Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Cradle
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
This is great food for thought and should be read at least twice to gain a better understanding of the author\'s (your) intent.
The second time I read this piece, I ended with a page break after \"do we\" in the stanza, \"Haven\'t a clue,
do we, of the nature of things, etc.
Your other verses contain page breaks at that point, so it may have been just how you typed it. Yet, it is an easier and more understandable read if the page break occurs have \"do we.\"
Nicely done!
September 24th, 2018 13:14
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
This is great food for thought and should be read at least twice to gain a better understanding of the author\'s (your) intent.
The second time I read this piece, I ended with a page break after \"do we\" in the stanza, \"Haven\'t a clue,
do we, of the nature of things, etc.
Your other verses contain page breaks at that point, so it may have been just how you typed it. Yet, it is an easier and more understandable read if the page break occurs have \"do we.\"
Nicely done!
September 24th, 2018 13:14
Crimson Fog
The Gifted One said:
Now that is true poetry in motion. A very nice read handsome.
The Gifted One
September 17th, 2018 09:32
The Gifted One said:
Now that is true poetry in motion. A very nice read handsome.
The Gifted One
September 17th, 2018 09:32
I Fear Not
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Awesome work and I love the artwork you chose...it fits perfectly...take care..
August 2nd, 2018 15:40
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Awesome work and I love the artwork you chose...it fits perfectly...take care..
August 2nd, 2018 15:40
Speck
HangingbyaHalo said:
My perception of this was the fall of humanity, being replaced with technology.
A wonderful thought provoking piece.
With no disrespect may I ask what you intended the reader to see?
June 14th, 2018 18:33
HangingbyaHalo said:
My perception of this was the fall of humanity, being replaced with technology.
A wonderful thought provoking piece.
With no disrespect may I ask what you intended the reader to see?
June 14th, 2018 18:33
Hand
MaddieJ said:
Not a fan of the formatting that you chose for this piece, however I am a fan of the words! Might I ask, are you referring to the prehistoric art on the walls of caves? I am quite fascinated with prehistoric art.
June 6th, 2018 18:08
MaddieJ said:
Not a fan of the formatting that you chose for this piece, however I am a fan of the words! Might I ask, are you referring to the prehistoric art on the walls of caves? I am quite fascinated with prehistoric art.
June 6th, 2018 18:08
A Walk In The Woods
FineB said:
Hi JGCollins.
I am a rambler and I belong to a walking group.
This poem speaks to me. There is nothing more therapeutic than a walk in tbe woods to relieve the stress of modern life and its effects.
Thank you
Keep writing
FineB
May 7th, 2018 07:24
FineB said:
Hi JGCollins.
I am a rambler and I belong to a walking group.
This poem speaks to me. There is nothing more therapeutic than a walk in tbe woods to relieve the stress of modern life and its effects.
Thank you
Keep writing
FineB
May 7th, 2018 07:24
Creativity
WildMoonChild said:
So deep and real, love the layout and how my eyes were eager to read the next word!
March 27th, 2018 17:11
WildMoonChild said:
So deep and real, love the layout and how my eyes were eager to read the next word!
March 27th, 2018 17:11
Oozed
Lorna said:
Out of the chemical soup and into the rat race of today....... how did we get here?
March 21st, 2018 11:00
Lorna said:
Out of the chemical soup and into the rat race of today....... how did we get here?
March 21st, 2018 11:00
Genesis
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s right. I\'m immortal.
Good one, very interesting!
March 16th, 2018 09:00
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s right. I\'m immortal.
Good one, very interesting!
March 16th, 2018 09:00
Sea Monkeys
Lorna said:
I\'ll try to remember!!! It might help with road rage against tailgaters (although I\'m too tired of raging to do it anymore).........
March 4th, 2018 06:19
Lorna said:
I\'ll try to remember!!! It might help with road rage against tailgaters (although I\'m too tired of raging to do it anymore).........
March 4th, 2018 06:19
Dark Force
ZIGGY said:
hi I saw we have the same last name I came in for a read so glad I did I like this one can I ask what inspired this this theme ,,,zigs
February 24th, 2018 13:11
ZIGGY said:
hi I saw we have the same last name I came in for a read so glad I did I like this one can I ask what inspired this this theme ,,,zigs
February 24th, 2018 13:11
Animal
Caring dove said:
great poem ! so true, we are animals tho to be perfectly honest with you , a lot of us are cruel to animals, many of us think we are superior and that we have the right to hurt animals , that we can treat them how we want .. a sad state of affairs.. if we
February 24th, 2018 12:25
Caring dove said:
great poem ! so true, we are animals tho to be perfectly honest with you , a lot of us are cruel to animals, many of us think we are superior and that we have the right to hurt animals , that we can treat them how we want .. a sad state of affairs.. if we
February 24th, 2018 12:25
Animal
Maddy Daltrey said:
The message conveyed here is so true! Fantadtic work!
October 18th, 2017 17:16
Maddy Daltrey said:
The message conveyed here is so true! Fantadtic work!
October 18th, 2017 17:16
Animal
orchidee said:
I say we are animals - mammals. But we have been appointed care-takers of God\'s creation. We are superior in that way.
October 18th, 2017 09:20
orchidee said:
I say we are animals - mammals. But we have been appointed care-takers of God\'s creation. We are superior in that way.
October 18th, 2017 09:20
Animal
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but it is a shame that Homo sapiens cannot be more responsible for itself.
October 18th, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but it is a shame that Homo sapiens cannot be more responsible for itself.
October 18th, 2017 08:07
They Will Be Different
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true in many respects it is what learning and change is all about but sometimes the experience that the elder have comes to the fore in many situations and experience cannot be taught.
Good write.
October 16th, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true in many respects it is what learning and change is all about but sometimes the experience that the elder have comes to the fore in many situations and experience cannot be taught.
Good write.
October 16th, 2017 01:07
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