Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
You, Me, Us, Et Al (+4)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āYou , Me, Us, Et Alā
A gem of a message encapsulated within your four couplets! Brilliantly done!
These postings are absolutely delightful
and cleverly penned!
...and
āthis is the absolute final timeā
that Iāll...
Iāll let you fill in after the ellipsis!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 07:13
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āYou , Me, Us, Et Alā
A gem of a message encapsulated within your four couplets! Brilliantly done!
These postings are absolutely delightful
and cleverly penned!
...and
āthis is the absolute final timeā
that Iāll...
Iāll let you fill in after the ellipsis!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 07:13
Living Beyond
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I thoroughly enjoyed all three brilliant poems!
⢠āLiving Beyondā
So very happy you were
āReborn a poet
and then set freeā
to write all that you do and globally share your talents that will
ālive beyond wealth
āand majestyā
⢠āThe Fountainā
Brilliantly penned as your muse wanted...I am certain!
āIf the pain is too great,
my heart you may take
āas I suture you back
from the brinkā
Wow! I absolutely love this stanza!!
⢠āWhat Darkness Bringsā
As I was reading this beautiful poem, it reminded me of the night my father died...
āThe sun has now left
with my hopes not bereft
Only the night
āpoints to heaven aboveā
This one I shall read to my mom. It will make her smile!
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poems!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2019 02:22
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I thoroughly enjoyed all three brilliant poems!
⢠āLiving Beyondā
So very happy you were
āReborn a poet
and then set freeā
to write all that you do and globally share your talents that will
ālive beyond wealth
āand majestyā
⢠āThe Fountainā
Brilliantly penned as your muse wanted...I am certain!
āIf the pain is too great,
my heart you may take
āas I suture you back
from the brinkā
Wow! I absolutely love this stanza!!
⢠āWhat Darkness Bringsā
As I was reading this beautiful poem, it reminded me of the night my father died...
āThe sun has now left
with my hopes not bereft
Only the night
āpoints to heaven aboveā
This one I shall read to my mom. It will make her smile!
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poems!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2019 02:22
Shining A Light (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two more super additions...
⢠āThe Geneā
āDNA always proffered as baitā...
I suppose thereās some good and some bad in all of us that we pass down. No one is perfect!
⢠āA Viking Crest Ablazeā
This poem reminded me of the great VIKING series presented on the History channel which I very much enjoyed watching!
Thank you for sharing your superb writings!
Iām looking forward to reading Volume 3.
These April writings are amazing!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2019 01:23
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two more super additions...
⢠āThe Geneā
āDNA always proffered as baitā...
I suppose thereās some good and some bad in all of us that we pass down. No one is perfect!
⢠āA Viking Crest Ablazeā
This poem reminded me of the great VIKING series presented on the History channel which I very much enjoyed watching!
Thank you for sharing your superb writings!
Iām looking forward to reading Volume 3.
These April writings are amazing!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2019 01:23
Shining A Light (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Yes, youāre certainly āShining A Lightā through your segacious words!
~Laura~
January 16th, 2019 10:49
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Yes, youāre certainly āShining A Lightā through your segacious words!
~Laura~
January 16th, 2019 10:49
My Will On Fire (+3)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āMy Will On Fireā
āEach time when it almost mattered,
It mattered not that muchā
Unfortunately, to my detriment, to me it always matters! Itās hard to distance myself! When I have to do so, the pain is always there! I try to justify it...but it never goes away! I tend to compartmentalize!
A lot to think about...
A lot to ponder upon...
Thanks to your poetry...
It shall be done!
~Laura~
January 14th, 2019 15:25
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āMy Will On Fireā
āEach time when it almost mattered,
It mattered not that muchā
Unfortunately, to my detriment, to me it always matters! Itās hard to distance myself! When I have to do so, the pain is always there! I try to justify it...but it never goes away! I tend to compartmentalize!
A lot to think about...
A lot to ponder upon...
Thanks to your poetry...
It shall be done!
~Laura~
January 14th, 2019 15:25
An Orphan\'s Silence (+9)
whisperingquill said:
Truly epic truly epic
Thank you
January 13th, 2019 18:50
whisperingquill said:
Truly epic truly epic
Thank you
January 13th, 2019 18:50
An Orphan\'s Silence (+9)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Exceptional writes...as always!
The first and the last have affected me the most because of this weekendās sad news...the passing of a friend! Hadnāt seen her for two years. We kept in touch via phone conversations and postcards. She never hinted to the fact that she was dying with ovarian cancer. She was the kind of person that wouldnāt share her pain so that we wouldnāt suffer along with her! She dealt with it all alone. Sheās gone at age 59! No more suffering for her! Thatās the good part.
The bad part...
I wasnāt there to see her one more time!
~Laura~
January 13th, 2019 18:45
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Exceptional writes...as always!
The first and the last have affected me the most because of this weekendās sad news...the passing of a friend! Hadnāt seen her for two years. We kept in touch via phone conversations and postcards. She never hinted to the fact that she was dying with ovarian cancer. She was the kind of person that wouldnāt share her pain so that we wouldnāt suffer along with her! She dealt with it all alone. Sheās gone at age 59! No more suffering for her! Thatās the good part.
The bad part...
I wasnāt there to see her one more time!
~Laura~
January 13th, 2019 18:45
An Orphan\'s Silence (+9)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you, Claudelle. I always appreciate
your taking the time to read.
Kurt
January 12th, 2019 11:52
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you, Claudelle. I always appreciate
your taking the time to read.
Kurt
January 12th, 2019 11:52
It Was All Of That (+5)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
And I wish that for you!
Great weekend!
Kurt
January 11th, 2019 21:54
Kurt Philip Behm said:
And I wish that for you!
Great weekend!
Kurt
January 11th, 2019 21:54
It Was All Of That (+5)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āIt Was All Of Thatā
... and more!...
...once I stopped overthinking it!
Exceptionally expressed to my liking! Loved it!
~Laura~
P.S.- I remain spellbound with your poems!
January 11th, 2019 21:43
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āIt Was All Of Thatā
... and more!...
...once I stopped overthinking it!
Exceptionally expressed to my liking! Loved it!
~Laura~
P.S.- I remain spellbound with your poems!
January 11th, 2019 21:43
It Was All Of That (+5)
Aislinn Wilson said:
All individually good and unique, the first being my favorite. May I ask when you included three poems in one though?
January 11th, 2019 13:48
Aislinn Wilson said:
All individually good and unique, the first being my favorite. May I ask when you included three poems in one though?
January 11th, 2019 13:48
The Wages Of Sin (+4)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āCream Always Risesā
So, so true!
And...
āThe truth never captive,
enchainedāor then ownedā
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
January 10th, 2019 15:14
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āCream Always Risesā
So, so true!
And...
āThe truth never captive,
enchainedāor then ownedā
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
January 10th, 2019 15:14
The Wages Of Sin (+4)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One rhetorical question for thee...
How far down did that elevator go?
Metaphorically brilliant!
~Laura~
January 10th, 2019 11:19
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One rhetorical question for thee...
How far down did that elevator go?
Metaphorically brilliant!
~Laura~
January 10th, 2019 11:19
Indecision (+8)
Neville said:
thought provoking and thoroughly enjoyed.... is this your way of getting around the one post per day rule.... I like it regardless..... N
January 9th, 2019 13:19
Neville said:
thought provoking and thoroughly enjoyed.... is this your way of getting around the one post per day rule.... I like it regardless..... N
January 9th, 2019 13:19
Indecision (+8)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m back to editing \'An Anthony Of Perception\' Vol #3, and still have 500
pages left to go. I\'m hoping to do 10-15 pages a day and be done by the
end of March. I\'d like to send it to the publisher before April 1.
Then, it\'s on to the next Cutty adventure...
Thanks
Kurt
January 9th, 2019 13:06
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m back to editing \'An Anthony Of Perception\' Vol #3, and still have 500
pages left to go. I\'m hoping to do 10-15 pages a day and be done by the
end of March. I\'d like to send it to the publisher before April 1.
Then, it\'s on to the next Cutty adventure...
Thanks
Kurt
January 9th, 2019 13:06
Indecision (+8)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Youāre on a roll!š
Keep on...
...rolling...
...rolling...
...rolling...
.................
āThese troubles will pass
āand my faith will move onā
~Laura~
January 9th, 2019 12:50
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Youāre on a roll!š
Keep on...
...rolling...
...rolling...
...rolling...
.................
āThese troubles will pass
āand my faith will move onā
~Laura~
January 9th, 2019 12:50
New Forests Call
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A young man\'s wistful dalliance...
:-)
January 8th, 2019 09:42
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A young man\'s wistful dalliance...
:-)
January 8th, 2019 09:42
New Forests Call
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Upon reading this metaphorically astounding poem, I can find myself intricately woven throughout the penned words of your poetry...
Especially within...
āNew forests call, as Spring awaits
āmy love to loan once moreā
~Laura~
January 8th, 2019 00:31
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Upon reading this metaphorically astounding poem, I can find myself intricately woven throughout the penned words of your poetry...
Especially within...
āNew forests call, as Spring awaits
āmy love to loan once moreā
~Laura~
January 8th, 2019 00:31
My Spirit Enthroned
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āEach choice that I madeāevery promise I kept,
my spirit enthroned sovereign and newā
Amazingly beautiful and comforting!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2019 22:32
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āEach choice that I madeāevery promise I kept,
my spirit enthroned sovereign and newā
Amazingly beautiful and comforting!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2019 22:32
Goodbye (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āGoodbye
Ominous and intense...
Resonating and relatable!
Itās hard to let go and say goodbye...especially to a close friend.
We begin a relationship with the best of intentions! We nurture that special friendship; but oftentimes we can get lost somewhere along the way...without realizing it!
It is tough and painful when it happens! We have to let go and bear the pain...to live again!
⢠āBeyondā
Itās beyond the words that weāll ascertain the meaning!
Two super poems written in your special style!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2019 17:38
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āGoodbye
Ominous and intense...
Resonating and relatable!
Itās hard to let go and say goodbye...especially to a close friend.
We begin a relationship with the best of intentions! We nurture that special friendship; but oftentimes we can get lost somewhere along the way...without realizing it!
It is tough and painful when it happens! We have to let go and bear the pain...to live again!
⢠āBeyondā
Itās beyond the words that weāll ascertain the meaning!
Two super poems written in your special style!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2019 17:38
A New Path
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. This is the beginning of a poem
you need to write...
\"Words invisible...
actions not!\"
Unspoken dreams
our futures caught...
January 5th, 2019 10:21
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. This is the beginning of a poem
you need to write...
\"Words invisible...
actions not!\"
Unspoken dreams
our futures caught...
January 5th, 2019 10:21
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