Comments received on poems by WG7
Can\'t keep fighting..
Goldfinch60 said:
The fight should never be abandoned you are special in this life go out and enjoy it.
June 23rd, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The fight should never be abandoned you are special in this life go out and enjoy it.
June 23rd, 2017 00:58
Can\'t keep fighting..
Lars Persson said:
Are you interested in singing? Very lyrical words. Life is so sacred, there is always a joyful way to find light..don\'t despair!
June 22nd, 2017 18:22
Lars Persson said:
Are you interested in singing? Very lyrical words. Life is so sacred, there is always a joyful way to find light..don\'t despair!
June 22nd, 2017 18:22
Can\'t keep fighting..
Tris Eaton said:
I promise there is someone that cares, if it means anything, I care about your life. So please don\'t listen to the voices, your life is worth it.
June 22nd, 2017 13:53
Tris Eaton said:
I promise there is someone that cares, if it means anything, I care about your life. So please don\'t listen to the voices, your life is worth it.
June 22nd, 2017 13:53
It\'s changing...
Goldfinch60 said:
Good and very true write, there are good people out there but all wee see and hear about are the bad ones.
June 21st, 2017 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good and very true write, there are good people out there but all wee see and hear about are the bad ones.
June 21st, 2017 00:48
It\'s changing...
poetboy123 said:
A wonderful write retelling of the many problems of the world, but with a great hopeful ending. Thanks for sharing
June 20th, 2017 12:14
poetboy123 said:
A wonderful write retelling of the many problems of the world, but with a great hopeful ending. Thanks for sharing
June 20th, 2017 12:14
Love?
FredPeyer said:
You expressed your emotions so much better than I could. Yes, love can be both beautiful and sad. But there is a silver lining. I have been married for over 40 years and sometimes, we still hold hands! :-)
June 20th, 2017 11:56
FredPeyer said:
You expressed your emotions so much better than I could. Yes, love can be both beautiful and sad. But there is a silver lining. I have been married for over 40 years and sometimes, we still hold hands! :-)
June 20th, 2017 11:56
It\'s changing...
FredPeyer said:
WG7, your beautifully written poem describes the woes of this world very well, but fortunately you give us some hope at the end.
June 20th, 2017 11:50
FredPeyer said:
WG7, your beautifully written poem describes the woes of this world very well, but fortunately you give us some hope at the end.
June 20th, 2017 11:50
It\'s been a long while (damage for you)
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good heartfelt write, I am glad that you are going to keep writing, I look forward to reading it.
June 19th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good heartfelt write, I am glad that you are going to keep writing, I look forward to reading it.
June 19th, 2017 01:00
It\'s been a long while (damage for you)
Discreation said:
Your poem is great, way to add layers. If you don\'t mind...but this is freakin\' awesome.
June 19th, 2017 00:20
Discreation said:
Your poem is great, way to add layers. If you don\'t mind...but this is freakin\' awesome.
June 19th, 2017 00:20
It\'s been a long while (damage for you)
poetboy123 said:
There is no better poem than this. Straight from your heart and each word is an expression of you. Please continue writing for everyone on this site as you are incredible at it. It may even help you find out who you are, keep your head high.
June 19th, 2017 00:17
poetboy123 said:
There is no better poem than this. Straight from your heart and each word is an expression of you. Please continue writing for everyone on this site as you are incredible at it. It may even help you find out who you are, keep your head high.
June 19th, 2017 00:17
The cool silver of the gun...
swingline said:
The sorrow feeds on itself and grows into depression . Depression is the vine that chokes any sanity to death . And death is the crown that depression wears when it constitutes (makes law) to cast reality away .
May 8th, 2017 12:36
swingline said:
The sorrow feeds on itself and grows into depression . Depression is the vine that chokes any sanity to death . And death is the crown that depression wears when it constitutes (makes law) to cast reality away .
May 8th, 2017 12:36
My mind, body & soul
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all hidden from others, we wear different masks in different situations, the only people who know who you/we really are ourselves and, if you believe, God. Good write.
April 1st, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all hidden from others, we wear different masks in different situations, the only people who know who you/we really are ourselves and, if you believe, God. Good write.
April 1st, 2017 00:50
You only get one
lovelydarkanddeep said:
wow. just wow. i loved this! you are a great writer! i love the italicizing and bold words! ~Izzy
March 30th, 2017 17:43
lovelydarkanddeep said:
wow. just wow. i loved this! you are a great writer! i love the italicizing and bold words! ~Izzy
March 30th, 2017 17:43
You only get one
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing AMBER ~ another great poem.Lots of negatives in the first STANZA ~ BUT ~ lots of positive in STANZA 2. Love ~ Dreams ~ Hopes ~ Truth these are the 4 traits that drive me and I\'ve turned 18 so I have experienced FREEDOM and I love it ! Thanks for caring and sharing loved your poem ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN.
March 30th, 2017 14:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing AMBER ~ another great poem.Lots of negatives in the first STANZA ~ BUT ~ lots of positive in STANZA 2. Love ~ Dreams ~ Hopes ~ Truth these are the 4 traits that drive me and I\'ve turned 18 so I have experienced FREEDOM and I love it ! Thanks for caring and sharing loved your poem ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN.
March 30th, 2017 14:17
You only get one
Hopey_xx said:
I love it. So great to read when we are feeling down. Awesome write!
March 30th, 2017 12:32
Hopey_xx said:
I love it. So great to read when we are feeling down. Awesome write!
March 30th, 2017 12:32
Remember...
Hopey_xx said:
Such a great poem, well done. Keep writing, as I know you will get through the darkness, and see light.
March 28th, 2017 15:09
Hopey_xx said:
Such a great poem, well done. Keep writing, as I know you will get through the darkness, and see light.
March 28th, 2017 15:09
Remember...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another great poem by a great poet. You are a pure soul Amber, even though you find yourself shrouded by the darkness. I too wish I could go back to that innocence that was lost so young, but none of us can. With that said, within us all a piece (even if a small fragment) of that innocence remains. There\'s hope in that and I pray that one day, when looking back at all you\'ve been through, you will see how precious that remaining innocence is. It is what guides us to seek a brighter future and what aides us in giving a damn for others who suffer like us. What\'s more, while hell screams loudly and obnoxiously at us, never lose sight of the fact that the reminder of the reality of HEAVEN is that still, small, quiet, but ever present voice within you. Even in the midst of the hell you may find yourself in, know that heaven is yours! Keep searching. Keep expressing yourself and allowing your poetry to be a purge of all the stuff that is plaguing you. The darkness is a great muse and poetry is such a great release! This I KNOW you get, and that is why you are such an honest and beautifully poetic soul! Great write!
March 28th, 2017 13:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another great poem by a great poet. You are a pure soul Amber, even though you find yourself shrouded by the darkness. I too wish I could go back to that innocence that was lost so young, but none of us can. With that said, within us all a piece (even if a small fragment) of that innocence remains. There\'s hope in that and I pray that one day, when looking back at all you\'ve been through, you will see how precious that remaining innocence is. It is what guides us to seek a brighter future and what aides us in giving a damn for others who suffer like us. What\'s more, while hell screams loudly and obnoxiously at us, never lose sight of the fact that the reminder of the reality of HEAVEN is that still, small, quiet, but ever present voice within you. Even in the midst of the hell you may find yourself in, know that heaven is yours! Keep searching. Keep expressing yourself and allowing your poetry to be a purge of all the stuff that is plaguing you. The darkness is a great muse and poetry is such a great release! This I KNOW you get, and that is why you are such an honest and beautifully poetic soul! Great write!
March 28th, 2017 13:50
Love?
SorrowfullyHappy said:
this has a meaning deeper than the ocean i could feel the emotion you put into it and i can really relate
good write
March 27th, 2017 15:11
SorrowfullyHappy said:
this has a meaning deeper than the ocean i could feel the emotion you put into it and i can really relate
good write
March 27th, 2017 15:11
Short but true
Hopey_xx said:
Great write! I just wish that more people would share love rather than hate. I really hope you feel better soon- keep fighting 😊
March 20th, 2017 14:25
Hopey_xx said:
Great write! I just wish that more people would share love rather than hate. I really hope you feel better soon- keep fighting 😊
March 20th, 2017 14:25
Short but true
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can fix anything, if only everybody tried it.
March 20th, 2017 13:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can fix anything, if only everybody tried it.
March 20th, 2017 13:42
Short but true
elsiewarrenswords said:
love - an amazing thing when used correctly. love the message
March 20th, 2017 13:36
elsiewarrenswords said:
love - an amazing thing when used correctly. love the message
March 20th, 2017 13:36
My saviors
Augustus said:
Hey, you love it. It speaks to you. You are smart and like the words say, \"you will figure it out\". Nice tribute to something you can connect with.
March 12th, 2017 22:28
Augustus said:
Hey, you love it. It speaks to you. You are smart and like the words say, \"you will figure it out\". Nice tribute to something you can connect with.
March 12th, 2017 22:28
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