Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Nothing Alike
Mello said:
If they came they would in slave and look for resources they need. But great work.
February 23rd, 2023 07:27
Mello said:
If they came they would in slave and look for resources they need. But great work.
February 23rd, 2023 07:27
Voices
Goldfinch60 said:
Many people only hear but do not listen John.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Many people only hear but do not listen John.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:59
Voices
L. B. Mek said:
\'Reverberating
ripples.
Voices.
Endless
echoes.\'
indeed, wise Poet
its all there for us to glean
we need but slow down
n heed, those vibrations
guiding our life\'s, story
February 20th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Reverberating
ripples.
Voices.
Endless
echoes.\'
indeed, wise Poet
its all there for us to glean
we need but slow down
n heed, those vibrations
guiding our life\'s, story
February 20th, 2023 05:06
Invasion
Natalie Gladmir said:
I cannot say that there is something surreal in your poem. Quite a plausible version of the merger of the human mind with the alien. LOL!
February 19th, 2023 15:43
Natalie Gladmir said:
I cannot say that there is something surreal in your poem. Quite a plausible version of the merger of the human mind with the alien. LOL!
February 19th, 2023 15:43
Timeless2
Goldfinch60 said:
Time, a state of mind that has no consistency.
Andy
February 18th, 2023 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Time, a state of mind that has no consistency.
Andy
February 18th, 2023 02:41
Dependency
John Prophet said:
Full speed ahead 🚀
Thank you for reading Andy.
JP
February 16th, 2023 07:45
John Prophet said:
Full speed ahead 🚀
Thank you for reading Andy.
JP
February 16th, 2023 07:45
Dependency
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always move forward John, keep that accelerator pressed to the floor.
Andy
February 16th, 2023 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always move forward John, keep that accelerator pressed to the floor.
Andy
February 16th, 2023 03:00
Smarter
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, J.P.
We are running faster and faster to???
February 13th, 2023 17:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, J.P.
We are running faster and faster to???
February 13th, 2023 17:39
Misty
Goldfinch60 said:
That infinity is within us all and we will always go towards it John.
Andy
February 12th, 2023 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That infinity is within us all and we will always go towards it John.
Andy
February 12th, 2023 02:50
Beast
Goldfinch60 said:
That beast is within us all but mine has been calmed and will never be seen.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That beast is within us all but mine has been calmed and will never be seen.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:48
Soul2
Goldfinch60 said:
Each soul in each of us takes us to the places nobody else will know.
Andy
February 7th, 2023 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Each soul in each of us takes us to the places nobody else will know.
Andy
February 7th, 2023 02:57
Expanding
Goldfinch60 said:
True John, everything from nothing and then to nothing.
Andy
February 5th, 2023 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
True John, everything from nothing and then to nothing.
Andy
February 5th, 2023 02:51
Brethren
Goldfinch60 said:
Those origins and gods are in our minds eye.
Andy
February 4th, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Those origins and gods are in our minds eye.
Andy
February 4th, 2023 02:44
Time Illusion
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, insightful Poet
what to do?
we be granted just, one
lifetime
to impact an infinite, universe
a rather hard task
unless we begin, perfectly positioned
even then, empire sands
foreshadow
how fleeting our achievements
appear, in the scope
of all those who came before
and those, yet to come
best, maybe to reimagine legacy
manifest it
in each appreciated, bite of life
simply, go with flow...
we egotistically assume, we own
our boat\'s of life
when in-fact, we merely get to paddle
our path
upon that river of fate, that gifted
us, breath...
February 3rd, 2023 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, insightful Poet
what to do?
we be granted just, one
lifetime
to impact an infinite, universe
a rather hard task
unless we begin, perfectly positioned
even then, empire sands
foreshadow
how fleeting our achievements
appear, in the scope
of all those who came before
and those, yet to come
best, maybe to reimagine legacy
manifest it
in each appreciated, bite of life
simply, go with flow...
we egotistically assume, we own
our boat\'s of life
when in-fact, we merely get to paddle
our path
upon that river of fate, that gifted
us, breath...
February 3rd, 2023 05:39
Transformations
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last three lines say it all John.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last three lines say it all John.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:54
Design
Goldfinch60 said:
We only have to go outside of that box in which we are trapped to see our real Design John.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
We only have to go outside of that box in which we are trapped to see our real Design John.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:52
Aquarius
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, those days were part of my life where life was so wonderful in the sixties and seventies.
Andy
January 29th, 2023 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, those days were part of my life where life was so wonderful in the sixties and seventies.
Andy
January 29th, 2023 02:59
Delusion
L. B. Mek said:
\'Internal
data points
nothing
more.
Autobiographical.
Gazing
in the
mirror.
Seeing
all there
is to
see.
Swirling
in the
cosmic
wind.
Adrift
in false
reality.\'
so very true, dear wise Poet
(how sad
existence\'s proximity to greatness
aside
its shadowing of hapless insignificance...)
January 23rd, 2023 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Internal
data points
nothing
more.
Autobiographical.
Gazing
in the
mirror.
Seeing
all there
is to
see.
Swirling
in the
cosmic
wind.
Adrift
in false
reality.\'
so very true, dear wise Poet
(how sad
existence\'s proximity to greatness
aside
its shadowing of hapless insignificance...)
January 23rd, 2023 06:15
Delusion
Goldfinch60 said:
The centre of the Universe is within each of our own Universes John.
Andy
January 23rd, 2023 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The centre of the Universe is within each of our own Universes John.
Andy
January 23rd, 2023 03:27
Empire
Goldfinch60 said:
Those empires will eventually fade into the dust of the Universe John.
Andy
January 22nd, 2023 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Those empires will eventually fade into the dust of the Universe John.
Andy
January 22nd, 2023 02:37
Seed2
Goldfinch60 said:
Those seeds of life are so wonderful John, we must enjoy them all.
Andy
January 18th, 2023 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those seeds of life are so wonderful John, we must enjoy them all.
Andy
January 18th, 2023 02:42
Glass Darkly
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see our own things through that dark glass and wonder which is right John.
Andy
January 15th, 2023 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see our own things through that dark glass and wonder which is right John.
Andy
January 15th, 2023 02:42
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