Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Inhale/Exhale
aDarkerMind said:
both words and artistry combined....
you have a gift Tristan.
enjoyed every word.
January 5th, 2025 06:37
aDarkerMind said:
both words and artistry combined....
you have a gift Tristan.
enjoyed every word.
January 5th, 2025 06:37
Doors
arqios said:
Now, how did I miss this! Doors, light… and a keyhole comes to mind… as a child I remember looking through the keyhole, being somehow locked out of a room. Curious things the brain does while meant to be on task… another sign of ADD perhaps. Love always unlocks…
January 4th, 2025 19:14
arqios said:
Now, how did I miss this! Doors, light… and a keyhole comes to mind… as a child I remember looking through the keyhole, being somehow locked out of a room. Curious things the brain does while meant to be on task… another sign of ADD perhaps. Love always unlocks…
January 4th, 2025 19:14
Inhale/Exhale
NinjaGirl said:
My brother 😂😭! sad but true--seems to be easier to escape than to face it!
January 4th, 2025 12:37
NinjaGirl said:
My brother 😂😭! sad but true--seems to be easier to escape than to face it!
January 4th, 2025 12:37
Inhale/Exhale
Cassie58 said:
Dear Tristan. That lighter sparked some images. Never been a smoker, not only that I have never felt the need to inhale anything or even worse inject anything. I was a hippie without getting high:) As to cannabis, my grandchildren tell me, they think it would do me a favour:) I’ll just stick to my breathing exercises and relaxation music. A fun write. Have a great weekend.
January 4th, 2025 11:40
Cassie58 said:
Dear Tristan. That lighter sparked some images. Never been a smoker, not only that I have never felt the need to inhale anything or even worse inject anything. I was a hippie without getting high:) As to cannabis, my grandchildren tell me, they think it would do me a favour:) I’ll just stick to my breathing exercises and relaxation music. A fun write. Have a great weekend.
January 4th, 2025 11:40
Inhale/Exhale
Poetic Licence said:
I was once told that breathing controls the speed at which the mind processes and reacts, i am not sure if that is the case, i would of thought it would depend on how fit you are and what your choice of inhalation is !!, I enjoyed reading this puzzle and it has awoken my imagination. Have a great weekend
January 4th, 2025 10:57
Poetic Licence said:
I was once told that breathing controls the speed at which the mind processes and reacts, i am not sure if that is the case, i would of thought it would depend on how fit you are and what your choice of inhalation is !!, I enjoyed reading this puzzle and it has awoken my imagination. Have a great weekend
January 4th, 2025 10:57
Inhale/Exhale
sorenbarrett said:
Have worked with many on breathing exercises to relax, deal with pain and meditate. Can\'t overestimate the value of breathing. And breathing is necessary to take a toke. Loved the changing form in this poem that enhanced its power.
January 4th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Have worked with many on breathing exercises to relax, deal with pain and meditate. Can\'t overestimate the value of breathing. And breathing is necessary to take a toke. Loved the changing form in this poem that enhanced its power.
January 4th, 2025 10:18
Inhale/Exhale
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Sigh. Guess I\'ll vicariously indulge and nary further, that realm beyond me, as so much is. In another angle, I daresay I and aught else may well resonate since we\'ve each our own means of inhalation of whatever whereby we sail off dreamily far, far from here, glad to be oblivious. Fascinating and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and an irresistible poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 4th, 2025 09:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Sigh. Guess I\'ll vicariously indulge and nary further, that realm beyond me, as so much is. In another angle, I daresay I and aught else may well resonate since we\'ve each our own means of inhalation of whatever whereby we sail off dreamily far, far from here, glad to be oblivious. Fascinating and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and an irresistible poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 4th, 2025 09:39
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem went straight to my heart. I struggle with the concepts of living without fear and having a God who doesn\'t speak through silence. It seems that the foundation of human civilization incorporates fear as one of the mechanisms to wield control over the masses. When we combine that with a silent God we get a perfect recipe for sustained misunderstanding, stress and exploitation. I have seldom come across lines like \"For a year without fear I hope\" and \"To a God who speaks silence\" which speak so eloquently in brevity. Fantastic poem!
January 4th, 2025 04:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem went straight to my heart. I struggle with the concepts of living without fear and having a God who doesn\'t speak through silence. It seems that the foundation of human civilization incorporates fear as one of the mechanisms to wield control over the masses. When we combine that with a silent God we get a perfect recipe for sustained misunderstanding, stress and exploitation. I have seldom come across lines like \"For a year without fear I hope\" and \"To a God who speaks silence\" which speak so eloquently in brevity. Fantastic poem!
January 4th, 2025 04:16
We Knew
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. I\'ve read and reread, yet remain rather bewildered and confused, intrigued and somewhat fascinated. The grinch of the new year spews his disgust on the suggestion, despite the inevitable reality we all grow older, learning as we do. Interesting. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2025 20:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. I\'ve read and reread, yet remain rather bewildered and confused, intrigued and somewhat fascinated. The grinch of the new year spews his disgust on the suggestion, despite the inevitable reality we all grow older, learning as we do. Interesting. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2025 20:38
We Knew
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is the intended shape, but I see a curly piece of confetti. seems to me like a warning sign throughout the celebration
January 3rd, 2025 20:12
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is the intended shape, but I see a curly piece of confetti. seems to me like a warning sign throughout the celebration
January 3rd, 2025 20:12
We Knew
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
Powerful penning
Love it, thank you!!
Absolutely nothing
Would ever
Dare to
remain
true! 😢
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
January 3rd, 2025 18:54
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
Powerful penning
Love it, thank you!!
Absolutely nothing
Would ever
Dare to
remain
true! 😢
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
January 3rd, 2025 18:54
We Knew
arqios said:
And the rooster crows yet again in some forsaken backyard like some Groundhog Day scenario. Perhaps we can muddle through like St. Vincent, another unlikely postmodern antihero.
January 3rd, 2025 16:09
arqios said:
And the rooster crows yet again in some forsaken backyard like some Groundhog Day scenario. Perhaps we can muddle through like St. Vincent, another unlikely postmodern antihero.
January 3rd, 2025 16:09
We Knew
Poetic Licence said:
Confirming that what happens today, tomorrow it is history and it change again after that ( underlined with a hint of anger one suspects !!). Enjoyable read
January 3rd, 2025 11:14
Poetic Licence said:
Confirming that what happens today, tomorrow it is history and it change again after that ( underlined with a hint of anger one suspects !!). Enjoyable read
January 3rd, 2025 11:14
We Knew
orchidee said:
I am FFFF frustrated by that clock - it\'s 11 something but the other hand has fell off! lol.
January 3rd, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
I am FFFF frustrated by that clock - it\'s 11 something but the other hand has fell off! lol.
January 3rd, 2025 10:47
We Knew
sorenbarrett said:
The only constant is change and so it seems every year. Love the shape of this poem that reminds me of birds in flight
January 3rd, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
The only constant is change and so it seems every year. Love the shape of this poem that reminds me of birds in flight
January 3rd, 2025 10:07
Lazy Loo Logic
Dan Williams said:
Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about sixty or so don\'t need it but a fraction of the time the ladies do. All for it, his and hers.
January 3rd, 2025 01:11
Dan Williams said:
Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about sixty or so don\'t need it but a fraction of the time the ladies do. All for it, his and hers.
January 3rd, 2025 01:11
Lazy Loo Logic
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
and very funny I\'d say!! 😂
You hit it on the nail,
In every way!!🤩👍👍
Thanks for sharing
brought a big smile
to my day!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 2nd, 2025 23:04
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
and very funny I\'d say!! 😂
You hit it on the nail,
In every way!!🤩👍👍
Thanks for sharing
brought a big smile
to my day!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 2nd, 2025 23:04
Why?
NinjaGirl said:
I believe with the teacher shortages they start to hire cranky old people...I\'m serious I think that\'s what they put on their CV!
January 2nd, 2025 18:09
NinjaGirl said:
I believe with the teacher shortages they start to hire cranky old people...I\'m serious I think that\'s what they put on their CV!
January 2nd, 2025 18:09
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
NinjaGirl said:
Well a few of those words sent me on a googling spree! I quite like this tragic poem, it is very well written.
January 2nd, 2025 18:06
NinjaGirl said:
Well a few of those words sent me on a googling spree! I quite like this tragic poem, it is very well written.
January 2nd, 2025 18:06
Depth of Height
NinjaGirl said:
in searching for more when do you lose yourself?
January 2nd, 2025 18:01
NinjaGirl said:
in searching for more when do you lose yourself?
January 2nd, 2025 18:01
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder if the world just needs more vigilante crime fighters... any organized group is targeted, but an individual, not so much.
January 2nd, 2025 18:00
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder if the world just needs more vigilante crime fighters... any organized group is targeted, but an individual, not so much.
January 2nd, 2025 18:00
Resolution
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve been both fearful and joyful for new goals and opportunities...I can be so excited for myself, but also so worried for myself and others. I suppose in the long run, it\'s just another day, as was yesterday.
January 2nd, 2025 17:58
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve been both fearful and joyful for new goals and opportunities...I can be so excited for myself, but also so worried for myself and others. I suppose in the long run, it\'s just another day, as was yesterday.
January 2nd, 2025 17:58
Lazy Loo Logic
NinjaGirl said:
I must laugh at the absurdity, but I have often pondered the same topic! however, living a life with only sibling brothers, I must say I prefer a gendered loo, though I am very particular outside my own house! I think I know why I hate camping.
January 2nd, 2025 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
I must laugh at the absurdity, but I have often pondered the same topic! however, living a life with only sibling brothers, I must say I prefer a gendered loo, though I am very particular outside my own house! I think I know why I hate camping.
January 2nd, 2025 17:56
Lazy Loo Logic
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some other guys where the bathroom had no doors and six toilets with no stalls went wall to wall. Privacy was never an issue just pass down the tissue. A fun read
January 2nd, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some other guys where the bathroom had no doors and six toilets with no stalls went wall to wall. Privacy was never an issue just pass down the tissue. A fun read
January 2nd, 2025 13:08
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