Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



To My Beloved Daughter Melissa (On Your 40th Birthday)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
This is the most beautiful
piece of writing I’ve read
today! Children are precious!
A very Happy Birthday to
your special daughter! God
Bless you both!

~Laura~

May 2nd, 2018 06:31

Headstone Of Sorrow
onepauly said:

the bones picked clean.
the clean bones gone.
we shall have stars
at elbow and foot.


May 1st, 2018 17:51

Headstone Of Sorrow
onepauly said:

I don\'t want to be buried
i\'ll accept creamation.
then my brother tells me,
it will cost about 4000 dollars.
and he\'s the one taking care of my money.!!!

May 1st, 2018 14:19

The First Law (+1)
onepauly said:

and death shall have no dominion.

April 30th, 2018 08:38

Promises Kept
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks

April 27th, 2018 11:10

Promises Kept
onepauly said:

yes, music is good for the soul.

April 27th, 2018 10:51

Life\'s Greatest Curse (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

“Life’s greatest curse of all”

Well stated...
Concise and Powerful!


~Laura~


April 25th, 2018 10:18

In My Heart Delights
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Oh yes, I wish I could tick as fast as they can! They’re always ticking...as they’re walking, sitting, laying down...tick, tick, tick! I do have one rule in my home ! While we’re at the dinner table, no iPhones, iWatches, iPads, etc. to tick!
That’s the best I can do!

An enjoyable read!

~Laura~

April 24th, 2018 20:40

Truth Ensues
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Great last two lines...
“Those new words spoken
—where truth ensues”

One never knows what may eventuate!

~Laura~

April 22nd, 2018 15:47

Truth Ensues
onepauly said:

refreshing. don\'t give up the fight.

April 22nd, 2018 14:28

Longing Befriends
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I have no answers—only questions.

:-)

April 21st, 2018 20:51

Longing Befriends
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I\'m drawn to the questions, Laura; the answers are up to you.

Thanks for reading.

Kurt

April 21st, 2018 17:47

Longing Befriends
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Your fine write poses very thought provoking and interesting questions! In all honesty, I cannot answer any of them with an absolute yes!

You’ve probably asked yourself the same questions. I wonder what your answers would be?

~Laura~

April 21st, 2018 17:32

The Present Looms
Nicholas Browning said:

Your finishing stanzas never fail to impress. Your writing style is concrete and it\'s a refreshing thing to see every time I read your work. I don\'t know if I\'ve mentioned this before, but I\'m also from North Carolina. Small world.

April 20th, 2018 03:28

The Present Looms
Kurt Philip Behm said:

What I was hoping for!

Thanks Laura

Lirt

April 19th, 2018 18:43

The Present Looms
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

A super write that made me think about many things from my past, my present, and what is to be for me! There is “One imagine” that “flashes bright and clear” that I look forward to!

~Laura~

April 19th, 2018 18:41

Verbal Conflict
Christina8 said:

Really liked this one, Kurt!

April 13th, 2018 17:38

Where The When Begins
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

The When begins
right here and now...

~Laura~

April 13th, 2018 15:19

Verbal Conflict
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Another gem from your well written collection!
This one is especially meaningful because the readers will interpret it as they see fit...whether it relates to their own experiences or to their own wishful thinking! All subject to one’s own interpretation!

“Poetic dyslexia...”
“Emotions in crisis...”
“—a verbal divide “

Yes, indeed...
...much to my liking!

~Laura~




April 13th, 2018 15:13

Where The When Begins
Nicholas Browning said:

It\'s been a while good sir, but it seems that you still have the skills. Well done.
The first two lines hit like a hammer by the way.

April 13th, 2018 02:41

The Wings Of An Angel
Kurt Philip Behm said:

It\'s one from my \'Book Of Prayers.\'

Thanks Laura

Kurt

April 10th, 2018 22:52

The Moment Demands (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thank you, Laura

April 10th, 2018 22:50

The Wings Of An Angel
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
A beautiful poem...pleasant, soothing, comforting, and reassuring! I enjoyed reading it in its entirety! I especially loved the words...

“Where the wings of an Angel
—carry words into song”

Heavenly!

~Laura~

April 10th, 2018 21:24

The Moment Demands (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Two great writes! My favorite lines...

“As today takes its pound of flesh”...

“The devil left crying—salvation unbound”

Very interesting reads! Thank you for sharing your talents!

~Laura~

April 10th, 2018 21:05

Where Memories Can Run (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Things we all share that make us human. Thanks so much for reading again.

Great weekend!

Kurt

April 7th, 2018 10:36

Where Memories Can Run (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Four great writes!
“I like faces that show character”...
I see a lot of character in your face!
I also like that “bridge built” between the old and the young!

”Only For You”...
This poem is extremely meaningful for me! I won’t quote from this one because I would have to quote the entire poem! Very, very dear to my heart!

I vividly remember myself when I was 17! He left me because I was too young! He said he’d come back in a few years. I waited and hoped, but it was never meant to be! The older I get, the more vividly I remember...and “in every memory I see your face—your eyes still closed to me”...emotionally rich and very relatable!

Phenomenal writing ✍️
In your debt...as always...

~Laura~

April 6th, 2018 22:25

Where Memories Can Run (+3)
w c said:

These are outstanding.

April 6th, 2018 20:16

Where Memories Can Run (+3)
Christina8 said:

These are spectacular!

April 6th, 2018 17:39

Where Memories Can Run (+3)
Eugene S. said:

Awesome!

April 6th, 2018 13:34

Memory Exhales
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words grew into this excellent write Kurt.

April 6th, 2018 00:52



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