Comments received on poems by Caroline Lowry
Mum this is for you
WriteBeLight said:
Very good job on this poem. My heart breaks for what is happening in the poem. But, I feel hope, as well, that things will be OK.
February 19th, 2017 06:24
WriteBeLight said:
Very good job on this poem. My heart breaks for what is happening in the poem. But, I feel hope, as well, that things will be OK.
February 19th, 2017 06:24
Mum will never feel the same
P.H.Rose said:
Just beautiful Caroline
Wonderful tribute..
So good..
February 18th, 2017 18:57
P.H.Rose said:
Just beautiful Caroline
Wonderful tribute..
So good..
February 18th, 2017 18:57
Mum will never feel the same
Laydii said:
This is something I\'ve planned on writing about, you did it so much better :O its real heart touching ðŸ˜
February 18th, 2017 04:54
Laydii said:
This is something I\'ve planned on writing about, you did it so much better :O its real heart touching ðŸ˜
February 18th, 2017 04:54
we all miss you very much
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant and so well written about loss. Excellently sad and such a great piece of work.
February 17th, 2017 06:43
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant and so well written about loss. Excellently sad and such a great piece of work.
February 17th, 2017 06:43
Words I\'d Like To Say
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a loving tribute to a well loved and much missed father - a moving read.
February 16th, 2017 14:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a loving tribute to a well loved and much missed father - a moving read.
February 16th, 2017 14:27
Words I\'d Like To Say
WG7 said:
This is beautiful. I love the poem that is in front of me.
February 16th, 2017 12:49
WG7 said:
This is beautiful. I love the poem that is in front of me.
February 16th, 2017 12:49
Reasons
P.H.Rose said:
Just wow Caroline,
I love this so much,
Beauty and love in
every letter. Every
Time I hear the song
In the living years by
Mike and the mechanics.
The line,\" I think I cought
his spirit, later that same year,
I\'m sure I heard his echo in
My new born baby\'s tears\"
The songs lyrics don\'t really
Represent you and your dad
But I just love that line, and there\'s
Also Luther vandross and
\"Dance with my farther\"
Words and music are just
So beautiful ... Thank you
For sharing your beautiful
Words.... We are richer for them.
February 13th, 2017 16:46
P.H.Rose said:
Just wow Caroline,
I love this so much,
Beauty and love in
every letter. Every
Time I hear the song
In the living years by
Mike and the mechanics.
The line,\" I think I cought
his spirit, later that same year,
I\'m sure I heard his echo in
My new born baby\'s tears\"
The songs lyrics don\'t really
Represent you and your dad
But I just love that line, and there\'s
Also Luther vandross and
\"Dance with my farther\"
Words and music are just
So beautiful ... Thank you
For sharing your beautiful
Words.... We are richer for them.
February 13th, 2017 16:46
Six Months On
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely tribute,he will be with you forever
February 12th, 2017 23:54
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely tribute,he will be with you forever
February 12th, 2017 23:54
Six Months On
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-rending verse Caroline - a beautiful tribute to a much missed
Dad. It is so painful yet the happy memories can help grief after a while and I wish you those dear friend.
February 12th, 2017 17:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-rending verse Caroline - a beautiful tribute to a much missed
Dad. It is so painful yet the happy memories can help grief after a while and I wish you those dear friend.
February 12th, 2017 17:15
Six Months On
Caroline Lowry said:
thank you very much for ur kind words brian, I have wrote quite a few poems as I have lost both my parents who, i loved very much, my quote is
it\'s the heart, that rules the head, that rules the hand when writing my poems.
February 12th, 2017 16:31
Caroline Lowry said:
thank you very much for ur kind words brian, I have wrote quite a few poems as I have lost both my parents who, i loved very much, my quote is
it\'s the heart, that rules the head, that rules the hand when writing my poems.
February 12th, 2017 16:31
Six Months On
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAROLINE ~ Thanks for your first poem. Perfect structure in five quatrains and a final couplet all presented in rhyming couplets ~ elegant. The subject of your poem complements the structure ~ a lovely tribute to a lovely Man ~ your Dad ! You express confidence in the afterlife and your Dad still caring in the Heavenly Dimension. The answer lies in your own expression of hope. We only get one Dad & one Mum and they are exceedingly precious to us. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 12th, 2017 16:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAROLINE ~ Thanks for your first poem. Perfect structure in five quatrains and a final couplet all presented in rhyming couplets ~ elegant. The subject of your poem complements the structure ~ a lovely tribute to a lovely Man ~ your Dad ! You express confidence in the afterlife and your Dad still caring in the Heavenly Dimension. The answer lies in your own expression of hope. We only get one Dad & one Mum and they are exceedingly precious to us. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 12th, 2017 16:22
Six Months On
Caroline Lowry said:
thank you he certainly was, I have loads more lol one at a time
February 12th, 2017 16:19
Caroline Lowry said:
thank you he certainly was, I have loads more lol one at a time
February 12th, 2017 16:19
