Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Cryogenic Catharsis
sorenbarrett said:
Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did bleeding as a surgical procedure. A most interesting poem, full of introjections. Cryogenics do they still do that?
December 2nd, 2024 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did bleeding as a surgical procedure. A most interesting poem, full of introjections. Cryogenics do they still do that?
December 2nd, 2024 20:24
Hourglass
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderful shape poem,
captivating and
thought provoking must say!! 🤔
The older I get time just
seems to quickly slip away!!¿
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 2nd, 2024 15:06
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderful shape poem,
captivating and
thought provoking must say!! 🤔
The older I get time just
seems to quickly slip away!!¿
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 2nd, 2024 15:06
Hourglass
Cassie58 said:
Shape poetry. A double helping of creativity Tristan. Time - a Grand Canyon or a speck of sand. Love the imagery that comes to mind here. For me, it is speeding up as the sand shifts through the hour glass timer. When young, the days seemed endless. Wonderful write. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2024 07:28
Cassie58 said:
Shape poetry. A double helping of creativity Tristan. Time - a Grand Canyon or a speck of sand. Love the imagery that comes to mind here. For me, it is speeding up as the sand shifts through the hour glass timer. When young, the days seemed endless. Wonderful write. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2024 07:28
Hourglass
Teddy.15 said:
And in hourglass form this is superb dear Tristan I seem to have my own love affair with time, it\'s a truly fascinating theme. Beautifully done. 🌹 ⏳🌹
December 2nd, 2024 01:42
Teddy.15 said:
And in hourglass form this is superb dear Tristan I seem to have my own love affair with time, it\'s a truly fascinating theme. Beautifully done. 🌹 ⏳🌹
December 2nd, 2024 01:42
Hourglass
Cheeky Missy said:
With such a discussion, to think there\'s such an unavoidable reality coming upon us as \"...there shall be time no longer--\"(Rev 10:6b). I like your none too subtle point that it\'s not a trivial matter. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 1st, 2024 16:16
Cheeky Missy said:
With such a discussion, to think there\'s such an unavoidable reality coming upon us as \"...there shall be time no longer--\"(Rev 10:6b). I like your none too subtle point that it\'s not a trivial matter. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 1st, 2024 16:16
Hourglass
arqios said:
Good one Tristan! Down to the shapely hourglass ⌛️ curves; and Yes I’ve pondered upon this many a moment. And speaking of mythology; the Greek kairos and kronos are excellent clues to how we perceive time.
December 1st, 2024 10:35
arqios said:
Good one Tristan! Down to the shapely hourglass ⌛️ curves; and Yes I’ve pondered upon this many a moment. And speaking of mythology; the Greek kairos and kronos are excellent clues to how we perceive time.
December 1st, 2024 10:35
Hourglass
orchidee said:
I was ranting, sort of, in a recent poem, of people who say \'This moment in time\' or other naff expressions. I wouldn\'t mind, but they say them about 10 million times a day! lol.
And - Ohh, they say \'Time goes fast when you\'re enjoying yourself\' Does it?!
December 1st, 2024 10:07
orchidee said:
I was ranting, sort of, in a recent poem, of people who say \'This moment in time\' or other naff expressions. I wouldn\'t mind, but they say them about 10 million times a day! lol.
And - Ohh, they say \'Time goes fast when you\'re enjoying yourself\' Does it?!
December 1st, 2024 10:07
Hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
The paradox of time to me is that the more miserable one is the slower it goes, and the more joy one finds the faster it runs. I have spent many hours thinking about what time really is a fifth dimension bent by gravity Einstein’s view simply an issue of movement in space, I have no idea, but I know that it has gone too fast for me. A wonderful poem, brilliant !!!
December 1st, 2024 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
The paradox of time to me is that the more miserable one is the slower it goes, and the more joy one finds the faster it runs. I have spent many hours thinking about what time really is a fifth dimension bent by gravity Einstein’s view simply an issue of movement in space, I have no idea, but I know that it has gone too fast for me. A wonderful poem, brilliant !!!
December 1st, 2024 09:16
Enough
Poetic Licence said:
I think a lot of people can identify with this subject, Well written, Enjoyable read
November 30th, 2024 21:36
Poetic Licence said:
I think a lot of people can identify with this subject, Well written, Enjoyable read
November 30th, 2024 21:36
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Doggerel Dave said:
Thoughts on your piece, Tristan:
1. Stunning ingenuity involved
2. Beautiful to look at and read.
3. Are you aware there are only 24 hours available each day?
Great to see your name on the roll call so regularly.
November 30th, 2024 17:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Thoughts on your piece, Tristan:
1. Stunning ingenuity involved
2. Beautiful to look at and read.
3. Are you aware there are only 24 hours available each day?
Great to see your name on the roll call so regularly.
November 30th, 2024 17:06
Enough
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it hard to be enough when they expect so much? must you be rich, hard-working, family-loving, vacation-seeking, world-traveling, business-creating, and already-on-retirement to be enough? the paradox is evident: you must love working for your family but must love family over work, value relationships more yet sacrifice relationships for success.
November 30th, 2024 16:52
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it hard to be enough when they expect so much? must you be rich, hard-working, family-loving, vacation-seeking, world-traveling, business-creating, and already-on-retirement to be enough? the paradox is evident: you must love working for your family but must love family over work, value relationships more yet sacrifice relationships for success.
November 30th, 2024 16:52
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
NinjaGirl said:
beautiful lights, jolly old saint nick, and gifts galore--starving kids, houseless humans, all to ignore. christians who don\'t act like Christ; the name only to show others they are a \'good person\'
November 30th, 2024 16:47
NinjaGirl said:
beautiful lights, jolly old saint nick, and gifts galore--starving kids, houseless humans, all to ignore. christians who don\'t act like Christ; the name only to show others they are a \'good person\'
November 30th, 2024 16:47
Echoes
NinjaGirl said:
Did AI create this scene? I can only imagine the humorous prompt. Echoes remain of what once was... great poem
November 30th, 2024 16:41
NinjaGirl said:
Did AI create this scene? I can only imagine the humorous prompt. Echoes remain of what once was... great poem
November 30th, 2024 16:41
Labeled
NinjaGirl said:
A label is trying to sum up an entire person in one word. making them smaller, less than what they are. if all one ever is is \"weak\" they won\'t know if they can ever be strong in anything.
November 30th, 2024 16:38
NinjaGirl said:
A label is trying to sum up an entire person in one word. making them smaller, less than what they are. if all one ever is is \"weak\" they won\'t know if they can ever be strong in anything.
November 30th, 2024 16:38
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Tristan
November 30th, 2024 15:58
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Tristan
November 30th, 2024 15:58
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Neville said:
well thats a couple of birds killed with a single stone in my book .. a great concept almost like a star burst .. and free plugs all round .. you really are a fungi to have around our Tristan .. 🍄🍄🐧👍
November 30th, 2024 11:01
Neville said:
well thats a couple of birds killed with a single stone in my book .. a great concept almost like a star burst .. and free plugs all round .. you really are a fungi to have around our Tristan .. 🍄🍄🐧👍
November 30th, 2024 11:01
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
sorenbarrett said:
I like the form of this poem, but even more I liked some of the internal rhyme and the meaning behind it. Well thought out and thought provoking it has dropped its spores.
November 30th, 2024 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
I like the form of this poem, but even more I liked some of the internal rhyme and the meaning behind it. Well thought out and thought provoking it has dropped its spores.
November 30th, 2024 10:18
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Demar Desu said:
Poetizer sucks! Mypoeticside rules!
November 30th, 2024 10:17
Demar Desu said:
Poetizer sucks! Mypoeticside rules!
November 30th, 2024 10:17
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
An awesomazing
heroic crown of Sonnets indeed!!
Love this stanza in XV.
So many love to stroll down
Christmas lanes,
While we forget those things
that makes us weak.
While children starve and no
One ever gains,
something to cover up---Shhh!
--- date not speak..
Powerful penning my friend!! 🙏👋
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad
November 29th, 2024 17:37
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
An awesomazing
heroic crown of Sonnets indeed!!
Love this stanza in XV.
So many love to stroll down
Christmas lanes,
While we forget those things
that makes us weak.
While children starve and no
One ever gains,
something to cover up---Shhh!
--- date not speak..
Powerful penning my friend!! 🙏👋
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad
November 29th, 2024 17:37
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
Doggerel Dave said:
This is the most all inclusive picture of Christmas as I\'ve ever tripped over, Tristain. Christmas is usually one of those topics I avoid like the plague; in this instance I\'m very glad I didn\'t - although I\'ve now got to go lay down and recover...👍😊
November 29th, 2024 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
This is the most all inclusive picture of Christmas as I\'ve ever tripped over, Tristain. Christmas is usually one of those topics I avoid like the plague; in this instance I\'m very glad I didn\'t - although I\'ve now got to go lay down and recover...👍😊
November 29th, 2024 17:23
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
Poetic Licence said:
That is some piece of writing, Thank you i enjoyed the read. Covering both sides of the festive season, worth the hard work it must have took.
November 29th, 2024 17:04
Poetic Licence said:
That is some piece of writing, Thank you i enjoyed the read. Covering both sides of the festive season, worth the hard work it must have took.
November 29th, 2024 17:04
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
sorenbarrett said:
Christmas was to celebrate peace, closeness to others, charity and instead has become the opposite consumerism, who can get the most, keeping up with the Jones, greed, gluttony, selfishness, partying, forgetting the poor, the lonely and sad. Hypocrisy at its best.
November 29th, 2024 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
Christmas was to celebrate peace, closeness to others, charity and instead has become the opposite consumerism, who can get the most, keeping up with the Jones, greed, gluttony, selfishness, partying, forgetting the poor, the lonely and sad. Hypocrisy at its best.
November 29th, 2024 16:17
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
Neville said:
Say it like it bloomin is why don\'tcha .. not everyone is gonna like it but I applaud you for saying it regardless .. How you managed to pull this off is close to a miracle I know for sure I couldn\'t have done it .. but then, I\'ve never even writ a single sonnet .. The old Bard himself would be proud of ya .. I\'m just glad I was born when I was, when things were a bit different back then .. I think you deserve the very distinguished dubble 👍👍
November 29th, 2024 14:05
Neville said:
Say it like it bloomin is why don\'tcha .. not everyone is gonna like it but I applaud you for saying it regardless .. How you managed to pull this off is close to a miracle I know for sure I couldn\'t have done it .. but then, I\'ve never even writ a single sonnet .. The old Bard himself would be proud of ya .. I\'m just glad I was born when I was, when things were a bit different back then .. I think you deserve the very distinguished dubble 👍👍
November 29th, 2024 14:05
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos a thousand time, Christmas should be about having those you love around you, hot food and some music, its commercially ruined by all the got to haves, I got a barbie when I was 13 now the 13 year olds get
( I phones.) Sad world in this case. 🌹
November 29th, 2024 12:32
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos a thousand time, Christmas should be about having those you love around you, hot food and some music, its commercially ruined by all the got to haves, I got a barbie when I was 13 now the 13 year olds get
( I phones.) Sad world in this case. 🌹
November 29th, 2024 12:32
Enough
Goddess of the Mist said:
One of the biggest lessons I\'ve learned in life is that you can\'t control what or how others think or feel about you. The last line of your poem says it all. We just need to like ourselves 🖤
November 29th, 2024 10:31
Goddess of the Mist said:
One of the biggest lessons I\'ve learned in life is that you can\'t control what or how others think or feel about you. The last line of your poem says it all. We just need to like ourselves 🖤
November 29th, 2024 10:31
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
arqios said:
A bunch of oddities and contradictory traditions, that seems to be part and parcel of Christmas charm.
November 29th, 2024 09:29
arqios said:
A bunch of oddities and contradictory traditions, that seems to be part and parcel of Christmas charm.
November 29th, 2024 09:29
A Thanksgiving Poem
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful write, all the traditions in the world mean nowt if it\'s not done with the heart. ❤️
November 28th, 2024 23:55
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful write, all the traditions in the world mean nowt if it\'s not done with the heart. ❤️
November 28th, 2024 23:55
A Thanksgiving Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
Going to give this one a big miss lest I embroil myself in the mysteries of another culture.😇
Model critique though, Tristan.
November 28th, 2024 17:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Going to give this one a big miss lest I embroil myself in the mysteries of another culture.😇
Model critique though, Tristan.
November 28th, 2024 17:59
A Thanksgiving Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Yes, Cristiano, you and I are on the same page today and I echo your feelings have a wonderful holiday
November 28th, 2024 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
Yes, Cristiano, you and I are on the same page today and I echo your feelings have a wonderful holiday
November 28th, 2024 16:41
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