Comments received on poems by WG7
Suicide (acrostic)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Really appreciate this. Spoken by someone who has much wisdom at a young age. Experience makes sages of those who survive and open themselves up to sharing their experiential wisdom with others! You are such a person and a blessing to those who feel alone in their darkness! This poem is brilliantly written and I love how this poem is acrostic and the first letter of each line spells suicide! Very well thought out and brilliantly written!
February 28th, 2017 11:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Really appreciate this. Spoken by someone who has much wisdom at a young age. Experience makes sages of those who survive and open themselves up to sharing their experiential wisdom with others! You are such a person and a blessing to those who feel alone in their darkness! This poem is brilliantly written and I love how this poem is acrostic and the first letter of each line spells suicide! Very well thought out and brilliantly written!
February 28th, 2017 11:33
Suicide (acrostic)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CONFUCIUS HE SAY: Better to write a Poem ~ to your Friends and get the angst out of your system ~Than to jump into a raging torrent and drown regretting that you jumped ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
February 27th, 2017 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CONFUCIUS HE SAY: Better to write a Poem ~ to your Friends and get the angst out of your system ~Than to jump into a raging torrent and drown regretting that you jumped ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
February 27th, 2017 16:53
Suicide (acrostic)
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
wow.. couldn\'t have said it any better
February 27th, 2017 14:24
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
wow.. couldn\'t have said it any better
February 27th, 2017 14:24
Suicide (acrostic)
willyweed said:
I think you are right wg7 time heals the wounds write on ww
February 27th, 2017 13:41
willyweed said:
I think you are right wg7 time heals the wounds write on ww
February 27th, 2017 13:41
Suicide (acrostic)
Hopey_xx said:
Very powerful, great poem, we all need to stay strong :)
February 27th, 2017 12:07
Hopey_xx said:
Very powerful, great poem, we all need to stay strong :)
February 27th, 2017 12:07
Suicide (acrostic)
Tris Eaton said:
Very powerful words. Nice job. You seem like a nice girl and you are a very good poet
February 27th, 2017 11:33
Tris Eaton said:
Very powerful words. Nice job. You seem like a nice girl and you are a very good poet
February 27th, 2017 11:33
My not so perfect family
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true but the line \"Every family has love that brings them together\" is also true of most families.
February 26th, 2017 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true but the line \"Every family has love that brings them together\" is also true of most families.
February 26th, 2017 01:50
My not so perfect family
willyweed said:
no family is perfect and yours is not the exception. except they sound very lovely but then I can\'t hear them Nice poem wolf. wolf. ww
February 25th, 2017 21:08
willyweed said:
no family is perfect and yours is not the exception. except they sound very lovely but then I can\'t hear them Nice poem wolf. wolf. ww
February 25th, 2017 21:08
HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
willyweed said:
They say its your sisters birthday? can you score me some cake & a slice of cheese pizza? happy birthday to you not her when is it anyway? I won\'t remember anyway! WW
February 24th, 2017 13:13
willyweed said:
They say its your sisters birthday? can you score me some cake & a slice of cheese pizza? happy birthday to you not her when is it anyway? I won\'t remember anyway! WW
February 24th, 2017 13:13
Broken heart
janetaylor said:
I agree with Robert ~ you write honestly and deeply in your poetry. Blessings to you dear Amber.
February 24th, 2017 12:36
janetaylor said:
I agree with Robert ~ you write honestly and deeply in your poetry. Blessings to you dear Amber.
February 24th, 2017 12:36
The last breath
Tris Eaton said:
I love this poem. It was heart breaking, but that message at the end lifted my heart just a little. You are an amazing poet and I love all of the works you have done. Keep going please.
February 23rd, 2017 16:22
Tris Eaton said:
I love this poem. It was heart breaking, but that message at the end lifted my heart just a little. You are an amazing poet and I love all of the works you have done. Keep going please.
February 23rd, 2017 16:22
The last breath
willyweed said:
see the thing about suicide is thing you may think you can just kill your self but even before the cops get there you pop right back out on the delivery table to a new mom maybe a new brothe and into a new live maybe better maybe not but you can\'t get away from the lessons you m=need to learn for your soul to grow? so yes you can run but you can\'t hide from GOD he has plenty of time and if you want to play hide and seek with he Ok but at the end of the day he will win and guess who loses no one but you just get a new family families are like a box of chocolate you never know what you\'ll get? ww
February 23rd, 2017 15:55
willyweed said:
see the thing about suicide is thing you may think you can just kill your self but even before the cops get there you pop right back out on the delivery table to a new mom maybe a new brothe and into a new live maybe better maybe not but you can\'t get away from the lessons you m=need to learn for your soul to grow? so yes you can run but you can\'t hide from GOD he has plenty of time and if you want to play hide and seek with he Ok but at the end of the day he will win and guess who loses no one but you just get a new family families are like a box of chocolate you never know what you\'ll get? ww
February 23rd, 2017 15:55
Amber Fulkerson
Hopey_xx said:
Love it... Great poem! Always remember you are strong enough to overcome everything, we\'ve gotta work through this together.. The people who are here to put us down,are just jealous.. More than likely they know we are better, and are just afraid to accept it... For if they did, they would lose all their so-called \'friends\'...
February 21st, 2017 12:36
Hopey_xx said:
Love it... Great poem! Always remember you are strong enough to overcome everything, we\'ve gotta work through this together.. The people who are here to put us down,are just jealous.. More than likely they know we are better, and are just afraid to accept it... For if they did, they would lose all their so-called \'friends\'...
February 21st, 2017 12:36
Amber Fulkerson
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AMBER for a very open and confessional poem. The AMBER I know (and love) is very SASSY a Great Poet and shared with me a great idea for highlighting the first letter in the line for acrostics. You have 100% of my respect ! Please recheck your poem HONEY ~ in my book ~ IT\'S NOT YOU ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
February 21st, 2017 12:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AMBER for a very open and confessional poem. The AMBER I know (and love) is very SASSY a Great Poet and shared with me a great idea for highlighting the first letter in the line for acrostics. You have 100% of my respect ! Please recheck your poem HONEY ~ in my book ~ IT\'S NOT YOU ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
February 21st, 2017 12:16
Life goals (acrostic)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREETINGS AMBER ~ I love ACROSTICS ~ they are a great way of getting your point across ! I love how you highlighted the initial letter in each line in red ~ can i pinch that idea ? We all need to have LIFE GOALS and the NINE you have chosen are excellent. Every Blessing always be the very BEST you can be ! Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my Poems ~ yours B
February 20th, 2017 17:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREETINGS AMBER ~ I love ACROSTICS ~ they are a great way of getting your point across ! I love how you highlighted the initial letter in each line in red ~ can i pinch that idea ? We all need to have LIFE GOALS and the NINE you have chosen are excellent. Every Blessing always be the very BEST you can be ! Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my Poems ~ yours B
February 20th, 2017 17:33
A true friend
Tris Eaton said:
I love this poem so much. Keep writing. You are wonderful.
February 19th, 2017 16:07
Tris Eaton said:
I love this poem so much. Keep writing. You are wonderful.
February 19th, 2017 16:07
Hold on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done! This is more than mere poetry, it is wisdom. I know how tough it is to express such wisdom when it seems counter to my own dark, present reality; however, you expressed that wisdom exquisitely. I hope that it acts as a reminder to you that no matter how dark things get, there is always hope. I know this poem will act as that reminder to me. Another masterful write!!!
February 18th, 2017 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done! This is more than mere poetry, it is wisdom. I know how tough it is to express such wisdom when it seems counter to my own dark, present reality; however, you expressed that wisdom exquisitely. I hope that it acts as a reminder to you that no matter how dark things get, there is always hope. I know this poem will act as that reminder to me. Another masterful write!!!
February 18th, 2017 10:00
Hold on
Allan J. Renaldo said:
This is so very beautiful, and very hopeful! I\'m glad you\'ve written it, because it\'s just amazing!
February 17th, 2017 17:17
Allan J. Renaldo said:
This is so very beautiful, and very hopeful! I\'m glad you\'ve written it, because it\'s just amazing!
February 17th, 2017 17:17
Hold on
Hopey_xx said:
Love it, well done, you are a great poet! Don\'t worry I find it kind of hard to write happy poems too :)
February 17th, 2017 16:13
Hopey_xx said:
Love it, well done, you are a great poet! Don\'t worry I find it kind of hard to write happy poems too :)
February 17th, 2017 16:13
One step at a time
kevin browne said:
young lady, not only do I believe your spirit is beautiful. I think your poetry skills are fascinating. it\'s just such an inspiration to read your work. being young is the greatest and most innocent part of life, yet, you write as if you have been writing for years. I read your profile and it saddened me deeply to hear this about you. rest-assured, if you keep writing and with the progress that lay ahead I am sure the fruits of your success will eventually change your opinion of your own life. I hope.
February 16th, 2017 16:10
kevin browne said:
young lady, not only do I believe your spirit is beautiful. I think your poetry skills are fascinating. it\'s just such an inspiration to read your work. being young is the greatest and most innocent part of life, yet, you write as if you have been writing for years. I read your profile and it saddened me deeply to hear this about you. rest-assured, if you keep writing and with the progress that lay ahead I am sure the fruits of your success will eventually change your opinion of your own life. I hope.
February 16th, 2017 16:10
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