Comments received on poems by lost-but-not-broken17
Destined to fly
Nicholas Browning said:
Never forget the lessons that pain and emptiness taught you. You\'re stronger now, and you will continue to grow.
I gladly look forward to seeing those wings. Make sure you stick around, so we can all see them some day.
July 11th, 2017 21:41
Nicholas Browning said:
Never forget the lessons that pain and emptiness taught you. You\'re stronger now, and you will continue to grow.
I gladly look forward to seeing those wings. Make sure you stick around, so we can all see them some day.
July 11th, 2017 21:41
River of tears
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very positive. The lines
\"But on the other side
Of that river
Is a brighter tomorrow.\"
say it all about our lives.
July 10th, 2017 23:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very positive. The lines
\"But on the other side
Of that river
Is a brighter tomorrow.\"
say it all about our lives.
July 10th, 2017 23:54
River of tears
FredPeyer said:
And what a beautiful smile it is!!!!
Cannot make up my mind what I like better, the picture or the poem.
Maybe you should change your moniker from lost-but-not-broken to LOOK-AT-ME-NOW!
Love your writing.
Be strong and get better!!!!!
July 10th, 2017 11:53
FredPeyer said:
And what a beautiful smile it is!!!!
Cannot make up my mind what I like better, the picture or the poem.
Maybe you should change your moniker from lost-but-not-broken to LOOK-AT-ME-NOW!
Love your writing.
Be strong and get better!!!!!
July 10th, 2017 11:53
River of tears
Nicholas Browning said:
A brighter tomorrow sounds pretty good to me. I take it you won? Good job. Keep winning.
July 10th, 2017 11:03
Nicholas Browning said:
A brighter tomorrow sounds pretty good to me. I take it you won? Good job. Keep winning.
July 10th, 2017 11:03
River of tears
S.louise said:
Beautiful poem. You are a very brave person. Take care. Keep writting. Much love x
July 10th, 2017 09:33
S.louise said:
Beautiful poem. You are a very brave person. Take care. Keep writting. Much love x
July 10th, 2017 09:33
River of tears
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SWEETHEART ~ for a beautiful poem crafted from real pain and brave tears ~ you are much too young & beautiful to be going through this ! You look awesome in your photo . Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Big Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 10th, 2017 07:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SWEETHEART ~ for a beautiful poem crafted from real pain and brave tears ~ you are much too young & beautiful to be going through this ! You look awesome in your photo . Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Big Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 10th, 2017 07:36
River of tears
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you so much for sharing all of this: \"THE RIVER OF TEARS
Will always be around
Until we learn to
stand firm on our own ground.\"
That runs more than deep for those tear I still put into the river you speek, know your words bring me closer to the other side of this. Where I hope to find you already sitting, truly inspiring motivational work.
July 10th, 2017 07:28
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you so much for sharing all of this: \"THE RIVER OF TEARS
Will always be around
Until we learn to
stand firm on our own ground.\"
That runs more than deep for those tear I still put into the river you speek, know your words bring me closer to the other side of this. Where I hope to find you already sitting, truly inspiring motivational work.
July 10th, 2017 07:28
I forgive you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, trust and respect once broken are difficult to get back.
July 7th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, trust and respect once broken are difficult to get back.
July 7th, 2017 01:40
I forgive you
Fay Slimm. said:
Your final line lends wisdom to forgiveness dear poet friend. A verse which honestly faces sad facts yet ends with remembering that God forgives those who know no better. A fine conclusion to use against hurt.
July 6th, 2017 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Your final line lends wisdom to forgiveness dear poet friend. A verse which honestly faces sad facts yet ends with remembering that God forgives those who know no better. A fine conclusion to use against hurt.
July 6th, 2017 16:40
I forgive you
FredPeyer said:
I can literally feel the pain woven throughout the lines and stanzas. Very emotional poem with a glorious ending. Kill em with kindness!
Judging from your writing, you are on the road to recovery, bravo, and keep on moving to a much brighter future.
July 6th, 2017 14:09
FredPeyer said:
I can literally feel the pain woven throughout the lines and stanzas. Very emotional poem with a glorious ending. Kill em with kindness!
Judging from your writing, you are on the road to recovery, bravo, and keep on moving to a much brighter future.
July 6th, 2017 14:09
I forgive you
burning-embers said:
Inside you are a very big hearted person. Forgiving is blessed, unselfish and unburdening of the soul.
July 6th, 2017 13:40
burning-embers said:
Inside you are a very big hearted person. Forgiving is blessed, unselfish and unburdening of the soul.
July 6th, 2017 13:40
What is life?
Fay Slimm. said:
Your reaction to bad news shines out like a beacon in this positive verse - - I love that first and last line which shows ;your outstanding courage to face life\'s challenge for just what it is. Bravo for sharing this inspiring piece of poetic intention to walk your path with unbroken spirit.
July 6th, 2017 13:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Your reaction to bad news shines out like a beacon in this positive verse - - I love that first and last line which shows ;your outstanding courage to face life\'s challenge for just what it is. Bravo for sharing this inspiring piece of poetic intention to walk your path with unbroken spirit.
July 6th, 2017 13:20
Did you ever really care?
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
Keep writing your emotions and thoughts in poems. Its a therapeutic practice that will help you in days to come. Due to the subject matter of this poem, and your profile I won\'t write a critique. However, I would like to say that I am proud that you can put pen to paper in these trying times that you seem to be having. In everything even though you want nothing to do with your Dad right now I am sure that relationship will be rekindled at some point. Relationships are hard regardless of who is in them, and you being at the budding of the beginning of your life I\'m sure have maybe a touch of wanderlust. Most of us go through a period where we just want to get away from our parents, and pave our own path. But, at some point we look back, and just want to hang out with our parents even if they weren\'t the best when we were growing up. I came from a similar situation and understand what your going through. But there is a light in the end of the tunnel, and even though we get hurt we learn to forgive. And accept our family as they are instead of how we want them to be.
July 5th, 2017 17:36
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
Keep writing your emotions and thoughts in poems. Its a therapeutic practice that will help you in days to come. Due to the subject matter of this poem, and your profile I won\'t write a critique. However, I would like to say that I am proud that you can put pen to paper in these trying times that you seem to be having. In everything even though you want nothing to do with your Dad right now I am sure that relationship will be rekindled at some point. Relationships are hard regardless of who is in them, and you being at the budding of the beginning of your life I\'m sure have maybe a touch of wanderlust. Most of us go through a period where we just want to get away from our parents, and pave our own path. But, at some point we look back, and just want to hang out with our parents even if they weren\'t the best when we were growing up. I came from a similar situation and understand what your going through. But there is a light in the end of the tunnel, and even though we get hurt we learn to forgive. And accept our family as they are instead of how we want them to be.
July 5th, 2017 17:36
Did you ever really care?
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful, you are so strong. This is so hard to read, when I miss my girl every day, but there\'s one thing to maybe look forward to is braking that cycle.
As I know what you feel and would never let mine feel the same, as I did when I realised the same.
July 5th, 2017 15:47
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful, you are so strong. This is so hard to read, when I miss my girl every day, but there\'s one thing to maybe look forward to is braking that cycle.
As I know what you feel and would never let mine feel the same, as I did when I realised the same.
July 5th, 2017 15:47
Did you ever really care?
burning-embers said:
One day i had a phone call from my brother, my big brother. We had grown apart and i wont say why here. We had not spoken for 18 years. He told me he was dieing of cancer.
July 5th, 2017 15:37
burning-embers said:
One day i had a phone call from my brother, my big brother. We had grown apart and i wont say why here. We had not spoken for 18 years. He told me he was dieing of cancer.
July 5th, 2017 15:37
Before I...
FredPeyer said:
Thank God I read burning-embers comment before starting to write here. I wanted to say the same thing!
Love your writing, love your poem, want to read a lot more, and yes, the last for lines could be a poem on their own. Short, meaningful, to the point, and very well written.
July 5th, 2017 03:35
FredPeyer said:
Thank God I read burning-embers comment before starting to write here. I wanted to say the same thing!
Love your writing, love your poem, want to read a lot more, and yes, the last for lines could be a poem on their own. Short, meaningful, to the point, and very well written.
July 5th, 2017 03:35
Before I...
burning-embers said:
You are wise beyond your years by anyones measure. This is a lovely piece. The last verse is amazing. In fact the last verse as a stand alone piece, just those 4 lines are the most poignant i have read on here.
July 5th, 2017 02:21
burning-embers said:
You are wise beyond your years by anyones measure. This is a lovely piece. The last verse is amazing. In fact the last verse as a stand alone piece, just those 4 lines are the most poignant i have read on here.
July 5th, 2017 02:21
Before I...
just a girl. said:
I was reading some of your poems, and I\'m absolutely in love with your writing. Keep doing good!
July 4th, 2017 11:44
just a girl. said:
I was reading some of your poems, and I\'m absolutely in love with your writing. Keep doing good!
July 4th, 2017 11:44
What is life?
burning-embers said:
When you walk through a storm
Hold your head up high
And dont be afraid of the dark
At the end of the storm
There\'s a golden sky
And the sweet silver song of a lark
Walk on through the wind
Walk on thru through the rain
Though your dreams be tossed and blown
Walk on, walk on
With hope in your heart
And you\'ll never walk alone
You\'ll never walk alone
Rogers & Hammerstein
July 3rd, 2017 22:54
burning-embers said:
When you walk through a storm
Hold your head up high
And dont be afraid of the dark
At the end of the storm
There\'s a golden sky
And the sweet silver song of a lark
Walk on through the wind
Walk on thru through the rain
Though your dreams be tossed and blown
Walk on, walk on
With hope in your heart
And you\'ll never walk alone
You\'ll never walk alone
Rogers & Hammerstein
July 3rd, 2017 22:54
What is life?
Louis Gibbs said:
\"It is what it is\" as your poem so eloquently expresses. It can be a bitch at times , and oh so beautiful at others. Do you think it may have been designed that way? Just a thought.
July 3rd, 2017 15:31
Louis Gibbs said:
\"It is what it is\" as your poem so eloquently expresses. It can be a bitch at times , and oh so beautiful at others. Do you think it may have been designed that way? Just a thought.
July 3rd, 2017 15:31
What is life?
malubotelho said:
Sorry for your sadness. The way you wrote it is so beautiful that I can only see directions on it. I think you are already in the path to overcome it.
July 3rd, 2017 15:12
malubotelho said:
Sorry for your sadness. The way you wrote it is so beautiful that I can only see directions on it. I think you are already in the path to overcome it.
July 3rd, 2017 15:12
What is life?
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding!
Live the life you love
Love the live you live
I\'ll say it again
That was outstanding
Thank you
July 3rd, 2017 14:16
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding!
Live the life you love
Love the live you live
I\'ll say it again
That was outstanding
Thank you
July 3rd, 2017 14:16
Perfection
burning-embers said:
Old git tho i may be, i do recall some of my time spent being your wonderful age. That was when the 1960\'s were becoming the 70\'s and everything was about growing up and doing things to \'find ones self\'. i never understood quite how to do that but all the popular musicians were talking about it. I shrugged it off and got on with my career and married young. Sometime later probably around age 40 i realised that finding myself was just about accepting me for what i am. We\'re all different, we\'re all valid. To quote the sentiments of Max Ehrmann, wotever you are you have as much right to be here as the stars and the trees, for you are a child of the universe.
July 3rd, 2017 04:17
burning-embers said:
Old git tho i may be, i do recall some of my time spent being your wonderful age. That was when the 1960\'s were becoming the 70\'s and everything was about growing up and doing things to \'find ones self\'. i never understood quite how to do that but all the popular musicians were talking about it. I shrugged it off and got on with my career and married young. Sometime later probably around age 40 i realised that finding myself was just about accepting me for what i am. We\'re all different, we\'re all valid. To quote the sentiments of Max Ehrmann, wotever you are you have as much right to be here as the stars and the trees, for you are a child of the universe.
July 3rd, 2017 04:17
Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:
If you reach perfection for what do you then strive,
July 3rd, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
If you reach perfection for what do you then strive,
July 3rd, 2017 01:29
Not even you
P.H.Rose said:
I love this..brilliant
Age neither defines
Us in strength nor
Wisdom....
I see myself inside
Your poem....
And I\'m 56...
Well done !!!!!
June 27th, 2017 01:34
P.H.Rose said:
I love this..brilliant
Age neither defines
Us in strength nor
Wisdom....
I see myself inside
Your poem....
And I\'m 56...
Well done !!!!!
June 27th, 2017 01:34
The secrets we hide.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write. Your feelings should be known by others and you will find peace of mind.
May 5th, 2017 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write. Your feelings should be known by others and you will find peace of mind.
May 5th, 2017 00:48
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