Comments received on poems by SharonMoemise
Unchained
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SHARON ~ for another beautiful Love Song ~ Perfect Meter ~ Perfect Rhyming Couplets ~ It melts my heart ! And what is yourr desire ? Just to LOVE and be LOVED ~ My esponse as always is YES ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
December 6th, 2016 06:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SHARON ~ for another beautiful Love Song ~ Perfect Meter ~ Perfect Rhyming Couplets ~ It melts my heart ! And what is yourr desire ? Just to LOVE and be LOVED ~ My esponse as always is YES ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
December 6th, 2016 06:19
Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SHARON ~ Each of your beautiful poems tells a story and NEVER disappoints. Our genre for this one is BITTER~SWEET. Thanks for your instructive comment ! As you know ~ sometimes people cross our paths and we know them without ever meeting them. For you such a one was DOC ! A Man wih a brilliant mind dedicated to his love and care for the environment. I guess you could have made sweet music together and there is a sad poignancy in your phrase \"H\'es gone I had my chance and blew it.\" Thanks for sharing and caring ~ thinking of you Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
December 5th, 2016 15:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SHARON ~ Each of your beautiful poems tells a story and NEVER disappoints. Our genre for this one is BITTER~SWEET. Thanks for your instructive comment ! As you know ~ sometimes people cross our paths and we know them without ever meeting them. For you such a one was DOC ! A Man wih a brilliant mind dedicated to his love and care for the environment. I guess you could have made sweet music together and there is a sad poignancy in your phrase \"H\'es gone I had my chance and blew it.\" Thanks for sharing and caring ~ thinking of you Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
December 5th, 2016 15:38
Prisoner
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Sharon, awesome work here...I am sure many can relate as I can...great job/...and Sabre Li..I WANT TO READ PIDJ TOO...yes, you must post I agree....:)
December 4th, 2016 15:05
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Sharon, awesome work here...I am sure many can relate as I can...great job/...and Sabre Li..I WANT TO READ PIDJ TOO...yes, you must post I agree....:)
December 4th, 2016 15:05
No
SabreLi said:
I was so sad to read this, Sharon, but I think that poetry is at its best when it invokes some kind of emotion from the reader, and it only goes to show how good the writing really is since you achieved this with such a difficult topic. Despite the vile experience that you\'ve had, you have worked raw emotion into a piece which flaunts your inner strength. Truly remarkable xx
December 4th, 2016 14:18
SabreLi said:
I was so sad to read this, Sharon, but I think that poetry is at its best when it invokes some kind of emotion from the reader, and it only goes to show how good the writing really is since you achieved this with such a difficult topic. Despite the vile experience that you\'ve had, you have worked raw emotion into a piece which flaunts your inner strength. Truly remarkable xx
December 4th, 2016 14:18
Prisoner
SabreLi said:
I love this one Sharon! As usual your work really inspires. Like you, most of my work stems from times of pain and sadness but it never ceases to amaze when turned into a thing of beauty such as this! Reminds me of a very old one of mine called Prisoner In Death\'s Jaws... I must post it one day as it seems we have much in common xx
December 4th, 2016 14:11
SabreLi said:
I love this one Sharon! As usual your work really inspires. Like you, most of my work stems from times of pain and sadness but it never ceases to amaze when turned into a thing of beauty such as this! Reminds me of a very old one of mine called Prisoner In Death\'s Jaws... I must post it one day as it seems we have much in common xx
December 4th, 2016 14:11
Prisoner
SharonMoemise said:
Thank you Brian. Very heartfelt comment. I truly appreciate it.
December 4th, 2016 09:48
SharonMoemise said:
Thank you Brian. Very heartfelt comment. I truly appreciate it.
December 4th, 2016 09:48
Prisoner
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY HAUNTING POEM SHARON ~ Your hearts plea is \"Break these chains from my HEART and set me free\" I fel so sad that someone as beautiful and sensuous as you ANGEL feels that you are \"Locked up for life ~ a prisoner of your own mind\". Love can set you free and we all love you ~ we love your poetry and we love the lovely sensuous Lady that we know you are. Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
December 4th, 2016 09:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY HAUNTING POEM SHARON ~ Your hearts plea is \"Break these chains from my HEART and set me free\" I fel so sad that someone as beautiful and sensuous as you ANGEL feels that you are \"Locked up for life ~ a prisoner of your own mind\". Love can set you free and we all love you ~ we love your poetry and we love the lovely sensuous Lady that we know you are. Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
December 4th, 2016 09:38
No
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you SHARON for another paradoxical poem. I appreciate that technically you are a classical poet with fine tuned consideration of rhyme and rhythm and each word carefully weighted ~ in that respect we love you and can all learn from you. Into this most finely honed poetic framework you sometimes place the most erotic of stories ~ and in this case the most harrowing. The structure comes from your head ~ the subject straight from your loving generous and scarred heart ! This is PERFECT POETRY. Bevause you are so precious the picture you paint of an abused and used innocent girl makes me cry ! This is PERFECT POETRY and for this and for being uniquely YOU ~ I LOVE YOU ~ BRIAN XOX
December 3rd, 2016 09:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you SHARON for another paradoxical poem. I appreciate that technically you are a classical poet with fine tuned consideration of rhyme and rhythm and each word carefully weighted ~ in that respect we love you and can all learn from you. Into this most finely honed poetic framework you sometimes place the most erotic of stories ~ and in this case the most harrowing. The structure comes from your head ~ the subject straight from your loving generous and scarred heart ! This is PERFECT POETRY. Bevause you are so precious the picture you paint of an abused and used innocent girl makes me cry ! This is PERFECT POETRY and for this and for being uniquely YOU ~ I LOVE YOU ~ BRIAN XOX
December 3rd, 2016 09:22
No
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I\'ve lived. In South Africa and like India, rape is very common there. This is a brave strong poem of abuse written in wonderful rhyming and amazing wordings. Poignant topic but very worthy of writing about. Kudos.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 3rd, 2016 05:26
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I\'ve lived. In South Africa and like India, rape is very common there. This is a brave strong poem of abuse written in wonderful rhyming and amazing wordings. Poignant topic but very worthy of writing about. Kudos.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 3rd, 2016 05:26
Higher up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Indeed SHARON ~ I love it ! You are an excellent poet ~ especially in the field of experiential sensuality ! We could all learn a lot from you ! Love you ~ BRIAN XOX
December 1st, 2016 16:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Indeed SHARON ~ I love it ! You are an excellent poet ~ especially in the field of experiential sensuality ! We could all learn a lot from you ! Love you ~ BRIAN XOX
December 1st, 2016 16:35
Higher up
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is very tasteful, well written erotica...I love how you capture the art of lovemaking so gracefully and poetically...absolutely stunning writing Sharon....I look forward to more
December 1st, 2016 13:51
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is very tasteful, well written erotica...I love how you capture the art of lovemaking so gracefully and poetically...absolutely stunning writing Sharon....I look forward to more
December 1st, 2016 13:51
Higher up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL SHARON ~ And a perfect answer to all a Man could ever desire ! Thanks you for caring ~ thank you for sharing # Love you BRIAN XOX
December 1st, 2016 11:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL SHARON ~ And a perfect answer to all a Man could ever desire ! Thanks you for caring ~ thank you for sharing # Love you BRIAN XOX
December 1st, 2016 11:02
Feeling you
SabreLi said:
You are evidently a versatile and talented writer - an artist, in fact, by the way you create works of art from words and thoughts. An intriguing and thought provoking piece which I loved every part of! xx
November 30th, 2016 17:35
SabreLi said:
You are evidently a versatile and talented writer - an artist, in fact, by the way you create works of art from words and thoughts. An intriguing and thought provoking piece which I loved every part of! xx
November 30th, 2016 17:35
Broken
SabreLi said:
I always seem to gravitate more towards works created from the pain of hard times and bad experiences. I am so glad you found the courage to turn this terrible situation around. You took a part of it and turned it into a piece of beauty. Your strength is inspirational xx
November 30th, 2016 17:32
SabreLi said:
I always seem to gravitate more towards works created from the pain of hard times and bad experiences. I am so glad you found the courage to turn this terrible situation around. You took a part of it and turned it into a piece of beauty. Your strength is inspirational xx
November 30th, 2016 17:32
Feeling you
willyweed said:
this is hot and steamy but again very well written. I salute you! ww
November 30th, 2016 07:57
willyweed said:
this is hot and steamy but again very well written. I salute you! ww
November 30th, 2016 07:57
Eye in the sky
willyweed said:
wonderful work here Sharon, so sad but true what horror that we have made the norm! God help us all to change our ways. peace ww
November 30th, 2016 07:52
willyweed said:
wonderful work here Sharon, so sad but true what horror that we have made the norm! God help us all to change our ways. peace ww
November 30th, 2016 07:52
Feeling you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING SHARON ~Thanks for sharing just how loved you feel outside and in ! It is a good poem to wake up to ! Every blessing ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 30th, 2016 03:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING SHARON ~Thanks for sharing just how loved you feel outside and in ! It is a good poem to wake up to ! Every blessing ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 30th, 2016 03:09
Broken
elsiewarrenswords said:
We can only attempt to try and understand this type of pain, if we haven\'t experienced it ourselves and from my attempt, you are a fantastic intelligent lady. So well done, I loved this. And so much courage - I admire you for your ways
November 29th, 2016 16:04
elsiewarrenswords said:
We can only attempt to try and understand this type of pain, if we haven\'t experienced it ourselves and from my attempt, you are a fantastic intelligent lady. So well done, I loved this. And so much courage - I admire you for your ways
November 29th, 2016 16:04
Broken
Tony36 said:
Sad, sad situation. Hope you found a way out. Great write though
November 29th, 2016 13:55
Tony36 said:
Sad, sad situation. Hope you found a way out. Great write though
November 29th, 2016 13:55
Broken
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh SHARON ~ this made me angry and sad ! You are much too beautiful and precious to be ever treated in this way I If you were my LADY I would lavish you with TLC and pleasure you with a velvet glove to release all your tension and pain. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ I am thrilled fate released you from your \"cloud of misery ~ hopelessness ~ self hate !\" Thinking of you and Praying for you ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN I know that sharing this will be CATHARTIC ~ please check my poems ~ Thanks B (UK)
November 29th, 2016 07:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh SHARON ~ this made me angry and sad ! You are much too beautiful and precious to be ever treated in this way I If you were my LADY I would lavish you with TLC and pleasure you with a velvet glove to release all your tension and pain. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ I am thrilled fate released you from your \"cloud of misery ~ hopelessness ~ self hate !\" Thinking of you and Praying for you ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN I know that sharing this will be CATHARTIC ~ please check my poems ~ Thanks B (UK)
November 29th, 2016 07:37
Eye in the sky
SabreLi said:
This is an amazing piece, excellently written and so full of truth and pure emotion. Yet through all of the honesty you do not fail to create a structured masterpiece of poetry brimming from start to finish with important messages and drawing attention to difficult times. It is a crying shame that such evils exist in our world, but we must all do what we can to correct what is within our power, and you do so elegantly by shining the spotlight xx
November 27th, 2016 18:01
SabreLi said:
This is an amazing piece, excellently written and so full of truth and pure emotion. Yet through all of the honesty you do not fail to create a structured masterpiece of poetry brimming from start to finish with important messages and drawing attention to difficult times. It is a crying shame that such evils exist in our world, but we must all do what we can to correct what is within our power, and you do so elegantly by shining the spotlight xx
November 27th, 2016 18:01
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