Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



To Dance With The Muse
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Beautifully expressed words you\'ve chosen that dance through the verses.

Wonderful imagery that will last after the last song has played. :-)

November 20th, 2018 18:29

To Dance With The Muse
Kurt Philip Behm said:

When it changes to a Tango, please let me know.

:-)

November 20th, 2018 16:47

Cyber Unlearned (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura, terrific insight as usual. I wish you the
Happiest Thanksgiving ever.

Kurt

November 20th, 2018 16:44

Cyber Unlearned (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Super writes! I appreciated them all!

• ā€œCyber Unlearnedā€
The bends will always be there. It’s up to us to deal with them the best way we can!
ā€˜Manipulating reality’ is like trying to fool Mother Nature!

• ā€œChanged Into Songā€
You’ve asked many great questions. I hope the smiles don’t pass me by and most of those puzzle pieces will fit just fine! I’ve embraced this change of fate and it’s a wonderful song to sing!

• ā€œHard Wonā€
It’s so true that
ā€œWe can all think
differently
While instantaneously feeling
the sameā€

• ā€œForgotten Lordā€
That prophet’s voice cannot be ignored.


~Laura~

November 20th, 2018 12:40

To Dance With The Muse
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

I love this dance with your muse! You had me waltzing for a while!

A great write!

~Laura~

November 20th, 2018 11:59

The Garden Burning
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Ah, but whose scheme?

:-)

November 18th, 2018 21:40

The Garden Burning
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Another super write!

ā€¢ā€œThe Garden Burningā€

My comment to this very interesting read...
All in the grand scheme of things!

~Laura~


November 18th, 2018 21:34

The Garden Burning
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Your perceptions are spot on!

Thanks Tamara

Kurt

November 17th, 2018 18:43

The Garden Burning
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Kurt, this is an impressive write.

My interpretation is this poem begins (with a world before time as we know it) in the Garden of Eden.

I suspect the two lovers were Adam and Eve and the lust to deceive defines their eating from the Tree of Knowledge of good and evil.

Just my take, but either way I loved it. :-)



November 17th, 2018 17:39

Ptesan-Wi (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I wrote her character based on many Native American Elders
that I have known. You share many of her qualities.

Have great weekend!

Kurt

November 16th, 2018 23:08

Ptesan-Wi (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• Ptesan - Wi
I remember the quote very well from your phenomenal novel, ā€œ ā€˜Revenge Along The War Trail’ ā€! A must read for anyone who hasn’t! I gifted my copy to a dear friend!

Needless to say, the other three writes are super! I enjoyed them immensely!

~Laura~

November 16th, 2018 21:56

Ptesan-Wi (+3)
Debsspot said:

Beautiful Kurt. Immersive.

November 16th, 2018 02:05

On The Line (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, it\'s nice to have a friend who\'s securely
on dry land.

:-)

Kurt

November 14th, 2018 12:57

On The Line (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Perfectly stated with your choice of brilliant metaphors...

ā€œUntil we get off the river and back on dry land,
Chamberlain Falls will continue to pull
—and Armageddon will continue to callā€

Superb!

~Laura~

November 14th, 2018 12:27

On The Line (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

We\'ve capitulated our higher education to a legion of idiots. It\'s going
to be hard to get it back... shame on us!

November 14th, 2018 09:19

On The Line (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

I interpret this write as a ā€œspot onā€ with the present political climate!

~Laura~

November 14th, 2018 08:57

Creation Redeemed (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura!

Kurt

November 14th, 2018 07:19

Creation Redeemed (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Three extraordinary poems! I can see a common thread throughout...a lifeline, so to speak!

•Can I love without pain?
ā€œCum Aetateā€...the pain diminishes!

•After Midnight—creation redeemed
A new day to cherish!

•Cum Aetate
Sensibility and appreciation

Loved all three!
Thank you!

~Laura~




November 14th, 2018 06:45

Creation Redeemed (+2)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Kurt, your poems continue to amaze me. I loved both.

There is always food for thought in each line you pen and you leave it up to the reader to interpret them as they choose.

The last line in the second poem expresses the downside of love or the half-empty glass.

Thanks for posting.



November 13th, 2018 17:28

The Beginning Of The End (+7)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Another one of those that woke me up from a sound sleep!

:-)

November 12th, 2018 16:19

The Beginning Of The End (+7)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Reading THE BEGINNING OF THE END was like reading a mind twister! The more I read it, the more I liked it! In a few minutes I’ll have it memorized! Super!

~Laura~

November 12th, 2018 16:05

My Gatekeeper
Michael Edwards said:

A super write and a great dedication to a great mps poet.

November 10th, 2018 13:16

My Gatekeeper
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

WOW...

I’m speechless,
honored, and
humbled!


~Laura~


November 10th, 2018 12:59

The Joy I\'m Without
Christina8 said:

Was very touched by your poem and your deep loss. So sorry, Kurt!

November 9th, 2018 20:22

The Joy I\'m Without
Debsspot said:

Such beautiful words Kurt. Your life is richer for having had him in your life. His gift will never leave you.

November 9th, 2018 16:14

The Joy I\'m Without
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

I’m truly and sincerely saddened by the loss of THE BEST FRIEND YOU EVER HAD...COLBY! My deepest sympathies and condolences my dear friend! There’s only one comforting thought in my mind...
No More Suffering For Him!

~Laura~

November 9th, 2018 15:24

The Mark Of Cain
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Veritas!

A very interesting and befitting posting!

Something happened tonight between me and my son. It shouldn’t have happened. Totally my fault! I should’ve been wiser. So now I’m drowning in guilt!

~Laura~





November 7th, 2018 00:10

To Pretend (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura, that\'s my favorite too.

Kurt

November 5th, 2018 17:05

To Pretend (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Four fantastic postings!
I particularly like...
ā€œThe Lineā€
The first two lines instantly captured my attention! Superb!

~Laura~

November 5th, 2018 16:32

The Mask (+5)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Sometimes it feels that way, especially in dreamsleep.

Have a great weekend, Laura.


November 3rd, 2018 20:21



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