Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



No Place To Hide (+4)
Frank J III said:

there are times I would like to hide - life can be mean


June 6th, 2019 08:13

Yours Alone (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:



June 4th, 2019 14:13

Yours Alone (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

The second one is attributable to
Ptesan Wi.

It was painted on the outside of her
Tipi.

June 4th, 2019 14:11

Yours Alone (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Two quotes so far from
ā€œJumping Into The Darknessā€...

Iā€™m loving them!šŸ’–

June 4th, 2019 12:06

Yours Alone (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Lauraā€”all a writer can hope for.

June 4th, 2019 11:23

Yours Alone (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œYours Aloneā€

ā€˜The choice begets freedom
ā€”yours alone to decideā€™

A super couplet that screams...
YES...my choice alone!

Inspirational...for me!

~Laura~




June 4th, 2019 11:14

Short & Dear (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œPick Your Poisonā€

ā€˜Boozeā€”Broadsā€”The Bibleā€™

Does the order matter?


Btw...
Is there a barstool at Captain Tonyā€™s with your name on it?

~Laura~



June 3rd, 2019 13:55

Short & Dear (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Very interesting postings today!
That dinner with Jerry Jeff Walker mustā€™ve been interesting!

~Laura~

June 3rd, 2019 11:14

Self-Implosion (+6)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Once it happens, there\'s no going back.

:-)

June 2nd, 2019 11:55

Self-Implosion (+6)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œSelf-Implosionā€

It sounds to me like a purge is in order!
The sooner the better!

~Laura~

June 2nd, 2019 11:50

Field Theory (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

As you can tell, I love her too. I\'ve carried her
inside me all my life.

June 1st, 2019 16:38

Field Theory (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

I Love Adrian!
What an incredible character!šŸ’–

~Laura~

June 1st, 2019 15:44

With Time (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œWings To My Flightā€

WOW...

I, as one of your readers, am humbled by this poem. Being a mere grain of sand among the ā€˜quarter of a million peopleā€™ reading your poetry, I (as other readers) am honored of the acknowledgement you have granted us of being part of those ā€˜wingsā€™ to your ā€˜flightā€™!
I do find solace when I read your work! Your writings are well thought out!

ā€˜I feel like I know them
when I write late at nightā€™

ā€˜As they call through the darkness
ā€”giving wings to my flightā€™

As the reader, the feeling is mutual!

This amazing poem has confirmed the meaning of CONNECTEDNESS!!

~Laura~





June 1st, 2019 11:41

Field Theory (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Usually the winner.

June 1st, 2019 11:11

With Time (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And again, your comments are most kind. I\'m so glad
you enjoy them. My best to your Aunt.

Kurt

May 31st, 2019 10:26

With Time (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œWith Timeā€

ā€˜With time,ā€™
meaningful wishes and desires fulfilled!

A super write!
Love it!

~Laura~


May 31st, 2019 08:52

Is There (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, to me it\'s a CATEGORICAL NO across the board.

Kurt

May 30th, 2019 12:30

Is There (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œIs Thereā€

Great poem to reflect upon!

My reflections upon the four couplets...

*It depends to whom you have to tell it.
*It depends whose lie it is.
*Thereā€™s always a choice.
* No! Any time I want saved, it shall so be!

~Laura~



May 30th, 2019 10:20

Walking With Verse (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Can I get another cup of coffee before we leave?

:-)

May 29th, 2019 15:06

Walking With Verse (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

ā€¢ ā€œLocked In Kayentaā€

Quit my job?!

Absolutely...

Will not keep MOTHER waiting...

I shall not disappoint her!

Sheā€™s an irresistible beauty...

...a beauty to be revered!

May 29th, 2019 14:54

Walking With Verse (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Yesā€”WARM!

May 29th, 2019 12:16

Walking With Verse (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œWalking With Verseā€
Filled with great images!
I especially liked...

ā€˜Deep down where itā€™s warmā€™...

I envision this as a wonderful nook for those formed words to cluster!

~Laura~




May 29th, 2019 11:35

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Nice take! Thanks for reading.

May 29th, 2019 10:41

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œSymbiosis Rebornā€
Iā€™ve read this poem several times. Each time Iā€™ve read it, the following interpretation (mine) keeps recurring...

I see two individuals reconnecting after an interrupted relationship! It seems that the one whoā€™s speaking craves for that interrupted relationship to be whole again!

I enjoyed reading each word...and while reading, I thought about its relatability!
Quite interesting...to say the least!

~Laura~



May 29th, 2019 09:35

A Reckoning (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

A great well penned poem my friend!

Youā€™re spot on with the four tercets! The fourth sums it all up...

ā€˜ā€˜In all things
thereā€™s is a reckoning
ā€”where truth and lies atoneā€™ā€™

Much to reflect upon!

~Laura~



May 28th, 2019 10:05

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Tristan. My son is named Trystan (with a Y).

Great name...

Kurt

May 27th, 2019 13:24

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Great writes. I love the spiritual realities behind each of them. Truly deep and profound poems.

May 27th, 2019 13:20

Sleep Well My Loveā€”Goodbye (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

It\'s possible I could have posted it before, but my notes don\'t show that.

Thanks

Kurt

May 25th, 2019 16:11

Sleep Well My Loveā€”Goodbye (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œSleep Well My Love
ā€”Goodbyeā€

This poem appears to be very familiar!
Three possibilities...
1) maybe you posted it once before...
2) maybe Iā€™ve dreamt it...
3) or perhaps Iā€™ve lived it...

Whichever one it is,
Iā€™ve enjoyed reading it!

ā€¢ ā€œA Joy / A Curseā€
With your permission, Iā€™d like to change the pronouns !šŸ˜‰

ā€¢ ā€œEmptiness Revealsā€
At times ā€˜Emptiness Revealsā€™ itself at the most inopportune time!
A revealing piece!

~Laura~

May 25th, 2019 15:27

Treasure The Silence (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Truly my honor...

Kurt

May 24th, 2019 09:25



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