Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



A Gentle Wind (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œA Gentle Windā€
Love it! šŸ’–
Absolutely exquisite!

~Laura~šŸŒ»


April 9th, 2019 20:42

Godel Was Right (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œGodel Was Rightā€

I was ā€˜introducedā€™ to Gƶdel by one of my professors in college! A fascinating man...to say the least!

ā€¢ ā€œNo Longer Freeā€

A truthful and intriguing write!
Read it more than once!
On my second read, I reversed the nouns and pronouns with the last couplet remaining unchanged!
Quite a read!!

Loved them both!

~Laura~

April 9th, 2019 11:14

Prisoner Of Disguise (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Ah yes...Montmartre!!!

I had an apartment for a while on Rue Scribe and then stayed with an aunt on Rue Jean Brunet...Meudon for two years!

You plead innocent because they havenā€™t caught you yet! My lips are sealed! šŸ˜‰



April 6th, 2019 23:46

Prisoner Of Disguise (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura. I lived in Versailles for two summers when I was
road-racing motorcycles in Europe.

I used to spend my days off wandering around Monmartre, talking
to street artists, writers, and Mimes (the Mimes never talked back,
but I did get a few smiles from a pretty female once).

I was there the year the Palace was robbed. I still plead my innocence.

:-)

April 6th, 2019 23:12

Prisoner Of Disguise (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œPrisoner Of Disguiseā€

A magnificent read!

The words in your poem...
ā€˜frameā€™, ā€˜canvasā€™, ā€˜easel ā€˜, ā€˜Parisā€™(a very special place with a very special meaning for me)...
made me think of a painter who paints beautiful pictures!
You are like that painter who has the gift of being able to create beautiful art! The painter creates with a brush and paint. You create with your poetā€™s pen! You both have the ability to put on ā€˜canvasā€™ ā€˜picturesā€™ that bring so much joy to people! A gift not possessed by many!

~Laura~





April 6th, 2019 22:33

One Vow
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œOne Vowā€
ā€¢ ā€œA Promise Wedā€

Beautiful and serene!
A good day to reflect upon...

~Laura~šŸŒ»

April 5th, 2019 10:25

As Ever Before (+6)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œAs Ever Beforeā€
Beautifully expressed!

Looking forward to more postings throughout the day! I shall visit your page from time to time today! I know it will make my day more serene! My drug of choice for the day!

~Laura~

April 4th, 2019 09:56

Dylan\'s Garden (+5)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

I can see that your Muse is keeping you busy! Just read the additional postings after ā€œDylanā€™s Gardenā€!

Magnificence at its best...

ā€˜Many candles through the darkness burn
ā€”with one light to beholdā€™

This thought/image shall be with me throughout this arduous day!

~Laura~

April 4th, 2019 09:19

Dylan\'s Garden (+5)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Good morning!šŸŒž

Love the poem!
Perfect sentiments!
You are ONE that never poisons the fruit! I learned that from day one! (Of course, at times I wished for it!)

~Laura~


April 3rd, 2019 10:36

The Awakening (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Hi Jo: I\'m empowered by your very thoughtful comments.

Thanks so much.

Kurt

April 2nd, 2019 21:20

The Awakening (+3)
Jo March said:

I really enjoyed your poem. It\'s such a beautiful way to think about poetry \"-- a reconciliation of opposites ā€”awakening the dream\". According to the Romantic poets, the aim of the creative power of the imagination was to reconcile opposites. You express this beautifully in the poem (Whatā€™s true then false, / whatā€™s false conscripts). It made me think that there is such a thin line between truth and falsehood. But walking this thin line makes it all the more worth it because as you say \"Truth lies beyond computation, / perception aware of itself\". Thank you so much for the poem.

April 2nd, 2019 21:11

Imagery Forgives (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks. I\'ve been listening to Sean Carrolls podcast \'Mindscape.\' It\'s
opening up a lot of doors. I think you\'d enjoy it.

April 1st, 2019 20:49

Imagery Forgives (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks. I\'ve been listening to Sean Carrolls podcast \'Mindscape.\' It\'s
opening up a lot of doors. I think you\'d enjoy it.

April 1st, 2019 20:45

Imagery Forgives (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Your Muse is on Fire šŸ”„ today!!
Love it!

~Laura~

April 1st, 2019 20:41

Imagery Forgives (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

You are the master of words!

ā€œAs words describe what minds canā€™t see
ā€”and imagery forgivesā€
These words are at the top of the heap to quote...A quotable quote penned by the master!

Exceptional!

~Laura~

April 1st, 2019 10:28

Imagery Forgives (+4)
JB said:

Wow... This is really good.

April 1st, 2019 09:39

Now
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Good Morning!šŸŒž
Two super and honest shares...especially ā€œThe Tightening Nooseā€!
Raising children is a tough job!

~Laura~


March 31st, 2019 11:20

Rotor Blades That Kill (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Your intensity always amazes....

Thanks so much!

Kurt

March 30th, 2019 22:36

Rotor Blades That Kill (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Super poems...
each and every one of them!

I will begin with my favorite...

ā€¢ ā€œFacing The Fireā€
It is my favorite because of my admiration and love for one of my favorite characters in your novel...CUTTY!
He is a warrior; and warriors need to be at war!
ā€˜He was once again at peace...
A Peace Only Proffered In Times Of Warā€™!

ā€¢ ā€œRotor Blades That Killā€
I totally agree with the message conveyed in this poem!

ā€˜The blanket that we spread
and fences we build

Imprison,
rather than defendā€™

...so, so true!

ā€¢ ā€œMiami Heatā€
Well...this one is hot, hot, hot...
Itā€™s onšŸ”„šŸ”„ šŸ”„!

ā€¢ ā€œVitaā€”Et Aliaā€
Et quod vita

ā€¢ ā€œInto The Lightā€
An insightful poem
by the one and only...
KPB!!

Awesome reads!!

~Laura~





March 30th, 2019 20:46

Destiny Wed
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Yes indeed...
I wholeheartedly agree with Claudelleā€™s comment!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your penned poem is uncannily relatable...
not to self,
but to a very dear friend of mine!
I shall definitely share it with her!

~Laura~



March 30th, 2019 11:25

Science Proclaims (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Beautiful! Thanks Laura.

Time is really the \'Grandest Illusion.\'

March 29th, 2019 11:20

Science Proclaims (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Your words in the first poem are powerful!
My comment is...
yes
yes
yes
ā€”and YES!
Your write made me think of a powerful quote that yesterday I was reminded of...

ā€œAll those moments
will be lost in time,
like tears in the rain.ā€

~Laura~



March 29th, 2019 10:58

Rotor Blades That Kill (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:



March 28th, 2019 11:18

Rotor Blades That Kill (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Man!

March 28th, 2019 10:36

The Choice (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Good morning! šŸŒž

Verum Verum...
Perfectus...

~Laura~

March 27th, 2019 10:21

Liberating The Truth (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Great poems once again!
I enjoyed them very much!
Of the four, my favorite is Magdalena!

~Laura~

March 26th, 2019 18:43

Prisoners Of Time (+6)
Nicholas Browning said:

All of these are fantastic, Kurt. Reading your work is always a pleasure.

March 25th, 2019 19:00

Prisoners Of Time (+6)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Wow! A truthful and an amazing write!
Indeed we are ...
ā€œIn the end all victims chained unto
themselves
ā€”prisoners timeā€

~Laura~

March 25th, 2019 11:37

Trappings (+5)
Nicholas Browning said:

Man, this is seriously nice literature. A well done to you, good sir.

March 24th, 2019 20:44

Venit Una Ex Multis (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Exactly. Thanks Nicholas.

Kurt

March 23rd, 2019 18:30



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