Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Parallel Trees
Goldfinch60 said:

I am intrigued by the idea of infinite parallel universes John.

Andy

July 23rd, 2022 00:02

Far Flung
L. B. Mek said:

a \'refreshing\' read
feel drenched to the bone
lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet

July 18th, 2022 03:29

Confined
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we do have only five senses but there is also a strong thing called love that we can project to those in our world.

Andy

July 15th, 2022 00:43

Oscillation
Goldfinch60 said:

That oscillation in life gets us nowhere John.

Andy

July 6th, 2022 00:08

Collective
Hollow Enigma said:

This is great and something I think I understand I hope! I think there is such a struggle to be your own person and a butterfly in a means. However taking a second look at humanity as an entirety, we all have a rooted connection to one another that makes us not hive-minded exactly but a strong wall or roman Phalanx.

July 1st, 2022 00:17

Collective
Goldfinch60 said:

May those puzzle pieces come together as one John and give us a wonderful earth on which to live.

Andy

July 1st, 2022 00:12

Ghost
Goldfinch60 said:

They are always there amongst us John.

Andy

June 28th, 2022 00:28

Ghost
Raven333 said:

your pen was great but I think the way the poem was threw me off my game, it got me dizzy. LOL

June 27th, 2022 21:17

Invasions
L. B. Mek said:

\'Touches,
tweaks.
Unaware.
Invisible
force,
under cover
gaining
control.

Butterfly effect.

Cascading
sinewy
web
of guidance.
Rolling
controlling
creating.
Invasion!\'
(Invasion\'s, from within
renouncing, our worth
in face
of circumstantial, fate
we look to hurtling rocks
for answers
while kicking, boredom\'s rocks
dreaming of Alien\'s
to save us, from
ourselves...
Never wondering, why
they would choose, to fly
away
so far, from wherever
they came from...)
another brilliantly
thought provoking, poem
dear Poet, thank you!

June 27th, 2022 04:30

Invasions
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John, some time we just never suspect what is happening to our lives.

Andy

June 27th, 2022 01:50

Next
Goldfinch60 said:

Those infinite possibilities are there for us all John.

Andy

June 18th, 2022 01:04

Possible
Goldfinch60 said:

In our lives everything is possible if our dreams are real.

Andy

June 11th, 2022 00:38

Timeless
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is that thing in our lives that shows no consistency in those lives John.

Andy

June 8th, 2022 00:24

Manifestations
Goldfinch60 said:

The creations in our life mean much to us if we are the ones that create them John.

Andy

June 4th, 2022 00:44

Endless
a thousand wishes said:

Speechless. I loved it

June 2nd, 2022 16:47

Meaning
Goldfinch60 said:

Self made certainly but always better if we go our own way and not follow the advice of many others,

Andy

June 2nd, 2022 01:19

Meaning
a thousand wishes said:

WOW, a deep dive into meaning and choices

June 1st, 2022 08:22

Pages
Goldfinch60 said:

That distant shore is a long way of yet John.

Andy

May 28th, 2022 23:57

Mind Worm
Jonas Robinson said:

Good stuff. Thank you for sharing. :)

May 26th, 2022 22:18

Facade
Goldfinch60 said:

But that facade can be brought into truth if it can be seen from outside the box of life in which we are trapped.

Andy

May 23rd, 2022 00:55

Song
L. B. Mek said:

\'Communicating.\'
that\'s the reflector, line
of direction, humanity\'s evolution
is missing
hence
our stagnant, state
of cyclically, meaningless
\'Vibrations, resonating\'
but never, illuminating...
(an insightful, philosophical
poetic treat of a read
thank you! dear poet)


May 20th, 2022 04:58

Song
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words John, music is there for all.

Andy

May 20th, 2022 00:40

Innocence
Goldfinch60 said:

That innocence of life is so wonderful, it\'s a pity it gets taken from us.

Andy

May 18th, 2022 00:55

Bombardment
Goldfinch60 said:

Those battles never win in the long run, they just cause more problems.

Andy

May 16th, 2022 00:30

Dust
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John, that dust of us in the Universe is so futile in the scheme of things.

Andy

May 12th, 2022 00:33

Narrative3
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words John.

\"How can you tell when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"

Andy

May 10th, 2022 00:58

Bubble2
Nicholas Browning said:

Every time I go outside and look up at the sky I see a wall. Different paint every day, but the wall remains the same.

May 7th, 2022 03:32

Whole Cloth
Goldfinch60 said:

Humanity\'s tapestry has taken many lifetimes to become what it is.

Andy

May 3rd, 2022 01:04

Octopus
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John but playing outside of the box can fill us with delight.

Andy

May 2nd, 2022 01:01

Bytes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John.

Andy

April 24th, 2022 00:50



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