Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
All I See Is Darkness
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I see the budding poet.
April 3rd, 2025 22:16
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I see the budding poet.
April 3rd, 2025 22:16
All I See Is Darkness
arqios said:
Throwback magic! The darkness was very dark indeed 🙏🏻🕊
April 3rd, 2025 19:10
arqios said:
Throwback magic! The darkness was very dark indeed 🙏🏻🕊
April 3rd, 2025 19:10
All I See Is Darkness
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write for just being 14 when written
April 3rd, 2025 12:03
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write for just being 14 when written
April 3rd, 2025 12:03
All I See Is Darkness
orchidee said:
I told ya to turn on the light! Doh! heehee.
April 3rd, 2025 11:31
orchidee said:
I told ya to turn on the light! Doh! heehee.
April 3rd, 2025 11:31
All I See Is Darkness
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me like walking around with a permanent blindfold on, taking the authors notes that is sad to feel so low at that age, but that was me as well. The explains to me alot about the authors writing\'s and the history that formed the author, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me like walking around with a permanent blindfold on, taking the authors notes that is sad to feel so low at that age, but that was me as well. The explains to me alot about the authors writing\'s and the history that formed the author, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:54
All I See Is Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later. It is dark and like being in a cave there is no sun and no guiding light. In its rawness it pulls at the heart.
April 3rd, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later. It is dark and like being in a cave there is no sun and no guiding light. In its rawness it pulls at the heart.
April 3rd, 2025 09:34
What the Hell?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now that was a challenging read. Be wise as serpents, gentle as doves!
April 2nd, 2025 21:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now that was a challenging read. Be wise as serpents, gentle as doves!
April 2nd, 2025 21:43
These Three Things
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, you\'ve got me. Intrigued rather hopelessly, stumped by the unfolding of those three items, having chuckled initially, now I\'m left with a wry smile, is it? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, you\'ve got me. Intrigued rather hopelessly, stumped by the unfolding of those three items, having chuckled initially, now I\'m left with a wry smile, is it? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:44
A Trip
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Charming quatrains with an interesting rhyme scheme, rendering a classic format and theme to effect so beautifully, it seems familiar somehow. Fascinating and thought-provoking with great imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I like it.
April 2nd, 2025 12:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Charming quatrains with an interesting rhyme scheme, rendering a classic format and theme to effect so beautifully, it seems familiar somehow. Fascinating and thought-provoking with great imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I like it.
April 2nd, 2025 12:40
Pray, Friend, You Must Pray
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and an intriguingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and an intriguingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
What the Hell?
orchidee said:
I went to a thorn bush expecting to find apples on it - doh! \'Tree know by its fruit\'. Too much here for me to comment on in detail. All I know is I can\'t have figs cos they..... Too Much Info to say why!
April 2nd, 2025 10:40
orchidee said:
I went to a thorn bush expecting to find apples on it - doh! \'Tree know by its fruit\'. Too much here for me to comment on in detail. All I know is I can\'t have figs cos they..... Too Much Info to say why!
April 2nd, 2025 10:40
What the Hell?
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in belief. I love how it is formed in a similarity of religious chants. A sarcastic presentation of what many believe but as a call to carefully think about what one says they believe. A fave
April 2nd, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in belief. I love how it is formed in a similarity of religious chants. A sarcastic presentation of what many believe but as a call to carefully think about what one says they believe. A fave
April 2nd, 2025 10:31
What the Hell?
Poetic Licence said:
This write is justified, religion is more guilty than the layman of misinterpretation of the holy books , as it is these houses of faith that the layman is told what to think, do and believe, and each and everyone is there serve there own purpose and individual agenda. Enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:48
Poetic Licence said:
This write is justified, religion is more guilty than the layman of misinterpretation of the holy books , as it is these houses of faith that the layman is told what to think, do and believe, and each and everyone is there serve there own purpose and individual agenda. Enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:48
What the Hell?
NinjaGirl said:
Profound and so frequent! People only take what they want to hear...
April 2nd, 2025 09:28
NinjaGirl said:
Profound and so frequent! People only take what they want to hear...
April 2nd, 2025 09:28
Opioid
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read of a warrior from old Japan who was tortured, and didn\'t even blink an eye. I have no way (that I know of/am capable of presently) to verify if that is a true story. Let\'s imagine it is. Then, how on earth did he do that? The only answer I can come up with is that there was no one there to feel the pain.
April 2nd, 2025 00:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read of a warrior from old Japan who was tortured, and didn\'t even blink an eye. I have no way (that I know of/am capable of presently) to verify if that is a true story. Let\'s imagine it is. Then, how on earth did he do that? The only answer I can come up with is that there was no one there to feel the pain.
April 2nd, 2025 00:46
Opioid
NinjaGirl said:
The funny thing is the opioid doesn\'t solve the problem...it just puts it off until more drugs are needed..
April 1st, 2025 21:38
NinjaGirl said:
The funny thing is the opioid doesn\'t solve the problem...it just puts it off until more drugs are needed..
April 1st, 2025 21:38
Opioid
arqios said:
So much pain and some of it so random, the intentional ones have very interesting barbs… I remember quite clearly how avoidance was a must; much like countermeasure flares in fighter jets. 🙏🏻🕊
April 1st, 2025 16:40
arqios said:
So much pain and some of it so random, the intentional ones have very interesting barbs… I remember quite clearly how avoidance was a must; much like countermeasure flares in fighter jets. 🙏🏻🕊
April 1st, 2025 16:40
Opioid
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks so much truth. The format I took at first as a tornado then a mushroom and finally it seemed smoke from an opium den. The message gets a here here from me as I watch so many settle into comfort and ignore what is important. A most poignant write Tristan
April 1st, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks so much truth. The format I took at first as a tornado then a mushroom and finally it seemed smoke from an opium den. The message gets a here here from me as I watch so many settle into comfort and ignore what is important. A most poignant write Tristan
April 1st, 2025 12:53
Opioid
Poetic Licence said:
Someone once said to me pain reminds you, you are still alive and keeps you on your toes, comfort is a blanket that suffocates your defences and allows you to just exist not live, probably nothing to do with the write but that is what came to mind, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 12:18
Poetic Licence said:
Someone once said to me pain reminds you, you are still alive and keeps you on your toes, comfort is a blanket that suffocates your defences and allows you to just exist not live, probably nothing to do with the write but that is what came to mind, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 12:18
Opioid
orchidee said:
Doh! I was thinking recently of how I could be MORE comforting to others - and to self too maybe.
April 1st, 2025 11:00
orchidee said:
Doh! I was thinking recently of how I could be MORE comforting to others - and to self too maybe.
April 1st, 2025 11:00
An Abrupt Visitor
NinjaGirl said:
I knew it was Death from the beginning, but what beautiful description. If there was a way to double favorite...I think this is one of my favorite poems I\'ve ever read.
March 31st, 2025 12:27
NinjaGirl said:
I knew it was Death from the beginning, but what beautiful description. If there was a way to double favorite...I think this is one of my favorite poems I\'ve ever read.
March 31st, 2025 12:27
Nightshade
NinjaGirl said:
The rhyme makes my soul happy...a stark contrast to the voice my head read this poem in. Mysterious and aloof, a definite favorite.
March 31st, 2025 12:18
NinjaGirl said:
The rhyme makes my soul happy...a stark contrast to the voice my head read this poem in. Mysterious and aloof, a definite favorite.
March 31st, 2025 12:18
Nightshade
orchidee said:
Ohh, what you doing mucking about with worms? lol. If I have Light-shade, will it still be partly dark? I can\'t see a thing in this darkness. Turn that light on, I yell! Doh! lol.
March 31st, 2025 11:40
orchidee said:
Ohh, what you doing mucking about with worms? lol. If I have Light-shade, will it still be partly dark? I can\'t see a thing in this darkness. Turn that light on, I yell! Doh! lol.
March 31st, 2025 11:40
Nightshade
Poetic Licence said:
The plans he laid, the words he saved, the music played, the poem was made, a clever piece of writing and very enjoyable read
March 31st, 2025 10:19
Poetic Licence said:
The plans he laid, the words he saved, the music played, the poem was made, a clever piece of writing and very enjoyable read
March 31st, 2025 10:19
Nightshade
Cheeky Missy said:
Nary author\'s note to enlighten further, your favorite angle flourishes again with eerie implications. Beautifully rendered with a lovely bit of rhyming, gorgeous imagery, and a disturbing poignancy haunting. Thank you for sharing.
March 31st, 2025 09:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Nary author\'s note to enlighten further, your favorite angle flourishes again with eerie implications. Beautifully rendered with a lovely bit of rhyming, gorgeous imagery, and a disturbing poignancy haunting. Thank you for sharing.
March 31st, 2025 09:52
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