Comments received on poems by WG7
My brother
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO SWEETHEART ~ THANKS FOR SHARING ~ it is painful but it helps you to heal. It is difficult when those who should love us most ~ hurt us most. It makes you ak who can you trust. Sometimes (when I read poems like yours) I am ashamed to even be a Man ! God bless you ~ thinkin\' of you an\' prayin\' for you 24/7 ~ Your Friend BRIAN (UK)
February 16th, 2017 11:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO SWEETHEART ~ THANKS FOR SHARING ~ it is painful but it helps you to heal. It is difficult when those who should love us most ~ hurt us most. It makes you ak who can you trust. Sometimes (when I read poems like yours) I am ashamed to even be a Man ! God bless you ~ thinkin\' of you an\' prayin\' for you 24/7 ~ Your Friend BRIAN (UK)
February 16th, 2017 11:14
One step at a time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Again...wow! Love your work! Great write!
February 14th, 2017 12:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Again...wow! Love your work! Great write!
February 14th, 2017 12:31
Darkness swallows me whole
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I think I may have found a kindred poetic spirit! I relate with your poetry a lot and started writing poems when I was about your age! This poem reminded me of those days and reminded me of something I would write! Thank you so much for sharing. Keep writing. Darkness is always present. I have learned that in life. There is always something that haunts you; however, the darkness cannot overcome the light, which is also ever present and burns away the darkest places. Your poetry, my friend, is a part of the light. There\'s nothing wrong with letting the darkness be your muse so that you can get it out and live in the light! There\'s much beauty in the world, and turning the darkness into poetry is...in a word...beautiful! Keep up the excellent work! :)
February 14th, 2017 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I think I may have found a kindred poetic spirit! I relate with your poetry a lot and started writing poems when I was about your age! This poem reminded me of those days and reminded me of something I would write! Thank you so much for sharing. Keep writing. Darkness is always present. I have learned that in life. There is always something that haunts you; however, the darkness cannot overcome the light, which is also ever present and burns away the darkest places. Your poetry, my friend, is a part of the light. There\'s nothing wrong with letting the darkness be your muse so that you can get it out and live in the light! There\'s much beauty in the world, and turning the darkness into poetry is...in a word...beautiful! Keep up the excellent work! :)
February 14th, 2017 12:27
What will it be?
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,you will grow out of it soon and become a beautiful swan
February 12th, 2017 23:52
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,you will grow out of it soon and become a beautiful swan
February 12th, 2017 23:52
F A L L I N G...
WG7 said:
Yeah I can try on a happy one. Sometimes being afraid of something makes you stronger because you have known what to do and you\'ll be the best of all. Fear takes control of someone and it grows, but all you have to do is push it back. You take control and then life will be great again. (Yes something close to what trump said but he stole it from someone else and I really don\'t like him so whatever.)
February 9th, 2017 18:56
WG7 said:
Yeah I can try on a happy one. Sometimes being afraid of something makes you stronger because you have known what to do and you\'ll be the best of all. Fear takes control of someone and it grows, but all you have to do is push it back. You take control and then life will be great again. (Yes something close to what trump said but he stole it from someone else and I really don\'t like him so whatever.)
February 9th, 2017 18:56
We Do Love You
willyweed said:
#1 you say you have true love for familyy oubawling=\\Crying~speak of in your second cuplet hopes & dreamsbeing dashed in you\'re second cuplet als political seanson\'s Aka ~ = #3 cou\\plet the old president OBAMA and new
new president the Donald and or akathe trumpiter~ #4coupletwhen dawn breaks tomorrow you will kill yuo\'re self?at least metoforicly !=couplet 5last and final couplet othe democratic party= last and final 2 lines =couplet=
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February 8th, 2017 09:42
willyweed said:
#1 you say you have true love for familyy oubawling=\\Crying~speak of in your second cuplet hopes & dreamsbeing dashed in you\'re second cuplet als political seanson\'s Aka ~ = #3 cou\\plet the old president OBAMA and new
new president the Donald and or akathe trumpiter~ #4coupletwhen dawn breaks tomorrow you will kill yuo\'re self?at least metoforicly !=couplet 5last and final couplet othe democratic party= last and final 2 lines =couplet=
to this very metiiforical poem i have penljum since I google 1960\'s
song titled penulum swings as a penulum do by Roger Millerwriter & producer King of the road orate
/producrer/writer/singer every line a metafor you\'re everlasting night in shinning armour. nice evry couplet a hide message in metofor, thanks for sharing ww
tune
this one statement sooner late the human race will have WW 3 a neclearor war
February 8th, 2017 09:42
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