Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Write Fright
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that contradicts itself in a fun way, not knowing what to write, so wrote about not knowing what to write hence knew what to write. A very enjoyable read
December 27th, 2024 10:34
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that contradicts itself in a fun way, not knowing what to write, so wrote about not knowing what to write hence knew what to write. A very enjoyable read
December 27th, 2024 10:34
This Christmas Night
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem π’
articulately penned!! π
Love the repeated lines!π
A captivating form
you have created,
much enjoyed my friend!π
Best regards βοΈπ Thad
December 26th, 2024 22:22
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem π’
articulately penned!! π
Love the repeated lines!π
A captivating form
you have created,
much enjoyed my friend!π
Best regards βοΈπ Thad
December 26th, 2024 22:22
This Christmas Night
arqios said:
Oh, awesome to get into: cascading revelations! Quite a technical triumph here married to substance and significance of content! Liked and Faved! ππ»ππ»
December 26th, 2024 19:59
arqios said:
Oh, awesome to get into: cascading revelations! Quite a technical triumph here married to substance and significance of content! Liked and Faved! ππ»ππ»
December 26th, 2024 19:59
This Christmas Night
Cheeky Missy said:
Why are you absent from the merriment and festivities, dear, beloved poet? Imagery so exquisite I nearly swoon, indulging vicariously until I nearly hug myself, and very beautifully rendered with a heartbreaking poignancy whose import begs intrigue come capering, thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Why are you absent from the merriment and festivities, dear, beloved poet? Imagery so exquisite I nearly swoon, indulging vicariously until I nearly hug myself, and very beautifully rendered with a heartbreaking poignancy whose import begs intrigue come capering, thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:27
This Christmas Night
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful lyrical write. So emotionally heartbreaking, but so clever in its composition. How do you do it Tristan? You are a master of words. Wishing you all the very best.
December 26th, 2024 14:23
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful lyrical write. So emotionally heartbreaking, but so clever in its composition. How do you do it Tristan? You are a master of words. Wishing you all the very best.
December 26th, 2024 14:23
This Christmas Night
Teddy.15 said:
I see all the talents of a truly great songwriter, when something has flames our heart yet fizzled out can make us feel grief, but one can find that true passion once more here I feel a longing to be able to share ones true talent and this is about writing music. πΉ
December 26th, 2024 12:57
Teddy.15 said:
I see all the talents of a truly great songwriter, when something has flames our heart yet fizzled out can make us feel grief, but one can find that true passion once more here I feel a longing to be able to share ones true talent and this is about writing music. πΉ
December 26th, 2024 12:57
This Christmas Night
Poetic Licence said:
A contrast of emotions searching for an answer, then coming to an understanding, really enjoyed the read. Thank you for explanation, more confused now!!!.
December 26th, 2024 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A contrast of emotions searching for an answer, then coming to an understanding, really enjoyed the read. Thank you for explanation, more confused now!!!.
December 26th, 2024 12:10
This Christmas Night
orchidee said:
I of course include all this in my poetic compositions and me pentameter thingys! π A lot of crackling, etc, going on here.
It\'s more complicated than my \'formats\' 8.8.8.8. Or could be, e.g. 47.35.82.26. syllables per line - summat like that anyway!
I used to say \'metre\' but that\'s more technical with some stressed syllables, which I get too stressed working them out. Doh! lol.
December 26th, 2024 11:36
orchidee said:
I of course include all this in my poetic compositions and me pentameter thingys! π A lot of crackling, etc, going on here.
It\'s more complicated than my \'formats\' 8.8.8.8. Or could be, e.g. 47.35.82.26. syllables per line - summat like that anyway!
I used to say \'metre\' but that\'s more technical with some stressed syllables, which I get too stressed working them out. Doh! lol.
December 26th, 2024 11:36
This Christmas Night
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be a song although sad and mournful it calls out with loss and yet memories of family and warmth. Beautiful in its darkness
December 26th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be a song although sad and mournful it calls out with loss and yet memories of family and warmth. Beautiful in its darkness
December 26th, 2024 10:14
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Mutley Ravishes said:
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
December 26th, 2024 05:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
December 26th, 2024 05:30
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
aDarkerMind said:
don\'t know how I missed this one Tristan, but found it eventually.
a dark write at it\'s very best.
December 26th, 2024 04:29
aDarkerMind said:
don\'t know how I missed this one Tristan, but found it eventually.
a dark write at it\'s very best.
December 26th, 2024 04:29
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic T.
December 26th, 2024 03:19
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic T.
December 26th, 2024 03:19
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. πΉ
December 26th, 2024 02:12
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. πΉ
December 26th, 2024 02:12
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Michael Edwards said:
A great form and a great example.
December 26th, 2024 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
A great form and a great example.
December 26th, 2024 01:56
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! π
A wonderful haiku,
yes nature is a
treat to behold it\'s true!? ποΈ
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 25th, 2024 22:31
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! π
A wonderful haiku,
yes nature is a
treat to behold it\'s true!? ποΈ
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 25th, 2024 22:31
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! How very, very beautifully rendered! It almost makes me swoon! Charming in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! How very, very beautifully rendered! It almost makes me swoon! Charming in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:35
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in these brief lines
December 25th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in these brief lines
December 25th, 2024 13:55
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely ditty and a stunning picture
December 25th, 2024 11:12
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely ditty and a stunning picture
December 25th, 2024 11:12
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Cheeky Missy said:
*Sigh* How exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously charming poignancy. I wish I could frame it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 18:48
Cheeky Missy said:
*Sigh* How exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously charming poignancy. I wish I could frame it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 18:48
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem and
dedication to all poets
at the end of 2024!! π
A stunning Christmas
present π
we could not ask for more!!π
A superb read indeed!!π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 24th, 2024 18:37
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem and
dedication to all poets
at the end of 2024!! π
A stunning Christmas
present π
we could not ask for more!!π
A superb read indeed!!π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 24th, 2024 18:37
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s all been said - a golden write - wishing you everything I would wish for myself and more - maybe a tad smug but we poets are a breed apart - it takes a special talent to write works of the standards displayed every day on this site and you are up there with the best,
December 24th, 2024 15:11
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s all been said - a golden write - wishing you everything I would wish for myself and more - maybe a tad smug but we poets are a breed apart - it takes a special talent to write works of the standards displayed every day on this site and you are up there with the best,
December 24th, 2024 15:11
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Demar Desu said:
Youβre a popular guy, merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 12:22
Demar Desu said:
Youβre a popular guy, merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 12:22
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
sweksha said:
Wishing you and your family a season full of blessings and a bright New Year ahead! β€οΈβπ©ΉMay everything you ask for be given to you and doors of new opportunities open for u may u heal from things you don\'t talk about may God be with you β‘
December 24th, 2024 11:46
sweksha said:
Wishing you and your family a season full of blessings and a bright New Year ahead! β€οΈβπ©ΉMay everything you ask for be given to you and doors of new opportunities open for u may u heal from things you don\'t talk about may God be with you β‘
December 24th, 2024 11:46
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Poetic Licence said:
Oh Dear Poets, echo the sentiments of the poem, and thank you for the explanation, Merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 11:45
Poetic Licence said:
Oh Dear Poets, echo the sentiments of the poem, and thank you for the explanation, Merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 11:45
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
orchidee said:
Good write Shovel, erm Tristan! lol.
December 24th, 2024 11:24
orchidee said:
Good write Shovel, erm Tristan! lol.
December 24th, 2024 11:24
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! and as Einstein said genius is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration this must have been a lot of work my friend.
December 24th, 2024 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! and as Einstein said genius is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration this must have been a lot of work my friend.
December 24th, 2024 10:27
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Neville said:
Wot a bunch we are .. and each grateful for being .. Bless you my very dear Tristan & here\'s me wishing you n all who pass by here a flippin brilliant healthy happy, safe and successful 2025 .. πππ€
December 24th, 2024 10:13
Neville said:
Wot a bunch we are .. and each grateful for being .. Bless you my very dear Tristan & here\'s me wishing you n all who pass by here a flippin brilliant healthy happy, safe and successful 2025 .. πππ€
December 24th, 2024 10:13
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Teddy.15 said:
Your first two lines say it all, it takes a very special person to be able to write poetry. We\'ve all got that talent, from the warmest deepest parts of Tuscany and London I send you nothing but the best of everything dearest Tristan such a special place here, for so many reasons. πΉ
December 24th, 2024 09:55
Teddy.15 said:
Your first two lines say it all, it takes a very special person to be able to write poetry. We\'ve all got that talent, from the warmest deepest parts of Tuscany and London I send you nothing but the best of everything dearest Tristan such a special place here, for so many reasons. πΉ
December 24th, 2024 09:55
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
arqios said:
Inflection, stress, diction, enunciation, changes things: βOh DEAR, poets!β Lol. Liked and Faved. What a way to cap 2024, Tristan. The first line is golden!!! For me atm, it is the poetβs mantra!
December 24th, 2024 09:15
arqios said:
Inflection, stress, diction, enunciation, changes things: βOh DEAR, poets!β Lol. Liked and Faved. What a way to cap 2024, Tristan. The first line is golden!!! For me atm, it is the poetβs mantra!
December 24th, 2024 09:15
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