Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Midnight Flight
Goldfinch60 said:

Reality is what we see within ourselves John.

Andy

December 7th, 2022 02:45

Midnight Flight
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, John.


December 6th, 2022 16:06

Midnight Flight
Kinsey Peterson said:

i don\'t often see poems spaced as this one is- a curious decision that works well with the flow of the piece. congratulations

December 6th, 2022 15:13

Enigma2
Goldfinch60 said:

We must all keep searching for our life as if we find it for what would we need to find.

Andy

December 3rd, 2022 02:54

Conundrum
Goldfinch60 said:

We came from the energy created by the big bang and will go on to infinity.

Andy

December 1st, 2022 02:30

Dreamworld
Goldfinch60 said:

That dreamworld is unique to every one of us John.

Andy

November 30th, 2022 02:23

Believing
Goldfinch60 said:

Believe in yourself in all ways.

Andy

November 26th, 2022 04:00

Gathering
Goldfinch60 said:

Beware indeed John, we are just not informed what is going to happen to us all.

Andy

November 25th, 2022 02:47

Gathering
MMadrid said:

Enjoyed your poem!

November 25th, 2022 00:41

Parallels
L. B. Mek said:

sorry for my little rant below
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(\'One slice
stands alone.\'
so wise, dear Poet
and that\'s why I put less emphasis on outcome
as a gage towards applicable value and worth
existence is an olympic event with only a few hundred medals
for the eight billion human participants...
I mean, we don\'t play the lottery because of those obscene ratios
so why do we judge each other for our failures?
when we\'re odds-on to fail, time n again?
life wouldn\'t be too bad, if we could just admit to ourselves
winning, in life
is managing to peek at yet another sunrise
everything else, is subject
to a callous fate of uncertainty
upon a flipped coin\'s
odds-on of unlikely)

November 21st, 2022 05:31

Domination
Goldfinch60 said:

To get things for themselves and not care about anybody else.

Andy

November 17th, 2022 02:40

Blended
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, John.
All the cats are out of their bags.

November 12th, 2022 13:47

Zeros And Ones
L. B. Mek said:

they can store more data on a single human cell
than half the world\' data centers combined,
and define that as progress?
lol
nature smiles, as we map out our inevitable demise
(great commentary, as thought-provoking as ever)
thank you, thoughtful poet

November 11th, 2022 08:03

Nexus
Goldfinch60 said:

Some of those connections in our lives are so nebulous John.

Andy

November 11th, 2022 02:21


War Of Existence
E Naughton said:

I love the imagery, great write ✍️

November 7th, 2022 16:32

Cloud
Goldfinch60 said:

The recycling of clouds brought into the mind John.

Andy

November 5th, 2022 02:50

Fabric
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful description of space John.

Andy

October 30th, 2022 02:44

Cosmic Creation
Goldfinch60 said:

May those cycles show us the way forward in our lives John.

Andy

October 26th, 2022 01:08

Fickle
L. B. Mek said:

(metaphysical topology
enshrined in Euclidean-like clarity
poetry, designed
to guide us on a path, where
our horizons incorporate
much wider scope for defining
what we glean
of life\'s meaningfully integrative
theorising, pursuits
to fathom fickle reality\'s, dimensional
anchors to existence\'s, chaotic tricks)
Brilliantly thought provoking
thank you! dear Poet

October 24th, 2022 04:59

Known
L. B. Mek said:

so true
and maybe if so many of us weren\'t so busy
tripping each other up, to get a flimsy foothold
on the rung above, one of us
may have reached further enough
to glimpse
at those metaphysical governing rules
in this our universal, universe
and only source to those meaningful answers in existence...
(I missed your dialectically questing verses dear Poet
thank you)

October 21st, 2022 03:35

Sirens Song
John Prophet said:

Yup, my inspiration for this piece.
Thanks for reading.

October 19th, 2022 12:08

Sirens Song
Goldfinch60 said:

That\'s politicians for you John! LOL

Andy

October 19th, 2022 01:25

Simple
Goldfinch60 said:

May that progress come to light John and give us the wonder in life that we all deserve.

Andy

October 15th, 2022 00:43

Eyes3
Goldfinch60 said:

Looking behind each others eyes reveals the truth John.

Andy

October 5th, 2022 01:48

Input2
Goldfinch60 said:

Those ones and zeros changed our lives John.

Andy

October 2nd, 2022 01:40

Perspective
Goldfinch60 said:

Each of our perspectives has a different path along which we have trod.

Andy

September 28th, 2022 01:43

Worlds
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words John, maybe one day we will see those from other worlds that are bound to be out there.

Andy

September 27th, 2022 01:58

End Game
Goldfinch60 said:

Those new creations will never stop John.

Andy

September 24th, 2022 00:50

End Game
Shetonya Latryce said:

I love this! I was right with the flow.

September 23rd, 2022 19:54



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