Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Eyes—Heart
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Yes, \'eyes\' is a metaphor.

Thanks, Fred

Kurt

July 27th, 2017 10:27

Eyes—Heart
FredPeyer said:

Agree completely with no.2 and no.3, Kurt, but have a comment on no.1.

If \'Eyes\' is representative for all the human senses, I agree.
If not, I don\'t agree, since blind people feel love, hate, and all the other emotions the same as all of us.
I take your poem to mean that there cannot be any emotion unless there is an experience.

July 27th, 2017 10:10

Eyes—Heart
charlesbarrett said:

Very true. Thanks for sharing.

July 27th, 2017 09:56

Death Never Quells
burning-embers said:

I am with you on this totally. Thank you, that is my viewpoint you express there. And as usual, so eloquently.

July 27th, 2017 06:05

Death Never Quells
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Fred. I\'m glad it resonated.

Kurt

July 26th, 2017 12:52

Death Never Quells
FredPeyer said:

Kurt, I love the whole poem, but the 2nd and last stanzas spoke to me even more.

July 26th, 2017 12:10

Death Never Quells
Louis Gibbs said:

Beautiful, insightful poem, Kurt! Thanks for sharing this fine one. Love the last phrase especially.

July 26th, 2017 10:50

Death Never Quells
charlesbarrett said:

That last line was amazing. Great piece

July 26th, 2017 10:48

Refusing To Play (+1)
Tony36 said:

Great writes

July 25th, 2017 11:26

Refusing To Play (+1)
charlesbarrett said:

Great pieces. I especially enjoyed “the devil called roll”. Thanks for sharing.

July 25th, 2017 10:21

Waiting For Dawn
FredPeyer said:

Kurt, you caught the futility of war perfectly.

July 24th, 2017 19:58

Waiting For Dawn
Louis Gibbs said:

A perfect summation of the never ending drama and folly of war ... man\'s favorite pastime throughout history. The last two lines were epic!

July 24th, 2017 11:47

Waiting For Dawn
charlesbarrett said:

Great work. Those last 2 lines will stick with me. So much was said in so few lines. Thank you for sharing.

July 24th, 2017 11:11

Waiting For Dawn
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Cat. My favorite line too!

Kurt

July 24th, 2017 11:01

Waiting For Dawn
burning-embers said:

Sombre strong truth imparted with skill and economy. Somehow simple but immensely strong. Goes into my Fav\'s.

July 24th, 2017 10:36

This Moment Transcendent
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Great takes, Louis.

Thanks

Kurt

July 23rd, 2017 10:42

This Moment Transcendent
Louis Gibbs said:

On \"Betrothed\" ... \'Whatever we conquer is with us forever.\' On \"This Moment Transendent\" ... \'As we age, we become more reflective upon, and appreciative of, the present moment.\' This what I take from these two fine expressions, Kurt. Well done!

July 23rd, 2017 10:27

Never To Dry (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Fred

July 22nd, 2017 22:48

Never To Dry (+2)
FredPeyer said:

I read all, loved all, but the last stanza of the last poem is the one that stayed in my mind!

July 22nd, 2017 15:05

New Pathway
FredPeyer said:

Great poem Kurt, do like the 5th stanza and also the repetition of \'Dying in the moment, reborn to eternity\', which in my opinion also could stand alone as a two-liner.

July 21st, 2017 11:16

New Pathway
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Cat.... and I wish the same for you.

Great weekend!

Kurt

July 21st, 2017 10:44

New Pathway
Louis Gibbs said:

The last phrase conveys much truth ... the pathway to eternity points inward, indeed! I appreciate this one, Kurt! Thanks.

July 21st, 2017 10:25

Soul To Repast (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And as always, you are too kind.

Thanks, Christina

Kurt

July 20th, 2017 22:02

Soul To Repast (+3)
Christina8 said:

I can\'t pick my favorite. Superb poetry at it\'s finest!

July 20th, 2017 19:57

Soul To Repast (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And I\'ll be honored every time I read those 3 letters, Fred.

Thanks again

Kurt

July 20th, 2017 18:45

Soul To Repast (+3)
FredPeyer said:

Kurt you are so good a writer, I just keep repeating myself from one poem to the next, or have to try like crazy to come up with new praise. So from now on I will only type TIC (Totally Incredible Creation) to save time writing and reading!

July 20th, 2017 18:28

Soul To Repast (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Q

July 20th, 2017 10:08

Soul To Repast (+3)
Q said:

Nicely done. Great rhythm and rhymes.

July 20th, 2017 09:43

Toll Mine To Pay (+1)
kevin browne said:

such a beauty of a poem here with every word fitting perfectly in place. you don\'t get to read pieces like this very often. beautiful my friend.

July 19th, 2017 15:09

Toll Mine To Pay (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks so much for the very meaningful words. They are
deeply appreciated.

Kurt

July 19th, 2017 11:42



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