Comments received on poems by Peculiarly Lauren
An idea of me
Cheeky Missy said:
Don\'t worry, welcome to reality. You may well be safer knowing this painful fact thus delineated so beautifully above, than fooling yourself decades longer, learning that he was more interested in making you like himself than who you thought you were, 30+ years into marriage, like my best friend seemingly expressed years ago so eloquently. And yet, if you\'re willing to lose yourself to who he is, you\'ll perhaps enjoy the blessing not all do. But that aside, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 30th, 2025 16:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Don\'t worry, welcome to reality. You may well be safer knowing this painful fact thus delineated so beautifully above, than fooling yourself decades longer, learning that he was more interested in making you like himself than who you thought you were, 30+ years into marriage, like my best friend seemingly expressed years ago so eloquently. And yet, if you\'re willing to lose yourself to who he is, you\'ll perhaps enjoy the blessing not all do. But that aside, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a rather exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 30th, 2025 16:30
to love so deeply
Poetic Licence said:
If it\'s real love it is very powerful, lovely write
March 28th, 2025 20:46
Poetic Licence said:
If it\'s real love it is very powerful, lovely write
March 28th, 2025 20:46
to love so deeply
sorenbarrett said:
One great love is hard to overcome. A wonderful write
March 28th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
One great love is hard to overcome. A wonderful write
March 28th, 2025 17:00
The angry daughter
MR.apocalypse said:
ive written something like this a loong time go........its good for you to be realistic with yourself and honest with your own short comings....... and honest to yourself about the things you did not create.......and the things you cannot control ....but after this moment of cathartic release......and speaking the dark to to world without a name to put to the story ...,.... and after you can come to terms with the aspects that are hard to accept and accept the way things are...there is only one question left ... what are you going to do about it
March 23rd, 2025 22:28
MR.apocalypse said:
ive written something like this a loong time go........its good for you to be realistic with yourself and honest with your own short comings....... and honest to yourself about the things you did not create.......and the things you cannot control ....but after this moment of cathartic release......and speaking the dark to to world without a name to put to the story ...,.... and after you can come to terms with the aspects that are hard to accept and accept the way things are...there is only one question left ... what are you going to do about it
March 23rd, 2025 22:28
The angry daughter
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write that many will relate with, the way it is structured allows good imagery as you read through, written with honesty and gives the warning needed, very good write
March 23rd, 2025 11:59
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write that many will relate with, the way it is structured allows good imagery as you read through, written with honesty and gives the warning needed, very good write
March 23rd, 2025 11:59
The angry daughter
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that many can identify with. Carefully organized and written with great images it rings of authenticity and echoes warning to others. Time for retooling I would say. Loved the poem
March 23rd, 2025 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that many can identify with. Carefully organized and written with great images it rings of authenticity and echoes warning to others. Time for retooling I would say. Loved the poem
March 23rd, 2025 10:37
The thought of you
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderfully crafted poem given the impression at first it is about innocence and romance,but I got a strong sense it was about faith, sorry if I\'m wrong, very enjoyable read
March 22nd, 2025 03:11
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderfully crafted poem given the impression at first it is about innocence and romance,but I got a strong sense it was about faith, sorry if I\'m wrong, very enjoyable read
March 22nd, 2025 03:11
The thought of you
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, innocent, romantic, lovely and most intriguing poem well done
March 21st, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, innocent, romantic, lovely and most intriguing poem well done
March 21st, 2025 14:49
Rose colored glasses
L. B. Mek said:
like the ingenuity in your form
a good read, thanks for sharing
(just got me thinking, do mermaids have tails or fins? lol)
November 12th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
like the ingenuity in your form
a good read, thanks for sharing
(just got me thinking, do mermaids have tails or fins? lol)
November 12th, 2021 05:14
Light everything on fire
L. B. Mek said:
\'the things I adored
no longer recognizable to my hands and fingers.
I am bitter,
I am hurt\'..
it sounds as though, you\'re fully justified
all you need do, is insure these words
are incorporated as part of your
self-healing journey;
that way, you\'ll insure the pain gifted to you
will fuel your phoenix, re-emergence and evolution
sadly, life is full of inevitable suffering
but mercifully, its rewards are multiplicative
keep believing in yourself
never settle for toxic companionship, break-free
from those choices that perpetuate those harmful cycles;
I genuinely hope you find, your better
keep inking your rage, if it helps
and if this write, was purely an artistic depiction
then more power, to your capacity to imitate yet still
voice pain, so relatable..
thanks for choosing to share
August 30th, 2021 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'the things I adored
no longer recognizable to my hands and fingers.
I am bitter,
I am hurt\'..
it sounds as though, you\'re fully justified
all you need do, is insure these words
are incorporated as part of your
self-healing journey;
that way, you\'ll insure the pain gifted to you
will fuel your phoenix, re-emergence and evolution
sadly, life is full of inevitable suffering
but mercifully, its rewards are multiplicative
keep believing in yourself
never settle for toxic companionship, break-free
from those choices that perpetuate those harmful cycles;
I genuinely hope you find, your better
keep inking your rage, if it helps
and if this write, was purely an artistic depiction
then more power, to your capacity to imitate yet still
voice pain, so relatable..
thanks for choosing to share
August 30th, 2021 04:14
Never worth it
peto said:
Super read Lauren
I feel this is just the beginning of what you have to say
Look forward to hearing your voice
June 11th, 2020 09:14
peto said:
Super read Lauren
I feel this is just the beginning of what you have to say
Look forward to hearing your voice
June 11th, 2020 09:14
Never worth it
dusk arising said:
Telling a story of life\'s effect on us can be beneficial to those experiencing something in their own life. No book can be read just by looking at the cover. Your cover does not reveal what you have lived through to bring you to today.
I sat down with my mum in her nineties and quizzed her about her life before she met my long departed dad. I was amazed at the stuff she did when she was a young woman and a jolliness came into her as she told of those times. I am so glad for the both of us that we had that conversation.
June 11th, 2020 01:20
dusk arising said:
Telling a story of life\'s effect on us can be beneficial to those experiencing something in their own life. No book can be read just by looking at the cover. Your cover does not reveal what you have lived through to bring you to today.
I sat down with my mum in her nineties and quizzed her about her life before she met my long departed dad. I was amazed at the stuff she did when she was a young woman and a jolliness came into her as she told of those times. I am so glad for the both of us that we had that conversation.
June 11th, 2020 01:20
Never worth it
Goldfinch60 said:
Every body has a story worth telling within them.
Andy
June 11th, 2020 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Every body has a story worth telling within them.
Andy
June 11th, 2020 00:44
𝓜𝓪𝓻𝓬𝓱
orchidee said:
Oohh, I like it when poets write about me on here! heehee.
March 5th, 2020 02:36
orchidee said:
Oohh, I like it when poets write about me on here! heehee.
March 5th, 2020 02:36
𝘓𝘦𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘣𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘥 𝘰𝘯𝘵𝘰
Goldfinch60 said:
Super love words Lauren, may that love be forever with you.
February 15th, 2020 11:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Super love words Lauren, may that love be forever with you.
February 15th, 2020 11:28
𝚊 𝚜𝚒𝚕𝚎𝚗𝚝 𝚔𝚒𝚕𝚕𝚎𝚛
Lorna said:
This is the second of your short stories that I have read and it\'s another powerful one.... you are very good at this form.......
November 8th, 2018 05:13
Lorna said:
This is the second of your short stories that I have read and it\'s another powerful one.... you are very good at this form.......
November 8th, 2018 05:13
