Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Write
orchidee said:

By the time ya done all that - Early morning, still dark, etc, etc......\'\' I\'m surprised ya had time let to write! heehee.

January 10th, 2019 07:47

Power
dusk arising said:

I agree with every word. Looking around this site its easy to see how the powerful have corrupted the minds of some who, for reasons which are beyond me, continually spout quasi religious bullshit poetry.
To what purpose i wonder?
Good write.

January 2nd, 2019 02:32

Endgame
Simon Bromley said:

Very straight to the point write! Life, especially humanity evolving all the time to the point where were practically driven by money and power, apart from the odd few of course. Am I right? Very good write.

December 27th, 2018 11:21

Deep
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes we live in a circle of mystery here on this wonderful planet and thanks for this well-crafted reminder that we do not have to know answers to recognise the magic in nature around us.

December 24th, 2018 11:52

Savage
Neville said:

I hope you dont mind me being the first to visit these words and leave a mark... enjoyed from one end to t\'other... Neville

December 22nd, 2018 08:04

Christmas
orchidee said:

A fine write JG.

December 6th, 2018 15:00

Communication
Fay Slimm. said:

A well- constructed reminder of what communication can achieve given time - - thanks for sharing it JG.

December 4th, 2018 14:07

Fireplace
Goldfinch60 said:

Mesmerising words as well.

November 30th, 2018 02:09

Never Born
Neville said:

a relevant question & one that has been asked throughout time, and ever shall be I imagine... nicely penned.. All Good Things, Neville

November 19th, 2018 10:49

Ethereal Riff
Goldfinch60 said:

Infinite life in infinite parallel Universes. We have travelled them all. Good write JG.

November 5th, 2018 01:10

Wandering
sylviasearcher said:

I\'m always wandering and wondering.

October 26th, 2018 07:53

Cradle
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

This is great food for thought and should be read at least twice to gain a better understanding of the author\'s (your) intent.

The second time I read this piece, I ended with a page break after \"do we\" in the stanza, \"Haven\'t a clue,
do we, of the nature of things, etc.

Your other verses contain page breaks at that point, so it may have been just how you typed it. Yet, it is an easier and more understandable read if the page break occurs have \"do we.\"

Nicely done!

September 24th, 2018 13:14

Crimson Fog
The Gifted One said:

Now that is true poetry in motion. A very nice read handsome.

The Gifted One


September 17th, 2018 09:32

The Well
Crystal Hope said:

wow! so beautifully done!

August 7th, 2018 21:37

I Fear Not
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Awesome work and I love the artwork you chose...it fits perfectly...take care..

August 2nd, 2018 15:40

Ascent
poetboy123 said:

Very true, and very well written!

July 22nd, 2018 10:02

Creator
willyweed said:

we are all created creators. ww

June 19th, 2018 20:20

Speck
HangingbyaHalo said:

My perception of this was the fall of humanity, being replaced with technology.
A wonderful thought provoking piece.
With no disrespect may I ask what you intended the reader to see?


June 14th, 2018 18:33

Life Change
poetboy123 said:

An enjoyable, thoughtful write!

June 9th, 2018 11:48

Hand
MaddieJ said:

Not a fan of the formatting that you chose for this piece, however I am a fan of the words! Might I ask, are you referring to the prehistoric art on the walls of caves? I am quite fascinated with prehistoric art.

June 6th, 2018 18:08

A Walk In The Woods
Michael Edwards said:

A real pleasure of a read JG

May 7th, 2018 08:15

A Walk In The Woods
FineB said:

Hi JGCollins.

I am a rambler and I belong to a walking group.

This poem speaks to me. There is nothing more therapeutic than a walk in tbe woods to relieve the stress of modern life and its effects.

Thank you

Keep writing
FineB


May 7th, 2018 07:24

Sex And Violence
onepauly said:

true.

May 6th, 2018 12:07

Sunrise
onepauly said:

until the next time.
very satisfying


May 2nd, 2018 23:11

Sunrise
Gabriella said:

I love this

May 2nd, 2018 08:33

Creativity
WildMoonChild said:

So deep and real, love the layout and how my eyes were eager to read the next word!

March 27th, 2018 17:11

Orb
Aislinn Wilson said:

truly beautiful

March 27th, 2018 10:42

Orb
Lorna said:

Nice ode to Mother Gaia JG......

March 27th, 2018 07:20

Creativity
anon-ii said:

Great write JG, i enjoyed it.

March 26th, 2018 14:25

Oozed
Lorna said:

Out of the chemical soup and into the rat race of today....... how did we get here?

March 21st, 2018 11:00



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