Comments received on poems by McKinsey Rose Lynn

Nicholas Browning said:

I stand against anything I don\'t like. I\'m not a racist, of any kind. I possess a set of morals that I strive to live by. That\'s just me. Just simply, be you.

July 8th, 2017 17:51

Awakened (chapter three)
niallprideaux said:

Dark and thrilling! There\'s one or two spelling mistakes but overall gripped me from the start - and I\'m not a big reader :) x

July 7th, 2017 16:11

Awakened (chapter two)
niallprideaux said:

Nice job! Looking forward to 3 x

July 6th, 2017 20:09

Awakened (chapter One)
burning-embers said:

Very nicely written and gripping! i wanted to keep on reading.
Your last line temps me to tease \'ah but what of your dreams?\'
more please

July 5th, 2017 02:11

Awakened (Prologue)
Tony36 said:

Love it, yes please continue

July 4th, 2017 07:39

Goldfinch60 said:

Memories can be priceless.

June 26th, 2017 00:22

FredPeyer said:

No more memory, no more writing! You may not want to remember something, but to heal you may have to.

June 25th, 2017 12:22

kevin browne said:

the emotional world in which yin and yang take good control leaving the vulnerability to tale control leaving the mind to whip up whirlwinds of mind bending thought. you have captured these feeling brilliantly but I do hope you get to feel better pretty soon. get into the thoughts of those memories but make sure you attempt to erase the nasty and naughty ones. keep hold of the heart felt ones.

June 25th, 2017 09:56

Louis Gibbs said:

But then, who would we be without our memories? Such is the tragedy of Alzheimer\'s. Thanks for your post, McKinsey!

June 25th, 2017 09:55

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

June 23rd, 2017 01:23

Gary Edward Geraci said:

Nice off the cuff write McKinsey. In my own experiences, it all works out for the better when we show that we care for others first....Just saying.

June 22nd, 2017 22:39

brandyngraham said:

Wow. Amazing

June 22nd, 2017 22:32

NikitaPassmore said:

It dosen\'t matter as long as you\'re being you

June 20th, 2017 23:53

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Photos capture a moment in time.

June 19th, 2017 23:57

Dead Men Tell No Tales
Allan J. Renaldo said:

I love this. Just love this. Amazing write.

June 13th, 2017 04:23

hidden.shine said:

Very morbid...

June 6th, 2017 18:00

ummbre said:

I agree with what you\'re saying, very powerful!

May 18th, 2017 23:52

Mello said:

Just great work man. You speak of the millions characters we have in the shadow. Good work.

May 18th, 2017 23:50

Goldfinch60 said:

words can be so peaceful and loving or so vicious and hateful, be careful using them.

May 15th, 2017 09:58

Red Rain

Thanks for sharing ROSE ~ This is a real Poeme Noire ~ it made me sad to read of another life sacrificed either by gun ~ knife or self harming ~ either way she dies. I work with Vocational Students (16 ~ 25) We counsel them against guns ~ knives and self harming. I today\'s volatile Society TEENS are very very vulnerable ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

May 14th, 2017 09:13

Goldfinch60 said:

Nothing Gothic about this, it is happening now and we look on and do nothing.

May 8th, 2017 00:24

swingline said:

It will happen someday and it will be awful .

May 7th, 2017 10:30

Reflection Of This World
Shakerite said:

Very deep and full of angst . Loved it.

January 18th, 2017 17:10

The Graveyard Shift
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 12th, 2017 16:53

The Graveyard Shift
Christina8 said:

Great poem! Scary though.

January 12th, 2017 14:02

The Graveyard Shift
WriteBeLight said:

Wow. Scary poem. Well done!

January 12th, 2017 12:55


WELCOME ROSE ~ Thanks for a very graphic GOTHIC POEM ~ Awesome. Love the visual very sensuous ! Thanks for sharing ~@ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pleas check my POEMS ~ Thanks B

January 12th, 2017 06:30

willyweed said:

nice. I enjoyed reading. ww

January 11th, 2017 21:48