Comments received on poems by Peculiarly Lauren



Light everything on fire
L. B. Mek said:

\'the things I adored
no longer recognizable to my hands and fingers.
I am bitter,
I am hurt\'..
it sounds as though, you\'re fully justified
all you need do, is insure these words
are incorporated as part of your
self-healing journey;
that way, you\'ll insure the pain gifted to you
will fuel your phoenix, re-emergence and evolution
sadly, life is full of inevitable suffering
but mercifully, its rewards are multiplicative
keep believing in yourself
never settle for toxic companionship, break-free
from those choices that perpetuate those harmful cycles;
I genuinely hope you find, your better
keep inking your rage, if it helps
and if this write, was purely an artistic depiction
then more power, to your capacity to imitate yet still
voice pain, so relatable..
thanks for choosing to share

August 30th, 2021 04:14

Never worth it
Mads said:

Exactly... couldn’t say it better myself...

June 11th, 2020 15:52

Never worth it
peto said:

Super read Lauren
I feel this is just the beginning of what you have to say
Look forward to hearing your voice

June 11th, 2020 09:14

Never worth it
dusk arising said:

Telling a story of life\'s effect on us can be beneficial to those experiencing something in their own life. No book can be read just by looking at the cover. Your cover does not reveal what you have lived through to bring you to today.

I sat down with my mum in her nineties and quizzed her about her life before she met my long departed dad. I was amazed at the stuff she did when she was a young woman and a jolliness came into her as she told of those times. I am so glad for the both of us that we had that conversation.

June 11th, 2020 01:20

Never worth it
AKANKSHYA said:

I love it.




June 11th, 2020 01:10

Never worth it
AKANKSHYA said:

I love it.




June 11th, 2020 01:10

Never worth it
Goldfinch60 said:

Every body has a story worth telling within them.

Andy

June 11th, 2020 00:44


𝙈𝙖𝙙𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛
dusk arising said:

Your chosen words brought back to me what it is to be madly in love. Well done and thank you.

Be careful not to lose yourself.

March 17th, 2020 23:52

𝓜𝓪𝓻𝓬𝓱
orchidee said:

Oohh, I like it when poets write about me on here! heehee.

March 5th, 2020 02:36

𝓜𝓪𝓻𝓬𝓱
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Lauren.

Andy

March 5th, 2020 02:02



𝚊 𝚜𝚒𝚕𝚎𝚗𝚝 𝚔𝚒𝚕𝚕𝚎𝚛
Lorna said:

This is the second of your short stories that I have read and it\'s another powerful one.... you are very good at this form.......

November 8th, 2018 05:13