Comments received on poems by Jmanning5



Free
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is the one thing in our lives that will always be with us, use it well.

May 5th, 2017 01:00

Free
Michelle Syd said:

Love this!

May 4th, 2017 20:02

Free
swingline said:

One has to learn to forget their mistakes . What started off as a hike on the river bank with a nap sack of mistakes has turned into pulling a brage full of mistakes in a dry riverbed . Take a knife and cut those ropes that bind you to the past . Leave those mistakes behind .

May 4th, 2017 18:09

Temporary
Dakota said:

no doubt badass

April 19th, 2017 00:07

Carpe diem
Goldfinch60 said:

Always live for the moment, each moment is precious.

March 13th, 2017 02:40

Carpe diem
JJCooke said:

This is good, thank you.

March 12th, 2017 23:13

Carpe diem
Augustus said:

I like this. Living in the moment is the way to live. Liked your form. I wrote one by the same title on March 5. Yours is serious, mine was an old man fooling around.

March 12th, 2017 22:34

Snake bite
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 7th, 2017 08:48

Snake bite
HOODSTAR POET said:

YUP

March 7th, 2017 08:16

Why?
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2017 15:57

Social media
Christina8 said:

Very good poem. I do not own a smartphone so I have nothing to look down at, but I observe the same people looking down, unaware of whats happening around them. Excellent write!!

January 3rd, 2017 17:26

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JerryBolton said:

THIS is wonderful. You broke everything down to its simplest level. I could not agree more with everything you said here. I do not have any of those i\'s you mentioned. I have a computer and that it is. I had my cable unplugged seven years ago. I do NOT miss it. This is the best explanation on the subject I have ever read. Thank you.

January 3rd, 2017 16:45

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Hopey_xx said:

Great poem!

January 3rd, 2017 16:13

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caroline-o said:

i really enjoyed this poem, it\'s always essential to admire the world sans social media and technology. good work!

January 3rd, 2017 15:57

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willyweed said:

smartphones make people stupid.
they better get them automatic driverless cars soon or we all be dead. I like your poem! ww

January 3rd, 2017 15:45

Suicidal Love
Jmanning5 said:

Thanks for the support you guys

January 3rd, 2017 15:36

Social media
rrodriguez said:

nicely put!


January 3rd, 2017 15:21

Suicidal Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JM ~ Thanks for challenging first poem ! Sometimes we try to sanitise LOVE but you tell it like it is. I have experienced this type of love ~ it hurts but we hold on to it ~ because we are too deeply IN LOVE to get out ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK

December 31st, 2016 20:01

Suicidal Love
Christina8 said:

Welcome to Mps! Great first poem. Like you said, sometimes love does suck, but someday I hope you\'ll meet the one. I hope you found writing cathartic. I enjoyed reading your poem. Happy New Year!

December 31st, 2016 18:55