Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Spire
Doggerel Dave said:
Appreciate I’m swimming against the tide here, Tristan; I see no phallic symbolism in steeples and tall slender industrial chimneys but can only marvel at the work undertaken to escape gravity. Certainly get no obeisance out of me! lol
Enjoyed the write and provocation..
April 12th, 2025 19:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Appreciate I’m swimming against the tide here, Tristan; I see no phallic symbolism in steeples and tall slender industrial chimneys but can only marvel at the work undertaken to escape gravity. Certainly get no obeisance out of me! lol
Enjoyed the write and provocation..
April 12th, 2025 19:45
The Spire
Poetic Licence said:
Hey look at me and do as your told feel to this write, to me it also looks like a phallic symbol which would he fair to say that people who behave this way are, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 09:43
Poetic Licence said:
Hey look at me and do as your told feel to this write, to me it also looks like a phallic symbol which would he fair to say that people who behave this way are, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 09:43
The Spire
sorenbarrett said:
So brief yet inspiring the metaphor can not go unnoticed if human the phallic symbol raised and reinforced by the line erected high gives the image that we are driven in demanded obedience being the only one in residence to follow. The primal urge to leave our seed upon the earth. The strongest drive next to survival air, water, food and shelter. A most lovely and powerful write
April 12th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
So brief yet inspiring the metaphor can not go unnoticed if human the phallic symbol raised and reinforced by the line erected high gives the image that we are driven in demanded obedience being the only one in residence to follow. The primal urge to leave our seed upon the earth. The strongest drive next to survival air, water, food and shelter. A most lovely and powerful write
April 12th, 2025 09:21
The Spire
arqios said:
Short and powerful. Has a kind of LOTR feel to it as well🙏🏻🕊️
April 12th, 2025 09:04
arqios said:
Short and powerful. Has a kind of LOTR feel to it as well🙏🏻🕊️
April 12th, 2025 09:04
Oh Snap
teardrop said:
I am glad I read your comments on this piece for it made me reread it and even read it with a different perspective. Anxiety is and can be as sporadic as you very well described it. Great write, poet.
April 12th, 2025 04:43
teardrop said:
I am glad I read your comments on this piece for it made me reread it and even read it with a different perspective. Anxiety is and can be as sporadic as you very well described it. Great write, poet.
April 12th, 2025 04:43
Oh Snap
Poetic Licence said:
A write of a largely ignored and unknown subject that many people suffer from in various levels, as the write says, the saying oh just snap out of it only heightens that anxiety because from my point of view, makes you so bloody angry, nice to see a write on this subject.
April 11th, 2025 09:40
Poetic Licence said:
A write of a largely ignored and unknown subject that many people suffer from in various levels, as the write says, the saying oh just snap out of it only heightens that anxiety because from my point of view, makes you so bloody angry, nice to see a write on this subject.
April 11th, 2025 09:40
Oh Snap
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety one of the biggest killers, raise blood pressure, alters sugar consumption by the body, increases heart rate among other things. Alters perception, decreases concentration, makes sleep more difficult. A much needed write on a subject too neglected
April 11th, 2025 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety one of the biggest killers, raise blood pressure, alters sugar consumption by the body, increases heart rate among other things. Alters perception, decreases concentration, makes sleep more difficult. A much needed write on a subject too neglected
April 11th, 2025 08:58
Oh Snap
arqios said:
Oh the joy and frustration of triggers in our day to day lives!🙏🏻🕊️
April 11th, 2025 07:30
arqios said:
Oh the joy and frustration of triggers in our day to day lives!🙏🏻🕊️
April 11th, 2025 07:30
Muscle Car
arqios said:
That was my dad’s generation, after the oppression of the 40s they were kings in the late 50s to the mid70s, the muscle car their god of choice. So many memories and psychoanalytic fodder… much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊
April 10th, 2025 21:48
arqios said:
That was my dad’s generation, after the oppression of the 40s they were kings in the late 50s to the mid70s, the muscle car their god of choice. So many memories and psychoanalytic fodder… much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊
April 10th, 2025 21:48
Muscle Car
Cheeky Missy said:
[I just had a ball commenting, and in attempting to eliminate the idiotic slash marks punishing the use of apostrophes, it vaporized in a heartbeat, in lieu of opening the edit page. Being fucked isn\'t fun when you felt inspired. Argh.] What in the world are you about in this pretty number regarding an American classic? Ah, but now I see. That generation gone unto the dogs, there\'s truly naught left but haints to troll the streets and alleyways looking for a place, roaming near and far, displaced by the 80\'s and what followed, til naught but ghosts indeed are at the wheel. Even the Fast and the Furious didn\'t drive that Amer\'can phenomenon. La dee. How delectably rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy I swear is subtly laced by a note of humor. Stupendous. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 18:24
Cheeky Missy said:
[I just had a ball commenting, and in attempting to eliminate the idiotic slash marks punishing the use of apostrophes, it vaporized in a heartbeat, in lieu of opening the edit page. Being fucked isn\'t fun when you felt inspired. Argh.] What in the world are you about in this pretty number regarding an American classic? Ah, but now I see. That generation gone unto the dogs, there\'s truly naught left but haints to troll the streets and alleyways looking for a place, roaming near and far, displaced by the 80\'s and what followed, til naught but ghosts indeed are at the wheel. Even the Fast and the Furious didn\'t drive that Amer\'can phenomenon. La dee. How delectably rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy I swear is subtly laced by a note of humor. Stupendous. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 18:24
Muscle Car
Poetic Licence said:
Killed by there passion, never driven in one, would love to, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
Killed by there passion, never driven in one, would love to, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 12:07
Muscle Car
sorenbarrett said:
My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with oversized engine he had more speeding tickets than the glovebox could hold. Great poem Tristan
April 10th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with oversized engine he had more speeding tickets than the glovebox could hold. Great poem Tristan
April 10th, 2025 10:57
The Pecking
Mutley Ravishes said:
Raven and co just keep on pecking! They must be trying to tell us something. I wonder who they work for?
Great write, Tristan.
April 9th, 2025 19:53
Mutley Ravishes said:
Raven and co just keep on pecking! They must be trying to tell us something. I wonder who they work for?
Great write, Tristan.
April 9th, 2025 19:53
Leave Little Room
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easier to tell people to hope than to find some ourselves... you have a few typos (lol)
April 9th, 2025 14:27
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easier to tell people to hope than to find some ourselves... you have a few typos (lol)
April 9th, 2025 14:27
Blind
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, but you must wonder, friend, did you see the knife and ignore it because you felt loved? Beautifully heartbreaking.
April 9th, 2025 14:12
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, but you must wonder, friend, did you see the knife and ignore it because you felt loved? Beautifully heartbreaking.
April 9th, 2025 14:12
The Pecking
Cheeky Missy said:
Pecking order, eh? The messenger with freighted news by the conclusion is an excellent twist, whereas the initial character conjures effigies to haunt the landscape as a deterrence. Fascinating indeed. My, my, my. The few saved shall receive your message who first was misperceived as a pest. Superb! Did I hit the jackpot? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, grand style and effects, and oh me! what a chilling poignancy!
April 9th, 2025 13:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Pecking order, eh? The messenger with freighted news by the conclusion is an excellent twist, whereas the initial character conjures effigies to haunt the landscape as a deterrence. Fascinating indeed. My, my, my. The few saved shall receive your message who first was misperceived as a pest. Superb! Did I hit the jackpot? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, grand style and effects, and oh me! what a chilling poignancy!
April 9th, 2025 13:35
The Pecking
Poetic Licence said:
The mind in chaos and darkness being peck at by its thoughts, gaps between the pecks allowing the mind to panic and fear the pecks, aided and abetted by the tools of the poets trade, wonderful write.
April 9th, 2025 11:55
Poetic Licence said:
The mind in chaos and darkness being peck at by its thoughts, gaps between the pecks allowing the mind to panic and fear the pecks, aided and abetted by the tools of the poets trade, wonderful write.
April 9th, 2025 11:55
The Pecking
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem felt like you have melted crow and raven into one knowing that one day from a Ravens nest transformation might awaken.
I felt there were many other small clues though the quill is one that can be feathered and there were times scribes and poets dipped feathers into ink.
Fountain pens, fountains of words is yet another clue I got from these riddled words.
be well
bright blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 08:45
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem felt like you have melted crow and raven into one knowing that one day from a Ravens nest transformation might awaken.
I felt there were many other small clues though the quill is one that can be feathered and there were times scribes and poets dipped feathers into ink.
Fountain pens, fountains of words is yet another clue I got from these riddled words.
be well
bright blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 08:45
The Pecking
sorenbarrett said:
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos and smudged erasure marks, before white out. The carbon copies were the worst. This poem speaks from the dank quarters of the mind of the poet. The pecking seen in the print. Each key a peck and in this poem emphasized by the spaces between in the expanded print. Wondering if those spaces are the mind in blank between thoughts. Raven writer or muse one and the same it speaks out of darkness. Lovely
April 9th, 2025 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos and smudged erasure marks, before white out. The carbon copies were the worst. This poem speaks from the dank quarters of the mind of the poet. The pecking seen in the print. Each key a peck and in this poem emphasized by the spaces between in the expanded print. Wondering if those spaces are the mind in blank between thoughts. Raven writer or muse one and the same it speaks out of darkness. Lovely
April 9th, 2025 08:27
The Pecking
arqios said:
Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile! Funny I never thought of the writer themselves as the crow; or could it be the Muse, or both? Alter-ego? 🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 07:31
arqios said:
Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile! Funny I never thought of the writer themselves as the crow; or could it be the Muse, or both? Alter-ego? 🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 07:31
Blind
Demar Desu said:
Why do you copy write your poems? Do you have a LLC for poetry ?
April 8th, 2025 18:27
Demar Desu said:
Why do you copy write your poems? Do you have a LLC for poetry ?
April 8th, 2025 18:27
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