Comments received on poems by lost-but-not-broken17
My story (warning it’s long)
FredPeyer said:
Quite a story! I do hope that all the worst part of your life is over now and that you can look forward to a much better future. Not an easy one, but a better one.
February 23rd, 2018 20:42
FredPeyer said:
Quite a story! I do hope that all the worst part of your life is over now and that you can look forward to a much better future. Not an easy one, but a better one.
February 23rd, 2018 20:42
Pregnant at 18
FredPeyer said:
The pictures are amazing! Congratulations! I do believe that having a child is the most precious gift one can receive. And don\'t worry, nobody is born a parent, but one learns quickly! :-)
No matter how hard it is, you have your faith, your baby, and your own strong will. Just make sure you get some sleep!!!
February 13th, 2018 19:54
FredPeyer said:
The pictures are amazing! Congratulations! I do believe that having a child is the most precious gift one can receive. And don\'t worry, nobody is born a parent, but one learns quickly! :-)
No matter how hard it is, you have your faith, your baby, and your own strong will. Just make sure you get some sleep!!!
February 13th, 2018 19:54
Pregnant at 18
Jo Middleton said:
It\'ll be hard but I\'m sure you can be an amazing parent.. just believe in yourself
Congrats
February 13th, 2018 18:06
Jo Middleton said:
It\'ll be hard but I\'m sure you can be an amazing parent.. just believe in yourself
Congrats
February 13th, 2018 18:06
Pregnant at 18
Syd said:
Good luck! I know how stressful it is, but I\'m sure you can do it. I\'m happy for you, and I know you\'ll provide the best life for your little one!
February 13th, 2018 16:36
Syd said:
Good luck! I know how stressful it is, but I\'m sure you can do it. I\'m happy for you, and I know you\'ll provide the best life for your little one!
February 13th, 2018 16:36
My Precious Angel ❤️
FredPeyer said:
Congratulations mom! Make sure you print and frame this beautiful welcome poem to your child and hang it in the baby room!
January 13th, 2018 22:00
FredPeyer said:
Congratulations mom! Make sure you print and frame this beautiful welcome poem to your child and hang it in the baby room!
January 13th, 2018 22:00
My Guardian Angel
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful tribute to your grandma! Wishing you both Male Kalikimaka and a happy and healthy new year.
December 24th, 2017 14:02
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful tribute to your grandma! Wishing you both Male Kalikimaka and a happy and healthy new year.
December 24th, 2017 14:02
My Guardian Angel
L. Wolfe said:
This is a beautiful poem!
I recently lost my grandma and we were close.
December 24th, 2017 01:27
L. Wolfe said:
This is a beautiful poem!
I recently lost my grandma and we were close.
December 24th, 2017 01:27
I don’t even know
FredPeyer said:
There is one alliance behind you, lost-but-not-broken: MPS!
We all root for you, believe in you, and are your supportive alliance!!!
November 16th, 2017 21:25
FredPeyer said:
There is one alliance behind you, lost-but-not-broken: MPS!
We all root for you, believe in you, and are your supportive alliance!!!
November 16th, 2017 21:25
I don’t even know
myself and me said:
\"Keep on fighting\", way to go my hero. One day you will beat it. Well expressed.
November 16th, 2017 13:37
myself and me said:
\"Keep on fighting\", way to go my hero. One day you will beat it. Well expressed.
November 16th, 2017 13:37
I don’t even know
Christina8 said:
Oh great write but I feel for you! You have cancer and they tell you you\'re playing the sympathy card and calling you an attention whore? Oh goodness. I can relate on depression but not what you\'re going through. You are a brave woman!
November 16th, 2017 12:04
Christina8 said:
Oh great write but I feel for you! You have cancer and they tell you you\'re playing the sympathy card and calling you an attention whore? Oh goodness. I can relate on depression but not what you\'re going through. You are a brave woman!
November 16th, 2017 12:04
Nobody knows
FredPeyer said:
Lost-but-not-broken, well written poem, but the last two lines are wrong. One, we here on MPS know that you are different, otherwise you would not be posting poems, and two we don\'t know the future. One day there will be that very special person who will love you and whom you will love. Take it from an old guy. I just know it will happen.
October 12th, 2017 23:18
FredPeyer said:
Lost-but-not-broken, well written poem, but the last two lines are wrong. One, we here on MPS know that you are different, otherwise you would not be posting poems, and two we don\'t know the future. One day there will be that very special person who will love you and whom you will love. Take it from an old guy. I just know it will happen.
October 12th, 2017 23:18
Empty
FredPeyer said:
Awesome writing! You are really good. Am glad you are doing better! Please keep on writing.
September 20th, 2017 00:17
FredPeyer said:
Awesome writing! You are really good. Am glad you are doing better! Please keep on writing.
September 20th, 2017 00:17
Okay?
FredPeyer said:
So well written. All it takes is one person to change somebody\'s outlook on life.
August 28th, 2017 17:59
FredPeyer said:
So well written. All it takes is one person to change somebody\'s outlook on life.
August 28th, 2017 17:59
Mental illness
Emmarunway said:
This is so relatable . everything that goes on you have hit on the day. It strangely calmed me. Hope you feel better soon.
August 23rd, 2017 01:46
Emmarunway said:
This is so relatable . everything that goes on you have hit on the day. It strangely calmed me. Hope you feel better soon.
August 23rd, 2017 01:46
Rise
dusk arising said:
Who could fail to adore this positive writing and your smiling face. Quite delightful.
August 23rd, 2017 00:38
dusk arising said:
Who could fail to adore this positive writing and your smiling face. Quite delightful.
August 23rd, 2017 00:38
Rise
FredPeyer said:
I know you will!
Like this poem very much, so full of energy, hope, and determination.
Well penned!
August 22nd, 2017 21:57
FredPeyer said:
I know you will!
Like this poem very much, so full of energy, hope, and determination.
Well penned!
August 22nd, 2017 21:57
Mental illness
FredPeyer said:
I do hope the writing helps, but have to agree with the first comment. All you can do is fight, not give up, fight again. Am very happy that you are back! Always looking for your contributions.
You know that eventually you will win, so stay strong, and keep up the fight!!!
August 21st, 2017 22:48
FredPeyer said:
I do hope the writing helps, but have to agree with the first comment. All you can do is fight, not give up, fight again. Am very happy that you are back! Always looking for your contributions.
You know that eventually you will win, so stay strong, and keep up the fight!!!
August 21st, 2017 22:48
Mental illness
burning-embers said:
Hi l-b-n-b good to see your writings again. Wish i could give you some words of wisdom but i haven\'t any. But imagine i\'m tickling your toes with a fluffy feather and u just might smile for me. I do like to read your stuff and see how you are doing.
August 21st, 2017 22:45
burning-embers said:
Hi l-b-n-b good to see your writings again. Wish i could give you some words of wisdom but i haven\'t any. But imagine i\'m tickling your toes with a fluffy feather and u just might smile for me. I do like to read your stuff and see how you are doing.
August 21st, 2017 22:45
Mental illness
myself and me said:
\"Even when everything is going perfectly fine
You\'re still sitting there trapped in your own mind\"
You get it so accurate. A tough illness to fight, yet no other way around, but fight.
Nice writing.
August 21st, 2017 18:53
myself and me said:
\"Even when everything is going perfectly fine
You\'re still sitting there trapped in your own mind\"
You get it so accurate. A tough illness to fight, yet no other way around, but fight.
Nice writing.
August 21st, 2017 18:53
Trials
FredPeyer said:
l-b-n-b, this is a very beautiful poem, and I am sure it will make a lot of readers pause and think, and look at their problems in a new way. True love really does conquer all, and it IS a gift!
July 18th, 2017 15:17
FredPeyer said:
l-b-n-b, this is a very beautiful poem, and I am sure it will make a lot of readers pause and think, and look at their problems in a new way. True love really does conquer all, and it IS a gift!
July 18th, 2017 15:17
Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness has a strong pull but believe me lightness will always overcome it, look for the light - it will always be there.
July 18th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness has a strong pull but believe me lightness will always overcome it, look for the light - it will always be there.
July 18th, 2017 00:55
Darkness
denxse said:
Such a powerful piece. Something that I can personally relate to , but I got through it and so can you . Things can only get better I promise. You can use your writing to help others too . I agree with the other comments , you are a strong fighter and you can get through this.
July 17th, 2017 17:00
denxse said:
Such a powerful piece. Something that I can personally relate to , but I got through it and so can you . Things can only get better I promise. You can use your writing to help others too . I agree with the other comments , you are a strong fighter and you can get through this.
July 17th, 2017 17:00
Darkness
FredPeyer said:
l-b-n-b, this is dark, and you paint a vivid picture. Very well written!
I only know a little bit of you from your writing, but that little bit tells me you are a fighter! If I learned anything in my life it is that when one reaches the low point, the only remaining direction is UP!
July 17th, 2017 16:15
FredPeyer said:
l-b-n-b, this is dark, and you paint a vivid picture. Very well written!
I only know a little bit of you from your writing, but that little bit tells me you are a fighter! If I learned anything in my life it is that when one reaches the low point, the only remaining direction is UP!
July 17th, 2017 16:15
Destined to fly
burning-embers said:
i thought i was reading about drug addiction, then i read your author\'s note. Interesting that your words are equally applicable to a drug overtaking a persons life. Superb write recounting your pain and your positivity shines out.
July 11th, 2017 23:28
burning-embers said:
i thought i was reading about drug addiction, then i read your author\'s note. Interesting that your words are equally applicable to a drug overtaking a persons life. Superb write recounting your pain and your positivity shines out.
July 11th, 2017 23:28
Destined to fly
malubotelho said:
Awesome poem. Very strong like you are getting to be. Keep yourself high.
July 11th, 2017 23:01
malubotelho said:
Awesome poem. Very strong like you are getting to be. Keep yourself high.
July 11th, 2017 23:01
Destined to fly
FredPeyer said:
Wow, an incredible poem lost-but-not-broken! I could feel the despair at the beginning and then the slow change to hope, decision, and strength. Well written! I am glad you are winning, and wish you all the best!
July 11th, 2017 22:25
FredPeyer said:
Wow, an incredible poem lost-but-not-broken! I could feel the despair at the beginning and then the slow change to hope, decision, and strength. Well written! I am glad you are winning, and wish you all the best!
July 11th, 2017 22:25
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