Comments received on poems by iRonnie
Dream in the Dark of the Day
roudan said:
and i normally run! i like this! good stuff
August 21st, 2017 23:09
roudan said:
and i normally run! i like this! good stuff
August 21st, 2017 23:09
Dream in the Dark of the Day
burning-embers said:
Turn your cravings into words which reach the eye or ears of this special someone poet or they may never know. Your future is yours, grasping difficult situations even if you fluff them will make you stronger. Nice writing.
August 21st, 2017 22:50
burning-embers said:
Turn your cravings into words which reach the eye or ears of this special someone poet or they may never know. Your future is yours, grasping difficult situations even if you fluff them will make you stronger. Nice writing.
August 21st, 2017 22:50
Dream in the Dark of the Day
seeker123 said:
i really liked your metaphors especially the title. I also wrote a poem about the eclipse, though my title is not as clever as yours. It\'s called Eclipse, (I know very creative:) Good work!
August 21st, 2017 20:26
seeker123 said:
i really liked your metaphors especially the title. I also wrote a poem about the eclipse, though my title is not as clever as yours. It\'s called Eclipse, (I know very creative:) Good work!
August 21st, 2017 20:26
Mother of Pearl
b-LAH-que said:
I love the structure and scheme of the writing in this, especially when it changes in the final verse. It really makes it kind of burst out from the previous two, which seemed like a pleasant but brief lead-in to the last and most beautifully impactful final verse. I guess it\'s sort of like the big splash at the end of a waterslide. Well done!
August 19th, 2017 00:12
b-LAH-que said:
I love the structure and scheme of the writing in this, especially when it changes in the final verse. It really makes it kind of burst out from the previous two, which seemed like a pleasant but brief lead-in to the last and most beautifully impactful final verse. I guess it\'s sort of like the big splash at the end of a waterslide. Well done!
August 19th, 2017 00:12
Empowering Presence
orchidee said:
A fine write Ronnie. But I dunno - who is this Karma chappie (or chap-ess)?! He, or she, is responsible for a lot of stuff, it seems. lol.
July 25th, 2017 11:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Ronnie. But I dunno - who is this Karma chappie (or chap-ess)?! He, or she, is responsible for a lot of stuff, it seems. lol.
July 25th, 2017 11:01
Tail Impale
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow what a super poem humoured and witty. Awesome rhyming too. I enjoyed esp the regale line lots. Kudos.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
November 23rd, 2016 04:48
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow what a super poem humoured and witty. Awesome rhyming too. I enjoyed esp the regale line lots. Kudos.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
November 23rd, 2016 04:48
Tail Impale
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RONNIE ~ tHANKS YOU FOR A VERY DROLL FIRST POEM ! Interesting to get the same rhyme pattern (aaaa X 3) in all four quatrains. I love fun poems and mine is also one today on ZIPS with which also lots of words rhyme ! The tussle between the WHALE and the SAIL is interesting and a metaphor of human interaction ! I will hav to think it through ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
November 22nd, 2016 09:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RONNIE ~ tHANKS YOU FOR A VERY DROLL FIRST POEM ! Interesting to get the same rhyme pattern (aaaa X 3) in all four quatrains. I love fun poems and mine is also one today on ZIPS with which also lots of words rhyme ! The tussle between the WHALE and the SAIL is interesting and a metaphor of human interaction ! I will hav to think it through ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
November 22nd, 2016 09:34
