Comments received on poems by Rajat
~~The Enchanting Zephyr~~
Rajat said:
thanku!!one can never judge a person fairly!
March 2nd, 2011 11:45
Rajat said:
thanku!!one can never judge a person fairly!
March 2nd, 2011 11:45
~~The Enchanting Zephyr~~
rajat mahaych said:
you have great sense dear! you are good at creating words more then me
March 2nd, 2011 11:41
rajat mahaych said:
you have great sense dear! you are good at creating words more then me
March 2nd, 2011 11:41
~~The Farewell~~
nikhilps said:
yaar... u had mentioned a big event with some small event.. really good man......
February 21st, 2011 10:48
nikhilps said:
yaar... u had mentioned a big event with some small event.. really good man......
February 21st, 2011 10:48
~~Incomplete without YOU. . .~~
nikhilps said:
wow really a good piece man..........
February 21st, 2011 10:43
nikhilps said:
wow really a good piece man..........
February 21st, 2011 10:43
~~Incomplete without YOU. . .~~
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently depicted so poetically....beautifully bittersweet!
February 21st, 2011 00:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently depicted so poetically....beautifully bittersweet!
February 21st, 2011 00:25
~~Incomplete without YOU. . .~~
Emi said:
This is amazingly beautiful. :) I love it... Wonderful word choice - the idea is perfectly expressed! :)
February 19th, 2011 18:51
Emi said:
This is amazingly beautiful. :) I love it... Wonderful word choice - the idea is perfectly expressed! :)
February 19th, 2011 18:51
~~Saving the planet~~
Dolphine29 said:
Eye opener, as most of us need to see to take the responsibility on what we do and on what can we do; no matter the scale it is a chain that will affect the entire world. I love it
Best
Dolphine.
February 16th, 2011 17:54
Dolphine29 said:
Eye opener, as most of us need to see to take the responsibility on what we do and on what can we do; no matter the scale it is a chain that will affect the entire world. I love it
Best
Dolphine.
February 16th, 2011 17:54
~~The Farewell~~
Dolphine29 said:
I love the way you write is so honest and beautiful. Well I have to say that I was curious about siliguri and Darjeeling is an overwhelming place and the views most be breathtaking surrounded by hills and mountains, and the weather is perfect for the moment 17° …in other words wow!!!! :)
I hope you have a happy week
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 17:02
Dolphine29 said:
I love the way you write is so honest and beautiful. Well I have to say that I was curious about siliguri and Darjeeling is an overwhelming place and the views most be breathtaking surrounded by hills and mountains, and the weather is perfect for the moment 17° …in other words wow!!!! :)
I hope you have a happy week
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 17:02
~~Irksome Exams!!~~
Cheeky Missy said:
Ugh....very well expressed...you remind me again of it. And the image is so perfect. Excellent.
February 12th, 2011 14:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Ugh....very well expressed...you remind me again of it. And the image is so perfect. Excellent.
February 12th, 2011 14:50
~~Never leave me. . .~~
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is a beautiful description of love and the desire for true love...I quite enjoyed it. The image with it is so perfect, of course. I like how you expressed it, ie....incomplete, brighter world, my treasure, childish heart pleading for light and never to be forsaken...your symbolism was excellent. It is lovely and nicely done/well-written.
February 12th, 2011 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is a beautiful description of love and the desire for true love...I quite enjoyed it. The image with it is so perfect, of course. I like how you expressed it, ie....incomplete, brighter world, my treasure, childish heart pleading for light and never to be forsaken...your symbolism was excellent. It is lovely and nicely done/well-written.
February 12th, 2011 14:45
~~Irksome Exams!!~~
Marius said:
This poem captures the essence of those times extremely well, while amusing us at the same time. Very well done. I quite enjoyed reading it.
February 9th, 2011 02:59
Marius said:
This poem captures the essence of those times extremely well, while amusing us at the same time. Very well done. I quite enjoyed reading it.
February 9th, 2011 02:59
~~Saving the planet~~
Rajat said:
what r your views about global warming then??
February 9th, 2011 02:30
Rajat said:
what r your views about global warming then??
February 9th, 2011 02:30
~~Saving the planet~~
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully done! Your end-rhyming is very good, and the rythm fairly good. It's put together very well, with the first stanza depicting the awe, grandeur and fascinating beauty of the earth and the ones given responsibility/stewardship, which the second stanza nicely expands on with the issues allegedly threatening the desirable earth, the final couplet perfectly concluding with the plea to try to sustain it, still connecting it with the responsible people. Excellent! But I beg to differ on global warming, so far as I know, it is a deception.
February 8th, 2011 15:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully done! Your end-rhyming is very good, and the rythm fairly good. It's put together very well, with the first stanza depicting the awe, grandeur and fascinating beauty of the earth and the ones given responsibility/stewardship, which the second stanza nicely expands on with the issues allegedly threatening the desirable earth, the final couplet perfectly concluding with the plea to try to sustain it, still connecting it with the responsible people. Excellent! But I beg to differ on global warming, so far as I know, it is a deception.
February 8th, 2011 15:43
The Eternal Time
BattleChrist said:
"Man never lives in today and never leaves his yesterday"
Epic line!!!
February 7th, 2011 10:46
BattleChrist said:
"Man never lives in today and never leaves his yesterday"
Epic line!!!
February 7th, 2011 10:46
The Eternal Time
Cheeky Missy said:
The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem flows nicely, an excellent description of time, in all your similes/symbolism. Your last two lines were so very perfect....excellent!!! Only thing.....it is missing the undeniable hand of God, Who more honestly seems the artist working on the canvas(which was an excellent depiction of our lives!). Delightful...I quite enjoyed the images you used to describe time and our perspectives and lives.
February 6th, 2011 21:05
Cheeky Missy said:
The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem flows nicely, an excellent description of time, in all your similes/symbolism. Your last two lines were so very perfect....excellent!!! Only thing.....it is missing the undeniable hand of God, Who more honestly seems the artist working on the canvas(which was an excellent depiction of our lives!). Delightful...I quite enjoyed the images you used to describe time and our perspectives and lives.
February 6th, 2011 21:05
The Eternal Time
Dolphine29 said:
Very special, I feel it embraces the idea of our existence through time; as our experiences and feelings dwell to complete it.
Very beautiful and unique.
Best
D.
February 6th, 2011 14:38
Dolphine29 said:
Very special, I feel it embraces the idea of our existence through time; as our experiences and feelings dwell to complete it.
Very beautiful and unique.
Best
D.
February 6th, 2011 14:38
My guardian angel
Dolphine29 said:
I like it, seems very sweet, and at the same time filled with fantasy.
But at the same time like part of a dream
Best
Dolphine
February 6th, 2011 14:34
Dolphine29 said:
I like it, seems very sweet, and at the same time filled with fantasy.
But at the same time like part of a dream
Best
Dolphine
February 6th, 2011 14:34
My guardian angel
Cheeky Missy said:
Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is adorable. Seems to be written to a lover, which provokes the fascination, intrigue and sweetness. I like it.
February 5th, 2011 12:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is adorable. Seems to be written to a lover, which provokes the fascination, intrigue and sweetness. I like it.
February 5th, 2011 12:14
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