Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
A Cut
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem, 😀
you must have amazing
healing powers¿?😳
Glad it wasn\'t serious! 😁
Great use of form,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:31
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem, 😀
you must have amazing
healing powers¿?😳
Glad it wasn\'t serious! 😁
Great use of form,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:31
Inauguration Day
Poetic Licence said:
I have never been a crowd follower the sheep mentality drives me insane. Sadly thou i fear we are entering what is going to be a unstable and very frighting period in our history, and for sure social injustice is only going to get worse. A great piece of writing, raising issues we should all pay attention to you.
January 22nd, 2025 21:57
Poetic Licence said:
I have never been a crowd follower the sheep mentality drives me insane. Sadly thou i fear we are entering what is going to be a unstable and very frighting period in our history, and for sure social injustice is only going to get worse. A great piece of writing, raising issues we should all pay attention to you.
January 22nd, 2025 21:57
A Cut
sorenbarrett said:
I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many times we suffer other times of cuts rather than our literal hand. Mind wandering again
January 22nd, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many times we suffer other times of cuts rather than our literal hand. Mind wandering again
January 22nd, 2025 14:18
A Cut
Cheeky Missy said:
At least it\'s a minor abrasion at this rate, nothing like the paring knife through my fingertip, piecing from one side to the other and leaving actual scars. Beautifully eloquent in its rendering with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s winsome to boot. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:18
Cheeky Missy said:
At least it\'s a minor abrasion at this rate, nothing like the paring knife through my fingertip, piecing from one side to the other and leaving actual scars. Beautifully eloquent in its rendering with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s winsome to boot. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:18
A Cut
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read with a serious message, that over time things will heal, but there will always be another cut at sometime, really enjoyed this one.
January 22nd, 2025 12:18
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read with a serious message, that over time things will heal, but there will always be another cut at sometime, really enjoyed this one.
January 22nd, 2025 12:18
A Cut
Cassie58 said:
Paper cuts are some of the most painful. Sting like hell. This appears to be deeper and describes the healing process. The all important healing process. Hopefully no scars will be left. Great description here Tristen. Have a happy Wednesday.
January 22nd, 2025 11:52
Cassie58 said:
Paper cuts are some of the most painful. Sting like hell. This appears to be deeper and describes the healing process. The all important healing process. Hopefully no scars will be left. Great description here Tristen. Have a happy Wednesday.
January 22nd, 2025 11:52
Descent in D Minor
NinjaGirl said:
I perhaps wouldn\'t go as far as to call them devilish notes, but they certainly have dark undertones! The piano, while basic, is a hauntingly beautiful instrument.
January 21st, 2025 22:51
NinjaGirl said:
I perhaps wouldn\'t go as far as to call them devilish notes, but they certainly have dark undertones! The piano, while basic, is a hauntingly beautiful instrument.
January 21st, 2025 22:51
Descent in D Minor
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A magical and
musical write! 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Just \"resonates\'\' with
greatness, to read a delight!! 🎹🎶
Thanks for sharing,
VERY creative!!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:16
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A magical and
musical write! 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Just \"resonates\'\' with
greatness, to read a delight!! 🎹🎶
Thanks for sharing,
VERY creative!!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:16
Descent in D Minor
arqios said:
And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 17:23
arqios said:
And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 17:23
Descent in D Minor
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Though my style is mainly to \'ascend\'. Yet we\'re \'heavier\' at some seasons, such as Lent, and not all the Psalms are praise-y in all their verses.
January 21st, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Though my style is mainly to \'ascend\'. Yet we\'re \'heavier\' at some seasons, such as Lent, and not all the Psalms are praise-y in all their verses.
January 21st, 2025 11:22
Descent in D Minor
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The format was perfect and the words resound in the eye as well as the ear. This is a Fave
January 21st, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The format was perfect and the words resound in the eye as well as the ear. This is a Fave
January 21st, 2025 08:34
Inauguration Day
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrific poem
the thoughts
and message penned!!
Love the form, repeated lines
much enjoyed my friend!!! 🏆
Have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:27
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrific poem
the thoughts
and message penned!!
Love the form, repeated lines
much enjoyed my friend!!! 🏆
Have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:27
Inauguration Day
arqios said:
And yet it is more than social justice, big as that is as far as issues go, of a cosmological and existential dilemma… some are aware, others chose to ignore the signs.
January 20th, 2025 17:48
arqios said:
And yet it is more than social justice, big as that is as far as issues go, of a cosmological and existential dilemma… some are aware, others chose to ignore the signs.
January 20th, 2025 17:48
Inauguration Day
NinjaGirl said:
This is a good one, I like the repetition, it really does drive the point across
January 20th, 2025 10:35
NinjaGirl said:
This is a good one, I like the repetition, it really does drive the point across
January 20th, 2025 10:35
Inauguration Day
sorenbarrett said:
Several times in history such events have happened and with differing outcomes. Good or bad, right or wrong the potential for change toward safety or over a cliff and we will have to wait to see. A great write one should never follow the crowd in doing wrong. One voice can make a difference
January 20th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Several times in history such events have happened and with differing outcomes. Good or bad, right or wrong the potential for change toward safety or over a cliff and we will have to wait to see. A great write one should never follow the crowd in doing wrong. One voice can make a difference
January 20th, 2025 10:29
unexpected snowfall
Neville said:
You just draughted the blizzard from hell .. and such a pretty one too .. blindingly brill my friend .. and with no time to prep, it was a pleasure to get caught out in it .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:03
Neville said:
You just draughted the blizzard from hell .. and such a pretty one too .. blindingly brill my friend .. and with no time to prep, it was a pleasure to get caught out in it .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:03
unexpected snowfall
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem, thoughts
and message, skillfully expressed!!
Brilliantly composed,
poetic awesomeness!!! 🥇
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:43
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem, thoughts
and message, skillfully expressed!!
Brilliantly composed,
poetic awesomeness!!! 🥇
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:43
unexpected snowfall
NinjaGirl said:
the snow is the cold blanket offered to the empty world
January 19th, 2025 16:41
NinjaGirl said:
the snow is the cold blanket offered to the empty world
January 19th, 2025 16:41
unexpected snowfall
Cheeky Missy said:
Come, come, take a second look and see the darling flakes all jostling as they descend impetuously, the silence of falling snow very much alive and listening, listening without a voice to break the almost hallowed silence which half seems to beg a reverence even while we trudge in lonely naught to our tasks. [I\'m dreadfully overtired and rambling, please forgive me.]
Exquisite and rendered to effect with a painful poignancy and such delicious imagery. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 09:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Come, come, take a second look and see the darling flakes all jostling as they descend impetuously, the silence of falling snow very much alive and listening, listening without a voice to break the almost hallowed silence which half seems to beg a reverence even while we trudge in lonely naught to our tasks. [I\'m dreadfully overtired and rambling, please forgive me.]
Exquisite and rendered to effect with a painful poignancy and such delicious imagery. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 09:00
unexpected snowfall
Cassie58 said:
How heartfelt is this poem Tristen. The silence and coldness felt amid the crystal beauty.
Snowflakes are so delicate yet the mood in this poem hangs heavy. Have a wonderful Sunday.
January 19th, 2025 08:13
Cassie58 said:
How heartfelt is this poem Tristen. The silence and coldness felt amid the crystal beauty.
Snowflakes are so delicate yet the mood in this poem hangs heavy. Have a wonderful Sunday.
January 19th, 2025 08:13
unexpected snowfall
sorenbarrett said:
Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing of the ground as it piles higher. The metaphor works well and the feeling of being abandoned and isolated in the masses is clear to me. Snow is deafening in its silence.
January 19th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing of the ground as it piles higher. The metaphor works well and the feeling of being abandoned and isolated in the masses is clear to me. Snow is deafening in its silence.
January 19th, 2025 08:00
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