Comments received on poems by mariannebmo
Work day, sad day
Viv Wade said:
Oh, I feel your pain - I\'ve had many work days like the one you describe! Nice write.
October 25th, 2017 09:00
Viv Wade said:
Oh, I feel your pain - I\'ve had many work days like the one you describe! Nice write.
October 25th, 2017 09:00
Work day, sad day
vvnrose said:
Can relate to that! And those b/t breaks..haha.
April 6th, 2017 13:23
vvnrose said:
Can relate to that! And those b/t breaks..haha.
April 6th, 2017 13:23
Work day, sad day
Aamina said:
Neat way to express yourself. I should do that after a bad day at college =)
April 6th, 2017 09:25
Aamina said:
Neat way to express yourself. I should do that after a bad day at college =)
April 6th, 2017 09:25
Work day, sad day
willyweed said:
life in an office can be a bitch! a write to the point! good one ww
April 6th, 2017 08:59
willyweed said:
life in an office can be a bitch! a write to the point! good one ww
April 6th, 2017 08:59
Baby Leo
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may his life be filled with joy and love.
April 6th, 2017 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may his life be filled with joy and love.
April 6th, 2017 00:37
Baby Leo
willyweed said:
nothing like a new born child to draw a family closer. nice poem
April 5th, 2017 07:50
willyweed said:
nothing like a new born child to draw a family closer. nice poem
April 5th, 2017 07:50
Twenties sad thoughts.
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
When people drop off the radar in pour lives, its actually a gift from our higher power telling us that we need to make room for more influential energies in our lives...if you wanna be popular, be specific and ask and it will return..trust me...great work on your poem..hope to see more soon
October 19th, 2016 15:10
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
When people drop off the radar in pour lives, its actually a gift from our higher power telling us that we need to make room for more influential energies in our lives...if you wanna be popular, be specific and ask and it will return..trust me...great work on your poem..hope to see more soon
October 19th, 2016 15:10
Twenties sad thoughts.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes we just feel alone
October 18th, 2016 17:30
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes we just feel alone
October 18th, 2016 17:30
Twenties sad thoughts.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for being my FRIEND ! The way MPS works is we comment on each others POEMS. I have also written a FUSION POEM on Flowers where you can add a STANZA. You have to scroll down on COMMUNITY and click on \"developing\" to see it ~ OK BRIAN
October 18th, 2016 16:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for being my FRIEND ! The way MPS works is we comment on each others POEMS. I have also written a FUSION POEM on Flowers where you can add a STANZA. You have to scroll down on COMMUNITY and click on \"developing\" to see it ~ OK BRIAN
October 18th, 2016 16:08
Twenties sad thoughts.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh MARIANNE (lovely name) I hope tis is not too autobiographical ? Thanks for sharing~ lovely structure ! 20 lines ~ 5 quatrains ~ rhyming couplets BUT such a ad lament ! I\'m 33 now and I remember my 20\'s ~ It was lonely sometimes waiting for MISS RIGHT being let down and sometimes letting others down because the \"chemistry\" was not right. I\'m still single but my relationships are smoother than 10 years ago ! I can empathise ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more lease ! Yours BRIAN
October 18th, 2016 15:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh MARIANNE (lovely name) I hope tis is not too autobiographical ? Thanks for sharing~ lovely structure ! 20 lines ~ 5 quatrains ~ rhyming couplets BUT such a ad lament ! I\'m 33 now and I remember my 20\'s ~ It was lonely sometimes waiting for MISS RIGHT being let down and sometimes letting others down because the \"chemistry\" was not right. I\'m still single but my relationships are smoother than 10 years ago ! I can empathise ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more lease ! Yours BRIAN
October 18th, 2016 15:51
