Comments received on poems by John Prophet
It Approaches
Louis Gibbs said:
Somehow I don\'t think \"singularity\" is all that close, unfortunately. To me it would indicate fulfillment as a species. Enjoy your work, \'c\'.
September 22nd, 2017 15:51
Louis Gibbs said:
Somehow I don\'t think \"singularity\" is all that close, unfortunately. To me it would indicate fulfillment as a species. Enjoy your work, \'c\'.
September 22nd, 2017 15:51
One With The Universe
wordseven7 said:
Not alone,
not apart,
but woven
into the fabric
of space and time,
part of a much
larger we!
My favorite part of the poem.
September 22nd, 2017 08:15
wordseven7 said:
Not alone,
not apart,
but woven
into the fabric
of space and time,
part of a much
larger we!
My favorite part of the poem.
September 22nd, 2017 08:15
Home
orchidee said:
Good write as a poem. I have to believe in a Garden of Eden for the Bible to make sense to me. It explains God\'s creation, \'original sin\' etc, seemingly in story-like themes. But not a fantasy for me.
September 20th, 2017 10:13
orchidee said:
Good write as a poem. I have to believe in a Garden of Eden for the Bible to make sense to me. It explains God\'s creation, \'original sin\' etc, seemingly in story-like themes. But not a fantasy for me.
September 20th, 2017 10:13
Ideas
orchidee said:
Simples! Nothing in me brain-box to start with! Look, there\'s a \'thought\' *light-bulb lights up*. heehee.
But seriously, we\'re beings made in the image and likeness of God, is how I see it. No spooky E.T. business or stuff like that. Well, \'receiving\' from a spiritual or heavenly realm maybe. I mean from God.
September 19th, 2017 07:45
orchidee said:
Simples! Nothing in me brain-box to start with! Look, there\'s a \'thought\' *light-bulb lights up*. heehee.
But seriously, we\'re beings made in the image and likeness of God, is how I see it. No spooky E.T. business or stuff like that. Well, \'receiving\' from a spiritual or heavenly realm maybe. I mean from God.
September 19th, 2017 07:45
Life
orchidee said:
Also - saying we\'re all God\'s children, in that He created all of us, I don\'t see Him as punishing us as naughty children.
September 17th, 2017 10:42
orchidee said:
Also - saying we\'re all God\'s children, in that He created all of us, I don\'t see Him as punishing us as naughty children.
September 17th, 2017 10:42
Life
orchidee said:
Of course it\'s easy for anyone to say \'A loving God exists\' when all is calm and cosy.
I heard a phrase from a church - bit strict one - The Lord intervened in that Mr X\'s wife broke her hip. Bit of a strange way to put it.
You see, I might think differently if I had a special needs child or something like that.Or to put it a bit flippantly - Dunno, I\'ve not been to heaven and back to ask Him!
September 17th, 2017 10:41
orchidee said:
Of course it\'s easy for anyone to say \'A loving God exists\' when all is calm and cosy.
I heard a phrase from a church - bit strict one - The Lord intervened in that Mr X\'s wife broke her hip. Bit of a strange way to put it.
You see, I might think differently if I had a special needs child or something like that.Or to put it a bit flippantly - Dunno, I\'ve not been to heaven and back to ask Him!
September 17th, 2017 10:41
Humanities Redemption
dusk arising said:
The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment on my stuff.
September 16th, 2017 10:53
dusk arising said:
The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment on my stuff.
September 16th, 2017 10:53
One With The Universe
dusk arising said:
I\'m inclined to be in agreement with comments made by Seek above.
Nice writing.
September 15th, 2017 21:58
dusk arising said:
I\'m inclined to be in agreement with comments made by Seek above.
Nice writing.
September 15th, 2017 21:58
One With The Universe
Seek said:
You capture the immensity of the Universe so well. Even with high tech, humans will never know. Only our egos make us think otherwise. As you rightly point out, if we are one with the U, we might make less mischief here on this minuscule planet. You may wish to compare notes with my own \"Cosmic Cruise\". Thanks for sharing.
September 15th, 2017 07:36
Seek said:
You capture the immensity of the Universe so well. Even with high tech, humans will never know. Only our egos make us think otherwise. As you rightly point out, if we are one with the U, we might make less mischief here on this minuscule planet. You may wish to compare notes with my own \"Cosmic Cruise\". Thanks for sharing.
September 15th, 2017 07:36
Acceleration
Mugsdaddy said:
Wonderful piece, ever so true ending, why we continue to move ahead no one seems to be looking ahead. Scary stuff.
Mugsdaddy
September 14th, 2017 06:54
Mugsdaddy said:
Wonderful piece, ever so true ending, why we continue to move ahead no one seems to be looking ahead. Scary stuff.
Mugsdaddy
September 14th, 2017 06:54
I Have Dreams
Accidental Poet said:
This pretty much says it all. We\'ve barely scratched the surface. And yes, why would a more advanced civilization want to waste their time with us until we \"all\" mature to a more universal social behavior. Great poem JG ; )
September 13th, 2017 19:09
Accidental Poet said:
This pretty much says it all. We\'ve barely scratched the surface. And yes, why would a more advanced civilization want to waste their time with us until we \"all\" mature to a more universal social behavior. Great poem JG ; )
September 13th, 2017 19:09
Time Prisoner
dark_energy said:
Simply put and thought-provoking. it\'s crazy how much things have developed over the years and what we take for granted now were not even in existence a few years back! Really enjoyed this piece :)
September 9th, 2017 14:53
dark_energy said:
Simply put and thought-provoking. it\'s crazy how much things have developed over the years and what we take for granted now were not even in existence a few years back! Really enjoyed this piece :)
September 9th, 2017 14:53
Time Prisoner
Accidental Poet said:
Granted, we are trapped within our own time physically. But what I find so appealing, is learning of other times and places. We are now in the age of technology and conveniences. I can\'t imaging how things would be 1000 years from now, and that\'s if we make it that far without destroying ourselves first. Excellent write Collin. ; )
September 9th, 2017 13:10
Accidental Poet said:
Granted, we are trapped within our own time physically. But what I find so appealing, is learning of other times and places. We are now in the age of technology and conveniences. I can\'t imaging how things would be 1000 years from now, and that\'s if we make it that far without destroying ourselves first. Excellent write Collin. ; )
September 9th, 2017 13:10
Time Prisoner
Louis Gibbs said:
We find ourselves in different versions of consensus-realities over time as we progress in our experiencing ... true. I believe we are \"trapped\" only by our slow progress in evolving past the inability to recognize and accept our oneness. We continue on this cycle of experiencing until we do ... then can graduate to the next level of being.
Love your insightful poem, JG!
September 9th, 2017 07:54
Louis Gibbs said:
We find ourselves in different versions of consensus-realities over time as we progress in our experiencing ... true. I believe we are \"trapped\" only by our slow progress in evolving past the inability to recognize and accept our oneness. We continue on this cycle of experiencing until we do ... then can graduate to the next level of being.
Love your insightful poem, JG!
September 9th, 2017 07:54
Years Long Past
bwilliams said:
It\'s sad how fast time goes sometimes. At least we have our memories, I guess. Loved your poem!
September 8th, 2017 15:02
bwilliams said:
It\'s sad how fast time goes sometimes. At least we have our memories, I guess. Loved your poem!
September 8th, 2017 15:02
Time To Grow Up
dusk arising said:
I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here have written of the desire for world peace - self included. Nice writing.
September 6th, 2017 16:45
dusk arising said:
I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here have written of the desire for world peace - self included. Nice writing.
September 6th, 2017 16:45
Joy Of Aging
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, my time may be done but I am not stopping yet.
September 6th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, my time may be done but I am not stopping yet.
September 6th, 2017 00:50
Joy Of Aging
FredPeyer said:
JG, you just very beautifully described my life! Except for the last stanza! My time isn\'t done yet! It is only starting!
September 5th, 2017 21:33
FredPeyer said:
JG, you just very beautifully described my life! Except for the last stanza! My time isn\'t done yet! It is only starting!
September 5th, 2017 21:33
Joy Of Aging
lasergraph said:
I can identify with this far too much. Great journey.
September 5th, 2017 15:35
lasergraph said:
I can identify with this far too much. Great journey.
September 5th, 2017 15:35
Define God
orchidee said:
The Bible says in one place: \'God is....\' Erm, that\'s a great help maybe - not! But He just IS - without beginning or end!
September 4th, 2017 08:30
orchidee said:
The Bible says in one place: \'God is....\' Erm, that\'s a great help maybe - not! But He just IS - without beginning or end!
September 4th, 2017 08:30
Define God
Seek said:
Ah! The search for the godhead is never ending. Is it possible once we locate and corner him/her/it that life as we know it may come to an end? Provocative, interesting write!
September 4th, 2017 07:58
Seek said:
Ah! The search for the godhead is never ending. Is it possible once we locate and corner him/her/it that life as we know it may come to an end? Provocative, interesting write!
September 4th, 2017 07:58
How Else Could It Have Gone
dusk arising said:
Maybe this is the alternative world?
September 3rd, 2017 14:14
dusk arising said:
Maybe this is the alternative world?
September 3rd, 2017 14:14
How Else Could It Have Gone
orchidee said:
A fine write. Seems a sort of \'What if.....? poem. We can\'t reverse what\'s already happened; the present is here now; and the future is yet to come. That\'s how I see it.
September 3rd, 2017 08:50
orchidee said:
A fine write. Seems a sort of \'What if.....? poem. We can\'t reverse what\'s already happened; the present is here now; and the future is yet to come. That\'s how I see it.
September 3rd, 2017 08:50
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