Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
The Wings Of An Angel
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
A beautiful poem...pleasant, soothing, comforting, and reassuring! I enjoyed reading it in its entirety! I especially loved the words...
“Where the wings of an Angel
—carry words into song”
Heavenly!
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 21:24
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
A beautiful poem...pleasant, soothing, comforting, and reassuring! I enjoyed reading it in its entirety! I especially loved the words...
“Where the wings of an Angel
—carry words into song”
Heavenly!
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 21:24
The Moment Demands (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Two great writes! My favorite lines...
“As today takes its pound of flesh”...
“The devil left crying—salvation unbound”
Very interesting reads! Thank you for sharing your talents!
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 21:05
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Two great writes! My favorite lines...
“As today takes its pound of flesh”...
“The devil left crying—salvation unbound”
Very interesting reads! Thank you for sharing your talents!
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 21:05
Where Memories Can Run (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Things we all share that make us human. Thanks so much for reading again.
Great weekend!
Kurt
April 7th, 2018 10:36
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Things we all share that make us human. Thanks so much for reading again.
Great weekend!
Kurt
April 7th, 2018 10:36
Where Memories Can Run (+3)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Four great writes!
“I like faces that show character”...
I see a lot of character in your face!
I also like that “bridge built” between the old and the young!
”Only For You”...
This poem is extremely meaningful for me! I won’t quote from this one because I would have to quote the entire poem! Very, very dear to my heart!
I vividly remember myself when I was 17! He left me because I was too young! He said he’d come back in a few years. I waited and hoped, but it was never meant to be! The older I get, the more vividly I remember...and “in every memory I see your face—your eyes still closed to me”...emotionally rich and very relatable!
Phenomenal writing ✍️
In your debt...as always...
~Laura~
April 6th, 2018 22:25
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Four great writes!
“I like faces that show character”...
I see a lot of character in your face!
I also like that “bridge built” between the old and the young!
”Only For You”...
This poem is extremely meaningful for me! I won’t quote from this one because I would have to quote the entire poem! Very, very dear to my heart!
I vividly remember myself when I was 17! He left me because I was too young! He said he’d come back in a few years. I waited and hoped, but it was never meant to be! The older I get, the more vividly I remember...and “in every memory I see your face—your eyes still closed to me”...emotionally rich and very relatable!
Phenomenal writing ✍️
In your debt...as always...
~Laura~
April 6th, 2018 22:25
Memory Exhales
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words grew into this excellent write Kurt.
April 6th, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words grew into this excellent write Kurt.
April 6th, 2018 00:52
Memory Exhales
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
What an entrance!!
The first two lines pull like a magnet...
An Exquisite write! Dare I say that you and your Muse are very much in sync?! She hasn’t left you...that’s for certain!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 18:05
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
What an entrance!!
The first two lines pull like a magnet...
An Exquisite write! Dare I say that you and your Muse are very much in sync?! She hasn’t left you...that’s for certain!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 18:05
The Fire They Share
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
A fine truthful and realistic write! Have been tumbled and hurled a few times! Painful indeed!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 09:52
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
A fine truthful and realistic write! Have been tumbled and hurled a few times! Painful indeed!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 09:52
The Silence Was Death (+3)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Great writes! Of the four, “Waiting For The Muse To Come” is my favorite!
“Her presence upon me
her breath an attack”
It seems her inspiration could not contain your “sword”! I’m really ecstatic about that! A brilliant piece! Loved it!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 09:43
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Great writes! Of the four, “Waiting For The Muse To Come” is my favorite!
“Her presence upon me
her breath an attack”
It seems her inspiration could not contain your “sword”! I’m really ecstatic about that! A brilliant piece! Loved it!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 09:43
Solo Uno
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
“Solo Uno”...
oppure...
Uno Solo...
___________
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 11:31
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
“Solo Uno”...
oppure...
Uno Solo...
___________
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 11:31
Voices That Call (+2)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
...and those voices do call!
You are the poet of veritas!
Brilliant!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 12:51
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
...and those voices do call!
You are the poet of veritas!
Brilliant!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 12:51
What They\'ll Never Escape (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Oh yes...
We can run,
We can hide, but..
We can’t escape!
Something I learned
a long time ago!
An illuminating write!
~Laura~
March 29th, 2018 11:49
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Oh yes...
We can run,
We can hide, but..
We can’t escape!
Something I learned
a long time ago!
An illuminating write!
~Laura~
March 29th, 2018 11:49
False Time Belies (+3)
Laura🌻 said:
“A convenience of the past”...
...a great line, Kurt!
The past is past...
that’s a relief!
The present will be
the past...
Tomorrow will be
today...
Today will be yesterday...
THE PAST!
“All conflict over”...
~Laura~
March 28th, 2018 10:34
Laura🌻 said:
“A convenience of the past”...
...a great line, Kurt!
The past is past...
that’s a relief!
The present will be
the past...
Tomorrow will be
today...
Today will be yesterday...
THE PAST!
“All conflict over”...
~Laura~
March 28th, 2018 10:34
They Flow (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Two fine writes, Kurt!
Let’s see what tomorrow will bring...
once we’ve dealt with today!
~Laura~
March 28th, 2018 10:26
Laura🌻 said:
Two fine writes, Kurt!
Let’s see what tomorrow will bring...
once we’ve dealt with today!
~Laura~
March 28th, 2018 10:26
One Truth (+2)
Laura🌻 said:
...and I see many who wear such faces!
Thank you for your candid share, Kurt!
~Laura~
March 26th, 2018 13:17
Laura🌻 said:
...and I see many who wear such faces!
Thank you for your candid share, Kurt!
~Laura~
March 26th, 2018 13:17
Concrete Jungles
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
A metaphorically rich write which I enjoyed reading! It did make me think of that “rat race”!
You’re so spot on with your response to Lorna’s comment!
We are “most vulnerable when they overload the senses”! We do need to distance ourselves from that city’s wildness if we want to survive...intact!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 09:56
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
A metaphorically rich write which I enjoyed reading! It did make me think of that “rat race”!
You’re so spot on with your response to Lorna’s comment!
We are “most vulnerable when they overload the senses”! We do need to distance ourselves from that city’s wildness if we want to survive...intact!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 09:56
Beyond The Now
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Intriguing to say the least!!
Very open ended!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 09:02
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Intriguing to say the least!!
Very open ended!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 09:02
Concrete Jungles
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much Hood, I\'m glad it resonated. Thanks for
reading.
Kurt
March 25th, 2018 07:56
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much Hood, I\'m glad it resonated. Thanks for
reading.
Kurt
March 25th, 2018 07:56
Concrete Jungles
Lorna said:
On a sunny day a City can be fun to visit - and then it closes in and becomes an overcrowded jail....... oh back to the country........
March 25th, 2018 05:21
Lorna said:
On a sunny day a City can be fun to visit - and then it closes in and becomes an overcrowded jail....... oh back to the country........
March 25th, 2018 05:21
Hunted By A Lie
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Exact life? Not exactly!
...and almost all the
mirrors have been taken
down! Great last line!
~Laura~
March 24th, 2018 06:55
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Exact life? Not exactly!
...and almost all the
mirrors have been taken
down! Great last line!
~Laura~
March 24th, 2018 06:55
Last Check To Cash (+4)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
“My Soul To Shine”
A very clever write...
I especially like the last line,
“My soul there to shine”
~~~
“Our New Beginning”
A beautiful write for your
grandchildren...
“As all wishes turn to song”...
Precious!
~~~
“Last Check To Cash”
“Stepping into eternity’s vault...
Powerful words!
~~~
“Till Our Wishes”
My absolute favorite
Very, very special...for me!
I’m reading a lot into this one!
~Laura~
March 22nd, 2018 17:21
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
“My Soul To Shine”
A very clever write...
I especially like the last line,
“My soul there to shine”
~~~
“Our New Beginning”
A beautiful write for your
grandchildren...
“As all wishes turn to song”...
Precious!
~~~
“Last Check To Cash”
“Stepping into eternity’s vault...
Powerful words!
~~~
“Till Our Wishes”
My absolute favorite
Very, very special...for me!
I’m reading a lot into this one!
~Laura~
March 22nd, 2018 17:21
Will I Ever (+2)
Laura🌻 said:
I see you’ve added a
second gem! Its last
stanza is absolutely
beautiful...
especially the words,
“New light from within
—here forever to shine”
March 21st, 2018 15:04
Laura🌻 said:
I see you’ve added a
second gem! Its last
stanza is absolutely
beautiful...
especially the words,
“New light from within
—here forever to shine”
March 21st, 2018 15:04
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