Comments received on poems by E.J. Waling



Soul Wars
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, \"Soul Wars\" really hit me hard! The way it\'s structured—so fragmented and disjointed—perfectly captures the chaos and overwhelm of modern life. Each line feels like a jolt, just like the constant barrage of information we deal with every day. The themes of manipulation and information warfare are so relevant right now, and you’ve nailed that sense of cognitive overload. It’s like you’ve put into words what so many of us are feeling but can’t quite articulate. This poem really makes you think about the battle for our minds and beliefs in this digital age. Truly thought-provoking and powerful!

July 25th, 2024 22:23

Character
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is unending John.

Andy

July 20th, 2024 01:19

Character
Jerry Reynolds said:

Nice, John. A lot to think about here.

July 19th, 2024 15:15

Dragon
Cassie58 said:

Visually captivating. Well done John.

July 9th, 2024 15:57

Dragon
Goldfinch60 said:

Back when they believed the world was flat as they reached the edge there was a sign that said \"Here Be Dragons\".
Nothing has changed John.

Andy

July 9th, 2024 01:20

Dragon
2781 said:

Until he pulls the plug.

July 8th, 2024 09:00

A.I. Good Or Bad
Goldfinch60 said:

AI or not there will still be some idiot who think that they are the best John.

Andy

July 7th, 2024 01:16

Endless Voyage
Goldfinch60 said:

Infinity certainly does await John, I will meet you there.

Andy

July 6th, 2024 01:38

Middle Way
Goldfinch60 said:

The middle way is certainly the way John. Everything in moderation.

Andy

July 4th, 2024 01:13

Stories
Cassie58 said:

Stories based on religion are the ones I find most scary. There is a real art to telling stories. I loved the ones my Dad would read to me at bedtime. Even if they made me cry :) Enjoyed my visit John. Much to contemplate here.

June 29th, 2024 06:46

Stories
2781 said:

What has been is what will be, and what has been done is what will be done; there is nothing new under the sun.

June 29th, 2024 06:45

The Station
Goldfinch60 said:

Each journey takes us to a better place in our lives John.

Andy

June 26th, 2024 01:19

Contemplation3
Goldfinch60 said:

We must all think deeply to see the truisms in our lives John.

But then as tell people, \"Don\'t think! It\'s dangerous!\"

Andy

June 24th, 2024 01:09

Shimmering3
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words John.

Andy

June 20th, 2024 01:38

Thought Stream
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

June 18th, 2024 15:30

Emergent
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true as well John.

Andy

June 18th, 2024 01:47

Emergent
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, John.

June 17th, 2024 13:09

Emergent
antra.coree said:

Deep!!

June 17th, 2024 10:27

Emergent
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

June 17th, 2024 10:22

Kindness
Goldfinch60 said:

We must all take life just one step at a time.

Andy

June 17th, 2024 01:45

Kindness
antra.coree said:

Treasure in every word❤

June 16th, 2024 07:38

Nevermore
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John but there is a theory that there are and infinite number of parallel universes where every thing that could have happened in out lives does happen.

Andy

June 16th, 2024 01:16

Inhabit
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John but as you know I think outside of that encasement.

Andy

June 12th, 2024 02:11

Absorption
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John but we must think for ourselves,

Andy

June 11th, 2024 01:49

Thought Stream
Goldfinch60 said:

That stream of thoughts will never leave our minds John, there will always be new thoughts.

Andy

June 10th, 2024 01:43

Lore
Cassie58 said:

Sometimes you wish those bloomin stories weren’t passed down from generation to generation from ancient scripts. Medieval doesn’t work in current times. A strong write John.

June 9th, 2024 10:21

Altered
Goldfinch60 said:

So glad I am of an age where I have the experience to do what I want and need to do John.

Andy

June 6th, 2024 01:53

Altered
Cassie58 said:

Pleased I was born when I was. I have experienced freedom of thought and expression. What is being driven in at speed is frightening. I fear for the future. Your poem says it all John. A bleak picture of mind bending.

June 6th, 2024 00:23

Convulsion
Cassie58 said:

I haven’t lost the power to form my own opinions. Not prepared to follow the sheep John.

June 3rd, 2024 02:42

Convulsion
Goldfinch60 said:

But I still have my opinion John as I think out of the box.

Andy

June 3rd, 2024 01:52



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