Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Synergy
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, the speed of life is now a blur.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, the speed of life is now a blur.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:16
Clay
Goldfinch60 said:
I may have been formed originally but found my own way into the place where I am now.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I may have been formed originally but found my own way into the place where I am now.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:22
Grid
L. B. Mek said:
great wordplay and theme on Asimov\'s laws (mule indeed)
thought provoking, astute and impassioned commentary!
while briefly studying computer science and they were lecturing
this supposedly \'statute laws\' to programming, I too
couldn\'t help wondering how negligently short-sighted
and self-servingly ignorant, it all sounded
I mean: what rule exists within humanity to adhere?
by what measure do you quantify integrity
when our very choices
curate existence\'s binary of fate or ill-fate...
how easy to forget
in the very same generation that nurtured
that lauded humanitarian Gandhi
\'our\' collective society helped curate:
that human nightmare of cruelty, Hitler...
and what has cost more lives
in the history of humankind
than that corrosive perversion of love
titled theology...
April 2nd, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
great wordplay and theme on Asimov\'s laws (mule indeed)
thought provoking, astute and impassioned commentary!
while briefly studying computer science and they were lecturing
this supposedly \'statute laws\' to programming, I too
couldn\'t help wondering how negligently short-sighted
and self-servingly ignorant, it all sounded
I mean: what rule exists within humanity to adhere?
by what measure do you quantify integrity
when our very choices
curate existence\'s binary of fate or ill-fate...
how easy to forget
in the very same generation that nurtured
that lauded humanitarian Gandhi
\'our\' collective society helped curate:
that human nightmare of cruelty, Hitler...
and what has cost more lives
in the history of humankind
than that corrosive perversion of love
titled theology...
April 2nd, 2021 04:36
Grid
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us in that Brave New World think outside the box and are beyond the future planned for us.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us in that Brave New World think outside the box and are beyond the future planned for us.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:11
Baton
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, sad when humanity\'s past is deemed obsolete to validate progressive ignorance, as modernity\'s go-to state..
good write of measured lament
March 29th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, sad when humanity\'s past is deemed obsolete to validate progressive ignorance, as modernity\'s go-to state..
good write of measured lament
March 29th, 2021 04:30
Baton
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe we will still exist in \'that someplace else\' John.
Andy
March 28th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe we will still exist in \'that someplace else\' John.
Andy
March 28th, 2021 00:31
Uncertainty
L. B. Mek said:
\'cyclical\' existence as nature intended, supposedly
at least at our distance to meaning..
maybe one day, we\'ll be granted access and introduce humanity: to the actual metaphysics of Reality...
March 26th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'cyclical\' existence as nature intended, supposedly
at least at our distance to meaning..
maybe one day, we\'ll be granted access and introduce humanity: to the actual metaphysics of Reality...
March 26th, 2021 05:13
Uncertainty
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, live is always changing and there is no end.
Andy
March 26th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, live is always changing and there is no end.
Andy
March 26th, 2021 02:04
Uncertainty
jarcher54 said:
Ouch... no end game? I like how you can\'t see the end of this word-play till it appears at the bottom of the page as you scroll down, coming at you like... well, like the end!
March 25th, 2021 22:46
jarcher54 said:
Ouch... no end game? I like how you can\'t see the end of this word-play till it appears at the bottom of the page as you scroll down, coming at you like... well, like the end!
March 25th, 2021 22:46
Emerging
L. B. Mek said:
\'stumbles that never relent
teaching us all the joy in a spirited lament
and lessons earned
by those scraped knees
we bravely, hobble forward with\'..
is the message your words conveyed, at least to me dear poet
March 25th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'stumbles that never relent
teaching us all the joy in a spirited lament
and lessons earned
by those scraped knees
we bravely, hobble forward with\'..
is the message your words conveyed, at least to me dear poet
March 25th, 2021 04:55
All
L. B. Mek said:
\'Perspective
and humility
in short
supply.
Brought
down to
size.
All brought
down to
Earth.
All,
just a
speck
in the
Martian
sky.
Humbling.\'..
indeed, so blatantly articulated even some of us most blinkered can\'t ignore:
\'its surgical precision of poignancy\'..
a great write dear poet!
March 18th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'Perspective
and humility
in short
supply.
Brought
down to
size.
All brought
down to
Earth.
All,
just a
speck
in the
Martian
sky.
Humbling.\'..
indeed, so blatantly articulated even some of us most blinkered can\'t ignore:
\'its surgical precision of poignancy\'..
a great write dear poet!
March 18th, 2021 05:44
All
Goldfinch60 said:
This speck upon which we live is just that, a speck in the Universe.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
This speck upon which we live is just that, a speck in the Universe.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:43
All
Goddess of the Mist said:
Nice job on this one! Definitely puts things in perspective. As always, very much enjoy reading your work.
March 17th, 2021 19:22
Goddess of the Mist said:
Nice job on this one! Definitely puts things in perspective. As always, very much enjoy reading your work.
March 17th, 2021 19:22
Realms
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beyond
capacity.
Capacity to
understand.
As constructed.
Parameciums
spinning
in circles.\'
an intriguing read, in your own unique style
March 16th, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beyond
capacity.
Capacity to
understand.
As constructed.
Parameciums
spinning
in circles.\'
an intriguing read, in your own unique style
March 16th, 2021 05:10
Realms
Goldfinch60 said:
Many realities can be beyond comprehension but the ones we do understand have brought us to the paces where we now are.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Many realities can be beyond comprehension but the ones we do understand have brought us to the paces where we now are.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:45
Vortices
Goldfinch60 said:
That transformation if created in the right way can bring such glory spinning around us John.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That transformation if created in the right way can bring such glory spinning around us John.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:28
Fading
L. B. Mek said:
\'Brainwashed.
Tech brainwash.
Tech changing.
The few
controlling
the many.
Has always
been.
The few
controlling
the many,
on a
global scale.
Tech zombies!
Beware the
fading.\'..
that harrowing image and your words, combine to make such an impactful read - beyond commentary, more an x-ray of society\'s most glaring threat, distilled for us all to read..
a timely and pertinent write, well executed! in my humble opinion..
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 11th, 2021 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Brainwashed.
Tech brainwash.
Tech changing.
The few
controlling
the many.
Has always
been.
The few
controlling
the many,
on a
global scale.
Tech zombies!
Beware the
fading.\'..
that harrowing image and your words, combine to make such an impactful read - beyond commentary, more an x-ray of society\'s most glaring threat, distilled for us all to read..
a timely and pertinent write, well executed! in my humble opinion..
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 11th, 2021 06:27
Fading
Goldfinch60 said:
That individualism is not lost yet but we do need to fight technology to keep it.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That individualism is not lost yet but we do need to fight technology to keep it.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:54
Proclamation
Goldfinch60 said:
History (facts?) is written by the winners, what if the losers were correct?
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
History (facts?) is written by the winners, what if the losers were correct?
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:37
NOthing
L. B. Mek said:
\'Firefly blink.
Deep woods
firefly flash.
Most
unnoticed,
nothing
left behind.
Majesty
and grandeur,
mere dust
in the
breeze.\'..
such insightful words, at times reading your work, morphs into a metaphorical commune between our forgotten dreams and those horizons of acceptance, we anchor our future\'s upon..
what a wonderful talent you posses for excavating and highlighting our natures truth\'s..
a great write of consequence, for us to learn from
March 5th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'Firefly blink.
Deep woods
firefly flash.
Most
unnoticed,
nothing
left behind.
Majesty
and grandeur,
mere dust
in the
breeze.\'..
such insightful words, at times reading your work, morphs into a metaphorical commune between our forgotten dreams and those horizons of acceptance, we anchor our future\'s upon..
what a wonderful talent you posses for excavating and highlighting our natures truth\'s..
a great write of consequence, for us to learn from
March 5th, 2021 04:51
Blue Marble
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking to say the least! what is meaning? If - but, a derivative of Time, when Time is devoid of choice and absorbed without restraint..
might as well, just take a plunge: hoping for the best..
a great read John
March 2nd, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking to say the least! what is meaning? If - but, a derivative of Time, when Time is devoid of choice and absorbed without restraint..
might as well, just take a plunge: hoping for the best..
a great read John
March 2nd, 2021 04:55
Blue Marble
Goldfinch60 said:
That minute speck that we are in the Universe makes us wonder what bigger and more wonderful things are out there.
Andy
March 2nd, 2021 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That minute speck that we are in the Universe makes us wonder what bigger and more wonderful things are out there.
Andy
March 2nd, 2021 01:33
Blue Marble
FredPeyer said:
Yes John, who knows, maybe we are just a giant experiment with eyes we cannot see checking on us once in a while just to see if we are still stupid or if we are finally getting it.
March 1st, 2021 16:12
FredPeyer said:
Yes John, who knows, maybe we are just a giant experiment with eyes we cannot see checking on us once in a while just to see if we are still stupid or if we are finally getting it.
March 1st, 2021 16:12
Owned
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John, but there are those who are hoping to fight against it, maybe one day?
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John, but there are those who are hoping to fight against it, maybe one day?
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:16
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