Comments received on poems by Maichael



Child Wonders...
Elbeanzio said:

Congratulations on your daughter man. I have two boys and must admit all we did with the first was panic. Every cry is a mystery or uncertainty. Second one was instinct as you learn a lot the first time round. Oh and enjoy sterilising bottles lol. Love the poem btw.

February 22nd, 2017 16:33

Child Wonders...
Maichael said:

And I wanted the picture to relate to everyone not just my child.

February 21st, 2017 23:59

Child Wonders...
Augustus said:

P.S. The sillouette is perfect for your piece.

February 21st, 2017 18:58

Child Wonders...
Augustus said:

Exactly the mind of a child. They need answers to all of those and need them repeadly, more by your actions than words. Well done.

February 21st, 2017 18:57

Child Wonders...
P.H.Rose said:

This is so very good
Maichael I really like
It, but would of loved
A last word such as..
Mother !!!! Or
Farther !!!!
I hope you don\'t take offence
The poem is brilliant
It was just a thought..
Well done...

February 21st, 2017 16:55

Drive
Elbeanzio said:

Reminds me a bit of \"Stan\" Eminem/Dido. Keep up the good work man 👍


February 20th, 2017 19:54

Drive
P.H.Rose said:

This is very good
I like this very much
Great story, love a story
Poem, my kinda poem
Well done !!!!

February 20th, 2017 18:44

Drive
Augustus said:

Cool.

February 20th, 2017 17:19

CALL IT HOPE
P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant Maichael
This so very good..

February 18th, 2017 18:45

CALL IT HOPE
Augustus said:

We continue learning and getting better. If you wand to edit look for the edit option. After editing you may have to renter the photo. Also to post the poem back you have to hit edit again which is confusing.

February 18th, 2017 10:44

CALL IT HOPE
Maichael said:

*So I now I stay clean white as snow
And waiting at the heavens door

Because I know when the time is right my cup will overflow*

February 18th, 2017 03:38

CALL IT HOPE
Jooles said:

Enjoyed reading. ..love when it\'s a personal experience with a positive outcome

February 18th, 2017 03:28

Broken Singles Prayer
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

February 15th, 2017 16:38

Walkingmare
MaxWritesPoems said:

I am beyond in love with your writing.

February 14th, 2017 22:24

TAKE CARE
Maichael said:

I have a blog page. Www.torealme.blog and I wrote yesterday a poem from a guy side of view and this was the respond to it. I used life lessons and thinks I have witness in the past. But mostly is just art and creative. Thanks for the feeed back lol

February 5th, 2017 18:51

Humbleness is Strength
rrodriguez said:

I believe in being humble, 👍 great job my friend.

February 4th, 2017 23:46

Humbleness is Strength
Tony36 said:

Great write and great message

February 4th, 2017 08:35

The Walls Up
Augustus said:

I can relate to this but in a little different way. In my recovery from abuse I realized I was enmeshed in others emotions and problems, especially anger. I had no boundaries. Where did they stop and I began. I imagined walls of bricks to help. Their sh-t was on one side and mine on the other. Thanks, brought back back old memories.

January 26th, 2017 01:12

The Walls Up
P.H.Rose said:

Another good write..
Well done....

January 21st, 2017 19:36

SELFIE
P.H.Rose said:

This is so very good,
I love it,some wonderful
Lines in it.....well done !!!

January 21st, 2017 19:33

SELFIE
SO SO BAD said:

Great Job Keep up the good work!!

January 10th, 2017 21:29

SELFIE
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 10th, 2017 19:46

The Walls Up
Deebs said:

I get it for sure lots to relate to thanks for sharing sometimes we care to much and we end up taking the blunt of it.

January 2nd, 2017 21:11

The Walls Up
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sad write,but i guess we all feel like this at one time or another !

January 2nd, 2017 20:50

The Walls Up
willyweed said:

This very relatable and well done!
get a demolition contractor and tear the walls down life must be engaged.
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January 2nd, 2017 20:47