
sorenbarrett said:
I can only imagine it in Spanish for the original is generally even better than the translation and this one is already a fave. Maybe it is that these lilies grow along the stream just below my house or maybe it is just their beauty or the beauty of the words and images of the poem itself but this poem brings many feelings that are nostalgic and peaceful and so poetically done.
May 19th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
I can only imagine it in Spanish for the original is generally even better than the translation and this one is already a fave. Maybe it is that these lilies grow along the stream just below my house or maybe it is just their beauty or the beauty of the words and images of the poem itself but this poem brings many feelings that are nostalgic and peaceful and so poetically done.
May 19th, 2025 03:57
The Eternal Fountain
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tranquil write to start the week, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tranquil write to start the week, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 02:19
Night Funeral in My Barrio
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece of cultural and class differences even when we bury out loved ones, nicely expressed
May 18th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece of cultural and class differences even when we bury out loved ones, nicely expressed
May 18th, 2025 02:24
Night Funeral in My Barrio
Doggerel Dave said:
Not really into funerals, so I\'m not sure why I opted into this one.... but once in, I got carried along nicely. Cultural background very much in evidence and enriched the story well. Thanks for the write.
May 17th, 2025 20:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Not really into funerals, so I\'m not sure why I opted into this one.... but once in, I got carried along nicely. Cultural background very much in evidence and enriched the story well. Thanks for the write.
May 17th, 2025 20:55
Night Funeral in My Barrio
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that\'s social comment speaks for the poor. Very nicely written with good description. The continued phrase (Night funeral in my barrio) carries power like an echo. A wonderful poem
May 17th, 2025 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that\'s social comment speaks for the poor. Very nicely written with good description. The continued phrase (Night funeral in my barrio) carries power like an echo. A wonderful poem
May 17th, 2025 15:19
Flamboyán: Pride of My Country
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautifully tree and write, refreshing and positive, enjoyed the read
May 17th, 2025 02:20
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautifully tree and write, refreshing and positive, enjoyed the read
May 17th, 2025 02:20
Flamboyán: Pride of My Country
Soman Ragavan said:
In your country it flowers in August, in Mauritius, in December. One thing we will notice about this tree is that, when flowering, so much resources are needed that there are few leaves.
May 16th, 2025 20:24
Soman Ragavan said:
In your country it flowers in August, in Mauritius, in December. One thing we will notice about this tree is that, when flowering, so much resources are needed that there are few leaves.
May 16th, 2025 20:24
Flamboyán: Pride of My Country
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful both the tree and the poem. A very well dome poem.
May 16th, 2025 19:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful both the tree and the poem. A very well dome poem.
May 16th, 2025 19:48
Sister, Make Me Laugh
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that has amazing flow and could well be a song. A fave
May 14th, 2025 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that has amazing flow and could well be a song. A fave
May 14th, 2025 20:17
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