Comments received on poems by Rosethebrokenhearted
Dark Lullabye For Two ft Josh Hosey
SabreLi said:
I have really enjoyed reading your work, and just had to comment on this piece. I love the darker themed writing as that\'s where alot of my own inspiration is. I think you\'ve done a great job here telling a morose story but turning the macabre into something beautiful :D x
November 27th, 2016 18:26
SabreLi said:
I have really enjoyed reading your work, and just had to comment on this piece. I love the darker themed writing as that\'s where alot of my own inspiration is. I think you\'ve done a great job here telling a morose story but turning the macabre into something beautiful :D x
November 27th, 2016 18:26
My Simple Thank You
SabreLi said:
I can relate to this piece so much - it is amazing to see your idols in person, even if they do not know you. Many years ago I had the same experience and to this day I have never forgotten it, they were my inspiration to begin writing as their efforts guided me through some very dark and distressing times without their even knowing it, and from those dark times they were a shining beacon xx
November 27th, 2016 18:25
SabreLi said:
I can relate to this piece so much - it is amazing to see your idols in person, even if they do not know you. Many years ago I had the same experience and to this day I have never forgotten it, they were my inspiration to begin writing as their efforts guided me through some very dark and distressing times without their even knowing it, and from those dark times they were a shining beacon xx
November 27th, 2016 18:25
The Goddess
SabreLi said:
We should all embrace our imperfections, since nobody is perfect, but this should not be at the expense of our self confidence or worth. Our imperfections are what makes us unique, and that is a thing of beauty - much like your writing. Thank you for writing such true and raw words xx
November 25th, 2016 14:35
SabreLi said:
We should all embrace our imperfections, since nobody is perfect, but this should not be at the expense of our self confidence or worth. Our imperfections are what makes us unique, and that is a thing of beauty - much like your writing. Thank you for writing such true and raw words xx
November 25th, 2016 14:35
The Boy; Lost Treasure
clockwork said:
Sorry for reading this so late, amazing work kind of like the other side to my deception poem. Thanks for this
October 23rd, 2016 23:02
clockwork said:
Sorry for reading this so late, amazing work kind of like the other side to my deception poem. Thanks for this
October 23rd, 2016 23:02
My Simple Thank You
Tony36 said:
Music like poetry is the language of the soul. great write
September 23rd, 2016 13:17
Tony36 said:
Music like poetry is the language of the soul. great write
September 23rd, 2016 13:17
My Simple Thank You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ROSE ~ Music is always very CATHARTIC ! Love MAYDAY PARADE ~ Love the LYRICS ! Love your poem ~ very elegant and words dripping with PATHOS ~ so so cathartic. Pleased you found "solace in the song" Thinking of you ~ BRIAN
September 23rd, 2016 09:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ROSE ~ Music is always very CATHARTIC ! Love MAYDAY PARADE ~ Love the LYRICS ! Love your poem ~ very elegant and words dripping with PATHOS ~ so so cathartic. Pleased you found "solace in the song" Thinking of you ~ BRIAN
September 23rd, 2016 09:29
My Simple Thank You
Augustus said:
Music can be very moving. You illustrate that on a level that elevates both you and your favorite band.
September 23rd, 2016 08:17
Augustus said:
Music can be very moving. You illustrate that on a level that elevates both you and your favorite band.
September 23rd, 2016 08:17
The Boy; Lost Treasure
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks RTBH for a very beautiful and enigmatic poem. Love and life is indeed a CHARADE and what we present to the WORLD hides our hidden persona. People who know me intimately tell me my inner persona is not the same as my public face _ we are all charades.. Our desire to express ourselves can make us lose the real inner treasure that is our real self. Reading this poem makes me sad ~ BUT ~ thanks for sharing ~ love it ! Yours BRIAN.
August 23rd, 2016 05:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks RTBH for a very beautiful and enigmatic poem. Love and life is indeed a CHARADE and what we present to the WORLD hides our hidden persona. People who know me intimately tell me my inner persona is not the same as my public face _ we are all charades.. Our desire to express ourselves can make us lose the real inner treasure that is our real self. Reading this poem makes me sad ~ BUT ~ thanks for sharing ~ love it ! Yours BRIAN.
August 23rd, 2016 05:59
The Boy; Lost Treasure
rrodriguez said:
I read it twice and found it very interesting. This poem portraits a lost soul yearn for attention.
August 17th, 2016 10:13
rrodriguez said:
I read it twice and found it very interesting. This poem portraits a lost soul yearn for attention.
August 17th, 2016 10:13
The Boy; Lost Treasure
calbreezy said:
Seems powerful, tell me if I am wrong, but this would be good for people who have been cat fished online, great work.
August 17th, 2016 09:13
calbreezy said:
Seems powerful, tell me if I am wrong, but this would be good for people who have been cat fished online, great work.
August 17th, 2016 09:13
To be In Love With You
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, a well structured poem. Nicely written!
August 16th, 2016 13:47
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, a well structured poem. Nicely written!
August 16th, 2016 13:47
To Fight the Angels
willyweed said:
best of luck with your grandma RTBH~ your thoughts are not mixed the love came through your words loud and clear ! ww
July 24th, 2016 10:54
willyweed said:
best of luck with your grandma RTBH~ your thoughts are not mixed the love came through your words loud and clear ! ww
July 24th, 2016 10:54
To be In Love With You
willyweed said:
Good story, flow and nicely crafted rhyme in this good job Rose very nice poem. ww
July 20th, 2016 15:43
willyweed said:
Good story, flow and nicely crafted rhyme in this good job Rose very nice poem. ww
July 20th, 2016 15:43
To be In Love With You
teenageheartbreak said:
This is amazing! Keep up the good work! TAHB
July 20th, 2016 12:27
teenageheartbreak said:
This is amazing! Keep up the good work! TAHB
July 20th, 2016 12:27
Dark Lullabye For Two ft Josh Hosey
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ROSE ~ Thank you for your first poem on the sad subject of broken and betrayed love. I love the way you presented it "white on black" like a "Death Notice" ~ very powerful ! I am a gentle and considerate lover and have great respect for all the "Girls I've ever known" so i find your poem quite distressing ~ I hope you found it cathartic. God how it hurts ~ can't speak ~ can't sleep ~ dark melodies ~ shed tears ~ torn heart ~ senses down ~ stolen soul ~ gossiped about ~ Dark Lullaby for Two. Thanks for sharing ~ Some Men are Monsters ~ I trust and pray you will find a Gentle-man someday soon. Every Blessing BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 03:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ROSE ~ Thank you for your first poem on the sad subject of broken and betrayed love. I love the way you presented it "white on black" like a "Death Notice" ~ very powerful ! I am a gentle and considerate lover and have great respect for all the "Girls I've ever known" so i find your poem quite distressing ~ I hope you found it cathartic. God how it hurts ~ can't speak ~ can't sleep ~ dark melodies ~ shed tears ~ torn heart ~ senses down ~ stolen soul ~ gossiped about ~ Dark Lullaby for Two. Thanks for sharing ~ Some Men are Monsters ~ I trust and pray you will find a Gentle-man someday soon. Every Blessing BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 03:57
