Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Virus
L. B. Mek said:

we click-bait ourselves
allowing our mind\'s to be willingly
invaded, for that ease
of a herded mindset as our chosen
lifestyle, surrendering
asking questions of distractions
and ignoring those
glaring lies making fools of us
so numb
to watching a peaceful march, devolve
till it sets alight
a country\'s moral compass and pride
popcorns in-hand
reality TV, sponsored by politics
and 24 hour Hollywood news
still, could be worse
its not like a nuclear power
is at war
and being baited everyday
to blow us away...

July 3rd, 2023 03:21

Base
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John, our base is the absolute start of our life.

Andy

July 3rd, 2023 02:27

Gods
Goldfinch60 said:

Gods may well be there, we may each have our own god but it is organised religion that is the problem John.

\"May you god go with you.\"

Andy

July 3rd, 2023 02:22

Souls2
Goldfinch60 said:

So many variations John, every one of them is unique.

Andy

July 3rd, 2023 02:16

Souls2
Bobby O said:

That one word in a line hurts my eyes.

July 1st, 2023 20:10

Souls2
2781 said:

Some truth in there.

July 1st, 2023 10:55

Gods
2781 said:

God.

June 30th, 2023 06:51

Opinion
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John.

Andy

June 26th, 2023 01:03

Future Note
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day changes in someone else\'s mind that they want to inflict on others John.

Andy

June 25th, 2023 01:40

Coerced
Goldfinch60 said:

Some just do not believe that the passed was true. History is written by the winners.

Andy

June 24th, 2023 01:11

To Be
L. B. Mek said:

we exist, wondering
what existence is all about...
imbedded in our dna
all the answers
to questions, we\'ve forgotten
to ask...
(another searching read, dear poet
with insightfully acute commentary)

June 19th, 2023 03:32

To Be
Ok Waleed said:

Hahahah, it is crazy how my genes have made it this far… we

June 19th, 2023 00:03

The Council
Goldfinch60 said:

Only if we let it be born John.

Andy

June 17th, 2023 01:47

The Council
mtspoet said:

A strong message for society today. True prophetic meaning.

June 16th, 2023 17:17

Emotion
Goldfinch60 said:

In my life emotions are so important.

Andy

June 16th, 2023 01:03

Emotion
2781 said:

No Spirit?

June 14th, 2023 06:40

Life Path
John Prophet said:

Hi LBM,
Thank you kindly for your always generous comments.
JP

June 12th, 2023 06:53

Life Path
L. B. Mek said:

so true!
\'Choices made drive the journey.
Author
results.
Will and drive power the trip.\'
Brilliant!

June 12th, 2023 01:15

Hive
John Prophet said:

Hi LBM,
Nefarious forces have alway existed and unfortunately, seem to be always one step ahead. Thank you kindly for reading.

June 10th, 2023 07:19

Hive
L. B. Mek said:

if only, dear Poet
we could aspire to that hive mindset dependability
of logical practicality and societal responsibility
what we, instead
strive to mark as our reality
is an entrenched status of life
of fear induced subservience
to a perceived threat as \'ruler\'
over our vey fate
I think
the below poem, expresses it best:
\'waiting for the Barbarians\' by C. P. Cavafy
(
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51294/waiting-for-the-barbarians
)

June 9th, 2023 02:02

Being2
Goldfinch60 said:

Those thoughts will go on forever John in our never ending life.

Andy

June 7th, 2023 01:14

Ideology
Goldfinch60 said:

Life is like that John, we think we are moving on but in so many ways we move backwards. We must move on.

Andy

June 6th, 2023 00:33

Ideology
L. B. Mek said:

\'Fear and
superstition
magnified,
accentuated.
Delivered
through
the cloud.\'
evolving
from smoke signals
to cloud networking
and yet
not a damn thing, changed
those in power
point a finger, so we identify
who to blame
for all the senseless anger
we harbour..
..and on, our zeal for self
decimation
amplifies our resolve to hate
rather than love,
Life

June 5th, 2023 02:27

Techmag
2781 said:

Plug pulled!

June 3rd, 2023 09:20

Conversations
Goldfinch60 said:

Those conversations can lead us to many places in our lives John.

Andy

June 1st, 2023 01:53

Five Percent
Goldfinch60 said:

That other 95 percent is there within us if only people are prepared to look.

Andy

May 26th, 2023 01:13

Faces
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John but there are those of us who look outside the box to the better way of living.

Andy

May 25th, 2023 01:22

Faces
2781 said:

Yep.

May 24th, 2023 08:22

Altar
Goldfinch60 said:

We all move forward into new worlds all the times of our lives John, I have been through many of them at my age.

Andy

May 24th, 2023 02:08

Altar
2781 said:

Not me.

May 23rd, 2023 08:08



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