Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Tech
Goldfinch60 said:
Eyes wide open certainly but there are so many out there now with their eyes wide shut.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Eyes wide open certainly but there are so many out there now with their eyes wide shut.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:27
Tally
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write John and those last two lines are so true.
May 22nd, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write John and those last two lines are so true.
May 22nd, 2020 00:15
Primitive
A said:
Let me be the first to comment, you really set the \'organic thoughts\' quick pace, passionate kind of script here. You\'ve got a mindset, a fire in you
I like the way you\'re getting ut out,
Putting it in your words.
It\'s almost like a rose in a sense. Round after round, endless petals. Thought after thought, but it\'s not like just thought, it feeling. Feelings arent always sentences, and most times the best words to use to describe a feeling are in no way actually relative to that feeling at all.
But it\'s just, like
Purely feeling satisfaction.
From your poem,
Personally, I\'ve gotten the perspective that you have every intention to write in a delicate and powerful, conscious perspective. To write with a cause.
However your lost in your mindset on that.
You dont know where to begin to describe the cause you have so much fire for, because also you arent fully sure what \'all\' of your \'cause\' is.
Your lost.
Idk atleast that\'s my interp. Could just be about burgers or some sht.;)
May 10th, 2020 10:57
A said:
Let me be the first to comment, you really set the \'organic thoughts\' quick pace, passionate kind of script here. You\'ve got a mindset, a fire in you
I like the way you\'re getting ut out,
Putting it in your words.
It\'s almost like a rose in a sense. Round after round, endless petals. Thought after thought, but it\'s not like just thought, it feeling. Feelings arent always sentences, and most times the best words to use to describe a feeling are in no way actually relative to that feeling at all.
But it\'s just, like
Purely feeling satisfaction.
From your poem,
Personally, I\'ve gotten the perspective that you have every intention to write in a delicate and powerful, conscious perspective. To write with a cause.
However your lost in your mindset on that.
You dont know where to begin to describe the cause you have so much fire for, because also you arent fully sure what \'all\' of your \'cause\' is.
Your lost.
Idk atleast that\'s my interp. Could just be about burgers or some sht.;)
May 10th, 2020 10:57
Sail
FredPeyer said:
Even though it would be great, it is impossible to find the \'perfect tack\' in life. Read it three times, am still pondering....
April 26th, 2020 12:30
FredPeyer said:
Even though it would be great, it is impossible to find the \'perfect tack\' in life. Read it three times, am still pondering....
April 26th, 2020 12:30
Uncertain
FredPeyer said:
Am uncertain if your poem is real but love it anyway!
April 26th, 2020 03:30
FredPeyer said:
Am uncertain if your poem is real but love it anyway!
April 26th, 2020 03:30
Mechanical
FredPeyer said:
You got it, John, the Universe doesn\'t care about our little problems. Life just is. Well done!
April 16th, 2020 12:39
FredPeyer said:
You got it, John, the Universe doesn\'t care about our little problems. Life just is. Well done!
April 16th, 2020 12:39
Beliefs
John Prophet said:
Hi DA,
Our beliefs come from all that we know, which is precious little.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
JP
April 12th, 2020 06:03
John Prophet said:
Hi DA,
Our beliefs come from all that we know, which is precious little.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
JP
April 12th, 2020 06:03
Beliefs
dusk arising said:
Whilst they were believing the world was flat some guys got together and decided to create a thing called religion. Along came a guy over a thousand years later who proved the world revolved around the sun.... the religious guys branded hima a heretic and imprisoned him..... that guy was Galileo... 300 years later the religious guys agreed he was right....
It\'s incredible some of the beliefs people hang onto..
I really enjoyed your writing today.
April 11th, 2020 19:25
dusk arising said:
Whilst they were believing the world was flat some guys got together and decided to create a thing called religion. Along came a guy over a thousand years later who proved the world revolved around the sun.... the religious guys branded hima a heretic and imprisoned him..... that guy was Galileo... 300 years later the religious guys agreed he was right....
It\'s incredible some of the beliefs people hang onto..
I really enjoyed your writing today.
April 11th, 2020 19:25
Yoke
dusk arising said:
So very true. This why religion captures the mind of the young naive inflicting a lifetimes brainwashing of control.
April 9th, 2020 13:47
dusk arising said:
So very true. This why religion captures the mind of the young naive inflicting a lifetimes brainwashing of control.
April 9th, 2020 13:47
Oblivion
thisismyidentity said:
I love this. It resonated with my own reality and is creatively written. Well done.
April 8th, 2020 11:40
thisismyidentity said:
I love this. It resonated with my own reality and is creatively written. Well done.
April 8th, 2020 11:40
Within
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John, that silence within us is so meaningful.
March 10th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John, that silence within us is so meaningful.
March 10th, 2020 01:29
Scars
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"What if..? question is probably the most asked question in the world that can never been answered.
\"What if I had not commented on your poem?\"
March 4th, 2020 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"What if..? question is probably the most asked question in the world that can never been answered.
\"What if I had not commented on your poem?\"
March 4th, 2020 02:01
Scars
Clara said:
Oh don\'t we all... If only we had a test run or perhaps infinite chances and choices. Great poem.
March 3rd, 2020 16:03
Clara said:
Oh don\'t we all... If only we had a test run or perhaps infinite chances and choices. Great poem.
March 3rd, 2020 16:03
Scars
dusk arising said:
Scarface maybe LOL.
Your words today echo thoughts i have had many times but hey-ho, my decisions seemed worthy at the time. The passage of time and the benefit of hindsight however do throw quite a different hue upon things.
I think you will have many reflecting back with your piece to day.
March 3rd, 2020 11:09
dusk arising said:
Scarface maybe LOL.
Your words today echo thoughts i have had many times but hey-ho, my decisions seemed worthy at the time. The passage of time and the benefit of hindsight however do throw quite a different hue upon things.
I think you will have many reflecting back with your piece to day.
March 3rd, 2020 11:09
Knowledge
Goldfinch60 said:
Each choice we make adds to our experience - experience cannot be taught.
Andy
February 26th, 2020 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Each choice we make adds to our experience - experience cannot be taught.
Andy
February 26th, 2020 01:09
Archaic
Goldfinch60 said:
The past will always be there but history has always been written by winners - what it the losers were right.
Andy
February 23rd, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
The past will always be there but history has always been written by winners - what it the losers were right.
Andy
February 23rd, 2020 01:29
Trends
Goldfinch60 said:
Those choices are always before, should we take \'The road less travelled\' ?
Andy
February 21st, 2020 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Those choices are always before, should we take \'The road less travelled\' ?
Andy
February 21st, 2020 01:53
Infinity
Goldfinch60 said:
At the end of my time on earth I will explore the galaxies in infinity.
Andy
February 19th, 2020 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
At the end of my time on earth I will explore the galaxies in infinity.
Andy
February 19th, 2020 02:55
As I Write
Goldfinch60 said:
Each word we write is consigned to history but the future is there in the words that we are going to write tomorrow.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 10:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Each word we write is consigned to history but the future is there in the words that we are going to write tomorrow.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 10:17
Vibrations
dusk arising said:
I found this format/layout too difficult to read and absorb the content. There are one or two poets on here who always use this format though.
February 14th, 2020 07:57
dusk arising said:
I found this format/layout too difficult to read and absorb the content. There are one or two poets on here who always use this format though.
February 14th, 2020 07:57
Grip
Bragee said:
Always a master plan behind the games, too bad the players never know.
February 4th, 2020 12:02
Bragee said:
Always a master plan behind the games, too bad the players never know.
February 4th, 2020 12:02
Magic Orb
Goldfinch60 said:
And may that life last forever in harmony and love.
January 25th, 2020 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
And may that life last forever in harmony and love.
January 25th, 2020 01:01
Drop
Nicholas Browning said:
Wow, how very true. Everything means nothing, and vice versa. There is meaning in all things, yet at the same time everything is meaningless. This is a nice write. Two thumbs up.
January 19th, 2020 02:27
Nicholas Browning said:
Wow, how very true. Everything means nothing, and vice versa. There is meaning in all things, yet at the same time everything is meaningless. This is a nice write. Two thumbs up.
January 19th, 2020 02:27
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