Comments received on poems by WG7
My saviors
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The more screaming the merrier, I say! I love BVB. The people who call music \"sick\" are the people who haven\'t been through what the songs address, have no point of reference, or just haven\'t given a damn to give it a chance. Either way, if the music speaks to you and leads you to a healthier place, it is A-Okay in my book! Rock it out Amber!!! Loved the poem!!!
March 12th, 2017 21:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The more screaming the merrier, I say! I love BVB. The people who call music \"sick\" are the people who haven\'t been through what the songs address, have no point of reference, or just haven\'t given a damn to give it a chance. Either way, if the music speaks to you and leads you to a healthier place, it is A-Okay in my book! Rock it out Amber!!! Loved the poem!!!
March 12th, 2017 21:23
The moon and the sun
Augustus said:
Liked the comparison to,the moon and the sun. You exposed your vulnerability here. Perhaps that\'s something to explore a little more. You can search deep without a knife. It may be a bit more painful however. This was very thoughtful.
March 11th, 2017 19:46
Augustus said:
Liked the comparison to,the moon and the sun. You exposed your vulnerability here. Perhaps that\'s something to explore a little more. You can search deep without a knife. It may be a bit more painful however. This was very thoughtful.
March 11th, 2017 19:46
The moon and the sun
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem WG7 ~ the Ups and Downs of LOVE ! Sometime when i have had no regular GF (it happens) the TWO come along at once. I generally end up with one as Girl who is just a Friend and the other as a \"hands on\" Girl Friend. 14 is a bit young so the one of 17 seems more appropriate. Also as my POEM says the SUN is hotter than the MOON (just joking !) Every Blessing and as Hopey says \"Just follow your heart !\" Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN.
March 11th, 2017 16:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem WG7 ~ the Ups and Downs of LOVE ! Sometime when i have had no regular GF (it happens) the TWO come along at once. I generally end up with one as Girl who is just a Friend and the other as a \"hands on\" Girl Friend. 14 is a bit young so the one of 17 seems more appropriate. Also as my POEM says the SUN is hotter than the MOON (just joking !) Every Blessing and as Hopey says \"Just follow your heart !\" Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN.
March 11th, 2017 16:49
Dark not light
AmySnitzel4 said:
That\'s what I\'m talking about ! Let me be me ! This is freaking awesome!!! Thank you for sharing !
March 11th, 2017 07:51
AmySnitzel4 said:
That\'s what I\'m talking about ! Let me be me ! This is freaking awesome!!! Thank you for sharing !
March 11th, 2017 07:51
Dark not light
Augustus said:
Honest injun. Hard to relate. We\'re greater than a half century apart. But I admire your spunk and independence. Kudos.
March 10th, 2017 17:29
Augustus said:
Honest injun. Hard to relate. We\'re greater than a half century apart. But I admire your spunk and independence. Kudos.
March 10th, 2017 17:29
Dark not light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I truly do enjoy reading your poetry, and I do find I relate with it quite a bit! I am thankful for you being on here, sharing your work.
March 10th, 2017 16:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I truly do enjoy reading your poetry, and I do find I relate with it quite a bit! I am thankful for you being on here, sharing your work.
March 10th, 2017 16:13
Dark not light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate with this! Black is where it\'s at! This poem reminds me of The Rolling Stones song, \"Paint It Black\". Not sure if you have heard that song or not...but if not, check it out.
To quote a part of the song:
\"I see a red door and I want it painted black
No colours anymore, I want them to turn black
I see the girls walk by dressed in their summer clothes
I have to turn my head until my darkness goes
\"I see a line of cars and they\'re all painted black
With flowers and my love, both never to come back
I see people turn their heads and quickly look away
Like a newborn baby, it just happens everyday
\"I look inside myself and see my heart is black
I see my red door and must have it painted black
Maybe then I\'ll fade away and not have to face the facts
It\'s not easy facing up when your whole world is black\"
Rolling Stones aside, great write! Thank you for sharing!
March 10th, 2017 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate with this! Black is where it\'s at! This poem reminds me of The Rolling Stones song, \"Paint It Black\". Not sure if you have heard that song or not...but if not, check it out.
To quote a part of the song:
\"I see a red door and I want it painted black
No colours anymore, I want them to turn black
I see the girls walk by dressed in their summer clothes
I have to turn my head until my darkness goes
\"I see a line of cars and they\'re all painted black
With flowers and my love, both never to come back
I see people turn their heads and quickly look away
Like a newborn baby, it just happens everyday
\"I look inside myself and see my heart is black
I see my red door and must have it painted black
Maybe then I\'ll fade away and not have to face the facts
It\'s not easy facing up when your whole world is black\"
Rolling Stones aside, great write! Thank you for sharing!
March 10th, 2017 15:56
Dark not light
Hopey_xx said:
Be who you want to be, don\'t ever let anyone change that. :)
Strong write.
March 10th, 2017 15:48
Hopey_xx said:
Be who you want to be, don\'t ever let anyone change that. :)
Strong write.
March 10th, 2017 15:48
Her last breath
SorrowfullyHappy said:
there was a time when i almost died
i saw light but i also saw darkness i didn\'t know where to go so i stayed in between and so i stand here alive now wondering if i would have been better off dead
March 9th, 2017 13:22
SorrowfullyHappy said:
there was a time when i almost died
i saw light but i also saw darkness i didn\'t know where to go so i stayed in between and so i stand here alive now wondering if i would have been better off dead
March 9th, 2017 13:22
Her last breath
Hypothesis said:
I have seriously disagree against, Outback. This story had a compelling insertion that not many can grip on if held with your eyelids shut. The drowning reminded me of Jason from Crystal lake. Though that may be fictional in some cases. The meaning behind the message is deeper than the shallows of morality.
Keep writing scholarly poet. There is more truth behind the cause & effect of what truly dwells within our livelihood.
March 9th, 2017 02:45
Hypothesis said:
I have seriously disagree against, Outback. This story had a compelling insertion that not many can grip on if held with your eyelids shut. The drowning reminded me of Jason from Crystal lake. Though that may be fictional in some cases. The meaning behind the message is deeper than the shallows of morality.
Keep writing scholarly poet. There is more truth behind the cause & effect of what truly dwells within our livelihood.
March 9th, 2017 02:45
Cam, Nic, Ash & Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring HONEY ~ great poem all human life is there It a poem we could all write the ins & outs of FRIENDS ! Personally I know we are all going to change so I just go with the flow ~ OK Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours HUGS BRIAN
March 8th, 2017 14:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring HONEY ~ great poem all human life is there It a poem we could all write the ins & outs of FRIENDS ! Personally I know we are all going to change so I just go with the flow ~ OK Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours HUGS BRIAN
March 8th, 2017 14:51
Cam, Nic, Ash & Me
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Interesting poem mod rocking rolling on real life issues. Breakup is so common among girlfriends and boyfriends, but it still hurts ahh. Thumbs up young writer.
March 8th, 2017 13:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Interesting poem mod rocking rolling on real life issues. Breakup is so common among girlfriends and boyfriends, but it still hurts ahh. Thumbs up young writer.
March 8th, 2017 13:34
Cam, Nic, Ash & Me
Tris Eaton said:
This is an... interesting situation you\'ve got going on here. It\'s be nice if they all got along, but at least they\'re friends with you. They seem nice.
March 8th, 2017 13:19
Tris Eaton said:
This is an... interesting situation you\'ve got going on here. It\'s be nice if they all got along, but at least they\'re friends with you. They seem nice.
March 8th, 2017 13:19
She and he
Allan J. Renaldo said:
It\'s beautiful! I loved the whole thing, truly amazing!
March 7th, 2017 20:56
Allan J. Renaldo said:
It\'s beautiful! I loved the whole thing, truly amazing!
March 7th, 2017 20:56
Life is turning around
willyweed said:
its wonderful when your in the dark good things come to light!
March 6th, 2017 09:34
willyweed said:
its wonderful when your in the dark good things come to light!
March 6th, 2017 09:34
I have nothing
willyweed said:
Hey wolf girl 7 what band did you see? did you get some food? have a good night!
March 4th, 2017 21:21
willyweed said:
Hey wolf girl 7 what band did you see? did you get some food? have a good night!
March 4th, 2017 21:21
The lone wolf
Hopey_xx said:
So very sad, I hope things get better for you soon- Keep writing!
March 3rd, 2017 16:14
Hopey_xx said:
So very sad, I hope things get better for you soon- Keep writing!
March 3rd, 2017 16:14
The lone wolf
Tris Eaton said:
This is very sad and I am very sorry that you have to live that way. However, this is also a fantastic poem, you are extremely talented, much better than I. I\'m your age, and I cannot imagine what it must be like to be in your shoes, but I love reading your poems, they are amazing.
March 3rd, 2017 12:29
Tris Eaton said:
This is very sad and I am very sorry that you have to live that way. However, this is also a fantastic poem, you are extremely talented, much better than I. I\'m your age, and I cannot imagine what it must be like to be in your shoes, but I love reading your poems, they are amazing.
March 3rd, 2017 12:29
Broken in places
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I would always say hi. I hope your days pass by into better ones and soon you will come out into the light.
March 2nd, 2017 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I would always say hi. I hope your days pass by into better ones and soon you will come out into the light.
March 2nd, 2017 01:20
Broken in places
Hopey_xx said:
Love it, I used to feel like that sometimes. Great job!
March 1st, 2017 13:59
Hopey_xx said:
Love it, I used to feel like that sometimes. Great job!
March 1st, 2017 13:59
Broken in places
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i can relate this is pretty much my life
March 1st, 2017 13:18
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i can relate this is pretty much my life
March 1st, 2017 13:18
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