Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Humanity
WL Schuett said:

Thought provoking, but what do you believe a creator or that we invented the creator this was a little ambiguous...still good poem

September 2nd, 2017 08:56

Fate Of Us
wordseven7 said:

very good writing.

August 31st, 2017 11:17

Temptation
Egyptianqt79 said:

Love this!

August 28th, 2017 23:15

Love
myself and me said:

What is love? Big question, everyone have their own answers.
Nice writing.

August 26th, 2017 21:28

Love
Accidental Poet said:

Love, will let you know when you\'re in love. Beautiful poem. ; )

August 26th, 2017 19:46

One Planet Many Worlds
docstorm said:

A very true vision of every humans world. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed the read.

August 25th, 2017 15:55

Crashing Storm
burning-embers said:

The clock is ticking. A good and clever write.

August 20th, 2017 11:25

My Life
Accidental Poet said:

Your future lies there before you waiting only for your footsteps to make it worn path. But what some are not always taught is to plan your steps carefully so as not to regret them later in life. Very hard to do without the guidance of experienced elders. A very thought provoking write collinsjg. I can relate very well.

August 19th, 2017 09:45

My Life
Louis Gibbs said:

We come into this world, time and time again, the product of those many lives and experiences. In that regard I must respectfully disagree with Nicholas\'s take on coming in as a \'blank slate\'. True, we are mentally programmed by parents and culture to fit in, but our basic nature and inherent wisdom come in with us, and remain the determining compass of our lives.
Yes, I believe we can \"fracture the mold\" and \"create my own way\", as you express the proposition so well. Why else would we have bothered to come back ... again? Splendid, thought-provoking poem!

August 19th, 2017 08:31

My Life
Nicholas Browning said:

Wired? No. Molded? Yes. Every child is a fresh slate. A parent\'s job is to mold you into a decent person. The path you take in life is ultimately up to you, though. You\'ll have bits and pieces of everything you\'ve been through in the past with you wherever you go. That\'s just how it is. Unless you\'re insane. Crazy people don\'t give no way no how, they just do stuff. Interesting philosophy. Keep up the work.

August 19th, 2017 07:45

Vessels
Louis Gibbs said:

Echoes the theme of the poem I posted today. Since there are no coincidences, it must be the right time for the message, don\'t you think?
Well done writing, Collins!

August 18th, 2017 11:49

Vessels
Nicholas Browning said:

Haha, we are all slaves to some higher power that may or may not exist. Well said.

August 18th, 2017 08:00

Rage
myself and me said:

Wow, you wake me up. I just need to gather some strength and energy to do it.
A powerful one.

August 17th, 2017 22:08

Rage
Lizzy Renee said:

Good Job! :)

August 17th, 2017 18:18

Golden Rule
Goldfinch60 said:

It makes sense to me as well. We may not know but I believe there is a Spirit that runs through my life.
I have spoken at length to people of different religions and the upshot is that the true believers all believe in a higher power - Spirit - but approach it in different ways - that Spirit is always the same.

August 17th, 2017 00:55

Golden Rule
Sinead358 said:

Love the way you wrote this,
Thanks for sharing.

August 16th, 2017 15:26

Golden Rule
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 16th, 2017 13:32

Golden Rule
Louis Gibbs said:

You share my feelings and sum them up beautifully in this poem, JG! Well spoken, indeed. The Golden Rule is all the religious teaching we need.

August 16th, 2017 12:59

Milieu
Night Owl said:

Big YES to your poem-- Peeling away the layers to find yourself again... TY for this Right On write!

August 15th, 2017 10:33

Milieu
Louis Gibbs said:

Your poem reflects the rising of consciousness in the world that it is, indeed, \"Time to evolve.\" A very encouraging trend to bring to our awareness in your fine poem, JG! Thanks.

August 15th, 2017 09:24

Milieu
Nicholas Browning said:

Mind boggling work of art. It holds true, and I think about it every day. Good stuff.

August 15th, 2017 09:13

Buckle Up
Louis Gibbs said:

A lofty goal for humanity you describe ... but then what would we do for lessons? What would be the point of being here? Just saying.
A deep, thought-provoking poem here, JG. Well done!

August 13th, 2017 09:59

Buckle Up
Accidental Poet said:

As long as those Power Brokers don\'t get us all killed first. But a great bit of writing here collinsjg

August 13th, 2017 08:54

Underpinnings
Louis Gibbs said:

Brilliant, JG! You capture the essence of this imagined reality succinctly in this work. Well done!

August 12th, 2017 19:17

Awakening
Night Owl said:

Oh I like this poem-- I too wonder... Well done!

August 11th, 2017 09:29

The Melding
Michael Edwards said:

Super write and so thought provoking

August 10th, 2017 15:53

The Melding
Louis Gibbs said:

A brilliant peek ahead, this fine poem! Explorative thinking well presented, JG! You nailed it!

August 10th, 2017 15:47

Children
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that pivot is waiting for us to change the Universe.

August 10th, 2017 01:04

Children
Heather T said:

I don\'t resonate with the entirety of your message, but no matter. Excellent writing! Could be the epic beginning or ending of a novel. Your breadth of view is awesome.

August 9th, 2017 17:08

Children
Louis Gibbs said:

\"What a pivot indeed!\", and what a poem, indeed! You demonstrate great vision as well as poetic ability with this one, JG! Kudos.

August 9th, 2017 08:34



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