Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Pecking
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem felt like you have melted crow and raven into one knowing that one day from a Ravens nest transformation might awaken.
I felt there were many other small clues though the quill is one that can be feathered and there were times scribes and poets dipped feathers into ink.
Fountain pens, fountains of words is yet another clue I got from these riddled words.
be well
bright blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 08:45
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem felt like you have melted crow and raven into one knowing that one day from a Ravens nest transformation might awaken.
I felt there were many other small clues though the quill is one that can be feathered and there were times scribes and poets dipped feathers into ink.
Fountain pens, fountains of words is yet another clue I got from these riddled words.
be well
bright blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 08:45
The Pecking
sorenbarrett said:
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos and smudged erasure marks, before white out. The carbon copies were the worst. This poem speaks from the dank quarters of the mind of the poet. The pecking seen in the print. Each key a peck and in this poem emphasized by the spaces between in the expanded print. Wondering if those spaces are the mind in blank between thoughts. Raven writer or muse one and the same it speaks out of darkness. Lovely
April 9th, 2025 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos and smudged erasure marks, before white out. The carbon copies were the worst. This poem speaks from the dank quarters of the mind of the poet. The pecking seen in the print. Each key a peck and in this poem emphasized by the spaces between in the expanded print. Wondering if those spaces are the mind in blank between thoughts. Raven writer or muse one and the same it speaks out of darkness. Lovely
April 9th, 2025 08:27
The Pecking
arqios said:
Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile! Funny I never thought of the writer themselves as the crow; or could it be the Muse, or both? Alter-ego? 🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 07:31
arqios said:
Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile! Funny I never thought of the writer themselves as the crow; or could it be the Muse, or both? Alter-ego? 🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 07:31
Blind
Demar Desu said:
Why do you copy write your poems? Do you have a LLC for poetry ?
April 8th, 2025 18:27
Demar Desu said:
Why do you copy write your poems? Do you have a LLC for poetry ?
April 8th, 2025 18:27
Blind
arqios said:
And there appears yet again the fine edge of that reckless knife. Saw for the first time today the finished product of a 3D printer and it happened to be a dark rose… what a tandem coincidence, this poem and the printer’s cutting edge. 🕊🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 17:42
arqios said:
And there appears yet again the fine edge of that reckless knife. Saw for the first time today the finished product of a 3D printer and it happened to be a dark rose… what a tandem coincidence, this poem and the printer’s cutting edge. 🕊🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 17:42
Blind
Cheeky Missy said:
Adroitly twisting at least one word herein, bittersweet brevity sweetly renders an all too common case superbly. Exquisitely painful with gorgeous imagery, how very poignant it is. Thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Adroitly twisting at least one word herein, bittersweet brevity sweetly renders an all too common case superbly. Exquisitely painful with gorgeous imagery, how very poignant it is. Thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:45
Nightshade
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and rather intricately woven to effect, you remind me of how I loved to wander in the moonlit nights, trying for solace therein, but to little effect. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and an haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and rather intricately woven to effect, you remind me of how I loved to wander in the moonlit nights, trying for solace therein, but to little effect. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and an haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:43
Blind
orchidee said:
Well - if ya can do anything about the blindness and darkness - sometimes we can\'t change blindness, but if ya can - switch a light on. Doh! lol. You knew I was gonna say that!
April 8th, 2025 10:58
orchidee said:
Well - if ya can do anything about the blindness and darkness - sometimes we can\'t change blindness, but if ya can - switch a light on. Doh! lol. You knew I was gonna say that!
April 8th, 2025 10:58
Blind
Poetic Licence said:
It initially paints a very vivid image of pain and hurt, but something says there is more tomorrow to this than meets the eye, very enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
It initially paints a very vivid image of pain and hurt, but something says there is more tomorrow to this than meets the eye, very enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 10:55
Defy
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello again,
While reading the poem I was in for some pending shake ups and felt like becoming part of a storm erupting. There is a lot I can say about this poem but I will save you my looking glass telescopic eye and just lean back letting the poem unfold. Into yet new images, I really like the tree that felt like rooting the piece into solid soil. The end was a yah oh yah part, I defy.....
splendid!
I will surely read more of your works!
April 8th, 2025 09:41
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello again,
While reading the poem I was in for some pending shake ups and felt like becoming part of a storm erupting. There is a lot I can say about this poem but I will save you my looking glass telescopic eye and just lean back letting the poem unfold. Into yet new images, I really like the tree that felt like rooting the piece into solid soil. The end was a yah oh yah part, I defy.....
splendid!
I will surely read more of your works!
April 8th, 2025 09:41
Blind
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever rhyme scheme and intricate meter. This is a rather advanced poem in all areas. A fave
April 8th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever rhyme scheme and intricate meter. This is a rather advanced poem in all areas. A fave
April 8th, 2025 09:33
Blind
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
Though this short concise poem gives way to images that vividly open in the minds eye of me as a reader. I felt there still was just that sense of mystery. You lifted just a tip of a veil enough and left the piece like billowing smoke. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:19
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
Though this short concise poem gives way to images that vividly open in the minds eye of me as a reader. I felt there still was just that sense of mystery. You lifted just a tip of a veil enough and left the piece like billowing smoke. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:19
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
Poetic Licence said:
This was a bit of a mind bender for me and took me a while to get my head round it, which kinda makes the read even more enjoyable.
April 7th, 2025 17:35
Poetic Licence said:
This was a bit of a mind bender for me and took me a while to get my head round it, which kinda makes the read even more enjoyable.
April 7th, 2025 17:35
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
2781 said:
I couldn\'t take a deeper dive, probably my myopia!
April 7th, 2025 13:00
2781 said:
I couldn\'t take a deeper dive, probably my myopia!
April 7th, 2025 13:00
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is our myopia that impairs a cornucopia of benefits from such a hope. It seems that you have covered all the bases and despite all our striving we seem no closer than in the past. I am not sure that such a place exists my friend or ever will. A mind probing work that gives one thought. Nicely done surprised that you found so many words that I had to look up.
April 7th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is our myopia that impairs a cornucopia of benefits from such a hope. It seems that you have covered all the bases and despite all our striving we seem no closer than in the past. I am not sure that such a place exists my friend or ever will. A mind probing work that gives one thought. Nicely done surprised that you found so many words that I had to look up.
April 7th, 2025 10:02
Defy
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, as children we become shaped and moulded and adapt to be and those roots will always be there. When we become adults we are the same just bigger and that we will always be, sorry if that doesn\'t make any sense,loved the write
April 7th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, as children we become shaped and moulded and adapt to be and those roots will always be there. When we become adults we are the same just bigger and that we will always be, sorry if that doesn\'t make any sense,loved the write
April 7th, 2025 09:38
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
arqios said:
Quite a deep dive, very intriguing thoughts🕊🙏🏻
April 7th, 2025 08:21
arqios said:
Quite a deep dive, very intriguing thoughts🕊🙏🏻
April 7th, 2025 08:21
Defy
Cheeky Missy said:
Defy what, precisely, dear friend? Maturity was what they pushed us toward, yet, alas, having likewise introduced us to Peter Pan, which of us didn\'t go that route? So, we\'re adults, can\'t alter that, but yet we\'re children still, either rooted in sand or in the rock. And having taken me on that ride, I\'ll thank you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Defy what, precisely, dear friend? Maturity was what they pushed us toward, yet, alas, having likewise introduced us to Peter Pan, which of us didn\'t go that route? So, we\'re adults, can\'t alter that, but yet we\'re children still, either rooted in sand or in the rock. And having taken me on that ride, I\'ll thank you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:53
Defy
orchidee said:
Yes - I\'m growing down. I\'m taking some pills to stunt my growth. I\'m 3 inches shorter already! lol. Woof! says Fido. \'You\'ve not got the right meaning of this poem\'. heehee.
April 6th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
Yes - I\'m growing down. I\'m taking some pills to stunt my growth. I\'m 3 inches shorter already! lol. Woof! says Fido. \'You\'ve not got the right meaning of this poem\'. heehee.
April 6th, 2025 10:47
Defy
arqios said:
Reminds me of the old boys’ club and all that… shivers and cringes🙏🏻🕊liked and Faved🤩
April 6th, 2025 08:38
arqios said:
Reminds me of the old boys’ club and all that… shivers and cringes🙏🏻🕊liked and Faved🤩
April 6th, 2025 08:38
Defy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted knowledge. This poem does just that in a unique rhyme pattern and format. My father\'s moto was if you\'re not five minutes early you are late. My mother was always late, not by five minutes but much more. I saw the conflict first hand between conformity and who you are. One need not be a rebel to be oneself, there is no rebellion just being that is enough. A fave my friend
April 6th, 2025 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted knowledge. This poem does just that in a unique rhyme pattern and format. My father\'s moto was if you\'re not five minutes early you are late. My mother was always late, not by five minutes but much more. I saw the conflict first hand between conformity and who you are. One need not be a rebel to be oneself, there is no rebellion just being that is enough. A fave my friend
April 6th, 2025 08:07
Enemy
NafisaSB said:
you have given us so much to ponder about - some of these thoughts come to us too - glad you put them in verse, and asked the world..
April 6th, 2025 02:37
NafisaSB said:
you have given us so much to ponder about - some of these thoughts come to us too - glad you put them in verse, and asked the world..
April 6th, 2025 02:37
Serpentine Seduction
orchidee said:
I shertainly can\'t shay all thish poem after a ginsh of threesh! lol.
April 5th, 2025 10:18
orchidee said:
I shertainly can\'t shay all thish poem after a ginsh of threesh! lol.
April 5th, 2025 10:18
Serpentine Seduction
sorenbarrett said:
A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is too close it bites before you know it. Very nicely done Tristan
April 5th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is too close it bites before you know it. Very nicely done Tristan
April 5th, 2025 07:09
Serpentine Seduction
arqios said:
Super! The esses have it in thisss one! What an accomplishment 🕊🙏🏻Liked and Faved 🤩
April 5th, 2025 07:03
arqios said:
Super! The esses have it in thisss one! What an accomplishment 🕊🙏🏻Liked and Faved 🤩
April 5th, 2025 07:03
Viscosity
Courtnie McKern said:
Nicely done! I love the last line
Where ink will flow free and enter hearts to live
April 4th, 2025 20:08
Courtnie McKern said:
Nicely done! I love the last line
Where ink will flow free and enter hearts to live
April 4th, 2025 20:08
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