Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Open Door
arqios said:
Stripped back yet resonant, this feels like a manifesto of light and love; rejecting hierarchy for kinship, grounding faith in the real, and ending with an open‑armed inclusivity that lingers like an open door itself. \'Let there be light!\'
August 16th, 2025 07:50
arqios said:
Stripped back yet resonant, this feels like a manifesto of light and love; rejecting hierarchy for kinship, grounding faith in the real, and ending with an open‑armed inclusivity that lingers like an open door itself. \'Let there be light!\'
August 16th, 2025 07:50
The Descendant of Dereliction
Cheeky Missy said:
Say you so, eh? Hmm. This piece looks like it was fun to write, tripping down the page unrolling a dirty carpet for whose feet? Methinks consonance and assonance have danced herein, and the dark ambiance cannot be shifted. Interesting. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 22:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Say you so, eh? Hmm. This piece looks like it was fun to write, tripping down the page unrolling a dirty carpet for whose feet? Methinks consonance and assonance have danced herein, and the dark ambiance cannot be shifted. Interesting. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 22:49
The Descendant of Dereliction
arqios said:
This sixth vision in The Book of Tittu is searing and immediate; not a warning, but a verdict already unfolding. The imagery of “maggot bread” and “dereliction’s descendant” evokes a world where corruption is consumed and decay breeds destruction. Nemesis isn’t approaching; she’s arrived. A powerful, rhythmic reckoning that spares no one.
August 15th, 2025 20:24
arqios said:
This sixth vision in The Book of Tittu is searing and immediate; not a warning, but a verdict already unfolding. The imagery of “maggot bread” and “dereliction’s descendant” evokes a world where corruption is consumed and decay breeds destruction. Nemesis isn’t approaching; she’s arrived. A powerful, rhythmic reckoning that spares no one.
August 15th, 2025 20:24
The Descendant of Dereliction
Teddy.15 said:
Totally powerful and so very relatable on today of all days. I am a huge fan of justice and not of haughty (love that word) it\'s new to me. I feel your heart on your sleeve my dear Tristan 🌹
August 15th, 2025 13:37
Teddy.15 said:
Totally powerful and so very relatable on today of all days. I am a huge fan of justice and not of haughty (love that word) it\'s new to me. I feel your heart on your sleeve my dear Tristan 🌹
August 15th, 2025 13:37
The Descendant of Dereliction
Poetic Licence said:
Another strong feeling rite of forthcoming doom and gloom, or should I say the arrival off, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
Another strong feeling rite of forthcoming doom and gloom, or should I say the arrival off, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:23
The Descendant of Dereliction
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
\'nay, it\'s here.\' A lightning strike to the stomach of the \'haughty hiders\'. Another actioned packed verse of horrors powerfully expressed without inhibitions or pity as a poem of the like should be. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:25
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
\'nay, it\'s here.\' A lightning strike to the stomach of the \'haughty hiders\'. Another actioned packed verse of horrors powerfully expressed without inhibitions or pity as a poem of the like should be. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:25
The Unveiling
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Short, sharp, shock and the power of love in a poem to catch the reader head on and demand - \'live love\'. Your poetry is so energetic, an old bard like me could lose weight just reading it. Excellent, my fine fellow.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 10:28
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Short, sharp, shock and the power of love in a poem to catch the reader head on and demand - \'live love\'. Your poetry is so energetic, an old bard like me could lose weight just reading it. Excellent, my fine fellow.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 10:28
The Descendant of Dereliction
sorenbarrett said:
Impending doom in this poem. Alliteration aids in its flow as does some powerful words. Nicely composed it casts its shadow
August 15th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Impending doom in this poem. Alliteration aids in its flow as does some powerful words. Nicely composed it casts its shadow
August 15th, 2025 10:26
The Descendant of Dereliction
orchidee said:
Nay, Popeye, we say - but he ignores us! lol.
August 15th, 2025 10:15
orchidee said:
Nay, Popeye, we say - but he ignores us! lol.
August 15th, 2025 10:15
Never the Destination
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I sat for a few minutes after reading. This one is a slow burner. Fantastic
August 15th, 2025 06:54
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I sat for a few minutes after reading. This one is a slow burner. Fantastic
August 15th, 2025 06:54
The Unveiling
NinjaGirl said:
The truth tastes bitter, but isn\'t it better? Lovely write!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
NinjaGirl said:
The truth tastes bitter, but isn\'t it better? Lovely write!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
The Unveiling
Neville said:
These are never as easy as you make them seem and this one in particular .. But hey .. Tittu clearly knows a thing or two too don\'tcha know .. 😎🐦⬛🐧🐈⬛👍
August 14th, 2025 13:15
Neville said:
These are never as easy as you make them seem and this one in particular .. But hey .. Tittu clearly knows a thing or two too don\'tcha know .. 😎🐦⬛🐧🐈⬛👍
August 14th, 2025 13:15
The Unveiling
Salvia.S said:
A stunningly crafted acrostic that feels both timely and timeless. The imagery crackles with intensity—\'burning lightning blue\' stayed with me—and the message lands with weight and clarity. It’s not just a reckoning, but a call to rise above the chaos through truth and love. A bold, lyrical revelation in every sense. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹 A fave for sure!!!!
August 14th, 2025 12:01
Salvia.S said:
A stunningly crafted acrostic that feels both timely and timeless. The imagery crackles with intensity—\'burning lightning blue\' stayed with me—and the message lands with weight and clarity. It’s not just a reckoning, but a call to rise above the chaos through truth and love. A bold, lyrical revelation in every sense. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹 A fave for sure!!!!
August 14th, 2025 12:01
The Unveiling
orchidee said:
Is Popeye noxious at all? Best not answer that! lol.
August 14th, 2025 10:44
orchidee said:
Is Popeye noxious at all? Best not answer that! lol.
August 14th, 2025 10:44
The Unveiling
Poetic Licence said:
This is written with passion, you feel it the words. Love is like an invading army, storms in and conquers, but if you want it to last, you have to adapt and change along the way relinquishing some of that initial control, great write, Artist At Work, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
This is written with passion, you feel it the words. Love is like an invading army, storms in and conquers, but if you want it to last, you have to adapt and change along the way relinquishing some of that initial control, great write, Artist At Work, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:22
Something in the Mind
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Well, I had to press the fave button. The emphasis being on the ‘had’.
August 14th, 2025 10:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Well, I had to press the fave button. The emphasis being on the ‘had’.
August 14th, 2025 10:14
The Unveiling
sorenbarrett said:
So true Tristan love is never a surrender but instead an invasion that takes all that it encounters not by force but by conversion. A most lovely write
August 14th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
So true Tristan love is never a surrender but instead an invasion that takes all that it encounters not by force but by conversion. A most lovely write
August 14th, 2025 09:55
The Unveiling
Cheeky Missy said:
[The last decent boyfriend I had too many years, nay, decades ago, had your first name. Curious.] Forsooth, I believe the way the Scriptures put it is something like, \"He, that being often reproved hardeneth his neck, shall suddenly be destroyed, and that without remedy.\" (Prov 29:1) Guess that leaves discussion out of the picture. After that you leave me uncertain, the message at odds seemingly with the same quote. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 14th, 2025 09:35
Cheeky Missy said:
[The last decent boyfriend I had too many years, nay, decades ago, had your first name. Curious.] Forsooth, I believe the way the Scriptures put it is something like, \"He, that being often reproved hardeneth his neck, shall suddenly be destroyed, and that without remedy.\" (Prov 29:1) Guess that leaves discussion out of the picture. After that you leave me uncertain, the message at odds seemingly with the same quote. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 14th, 2025 09:35
The Unveiling
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, what a beautiful message I can feel that lightning dear Tristan. ⚡ 🌹 I can feel the passion in your words.
August 14th, 2025 09:25
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, what a beautiful message I can feel that lightning dear Tristan. ⚡ 🌹 I can feel the passion in your words.
August 14th, 2025 09:25
The Gauntlet
Salvia.S said:
This poem is a powerful reflection on the journey of self-discovery. It encourages facing truth over illusion and embracing the unknown within. Thoughtful and quietly bold. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️
August 13th, 2025 20:13
Salvia.S said:
This poem is a powerful reflection on the journey of self-discovery. It encourages facing truth over illusion and embracing the unknown within. Thoughtful and quietly bold. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️
August 13th, 2025 20:13
Never the Destination
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautifully reflective poem—quietly powerful, with a deep sense of reverence. The message that the journey itself holds the meaning, not the destination, is timeless and moving. Very nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave for sure 🌹
August 13th, 2025 20:09
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautifully reflective poem—quietly powerful, with a deep sense of reverence. The message that the journey itself holds the meaning, not the destination, is timeless and moving. Very nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave for sure 🌹
August 13th, 2025 20:09
Never the Destination
Teddy.15 said:
Superb last lines. It is in fact the journey more so than the destination. I hear, live for today and enjoy every second, in this 🌹 beautiful. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:13
Teddy.15 said:
Superb last lines. It is in fact the journey more so than the destination. I hear, live for today and enjoy every second, in this 🌹 beautiful. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:13
Never the Destination
orchidee said:
Good write T. Does Popeye \'arrive\' sometimes, always, or never? Arrive where? Don\'t answer that! LOL.
August 13th, 2025 11:37
orchidee said:
Good write T. Does Popeye \'arrive\' sometimes, always, or never? Arrive where? Don\'t answer that! LOL.
August 13th, 2025 11:37
Never the Destination
Poetic Licence said:
The journey and searching of a way home that cannot be found, enjoying the series,
August 13th, 2025 10:53
Poetic Licence said:
The journey and searching of a way home that cannot be found, enjoying the series,
August 13th, 2025 10:53
Never the Destination
Cheeky Missy said:
What, dearest me, is it about aught \"twisty\" erm, for lack of a better word: stuff, that we like cats cannot avoid entangling ourselves therein, to our ultimate detriment? Rarer know than most whom Jesus is, and apparently therefore, what or whom love is, is that? And thus the philosopher unrolls another tapestry for our indulgence, feigning, like a certain individual in Genesis 3, we\'ll be enlightened if only we partake. Where the KJV renders it \"...He hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.\" (Ecc 3:11b) all the rest render it that \"...He put eternity in their hearts--\" and fewer know than not how tis all perverted. Pardon me, please.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 13th, 2025 10:51
Cheeky Missy said:
What, dearest me, is it about aught \"twisty\" erm, for lack of a better word: stuff, that we like cats cannot avoid entangling ourselves therein, to our ultimate detriment? Rarer know than most whom Jesus is, and apparently therefore, what or whom love is, is that? And thus the philosopher unrolls another tapestry for our indulgence, feigning, like a certain individual in Genesis 3, we\'ll be enlightened if only we partake. Where the KJV renders it \"...He hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.\" (Ecc 3:11b) all the rest render it that \"...He put eternity in their hearts--\" and fewer know than not how tis all perverted. Pardon me, please.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 13th, 2025 10:51
Never the Destination
sorenbarrett said:
Bold and powerful words that expand the vista to horizons beyond reach and the desire to return home that can no longer be found. Well written and a fave
August 13th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
Bold and powerful words that expand the vista to horizons beyond reach and the desire to return home that can no longer be found. Well written and a fave
August 13th, 2025 08:59
The Gauntlet
Neville said:
What an amazingly insightful deduction .. am loving each step of the way .. both a telling and leading light lies ahead of the anticipated darkness .. the gauntlet is indeed thrown .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛⭐👍
August 13th, 2025 02:15
Neville said:
What an amazingly insightful deduction .. am loving each step of the way .. both a telling and leading light lies ahead of the anticipated darkness .. the gauntlet is indeed thrown .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛⭐👍
August 13th, 2025 02:15
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