Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Smarter
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, J.P.
We are running faster and faster to???

February 13th, 2023 17:39

Misty
Goldfinch60 said:

That infinity is within us all and we will always go towards it John.

Andy

February 12th, 2023 02:50

Beast
Goldfinch60 said:

That beast is within us all but mine has been calmed and will never be seen.

Andy

February 9th, 2023 02:48

Divide
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John, that cartoon says it all.

Andy

February 8th, 2023 02:55

Soul2
Goldfinch60 said:

Each soul in each of us takes us to the places nobody else will know.

Andy

February 7th, 2023 02:57

Expanding
Goldfinch60 said:

True John, everything from nothing and then to nothing.

Andy

February 5th, 2023 02:51

Brethren
Goldfinch60 said:

Those origins and gods are in our minds eye.

Andy

February 4th, 2023 02:44

Time Illusion
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, insightful Poet
what to do?
we be granted just, one
lifetime
to impact an infinite, universe
a rather hard task
unless we begin, perfectly positioned
even then, empire sands
foreshadow
how fleeting our achievements
appear, in the scope
of all those who came before
and those, yet to come
best, maybe to reimagine legacy
manifest it
in each appreciated, bite of life
simply, go with flow...
we egotistically assume, we own
our boat\'s of life
when in-fact, we merely get to paddle
our path
upon that river of fate, that gifted
us, breath...


February 3rd, 2023 05:39

Transformations
Goldfinch60 said:

Those last three lines say it all John.

Andy

February 1st, 2023 02:54

Transformations
John Prophet said:

Thank you kindly for reading my work

January 31st, 2023 18:27

Transformations
Ok Waleed said:

Great poem

January 31st, 2023 17:07

Design
Goldfinch60 said:

We only have to go outside of that box in which we are trapped to see our real Design John.

Andy

January 31st, 2023 02:52

Aquarius
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John, those days were part of my life where life was so wonderful in the sixties and seventies.

Andy

January 29th, 2023 02:59

Tea Cup
Goldfinch60 said:

That cup of tea is important to us all John.

Andy

January 26th, 2023 02:51

Delusion
L. B. Mek said:

\'Internal
data points
nothing
more.
Autobiographical.
Gazing
in the
mirror.
Seeing
all there
is to
see.
Swirling
in the
cosmic
wind.
Adrift
in false
reality.\'
so very true, dear wise Poet
(how sad
existence\'s proximity to greatness
aside
its shadowing of hapless insignificance...)

January 23rd, 2023 06:15

Delusion
Goldfinch60 said:

The centre of the Universe is within each of our own Universes John.

Andy

January 23rd, 2023 03:27

Empire
Goldfinch60 said:

Those empires will eventually fade into the dust of the Universe John.

Andy

January 22nd, 2023 02:37

Empire
Ok Waleed said:

Wait is this about star wars

January 21st, 2023 16:27

Seed2
Goldfinch60 said:

Those seeds of life are so wonderful John, we must enjoy them all.

Andy

January 18th, 2023 02:42

Glass Darkly
Goldfinch60 said:

We each see our own things through that dark glass and wonder which is right John.

Andy

January 15th, 2023 02:42

Size
Goldfinch60 said:

Many are not aware of how minimal we are in the Universe John.

Andy

January 12th, 2023 01:55

Where
Goldfinch60 said:

They are there John but we do not recognise them yet.

Andy

January 11th, 2023 01:35

A.I. Wars
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John but those of us who are aware will lead their own lives.

Andy

January 10th, 2023 02:18

Inundated
L. B. Mek said:

\'Overwhelming.\'
\'Lack of
moderation.\'
\'Pounding
rhythm
of technology.
Misused.\'
\'Pitting
one against
the other.
Pushback.
More of
the same.
Inducing
confusion,\'
Brilliant!

January 6th, 2023 05:42

Whose Reality
L. B. Mek said:

\'Spinning
in a box.\'
(indeed, we seldom contemplate
the likeliness
that it\'s us, awaiting to be freed
from our \'pandora box\' mirage realities
to plague, that which awaits
in that universe of true existence
affording us
an opportunity to taste, breath
in our ungrateful lungs
and hope, in our stuttering heart\'s...)
brilliantly thought provoking
as-ever, dear Poet

January 6th, 2023 05:39

People
L. B. Mek said:

\'Motes
in the
vastness.\'
wonderful imagery!

January 6th, 2023 05:33

Inundated
Goldfinch60 said:

Too much information id available nowadays and it can be so confusing.

Andy

January 6th, 2023 02:30

Inundated
Poets Dream said:

I can feel the emotions bursting threw my screen! This was a really good write!

January 4th, 2023 22:00

Whose Reality
Goldfinch60 said:

Reality is what is true to each of us.

Andy

January 4th, 2023 03:01

Where The Gods Live
Goldfinch60 said:

We each have our own god/Spirit John.

Andy

January 3rd, 2023 03:05



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