Comments received on poems by SharonMoemise



Together, whenever
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Affectionately so, the gentle fingertips of these words individually rise on their own stems, like plants from the redly colored pool of emotion, whence the heart\'s ink spilled from your pen, on this page. They reach out, they grab, and hold on, and in their firm clutches, two hearts speak as one, beating in synchrony, and never letting go. A true life love story.

January 24th, 2022 19:10

Yesterday
SharonMoemise said:

Thank you, Garth. Much appreciated

January 21st, 2022 10:36

Yesterday
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A love expressed so affectionately and with such undying humility can only be true... May this love never die.

January 21st, 2022 09:17

While it lasted
alsimmons said:

At a lost for words, wow.

December 2nd, 2021 15:29

To be, just be
Garth Rakumakoe said:

It does not get more genuine than this. So handcrafted, so out of the earth so, original, rustic even, in its authenticity. You\'re such a great writer! :-)

November 17th, 2021 02:02

A letter to God
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Truly amazing. Written with such sincerity, and from the heart. It fills my heart with so much gratitude. Thank you.

November 17th, 2021 01:57

I\'m that Woman
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A phenomenal work of art from a phenomenal pen. This poem swallows the ocean whole! - Magnanimous! Embellished with such courage - I love it!

November 17th, 2021 01:53

Skin Deep
Paul Bell said:

If you can\'t put yourself first, then at least love yourself a little more.
Who was it who said. Sassiness is next to godlessness. I\'ll steal it, it sounds good.


November 16th, 2021 11:43

Xanthe II
Garth Rakumakoe said:

So much love in this piece to light up the world, Sharon. I truly felt it. One can tell this was written from nowhere else, but the heart!

November 9th, 2021 13:55

Skin Deep
L. B. Mek said:

\'I\'m a woman who brought forth man and was left with silver streaks\'
brilliant imagery, with enticing flexibility in brevity,
you carry the legacy of Maya Angelou \'sassiness\' in every line,
great write

August 10th, 2020 05:16

Xanthe II
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write for your Granddaughter.
There is a saying that goes \"If I had known that grandchildren would be so much fun I would have had them first!\"

June 22nd, 2019 00:34

Lately
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write. This \'should haves\' and \'if onlys\' have a great deal for which to answer.

June 21st, 2019 00:16

Hopeless
JaydeVictoria said:

This is such a sad poem but also shows strength and resilience..I love the last line also, it captured the whole mood of the poem brilliantly ...xx

March 6th, 2019 06:42

Still
poetboy5454 said:

Beautiful piece, I\'m sorry to hear about your loss, but what a wonderful tribute.

January 24th, 2019 20:14

The Earth moved
Accidental Poet said:

A very moving write this is Sharon. Well done.

November 26th, 2017 09:09

The Earth moved
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIUFUL SHARON ~ I can empathise with every word and every sensation in this awesome LOVE POEM. When ANGELA & I make LOVE ~ every sense ~ Sight ~ Scent ~ Savour and Sound is employed and enhanced and satisfied. If there is not mutual abandonment and Mutual satisfaction IT ISN\'T LOVE ! Thanks for caring and sharing ! O I loved the STRUCTURE of the POEM as well as the SUBJECT !!! Yours BRIAN

November 26th, 2017 04:08

Woman
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

May 14th, 2017 23:52

Woman
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SHARON for a lovely tribute to all our MOMS ! As I get older I love my MOM more & more each day. She does all you say in your poem ~ with a smile and never ever goes in strike ! Remember when GOD created EVE He had a chance to look at ADAM and iron out all the FAULTS ~ i Thank GOD for every LADY on Earth ~ AMEN ! Hugs BRIAN~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.

May 14th, 2017 03:32

A letter to God
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SHARON ~ for another enigmatic poem ~ with a lot of unanswered questions ! It\'s always good to ask GOD ~ sometimes we get direct answers ~ from the BIBLE ~ from the Preachers ~ through Prayer and sometimes GOD (who has a great sense of humour) says \"Work it out for yourself\" It\'s not as hot in the UK as Capetown but after a hot spell i like to go out (in just my boxer shorts) and let God\'s rain wash me clean ~ then the SUN comes out again and I become rain washed and sun dried in Gods Shower ! Love you just for bein\' you ~ AMEN ! Hugs BRIAN Please check my Poems & Developing Fusions ~ Yours B

April 30th, 2017 11:16

A letter to God
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 30th, 2017 09:15

A letter to God
Aamina said:

That\'s beautiful x

April 30th, 2017 04:30

A letter to God
NoLongerATeen said:

Amazing write

April 30th, 2017 04:15

Hurts real bad
willyweed said:

looks like he can\'t see the beauty for his ego is in the way?

March 5th, 2017 15:51

Hurts real bad
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad write, is he worth the trouble?

March 5th, 2017 11:09

Giving up
WriteBeLight said:

Love the last line. Great work SharonMoemise.

February 3rd, 2017 20:07

Giving up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AMEN SISTER ~ There is nothing more precious than your Spiritual Soul. Your poem was painful to read and you know just how much God loves you ~ enough to commit his Beloved Son on the Cross ~ AMEN ! Also you know how much you are loved on MPS and how much we would all miss you. Thinking of You ~ Loving You ~ Praying for you 24/7 ~ Yours BRIAN XOX

February 3rd, 2017 15:24

New Year\'s wish
WriteBeLight said:

I could visualize the festivities and feel hopeful after reading! Happy New Year to you as well!

January 1st, 2017 05:37

New Year\'s wish
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 31st, 2016 21:08

New Year\'s wish
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL SHARON ~ Thanks for sharing ! It is now 2017 in the UK ~ Hapy New Year to You & Yours ! Love & Hugs for 2017 ~ BRIAN (UK)

December 31st, 2016 19:50

New Year\'s wish
Christina8 said:

I loved reading your well written poem. Lots of hope for 2017. Thanks for sharing!--Christina

December 31st, 2016 14:54

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