Comments received on poems by catdeu
Dear Dad
John Lee said:
Absolutely heartfelt and beautiful. The confusion we have after losing someone we love and looked up to is almost surreal. This made me think of my Grandfather, which I wrote a poem \"to\" .. maybe he heard the words as they spoke from the heart. \'Goodbye Papa\' https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-61093 was my way of saying goodbye but do we really?
November 21st, 2023 20:09
John Lee said:
Absolutely heartfelt and beautiful. The confusion we have after losing someone we love and looked up to is almost surreal. This made me think of my Grandfather, which I wrote a poem \"to\" .. maybe he heard the words as they spoke from the heart. \'Goodbye Papa\' https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-61093 was my way of saying goodbye but do we really?
November 21st, 2023 20:09
Chaos
L. B. Mek said:
in the word of Tom Cruise, you had me at:
\'serenity, my dear
i long for us to meet\'
and by the time I landed with a thud at:
\'at its core it feels like shards of glass
grazing over your skin just enough to hurt
but not enough to bleed
just barely bearable
to the shallow eye it is disguised as cotton
the real cotton, is serenity
it lay at the bottom of a creek that you must fall thousands of feet through chaos just to reach\'
your write
was bagged n tagged into my favourites bag...
truly an immersive write you have penned here, wonderful demonstration of your natural talent for flow and insightful commentary
October 26th, 2020 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
in the word of Tom Cruise, you had me at:
\'serenity, my dear
i long for us to meet\'
and by the time I landed with a thud at:
\'at its core it feels like shards of glass
grazing over your skin just enough to hurt
but not enough to bleed
just barely bearable
to the shallow eye it is disguised as cotton
the real cotton, is serenity
it lay at the bottom of a creek that you must fall thousands of feet through chaos just to reach\'
your write
was bagged n tagged into my favourites bag...
truly an immersive write you have penned here, wonderful demonstration of your natural talent for flow and insightful commentary
October 26th, 2020 04:12
Like a River
TN96 said:
Amen to that! I love your style!
As sad as it is I honestly think so many people our age (myself included) are made to put up with this sort of stuff. I particularly liked the line about life being an \'unsolvable puzzle\'! Most of us also seem to be awful about mentioning this stuff in person, so poems like this can be a really powerful tool :)
Keep writing.
August 31st, 2017 12:40
TN96 said:
Amen to that! I love your style!
As sad as it is I honestly think so many people our age (myself included) are made to put up with this sort of stuff. I particularly liked the line about life being an \'unsolvable puzzle\'! Most of us also seem to be awful about mentioning this stuff in person, so poems like this can be a really powerful tool :)
Keep writing.
August 31st, 2017 12:40
I\'m fat
willyweed said:
I never saw your body but I can say with surety you have a beautiful mind. ww
January 9th, 2017 19:21
willyweed said:
I never saw your body but I can say with surety you have a beautiful mind. ww
January 9th, 2017 19:21
I\'m fat
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CAIT ~ ARE YOU TELLING US PORKIES ? Your profile looks so trim. I hate STICKS and size ZERO ~ I like my Ladies to be UK 16 at least ~ Cuddly ~ Cute ~ Happy and not slaves to fashion or what it dictates. Poetry is fun and it\'s good to have a good poetic rant. You are beautiful and smart (read the comments !) and we all LOVE YOU ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
January 9th, 2017 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CAIT ~ ARE YOU TELLING US PORKIES ? Your profile looks so trim. I hate STICKS and size ZERO ~ I like my Ladies to be UK 16 at least ~ Cuddly ~ Cute ~ Happy and not slaves to fashion or what it dictates. Poetry is fun and it\'s good to have a good poetic rant. You are beautiful and smart (read the comments !) and we all LOVE YOU ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
January 9th, 2017 16:37
I\'m fat
My_Brain said:
Wonderful poem! I just wanted u to know that I think u look beautiful! Don\'t beat yourself up over things u can\'t change.
January 9th, 2017 12:59
My_Brain said:
Wonderful poem! I just wanted u to know that I think u look beautiful! Don\'t beat yourself up over things u can\'t change.
January 9th, 2017 12:59
I\'m fat
WriteBeLight said:
Wonderful piece of work. I sympathize entirely! Yes, writing poems is a great way to deal with issues. Glad you are doing so!
January 9th, 2017 12:46
WriteBeLight said:
Wonderful piece of work. I sympathize entirely! Yes, writing poems is a great way to deal with issues. Glad you are doing so!
January 9th, 2017 12:46
Like a River
John Lee said:
Great poem.. I love that style! I understand completely where you\'re coming from with the depression and anxiety wearing fake smiles like a style. I gotcha. Great job I can feel it. And looking at your profile pic.. I disagree with the ugly and gross repulsive at most line.
January 8th, 2017 01:57
John Lee said:
Great poem.. I love that style! I understand completely where you\'re coming from with the depression and anxiety wearing fake smiles like a style. I gotcha. Great job I can feel it. And looking at your profile pic.. I disagree with the ugly and gross repulsive at most line.
January 8th, 2017 01:57
Like a River
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAITDEU ~ Thanks for your first poem it is excellent. ! It throbs with Rhyme & Rhythm in its structure and Passion and Angst in its content. I am pleased you have got so much positive feedback and that you found it cathartic. MPS is a very empathetic site and you will make lots of Friends and read some excellent poetry ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN (UK)
January 5th, 2017 15:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAITDEU ~ Thanks for your first poem it is excellent. ! It throbs with Rhyme & Rhythm in its structure and Passion and Angst in its content. I am pleased you have got so much positive feedback and that you found it cathartic. MPS is a very empathetic site and you will make lots of Friends and read some excellent poetry ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN (UK)
January 5th, 2017 15:21
Like a River
Phoenix8523 said:
Hope is always a great message. Eloquently written! -- phoenix
January 5th, 2017 13:40
Phoenix8523 said:
Hope is always a great message. Eloquently written! -- phoenix
January 5th, 2017 13:40
Like a River
Hopey_xx said:
Welcome to MPS! Great first poem, I have been here for just over a week, I hope you keep writing!
January 5th, 2017 12:52
Hopey_xx said:
Welcome to MPS! Great first poem, I have been here for just over a week, I hope you keep writing!
January 5th, 2017 12:52
Like a River
My_Brain said:
Great job! I just started writing myself. And this is a great community of people, to write with! Hope to see more of your work soon!
January 5th, 2017 11:51
My_Brain said:
Great job! I just started writing myself. And this is a great community of people, to write with! Hope to see more of your work soon!
January 5th, 2017 11:51
Like a River
willyweed said:
you say this is your first write if that\'s true I have no doubt, you should keep on writing and get those feeling out.
Live is worth the living but sometimes it\'s not so clear ask your God to help you eliminate
your fear. ww
January 5th, 2017 11:48
willyweed said:
you say this is your first write if that\'s true I have no doubt, you should keep on writing and get those feeling out.
Live is worth the living but sometimes it\'s not so clear ask your God to help you eliminate
your fear. ww
January 5th, 2017 11:48
Like a River
rrodriguez said:
I like it... it has a flow and conveys your thoughts, feelings, and emotions clearly. Follow your feeling and write, then edit, then write, then edit... write, and write some more... I liked your poem, very sad...but it has a message.
January 5th, 2017 11:43
rrodriguez said:
I like it... it has a flow and conveys your thoughts, feelings, and emotions clearly. Follow your feeling and write, then edit, then write, then edit... write, and write some more... I liked your poem, very sad...but it has a message.
January 5th, 2017 11:43
Like a River
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS. Great first poem. I think it\'s great that you found yourself in a positive place. And like you said, hold on to hope. I hope that you keep writing, I would love to see more of your work! Thanks for sharing.
January 5th, 2017 11:37
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS. Great first poem. I think it\'s great that you found yourself in a positive place. And like you said, hold on to hope. I hope that you keep writing, I would love to see more of your work! Thanks for sharing.
January 5th, 2017 11:37
