Comments received on poems by Jmanning5
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Goldfinch60 said:
Time is the one thing in our lives that will always be with us, use it well.
May 5th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is the one thing in our lives that will always be with us, use it well.
May 5th, 2017 01:00
Free
swingline said:
One has to learn to forget their mistakes . What started off as a hike on the river bank with a nap sack of mistakes has turned into pulling a brage full of mistakes in a dry riverbed . Take a knife and cut those ropes that bind you to the past . Leave those mistakes behind .
May 4th, 2017 18:09
swingline said:
One has to learn to forget their mistakes . What started off as a hike on the river bank with a nap sack of mistakes has turned into pulling a brage full of mistakes in a dry riverbed . Take a knife and cut those ropes that bind you to the past . Leave those mistakes behind .
May 4th, 2017 18:09
Carpe diem
Goldfinch60 said:
Always live for the moment, each moment is precious.
March 13th, 2017 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Always live for the moment, each moment is precious.
March 13th, 2017 02:40
Carpe diem
Augustus said:
I like this. Living in the moment is the way to live. Liked your form. I wrote one by the same title on March 5. Yours is serious, mine was an old man fooling around.
March 12th, 2017 22:34
Augustus said:
I like this. Living in the moment is the way to live. Liked your form. I wrote one by the same title on March 5. Yours is serious, mine was an old man fooling around.
March 12th, 2017 22:34
Social media
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I do not own a smartphone so I have nothing to look down at, but I observe the same people looking down, unaware of whats happening around them. Excellent write!!
January 3rd, 2017 17:26
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I do not own a smartphone so I have nothing to look down at, but I observe the same people looking down, unaware of whats happening around them. Excellent write!!
January 3rd, 2017 17:26
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JerryBolton said:
THIS is wonderful. You broke everything down to its simplest level. I could not agree more with everything you said here. I do not have any of those i\'s you mentioned. I have a computer and that it is. I had my cable unplugged seven years ago. I do NOT miss it. This is the best explanation on the subject I have ever read. Thank you.
January 3rd, 2017 16:45
JerryBolton said:
THIS is wonderful. You broke everything down to its simplest level. I could not agree more with everything you said here. I do not have any of those i\'s you mentioned. I have a computer and that it is. I had my cable unplugged seven years ago. I do NOT miss it. This is the best explanation on the subject I have ever read. Thank you.
January 3rd, 2017 16:45
Social media
caroline-o said:
i really enjoyed this poem, it\'s always essential to admire the world sans social media and technology. good work!
January 3rd, 2017 15:57
caroline-o said:
i really enjoyed this poem, it\'s always essential to admire the world sans social media and technology. good work!
January 3rd, 2017 15:57
Social media
willyweed said:
smartphones make people stupid.
they better get them automatic driverless cars soon or we all be dead. I like your poem! ww
January 3rd, 2017 15:45
willyweed said:
smartphones make people stupid.
they better get them automatic driverless cars soon or we all be dead. I like your poem! ww
January 3rd, 2017 15:45
Suicidal Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JM ~ Thanks for challenging first poem ! Sometimes we try to sanitise LOVE but you tell it like it is. I have experienced this type of love ~ it hurts but we hold on to it ~ because we are too deeply IN LOVE to get out ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK
December 31st, 2016 20:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JM ~ Thanks for challenging first poem ! Sometimes we try to sanitise LOVE but you tell it like it is. I have experienced this type of love ~ it hurts but we hold on to it ~ because we are too deeply IN LOVE to get out ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK
December 31st, 2016 20:01
Suicidal Love
Christina8 said:
Welcome to Mps! Great first poem. Like you said, sometimes love does suck, but someday I hope you\'ll meet the one. I hope you found writing cathartic. I enjoyed reading your poem. Happy New Year!
December 31st, 2016 18:55
Christina8 said:
Welcome to Mps! Great first poem. Like you said, sometimes love does suck, but someday I hope you\'ll meet the one. I hope you found writing cathartic. I enjoyed reading your poem. Happy New Year!
December 31st, 2016 18:55
