Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



You, Me, Us, Et Al (+4)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• ā€œYou , Me, Us, Et Alā€
A gem of a message encapsulated within your four couplets! Brilliantly done!


These postings are absolutely delightful
and cleverly penned!

...and
ā€˜this is the absolute final time’
that I’ll...


I’ll let you fill in after the ellipsis!

~Laura~

January 18th, 2019 07:13

Living Beyond
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

I thoroughly enjoyed all three brilliant poems!

• ā€œLiving Beyondā€
So very happy you were
ā€˜Reborn a poet
and then set free’
to write all that you do and globally share your talents that will
ā€˜live beyond wealth
—and majesty’

• ā€œThe Fountainā€
Brilliantly penned as your muse wanted...I am certain!
ā€˜If the pain is too great,
my heart you may take
—as I suture you back
from the brink’
Wow! I absolutely love this stanza!!

• ā€œWhat Darkness Bringsā€
As I was reading this beautiful poem, it reminded me of the night my father died...
ā€˜The sun has now left
with my hopes not bereft

Only the night
—points to heaven above’

This one I shall read to my mom. It will make her smile!

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poems!

~Laura~

January 17th, 2019 02:22

Shining A Light (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Two more super additions...

• ā€œThe Geneā€

ā€˜DNA always proffered as bait’...
I suppose there’s some good and some bad in all of us that we pass down. No one is perfect!

• ā€œA Viking Crest Ablazeā€

This poem reminded me of the great VIKING series presented on the History channel which I very much enjoyed watching!

Thank you for sharing your superb writings!
I’m looking forward to reading Volume 3.
These April writings are amazing!

~Laura~


January 17th, 2019 01:23

Shining A Light (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Very kind. Thanks Laura.

Kurt

January 16th, 2019 11:28

Shining A Light (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Yes, you’re certainly ā€œShining A Lightā€ through your segacious words!

~Laura~



January 16th, 2019 10:49

My Will On Fire (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• ā€œMy Will On Fireā€

ā€œEach time when it almost mattered,
It mattered not that muchā€

Unfortunately, to my detriment, to me it always matters! It’s hard to distance myself! When I have to do so, the pain is always there! I try to justify it...but it never goes away! I tend to compartmentalize!

A lot to think about...
A lot to ponder upon...
Thanks to your poetry...
It shall be done!

~Laura~

January 14th, 2019 15:25

An Orphan\'s Silence (+9)
whisperingquill said:

Truly epic truly epic
Thank you

January 13th, 2019 18:50

An Orphan\'s Silence (+9)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Exceptional writes...as always!

The first and the last have affected me the most because of this weekend’s sad news...the passing of a friend! Hadn’t seen her for two years. We kept in touch via phone conversations and postcards. She never hinted to the fact that she was dying with ovarian cancer. She was the kind of person that wouldn’t share her pain so that we wouldn’t suffer along with her! She dealt with it all alone. She’s gone at age 59! No more suffering for her! That’s the good part.
The bad part...
I wasn’t there to see her one more time!

~Laura~

January 13th, 2019 18:45

An Orphan\'s Silence (+9)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thank you, Claudelle. I always appreciate
your taking the time to read.

Kurt

January 12th, 2019 11:52

It Was All Of That (+5)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And I wish that for you!

Great weekend!

Kurt

January 11th, 2019 21:54

It Was All Of That (+5)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• ā€œIt Was All Of Thatā€
... and more!...
...once I stopped overthinking it!

Exceptionally expressed to my liking! Loved it!

~Laura~

P.S.- I remain spellbound with your poems!





January 11th, 2019 21:43

It Was All Of That (+5)
Aislinn Wilson said:

All individually good and unique, the first being my favorite. May I ask when you included three poems in one though?

January 11th, 2019 13:48

The Wages Of Sin (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura

January 10th, 2019 15:42

The Wages Of Sin (+4)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• ā€œCream Always Risesā€
So, so true!
And...
ā€˜The truth never captive,
enchained—or then owned’

Beautifully expressed!

~Laura~


January 10th, 2019 15:14

The Wages Of Sin (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

All the way I\'m afraid!

:-)

January 10th, 2019 11:40

The Wages Of Sin (+4)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

One rhetorical question for thee...

How far down did that elevator go?


Metaphorically brilliant!


~Laura~

January 10th, 2019 11:19

Indecision (+8)
Neville said:

thought provoking and thoroughly enjoyed.... is this your way of getting around the one post per day rule.... I like it regardless..... N

January 9th, 2019 13:19

Indecision (+8)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I\'m back to editing \'An Anthony Of Perception\' Vol #3, and still have 500
pages left to go. I\'m hoping to do 10-15 pages a day and be done by the
end of March. I\'d like to send it to the publisher before April 1.

Then, it\'s on to the next Cutty adventure...

Thanks

Kurt

January 9th, 2019 13:06

Indecision (+8)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

You’re on a roll!šŸ˜„
Keep on...
...rolling...
...rolling...
...rolling...
.................

ā€œThese troubles will pass
—and my faith will move onā€


~Laura~

January 9th, 2019 12:50

Indecision (+8)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Good morning and thank you!

January 9th, 2019 11:18

Indecision (+8)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Wow!
That’s an eye opener!

~Laura~

January 9th, 2019 11:12

New Forests Call
Kurt Philip Behm said:

A young man\'s wistful dalliance...

:-)

January 8th, 2019 09:42

New Forests Call
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Upon reading this metaphorically astounding poem, I can find myself intricately woven throughout the penned words of your poetry...

Especially within...

ā€œNew forests call, as Spring awaits
—my love to loan once moreā€


~Laura~

January 8th, 2019 00:31

My Spirit Enthroned
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

ā€œEach choice that I made—every promise I kept,
my spirit enthroned sovereign and newā€

Amazingly beautiful and comforting!

~Laura~

January 7th, 2019 22:32

New Forests Call
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks so much!

January 7th, 2019 09:28

New Forests Call
psychofemale said:

Beautifully written :)

January 6th, 2019 22:31

Goodbye (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• ā€œGoodbye
Ominous and intense...
Resonating and relatable!
It’s hard to let go and say goodbye...especially to a close friend.
We begin a relationship with the best of intentions! We nurture that special friendship; but oftentimes we can get lost somewhere along the way...without realizing it!
It is tough and painful when it happens! We have to let go and bear the pain...to live again!

• ā€œBeyondā€
It’s beyond the words that we’ll ascertain the meaning!

Two super poems written in your special style!

Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~


January 6th, 2019 17:38

Goodbye (+1)
psychofemale said:

Nicely done :)

January 5th, 2019 15:08

Goodbye (+1)
MrNobody40 said:

Very well spoken

January 5th, 2019 13:44

A New Path
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks. This is the beginning of a poem
you need to write...

\"Words invisible...
actions not!\"
Unspoken dreams
our futures caught...

January 5th, 2019 10:21



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