Comments received on poems by lost-but-not-broken17



My story (warning it’s long)
FredPeyer said:

Quite a story! I do hope that all the worst part of your life is over now and that you can look forward to a much better future. Not an easy one, but a better one.

February 23rd, 2018 20:42

Pregnant at 18
FredPeyer said:

The pictures are amazing! Congratulations! I do believe that having a child is the most precious gift one can receive. And don\'t worry, nobody is born a parent, but one learns quickly! :-)
No matter how hard it is, you have your faith, your baby, and your own strong will. Just make sure you get some sleep!!!

February 13th, 2018 19:54

Pregnant at 18
Jo Middleton said:

It\'ll be hard but I\'m sure you can be an amazing parent.. just believe in yourself
Congrats

February 13th, 2018 18:06

Pregnant at 18
Syd said:

Good luck! I know how stressful it is, but I\'m sure you can do it. I\'m happy for you, and I know you\'ll provide the best life for your little one!

February 13th, 2018 16:36

My Precious Angel ❤️
FredPeyer said:

Congratulations mom! Make sure you print and frame this beautiful welcome poem to your child and hang it in the baby room!

January 13th, 2018 22:00

My Precious Angel ❤️
Christina8 said:

Great poem, Congratulations!

January 13th, 2018 12:12

My Precious Angel ❤️
Scrambled Letters said:

Very sweet, Congratulations ❤

January 13th, 2018 11:11

My Guardian Angel
FredPeyer said:

A beautiful tribute to your grandma! Wishing you both Male Kalikimaka and a happy and healthy new year.

December 24th, 2017 14:02

My Guardian Angel
L. Wolfe said:

This is a beautiful poem!
I recently lost my grandma and we were close.


December 24th, 2017 01:27

I don’t even know
FredPeyer said:

There is one alliance behind you, lost-but-not-broken: MPS!
We all root for you, believe in you, and are your supportive alliance!!!

November 16th, 2017 21:25

I don’t even know
myself and me said:

\"Keep on fighting\", way to go my hero. One day you will beat it. Well expressed.

November 16th, 2017 13:37

I don’t even know
Christina8 said:

Oh great write but I feel for you! You have cancer and they tell you you\'re playing the sympathy card and calling you an attention whore? Oh goodness. I can relate on depression but not what you\'re going through. You are a brave woman!

November 16th, 2017 12:04

Nobody knows
FredPeyer said:

Lost-but-not-broken, well written poem, but the last two lines are wrong. One, we here on MPS know that you are different, otherwise you would not be posting poems, and two we don\'t know the future. One day there will be that very special person who will love you and whom you will love. Take it from an old guy. I just know it will happen.

October 12th, 2017 23:18

Empty
Writings From The Unknown13 said:

this is amazing

September 20th, 2017 07:24

Empty
FredPeyer said:

Awesome writing! You are really good. Am glad you are doing better! Please keep on writing.

September 20th, 2017 00:17

Okay?
FredPeyer said:

So well written. All it takes is one person to change somebody\'s outlook on life.

August 28th, 2017 17:59

Okay?
Hopey_xx said:

Wow- amazing..

August 27th, 2017 13:29

Rise
Lakiea said:

Love your poem 😊 and that\'s right always rise 😊

August 23rd, 2017 18:56

Mental illness
Emmarunway said:

This is so relatable . everything that goes on you have hit on the day. It strangely calmed me. Hope you feel better soon.

August 23rd, 2017 01:46

Rise
dusk arising said:

Who could fail to adore this positive writing and your smiling face. Quite delightful.

August 23rd, 2017 00:38

Rise
Santita said:

Lovely! And yes, you will rise! Believe in you!

August 22nd, 2017 22:00

Rise
FredPeyer said:

I know you will!
Like this poem very much, so full of energy, hope, and determination.
Well penned!

August 22nd, 2017 21:57

Mental illness
FredPeyer said:

I do hope the writing helps, but have to agree with the first comment. All you can do is fight, not give up, fight again. Am very happy that you are back! Always looking for your contributions.
You know that eventually you will win, so stay strong, and keep up the fight!!!

August 21st, 2017 22:48

Mental illness
burning-embers said:

Hi l-b-n-b good to see your writings again. Wish i could give you some words of wisdom but i haven\'t any. But imagine i\'m tickling your toes with a fluffy feather and u just might smile for me. I do like to read your stuff and see how you are doing.

August 21st, 2017 22:45

Mental illness
Santita said:

An insightful write about what you\'re going through, and you made it flow so well! Keep fighting, girl just by reading this I know you are strong!

August 21st, 2017 19:26

Mental illness
myself and me said:

\"Even when everything is going perfectly fine
You\'re still sitting there trapped in your own mind\"

You get it so accurate. A tough illness to fight, yet no other way around, but fight.
Nice writing.

August 21st, 2017 18:53

Trials
FredPeyer said:

l-b-n-b, this is a very beautiful poem, and I am sure it will make a lot of readers pause and think, and look at their problems in a new way. True love really does conquer all, and it IS a gift!

July 18th, 2017 15:17

Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:

That darkness has a strong pull but believe me lightness will always overcome it, look for the light - it will always be there.

July 18th, 2017 00:55

Darkness
denxse said:

Such a powerful piece. Something that I can personally relate to , but I got through it and so can you . Things can only get better I promise. You can use your writing to help others too . I agree with the other comments , you are a strong fighter and you can get through this.

July 17th, 2017 17:00

Darkness
FredPeyer said:

l-b-n-b, this is dark, and you paint a vivid picture. Very well written!
I only know a little bit of you from your writing, but that little bit tells me you are a fighter! If I learned anything in my life it is that when one reaches the low point, the only remaining direction is UP!

July 17th, 2017 16:15

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