Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Time\'s Gauntlet
L. B. Mek said:
as I see it
\'They\' bequeathed us their Genius
for us to lean-on, knowing
we\'ll need it!\'
(these words you weaved, work on so many levels
personally, my initial interpretation
took me to our strained relationships with our muses or inspirations,
\'Searching for ideas
We challenge
—with voices from the past\')
a great shorty, succinct and unassuming
but imbued with so much depth, a true showcasing of layered poetic brevity
September 14th, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
as I see it
\'They\' bequeathed us their Genius
for us to lean-on, knowing
we\'ll need it!\'
(these words you weaved, work on so many levels
personally, my initial interpretation
took me to our strained relationships with our muses or inspirations,
\'Searching for ideas
We challenge
—with voices from the past\')
a great shorty, succinct and unassuming
but imbued with so much depth, a true showcasing of layered poetic brevity
September 14th, 2021 04:07
Time\'s Gauntlet
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
‘Tis wise and prudent
to heed the
‘voices from the past’…
‘the legends’.
So much history to interpret and understand between the white spaces of your written gem.
Laura🌻
September 13th, 2021 22:57
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
‘Tis wise and prudent
to heed the
‘voices from the past’…
‘the legends’.
So much history to interpret and understand between the white spaces of your written gem.
Laura🌻
September 13th, 2021 22:57
Guardian Age
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
…“The older I get
the sweeter the song”…
Yes, indeed!
Thank you for sharing your
‘golden words”.
Laura🌻
August 28th, 2021 00:21
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
…“The older I get
the sweeter the song”…
Yes, indeed!
Thank you for sharing your
‘golden words”.
Laura🌻
August 28th, 2021 00:21
Leaving With The Sun
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
…and the light shall guide you!
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 23:47
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
…and the light shall guide you!
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 23:47
The Moment Returns
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “The Moment Returns”
• “Leaving With The Sun”
• “Guardian Age”
• “Heaven\'s Gate”
I’ve enjoyed reading your Dreamsleeps.
Is it the subconscious getting messages through…the unpacking of what is happening at a deep inner and as yet unconscious level?
Upon continuing your journey, you’ll be leaving a little bit more of YOU in those majestic mountains and valleys.
Godspeed my dear poet.
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 23:35
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “The Moment Returns”
• “Leaving With The Sun”
• “Guardian Age”
• “Heaven\'s Gate”
I’ve enjoyed reading your Dreamsleeps.
Is it the subconscious getting messages through…the unpacking of what is happening at a deep inner and as yet unconscious level?
Upon continuing your journey, you’ll be leaving a little bit more of YOU in those majestic mountains and valleys.
Godspeed my dear poet.
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 23:35
The Moment Returns
L. B. Mek said:
oh to be wild and free, galloping carelessly
oh why did I have to stub my toe, trying to act all carefree
if only
there was a middle ground of temperate acceptance
we could excavate from within and help, curate
a small sense of serenity, in our everyday reality...
\'Tomorrow in the barn,
A horse running free\'...
Amen!
(profound wisdom
worded so accessibly poetic
thank you Kurt)
August 27th, 2021 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
oh to be wild and free, galloping carelessly
oh why did I have to stub my toe, trying to act all carefree
if only
there was a middle ground of temperate acceptance
we could excavate from within and help, curate
a small sense of serenity, in our everyday reality...
\'Tomorrow in the barn,
A horse running free\'...
Amen!
(profound wisdom
worded so accessibly poetic
thank you Kurt)
August 27th, 2021 03:05
Leaving With The Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'tickets for an escape shelter
in the middle of a deserted, cloud
wings spread wide, son by my side
and I warn him endlessly, knowing
he\'s tired of my voice
\'not too, high
nor too low
keep your dreams, sailing
in that middle, where
you\'ll find safety, hiding
in amongst, the majority herd\'...
as Aurora, opens the gates
I check our wax layers
one last fateful, time!\'
(what can I say my friend
your brilliance has inspired me again
actually your write, originally took me
to Tracy Chapman\'s song \'Fast Car\')
\'You got a fast car
I want a ticket to anywhere
Maybe we make a deal
Maybe together we can get somewhere
Any place is better
Starting from zero got nothing to lose
Maybe we\'ll make something
Me, myself, I got nothing to prove
You got a fast car
I got a plan to get us outta here
I been working at the convenience store
Managed to save just a little bit of money
Won\'t have to drive too far
Just \'cross the border and into the city
You and I can both get jobs
And finally see what it means to be living\'
August 26th, 2021 02:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'tickets for an escape shelter
in the middle of a deserted, cloud
wings spread wide, son by my side
and I warn him endlessly, knowing
he\'s tired of my voice
\'not too, high
nor too low
keep your dreams, sailing
in that middle, where
you\'ll find safety, hiding
in amongst, the majority herd\'...
as Aurora, opens the gates
I check our wax layers
one last fateful, time!\'
(what can I say my friend
your brilliance has inspired me again
actually your write, originally took me
to Tracy Chapman\'s song \'Fast Car\')
\'You got a fast car
I want a ticket to anywhere
Maybe we make a deal
Maybe together we can get somewhere
Any place is better
Starting from zero got nothing to lose
Maybe we\'ll make something
Me, myself, I got nothing to prove
You got a fast car
I got a plan to get us outta here
I been working at the convenience store
Managed to save just a little bit of money
Won\'t have to drive too far
Just \'cross the border and into the city
You and I can both get jobs
And finally see what it means to be living\'
August 26th, 2021 02:22
Guardian Age
L. B. Mek said:
\'as memory protects
—myself to belong\'..
this is so true
loved the wording!
thanks for sharing Kurt
helped to coalesce a lot of loose thoughts
I have been having lately, on a similar theme
August 26th, 2021 02:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'as memory protects
—myself to belong\'..
this is so true
loved the wording!
thanks for sharing Kurt
helped to coalesce a lot of loose thoughts
I have been having lately, on a similar theme
August 26th, 2021 02:10
Guardian Age
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice words and very true also. Thanks for sharing
August 24th, 2021 23:05
Thekkinkkattil said:
Nice words and very true also. Thanks for sharing
August 24th, 2021 23:05
Breathing Room
L. B. Mek said:
really liked the first one
sometimes I read my scribbles
and all I see, is all that they hide...
(\'Living\', a Great silence)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 23rd, 2021 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
really liked the first one
sometimes I read my scribbles
and all I see, is all that they hide...
(\'Living\', a Great silence)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 23rd, 2021 04:35
Heaven\'s Gate
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Heaven on Earth.
My mom and dad had a special connection with Idaho.
Laura🌻
August 22nd, 2021 21:37
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Heaven on Earth.
My mom and dad had a special connection with Idaho.
Laura🌻
August 22nd, 2021 21:37
A Blacker Black (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “The Blacker Black”
Are we brave enough to answer the call?
• “Before The Beginning”
The journey that began
as a dream continues its magnetic pull to where one is destined to be.
In reading your penned words, I’m so fascinated by their powerful pull/effect they’ve had upon yours truly. An incredible experience.
Thank you.
Laura🌻
August 20th, 2021 22:49
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “The Blacker Black”
Are we brave enough to answer the call?
• “Before The Beginning”
The journey that began
as a dream continues its magnetic pull to where one is destined to be.
In reading your penned words, I’m so fascinated by their powerful pull/effect they’ve had upon yours truly. An incredible experience.
Thank you.
Laura🌻
August 20th, 2021 22:49
Coming Together
L. B. Mek said:
I drink heartily from your fountain of wisdom
dear Poet,
grateful for each sip that allows me, more clarity...
\'You’re supposed, to be
what your nature
portends,
and not, what convention
proscribes!\'
August 20th, 2021 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
I drink heartily from your fountain of wisdom
dear Poet,
grateful for each sip that allows me, more clarity...
\'You’re supposed, to be
what your nature
portends,
and not, what convention
proscribes!\'
August 20th, 2021 03:58
Coming Together
Kurt Philip Behm said:
The \'why\' in trying to live outside yourself.
Thanks Laura
August 19th, 2021 19:13
Kurt Philip Behm said:
The \'why\' in trying to live outside yourself.
Thanks Laura
August 19th, 2021 19:13
Coming Together
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
An interesting and intriguing poem which I enjoyed reading and inspired me to give a lot of thought to the following…
•getting to know ‘the people’ I don’t…
why not?
•feeling ‘the things’ that I can’t…
why not?
•be not what your nature foretells…
why not?
•be what convention forbids…
why not?
•‘love without borders or fear’…
why not?
All daring and tempting,
I fearlessly say.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 18:49
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
An interesting and intriguing poem which I enjoyed reading and inspired me to give a lot of thought to the following…
•getting to know ‘the people’ I don’t…
why not?
•feeling ‘the things’ that I can’t…
why not?
•be not what your nature foretells…
why not?
•be what convention forbids…
why not?
•‘love without borders or fear’…
why not?
All daring and tempting,
I fearlessly say.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 18:49
Turning The Page
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Unlimited verses concealing
‘the moments most precious’…
… ‘tis our truth to reveal.
Should we or shouldn’t we? Hmm…
Our decision to make.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking ‘Dreamsleep’.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 00:20
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Unlimited verses concealing
‘the moments most precious’…
… ‘tis our truth to reveal.
Should we or shouldn’t we? Hmm…
Our decision to make.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking ‘Dreamsleep’.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 00:20
Between The Lines (+2)
L. B. Mek said:
agree with you on so many levels
admittedly, we are creatures of instinct
even after much consideration
we mostly work our way back, to rely
on our first impressions..
I think Might/Power, in and of itself
can never be vilified, so acquiring it
is essential, its just
how we choose to utilise it, that defines
whether we\'re branded heroes or villains..
(such an intriguing read
thanks for sharing Kurt)
August 16th, 2021 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
agree with you on so many levels
admittedly, we are creatures of instinct
even after much consideration
we mostly work our way back, to rely
on our first impressions..
I think Might/Power, in and of itself
can never be vilified, so acquiring it
is essential, its just
how we choose to utilise it, that defines
whether we\'re branded heroes or villains..
(such an intriguing read
thanks for sharing Kurt)
August 16th, 2021 03:53
Between The Lines (+2)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
There’s so much weaving and unweaving to unravel “Between The Lines (+2)”…
a welcomed challenge.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2021 18:52
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
There’s so much weaving and unweaving to unravel “Between The Lines (+2)”…
a welcomed challenge.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2021 18:52
Just Passing Through...
Kurt Philip Behm said:
The American West is being overrun by transplants from both coasts. They\'re
trying to dictate their misguided political views on people that have ranched and
farmed there for generations.
I\'m no threat. I just want to borrow their roads (view) for a while.
Thanks
Kurt
August 12th, 2021 08:04
Kurt Philip Behm said:
The American West is being overrun by transplants from both coasts. They\'re
trying to dictate their misguided political views on people that have ranched and
farmed there for generations.
I\'m no threat. I just want to borrow their roads (view) for a while.
Thanks
Kurt
August 12th, 2021 08:04
Just Passing Through...
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, a lot of this I can\'t relate to
but its poetry, makes me yearn to..
thanks for sharing
(sorry couldn\'t unfurl the colloquialisms
my friend) my loss, of that I\'m certain
August 12th, 2021 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, a lot of this I can\'t relate to
but its poetry, makes me yearn to..
thanks for sharing
(sorry couldn\'t unfurl the colloquialisms
my friend) my loss, of that I\'m certain
August 12th, 2021 04:19
\"And The Word Was Made Flesh...\"
L. B. Mek said:
If we be made Perfect, in His image
then pray tell
why do we seek Wisdom, from outside
ourselves?
and if Religion is what equates to God\'s love
then pray tell
why do their crimes, taint our rivers crimson!
and if we must suffer
by other\'s interpretations of dogma
then tell me, why do we not pray
for them to be judged, quickly
and rid us all, of their malignant fallacies
so we may be finally free
to Question, flesh of our own fallibility
armed with Veracity\'s: holiness...
(a thought provoking wording
of pregnant brevity, Kurt
thank you for inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
August 12th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
If we be made Perfect, in His image
then pray tell
why do we seek Wisdom, from outside
ourselves?
and if Religion is what equates to God\'s love
then pray tell
why do their crimes, taint our rivers crimson!
and if we must suffer
by other\'s interpretations of dogma
then tell me, why do we not pray
for them to be judged, quickly
and rid us all, of their malignant fallacies
so we may be finally free
to Question, flesh of our own fallibility
armed with Veracity\'s: holiness...
(a thought provoking wording
of pregnant brevity, Kurt
thank you for inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
August 12th, 2021 04:15
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