Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
To Always Return (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you see,
the more you want to seeā¦
the more you want to listen to those voices that always bring you back.
It is part of your existence.
I truly sense your latest visit in these writings.
You travel out West on your bike and I travel through the pages of āSearching For Crazy Horseā. It is my go to whenever you reference your trips out West.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:32
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you see,
the more you want to seeā¦
the more you want to listen to those voices that always bring you back.
It is part of your existence.
I truly sense your latest visit in these writings.
You travel out West on your bike and I travel through the pages of āSearching For Crazy Horseā. It is my go to whenever you reference your trips out West.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:32
The Ostrich
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many with their āhead in the sandā and facts be d*****!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 21st, 2021 15:08
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many with their āhead in the sandā and facts be d*****!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 21st, 2021 15:08
The Indian Sign
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ask not for whom the bell tollsā¦
Kurt
September 21st, 2021 10:23
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ask not for whom the bell tollsā¦
Kurt
September 21st, 2021 10:23
The Indian Sign
L. B. Mek said:
everywhere there\'s a few
\'like minded\' gathering of people
preaching to their own choir
creating an insulated cocoon of a \'safe space\' for each other, only..
you can assume, in short order
\'a pseudo aristocracy will manifest\'
from within that group
and those few, \'chosen\'
will devolve
fighting to keep that taste of power and influence, they now crave..
\'rinse and repeat\'
times millenniums, and spread it like a plague: conquering a planet
and that\'s why
anytime, we humans try to govern ourselves, inevitably
we end-up, sabotaging ourselves...
September 21st, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
everywhere there\'s a few
\'like minded\' gathering of people
preaching to their own choir
creating an insulated cocoon of a \'safe space\' for each other, only..
you can assume, in short order
\'a pseudo aristocracy will manifest\'
from within that group
and those few, \'chosen\'
will devolve
fighting to keep that taste of power and influence, they now crave..
\'rinse and repeat\'
times millenniums, and spread it like a plague: conquering a planet
and that\'s why
anytime, we humans try to govern ourselves, inevitably
we end-up, sabotaging ourselves...
September 21st, 2021 04:31
Sum Zero Sum
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasure⦠thanks as always for the
enlightened response.
Kurt
September 20th, 2021 08:46
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasure⦠thanks as always for the
enlightened response.
Kurt
September 20th, 2021 08:46
Sum Zero Sum
L. B. Mek said:
\'The voices of children,
our enemyās shield\'..
it always, infuriates me
when so-called activist\'s (especially those opportunistically abhorrent, celebs)
scream and shout about things,
they know so little about, because they choose
to dwell in their ignorance, excuses
for their pathetic virtue-signalling actions..
they never want the detailed complexities, just the fast-food
quick fixes...
so they\'ll march against one Nations actions for retaliatory warfare
and yet act all oblivious, when the Opposition
purposely, literally: utilises woman and children, as Shields, for their war mongering Regime...???!!!
If we let it, the absurdity of modernity\'s reality will eat us alive: truly!
But, we were gifted this life and like the generation\'s before us, who also decried this hypocrisy of social righteousness, in this warped reality, of phantom equality in our so-called evolved civility..
But!
we must, find a way to survive
yes we do our best, to create awareness and help those by our side
but we can\'t allow ourselves
to be swallowed-up by the bleakness in our horizon\'s of blanket night,
we must prevail, to get a glimpse
of Aurora\'s streaking forgiveness,
for another chance,
another day
another taste
of this blinked existence, we call life.
(another inspiring set of lines Kurt
had me typing away my feeble reply, as soon as I read that last line..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
September 20th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'The voices of children,
our enemyās shield\'..
it always, infuriates me
when so-called activist\'s (especially those opportunistically abhorrent, celebs)
scream and shout about things,
they know so little about, because they choose
to dwell in their ignorance, excuses
for their pathetic virtue-signalling actions..
they never want the detailed complexities, just the fast-food
quick fixes...
so they\'ll march against one Nations actions for retaliatory warfare
and yet act all oblivious, when the Opposition
purposely, literally: utilises woman and children, as Shields, for their war mongering Regime...???!!!
If we let it, the absurdity of modernity\'s reality will eat us alive: truly!
But, we were gifted this life and like the generation\'s before us, who also decried this hypocrisy of social righteousness, in this warped reality, of phantom equality in our so-called evolved civility..
But!
we must, find a way to survive
yes we do our best, to create awareness and help those by our side
but we can\'t allow ourselves
to be swallowed-up by the bleakness in our horizon\'s of blanket night,
we must prevail, to get a glimpse
of Aurora\'s streaking forgiveness,
for another chance,
another day
another taste
of this blinked existence, we call life.
(another inspiring set of lines Kurt
had me typing away my feeble reply, as soon as I read that last line..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
September 20th, 2021 05:00
Highway 93 Revisited
L. B. Mek said:
someday, if I continue to strive
I\'ll have earned the capacity and opportunity to write like you, wise Poet
and that day, when the cursor is blinking away
after my final word has found, its rightful place, I hope
I remember these words I write today
and in doing-so, pay homage
even for that momentary, melancholic - breath
to all those, that help guide me
in this endless, poetic journey...
(a Brilliant set of write\'s, Kurt!
that second poem \'18kt memories\', reads like an epitaph they would have thrown-in, at the Poet\'s corner, when Tennyson and those of his ilk got their grand celebratory funerals)
September 17th, 2021 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
someday, if I continue to strive
I\'ll have earned the capacity and opportunity to write like you, wise Poet
and that day, when the cursor is blinking away
after my final word has found, its rightful place, I hope
I remember these words I write today
and in doing-so, pay homage
even for that momentary, melancholic - breath
to all those, that help guide me
in this endless, poetic journey...
(a Brilliant set of write\'s, Kurt!
that second poem \'18kt memories\', reads like an epitaph they would have thrown-in, at the Poet\'s corner, when Tennyson and those of his ilk got their grand celebratory funerals)
September 17th, 2021 03:40
Real Time
L. B. Mek said:
between consequence and regret, exists our opportunity: for action..
between, tomorrow and yesterday,
exists our capacity: to experience..
sometimes, we need reminding
this moment, belongs to neither
and yet connects us, to both
our past and future
a bridge we need to grasp earnestly, desperately: willingly!
(thanks for sharing Kurt)
September 17th, 2021 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
between consequence and regret, exists our opportunity: for action..
between, tomorrow and yesterday,
exists our capacity: to experience..
sometimes, we need reminding
this moment, belongs to neither
and yet connects us, to both
our past and future
a bridge we need to grasp earnestly, desperately: willingly!
(thanks for sharing Kurt)
September 17th, 2021 03:25
Time\'s Gauntlet
L. B. Mek said:
as I see it
\'They\' bequeathed us their Genius
for us to lean-on, knowing
we\'ll need it!\'
(these words you weaved, work on so many levels
personally, my initial interpretation
took me to our strained relationships with our muses or inspirations,
\'Searching for ideas
We challenge
āwith voices from the past\')
a great shorty, succinct and unassuming
but imbued with so much depth, a true showcasing of layered poetic brevity
September 14th, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
as I see it
\'They\' bequeathed us their Genius
for us to lean-on, knowing
we\'ll need it!\'
(these words you weaved, work on so many levels
personally, my initial interpretation
took me to our strained relationships with our muses or inspirations,
\'Searching for ideas
We challenge
āwith voices from the past\')
a great shorty, succinct and unassuming
but imbued with so much depth, a true showcasing of layered poetic brevity
September 14th, 2021 04:07
Time\'s Gauntlet
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTis wise and prudent
to heed the
āvoices from the pastāā¦
āthe legendsā.
So much history to interpret and understand between the white spaces of your written gem.
Lauraš»
September 13th, 2021 22:57
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTis wise and prudent
to heed the
āvoices from the pastāā¦
āthe legendsā.
So much history to interpret and understand between the white spaces of your written gem.
Lauraš»
September 13th, 2021 22:57
Guardian Age
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¦āThe older I get
the sweeter the songāā¦
Yes, indeed!
Thank you for sharing your
āgolden wordsā.
Lauraš»
August 28th, 2021 00:21
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¦āThe older I get
the sweeter the songāā¦
Yes, indeed!
Thank you for sharing your
āgolden wordsā.
Lauraš»
August 28th, 2021 00:21
Leaving With The Sun
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¦and the light shall guide you!
Lauraš»
August 27th, 2021 23:47
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¦and the light shall guide you!
Lauraš»
August 27th, 2021 23:47
The Moment Returns
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āThe Moment Returnsā
⢠āLeaving With The Sunā
⢠āGuardian Ageā
⢠āHeaven\'s Gateā
Iāve enjoyed reading your Dreamsleeps.
Is it the subconscious getting messages throughā¦the unpacking of what is happening at a deep inner and as yet unconscious level?
Upon continuing your journey, youāll be leaving a little bit more of YOU in those majestic mountains and valleys.
Godspeed my dear poet.
Lauraš»
August 27th, 2021 23:35
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
⢠āThe Moment Returnsā
⢠āLeaving With The Sunā
⢠āGuardian Ageā
⢠āHeaven\'s Gateā
Iāve enjoyed reading your Dreamsleeps.
Is it the subconscious getting messages throughā¦the unpacking of what is happening at a deep inner and as yet unconscious level?
Upon continuing your journey, youāll be leaving a little bit more of YOU in those majestic mountains and valleys.
Godspeed my dear poet.
Lauraš»
August 27th, 2021 23:35
The Moment Returns
L. B. Mek said:
oh to be wild and free, galloping carelessly
oh why did I have to stub my toe, trying to act all carefree
if only
there was a middle ground of temperate acceptance
we could excavate from within and help, curate
a small sense of serenity, in our everyday reality...
\'Tomorrow in the barn,
A horse running free\'...
Amen!
(profound wisdom
worded so accessibly poetic
thank you Kurt)
August 27th, 2021 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
oh to be wild and free, galloping carelessly
oh why did I have to stub my toe, trying to act all carefree
if only
there was a middle ground of temperate acceptance
we could excavate from within and help, curate
a small sense of serenity, in our everyday reality...
\'Tomorrow in the barn,
A horse running free\'...
Amen!
(profound wisdom
worded so accessibly poetic
thank you Kurt)
August 27th, 2021 03:05
Leaving With The Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'tickets for an escape shelter
in the middle of a deserted, cloud
wings spread wide, son by my side
and I warn him endlessly, knowing
he\'s tired of my voice
\'not too, high
nor too low
keep your dreams, sailing
in that middle, where
you\'ll find safety, hiding
in amongst, the majority herd\'...
as Aurora, opens the gates
I check our wax layers
one last fateful, time!\'
(what can I say my friend
your brilliance has inspired me again
actually your write, originally took me
to Tracy Chapman\'s song \'Fast Car\')
\'You got a fast car
I want a ticket to anywhere
Maybe we make a deal
Maybe together we can get somewhere
Any place is better
Starting from zero got nothing to lose
Maybe we\'ll make something
Me, myself, I got nothing to prove
You got a fast car
I got a plan to get us outta here
I been working at the convenience store
Managed to save just a little bit of money
Won\'t have to drive too far
Just \'cross the border and into the city
You and I can both get jobs
And finally see what it means to be living\'
August 26th, 2021 02:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'tickets for an escape shelter
in the middle of a deserted, cloud
wings spread wide, son by my side
and I warn him endlessly, knowing
he\'s tired of my voice
\'not too, high
nor too low
keep your dreams, sailing
in that middle, where
you\'ll find safety, hiding
in amongst, the majority herd\'...
as Aurora, opens the gates
I check our wax layers
one last fateful, time!\'
(what can I say my friend
your brilliance has inspired me again
actually your write, originally took me
to Tracy Chapman\'s song \'Fast Car\')
\'You got a fast car
I want a ticket to anywhere
Maybe we make a deal
Maybe together we can get somewhere
Any place is better
Starting from zero got nothing to lose
Maybe we\'ll make something
Me, myself, I got nothing to prove
You got a fast car
I got a plan to get us outta here
I been working at the convenience store
Managed to save just a little bit of money
Won\'t have to drive too far
Just \'cross the border and into the city
You and I can both get jobs
And finally see what it means to be living\'
August 26th, 2021 02:22
Guardian Age
L. B. Mek said:
\'as memory protects
āmyself to belong\'..
this is so true
loved the wording!
thanks for sharing Kurt
helped to coalesce a lot of loose thoughts
I have been having lately, on a similar theme
August 26th, 2021 02:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'as memory protects
āmyself to belong\'..
this is so true
loved the wording!
thanks for sharing Kurt
helped to coalesce a lot of loose thoughts
I have been having lately, on a similar theme
August 26th, 2021 02:10
Guardian Age
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice words and very true also. Thanks for sharing
August 24th, 2021 23:05
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice words and very true also. Thanks for sharing
August 24th, 2021 23:05
Breathing Room
L. B. Mek said:
really liked the first one
sometimes I read my scribbles
and all I see, is all that they hide...
(\'Living\', a Great silence)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 23rd, 2021 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
really liked the first one
sometimes I read my scribbles
and all I see, is all that they hide...
(\'Living\', a Great silence)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 23rd, 2021 04:35
Heaven\'s Gate
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Heaven on Earth.
My mom and dad had a special connection with Idaho.
Lauraš»
August 22nd, 2021 21:37
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Heaven on Earth.
My mom and dad had a special connection with Idaho.
Lauraš»
August 22nd, 2021 21:37
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