Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Humanities Redemption
dusk arising said:
The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment on my stuff.
September 16th, 2017 10:53
dusk arising said:
The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment on my stuff.
September 16th, 2017 10:53
One With The Universe
dusk arising said:
I\'m inclined to be in agreement with comments made by Seek above.
Nice writing.
September 15th, 2017 21:58
dusk arising said:
I\'m inclined to be in agreement with comments made by Seek above.
Nice writing.
September 15th, 2017 21:58
One With The Universe
Seek said:
You capture the immensity of the Universe so well. Even with high tech, humans will never know. Only our egos make us think otherwise. As you rightly point out, if we are one with the U, we might make less mischief here on this minuscule planet. You may wish to compare notes with my own \"Cosmic Cruise\". Thanks for sharing.
September 15th, 2017 07:36
Seek said:
You capture the immensity of the Universe so well. Even with high tech, humans will never know. Only our egos make us think otherwise. As you rightly point out, if we are one with the U, we might make less mischief here on this minuscule planet. You may wish to compare notes with my own \"Cosmic Cruise\". Thanks for sharing.
September 15th, 2017 07:36
Acceleration
Mugsdaddy said:
Wonderful piece, ever so true ending, why we continue to move ahead no one seems to be looking ahead. Scary stuff.
Mugsdaddy
September 14th, 2017 06:54
Mugsdaddy said:
Wonderful piece, ever so true ending, why we continue to move ahead no one seems to be looking ahead. Scary stuff.
Mugsdaddy
September 14th, 2017 06:54
Time Prisoner
dark_energy said:
Simply put and thought-provoking. it\'s crazy how much things have developed over the years and what we take for granted now were not even in existence a few years back! Really enjoyed this piece :)
September 9th, 2017 14:53
dark_energy said:
Simply put and thought-provoking. it\'s crazy how much things have developed over the years and what we take for granted now were not even in existence a few years back! Really enjoyed this piece :)
September 9th, 2017 14:53
Time Prisoner
Louis Gibbs said:
We find ourselves in different versions of consensus-realities over time as we progress in our experiencing ... true. I believe we are \"trapped\" only by our slow progress in evolving past the inability to recognize and accept our oneness. We continue on this cycle of experiencing until we do ... then can graduate to the next level of being.
Love your insightful poem, JG!
September 9th, 2017 07:54
Louis Gibbs said:
We find ourselves in different versions of consensus-realities over time as we progress in our experiencing ... true. I believe we are \"trapped\" only by our slow progress in evolving past the inability to recognize and accept our oneness. We continue on this cycle of experiencing until we do ... then can graduate to the next level of being.
Love your insightful poem, JG!
September 9th, 2017 07:54
Years Long Past
bwilliams said:
It\'s sad how fast time goes sometimes. At least we have our memories, I guess. Loved your poem!
September 8th, 2017 15:02
bwilliams said:
It\'s sad how fast time goes sometimes. At least we have our memories, I guess. Loved your poem!
September 8th, 2017 15:02
Time To Grow Up
dusk arising said:
I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here have written of the desire for world peace - self included. Nice writing.
September 6th, 2017 16:45
dusk arising said:
I dont know if you are right about that throwback, but i know many on here have written of the desire for world peace - self included. Nice writing.
September 6th, 2017 16:45
Joy Of Aging
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, my time may be done but I am not stopping yet.
September 6th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, my time may be done but I am not stopping yet.
September 6th, 2017 00:50
Joy Of Aging
FredPeyer said:
JG, you just very beautifully described my life! Except for the last stanza! My time isn\'t done yet! It is only starting!
September 5th, 2017 21:33
FredPeyer said:
JG, you just very beautifully described my life! Except for the last stanza! My time isn\'t done yet! It is only starting!
September 5th, 2017 21:33
Joy Of Aging
lasergraph said:
I can identify with this far too much. Great journey.
September 5th, 2017 15:35
lasergraph said:
I can identify with this far too much. Great journey.
September 5th, 2017 15:35
Define God
orchidee said:
The Bible says in one place: \'God is....\' Erm, that\'s a great help maybe - not! But He just IS - without beginning or end!
September 4th, 2017 08:30
orchidee said:
The Bible says in one place: \'God is....\' Erm, that\'s a great help maybe - not! But He just IS - without beginning or end!
September 4th, 2017 08:30
Define God
Seek said:
Ah! The search for the godhead is never ending. Is it possible once we locate and corner him/her/it that life as we know it may come to an end? Provocative, interesting write!
September 4th, 2017 07:58
Seek said:
Ah! The search for the godhead is never ending. Is it possible once we locate and corner him/her/it that life as we know it may come to an end? Provocative, interesting write!
September 4th, 2017 07:58
How Else Could It Have Gone
dusk arising said:
Maybe this is the alternative world?
September 3rd, 2017 14:14
dusk arising said:
Maybe this is the alternative world?
September 3rd, 2017 14:14
How Else Could It Have Gone
orchidee said:
A fine write. Seems a sort of \'What if.....? poem. We can\'t reverse what\'s already happened; the present is here now; and the future is yet to come. That\'s how I see it.
September 3rd, 2017 08:50
orchidee said:
A fine write. Seems a sort of \'What if.....? poem. We can\'t reverse what\'s already happened; the present is here now; and the future is yet to come. That\'s how I see it.
September 3rd, 2017 08:50
Humanity
alienkid said:
great poem! and I really agree with the message. thanks for posting!
September 2nd, 2017 11:12
alienkid said:
great poem! and I really agree with the message. thanks for posting!
September 2nd, 2017 11:12
Humanity
WL Schuett said:
Thought provoking, but what do you believe a creator or that we invented the creator this was a little ambiguous...still good poem
September 2nd, 2017 08:56
WL Schuett said:
Thought provoking, but what do you believe a creator or that we invented the creator this was a little ambiguous...still good poem
September 2nd, 2017 08:56
Love
myself and me said:
What is love? Big question, everyone have their own answers.
Nice writing.
August 26th, 2017 21:28
myself and me said:
What is love? Big question, everyone have their own answers.
Nice writing.
August 26th, 2017 21:28
One Planet Many Worlds
docstorm said:
A very true vision of every humans world. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2017 15:55
docstorm said:
A very true vision of every humans world. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2017 15:55
Crashing Storm
burning-embers said:
The clock is ticking. A good and clever write.
August 20th, 2017 11:25
burning-embers said:
The clock is ticking. A good and clever write.
August 20th, 2017 11:25
My Life
Louis Gibbs said:
We come into this world, time and time again, the product of those many lives and experiences. In that regard I must respectfully disagree with Nicholas\'s take on coming in as a \'blank slate\'. True, we are mentally programmed by parents and culture to fit in, but our basic nature and inherent wisdom come in with us, and remain the determining compass of our lives.
Yes, I believe we can \"fracture the mold\" and \"create my own way\", as you express the proposition so well. Why else would we have bothered to come back ... again? Splendid, thought-provoking poem!
August 19th, 2017 08:31
Louis Gibbs said:
We come into this world, time and time again, the product of those many lives and experiences. In that regard I must respectfully disagree with Nicholas\'s take on coming in as a \'blank slate\'. True, we are mentally programmed by parents and culture to fit in, but our basic nature and inherent wisdom come in with us, and remain the determining compass of our lives.
Yes, I believe we can \"fracture the mold\" and \"create my own way\", as you express the proposition so well. Why else would we have bothered to come back ... again? Splendid, thought-provoking poem!
August 19th, 2017 08:31
My Life
Nicholas Browning said:
Wired? No. Molded? Yes. Every child is a fresh slate. A parent\'s job is to mold you into a decent person. The path you take in life is ultimately up to you, though. You\'ll have bits and pieces of everything you\'ve been through in the past with you wherever you go. That\'s just how it is. Unless you\'re insane. Crazy people don\'t give no way no how, they just do stuff. Interesting philosophy. Keep up the work.
August 19th, 2017 07:45
Nicholas Browning said:
Wired? No. Molded? Yes. Every child is a fresh slate. A parent\'s job is to mold you into a decent person. The path you take in life is ultimately up to you, though. You\'ll have bits and pieces of everything you\'ve been through in the past with you wherever you go. That\'s just how it is. Unless you\'re insane. Crazy people don\'t give no way no how, they just do stuff. Interesting philosophy. Keep up the work.
August 19th, 2017 07:45
Vessels
Louis Gibbs said:
Echoes the theme of the poem I posted today. Since there are no coincidences, it must be the right time for the message, don\'t you think?
Well done writing, Collins!
August 18th, 2017 11:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Echoes the theme of the poem I posted today. Since there are no coincidences, it must be the right time for the message, don\'t you think?
Well done writing, Collins!
August 18th, 2017 11:49
Vessels
Nicholas Browning said:
Haha, we are all slaves to some higher power that may or may not exist. Well said.
August 18th, 2017 08:00
Nicholas Browning said:
Haha, we are all slaves to some higher power that may or may not exist. Well said.
August 18th, 2017 08:00
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