Goodbye Tomorrow
Jo March said:

This such a beautiful poem! I especially liked the lines \"Muses cry / as shadows fade / No tracks to follow / no path within\" and \"This moment orphaned / the night so long\". It\'s so beautiful. It makes me think of how important it is to never lose hope. The path is inside us. Nobody points us to it. It should be within us and if it isn\'t then we really are lost. I think that our hopes fade only when we have gotten off our path. Thank you for the poem. I really enjoyed it.


October 13th, 2018 13:33

And Nothing At All (+7)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Eight SUPER postings!

You began with “wine”
and ended with one of
your “Lauras”!
Two of my favorite subjects!

“Bringing with it everything
—and nothing at all”

“Until capturing myself
—in the words of your song”

I very much enjoyed and appreciated reading your exceptional poetry!

~Laura~

October 11th, 2018 11:12

Myself, I Bring (+5)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Two more little gems for my reading enjoyment!

Veritas Vincit!

~Laura~


October 9th, 2018 18:02

Myself, I Bring (+5)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

One of your muses is working overtime!
Lucky for us, your readers!

Two great reads!
I especially liked the couplet...
“Living in a rented room
—to me, myself I bring”

~Laura~


October 9th, 2018 07:30

Legacy Of Fear (+7)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Six outstanding writes!
Of course, I truly enjoyed reading the second and the third! They made me feel like I should get up and dance all the way to the Nittany Mountains! They’re are calling! 😉
Your muse certainly inspired you to “dance” the night away in that “dingy remote garage apartment “and be forever yours. Her inspiration delights your readers...especially yours truly! It is an honor to share her name!
Truly amazing! Thank you for sharing these gems!

~Laura~


October 8th, 2018 18:22

In The End (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Two super writes!

•A perfect description of a politician!

•Yes, you are giving us the best gift of all...
YOUR WRITINGS!

~Laura~



October 7th, 2018 05:06

I Stand Accused (+4)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Sentiments beautifully expressed!

~Laura~

October 6th, 2018 13:43

Three Messages (+3)
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! These words were excellent. Nice work!

October 6th, 2018 10:59

Looking Back (+7)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Also a favorite of mine :-)

October 5th, 2018 10:39

Looking Back (+7)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Three splendid gems!

If other men see themselves in you, this world will be humanity’s safe haven!

You’re sharing so much with so many! Thank you for your gift to us!


~Laura~





October 4th, 2018 11:50

Bounty Of Hell (+6)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• Summer Song

A joyous “song” to wake up to!☀️
The four seasons of our life...
so beautifully expressed! Every couplet touched my heart and soul!

~Laura~

October 4th, 2018 09:26

Bounty Of Hell (+6)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

I’ve been reading the poems you’ve posted today many times over! Most of them I’m associating with the subject we commented on yesterday! I can’t get it out of my mind...for now!

“Headstone Forever Blank” made me think of the homeless man found dead in the street! So sad!

Superb writes as always!

~Laura~



October 3rd, 2018 16:03

Demon Lie Exposed (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Tamara, most of what the good Sisters taught me I have carried
with me, but some of the precepts they were charged with enforcing I
never believed—even as an 8 year old.

I adore the concept of the Holy Trinity, but the other concept they taught,
that only Catholics go to heaven, I knew was flawed and ludicrous from the start.

Anyway, the good thing was it started me to think, and after College and
Graduate School as a Philosophy-Theology student—I really majored in
\'Hypocrisy Revealed.\'

And no, it did not endear me to my Jesuit Professors.

Thanks for reading.

Kurt

October 2nd, 2018 15:02

Crossing Over—Turned Around (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Two super writes...especially
“The Perpetual Present”!
That is the longest write you’ve ever posted since I’ve known you! I’m almost positive that it will be included in your anticipated Anthology 3! If it isn’t, it should be...in my humble opinion.

Reading “The Perpetual Present” reminded me of the following quote by Lao Tzu...

“If you are depressed you
are living in the past.
If you are anxious you are
living in the future.
If you are at peace you are
living in the present.”

~Laura~


October 1st, 2018 16:47

Last Reflection
Kurt Philip Behm said:

It came to me in the middle of the night—so yes!

Thanks Laura

September 30th, 2018 23:49