Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Ethereal Riff
Pop64 said:

This so well allows the reader to identify that there really are so many paths, we have so many choices, yet we\'ve lived them or are about to live them all. Really enjoyed this read.

October 16th, 2023 08:42

Pliable
Goldfinch60 said:

All our thoughts, ideas and future are in our grey matter John.

Andy

October 15th, 2023 01:52

Rituals
Goldfinch60 said:

As I have said before John, we must always think outside the box.

Andy

October 5th, 2023 01:18

Measure
Goldfinch60 said:

We each have our own truth within us John.

Andy

October 1st, 2023 01:17

Wool
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words, we often have the wool pulled over our eyes to hide us from the truth.

Andy

September 24th, 2023 00:58

Wool
2781 said:

If not crutched, fly blown.

September 23rd, 2023 15:36

Cusp2
L. B. Mek said:

\'Techno Sapiens.\'
haunting, visionary words
its coming, palpable...
thank you! dear Poet

September 22nd, 2023 05:37

Cusp2
Goldfinch60 said:

We will always move on John. We never know what is around the next corner of our lives.

Andy

September 22nd, 2023 01:08

Primal
Goldfinch60 said:

That primal being is in us all John, but hopefully most of us keep it under control, unfortunately those in power don\'t!

Andy

September 21st, 2023 01:53

Where2
Goldfinch60 said:

That sound of silence within can bring so much resilience and wonder to our lives John.

Andy

September 20th, 2023 01:26

Understanding2
Goldfinch60 said:

As age overcomes us understanding becomes more natural.

Andy

September 19th, 2023 00:44

Endless2
L. B. Mek said:

\'milieu\'
one of my favourite words!
P G. Wodehouse visits me
in that word
a small reminder
that there are the lighter
pages
in the annals of humanity..
a reminder we all need
from time to time
desperately!

September 18th, 2023 05:03

Endless2
Goldfinch60 said:

We all move on in life John and always will do into that world of immortality.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:58

Dark Sky
L. B. Mek said:

\'Hopelessly
adrift.
Lemmings.
Sheep.
Critical
thinking,
independent
thought
crushed.\'

\'Battle
for the
soul.
Lost!
Marching
orders
planet wide.
What was,
will never
be allowed.\'

and we\'re watching the demise
real-time, front row seats
with our eyes shut wide..
(just crazy dear Poet
unfathomably, stupendously
crazy!)

September 15th, 2023 07:18

Light
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, refracted or a spotlight
own it, make sure we shine bright
while it hovers over us
(wonderful energy in this one dear Poet)

September 11th, 2023 05:25

Crystalline
Goldfinch60 said:

Those crystalline entities are within our world John but we do not see them.

Andy

September 10th, 2023 01:52

Destination2
L. B. Mek said:

blank pages as our road maps
we traverse a life designed
to have us stuttering our success
while gliding effortless
to all the abundant woe
in our accursed paths..
(better we don\'t know
what new flavour of strife
is waiting around that next corner
or else, i doubt
any of us would bother
learning to stand as children
knowing
we\'re better of just crawling around
realising
it won\'t be long till we\'re back down
on our hands and feet)

September 8th, 2023 03:18

Scripted
L. B. Mek said:

very clever
yes, antiquity named them magicians
Merlin as their legacy supreme
we call them politician\'s and scientist\'s
those
who confuse, delude and program us
in-to ignoring the logic
in our own, thoughts...
(another insightful slice
from your wisdom eyes..
thank you!
oh cherished Poet)

September 4th, 2023 05:26

Flows
kai-leah said:

Cool but the way it’s written is kinda distracting. Not allowing me to fully meditate on the words.

September 3rd, 2023 04:03

Hypnosis
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John. A few years ago I was going up to London on a Sunday.
I was at the railway station to get the first train and there were 16 people on the platforms, I was the ONLY one not on the \'phone!

Andy

September 2nd, 2023 01:27

Door
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John, in our lives we have passed through many doors and the ones I have passed through have given me a wonderful life.

Andy

September 1st, 2023 01:17

Inorganic
Goldfinch60 said:

Gods are only in the minds of the organic, inorganic do not need gods.

Andy

August 31st, 2023 01:26

Alignment2
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(and crazy the symmetry
between your wonderful poem
and the latest scribble I shared)
\'Time
space
choreography.
Infinite
moving parts
conjoined.\'

August 28th, 2023 04:35

Alignment2
Goldfinch60 said:

At least we all arrive on that scene eventually John.

Andy

August 28th, 2023 01:49

Introspection
Goldfinch60 said:

All we can do is move on into what awaits us in our path of life John.

Andy

August 24th, 2023 01:07

Solitude
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words John, being in silence can bring such wonders to body and mind.

Andy

August 24th, 2023 00:54

Solitude
2781 said:

Call no one teacher...

August 23rd, 2023 12:27

Our People
2781 said:

That\'s true.

August 21st, 2023 08:02

Marching
2781 said:

My sight turn to advertising lately. I couldn\'t believe I fell for that garbage.

August 20th, 2023 07:40

Alone3
2781 said:

You just described societies slide.

August 19th, 2023 08:09



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