Comments received on poems by Isabel Chelisia Villa
Battles
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem of depression is heart wrenching and your words are hauntingly dark.
Yet, you cannot give in to depression and as soon as that feeling comes over you please choose one or all of these biblical verses to read. Light alone extinguishes darkness.
Philippians 4:8, Deuteronomy 31:8, Psalm 34:17, Psalm 40:1-3, Psalm 3:3, Psalm 32:10, Psalm 42:11,
1 Peter 5:6-7, John 16:33,
Romans 8:38-39,
2 Corinthians 1:3-4,
1 Peter 4:12-13, Psalm 37:23-24, and Isaiah 41:10
Don\'t give up. Keep occupied with your writing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:37
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem of depression is heart wrenching and your words are hauntingly dark.
Yet, you cannot give in to depression and as soon as that feeling comes over you please choose one or all of these biblical verses to read. Light alone extinguishes darkness.
Philippians 4:8, Deuteronomy 31:8, Psalm 34:17, Psalm 40:1-3, Psalm 3:3, Psalm 32:10, Psalm 42:11,
1 Peter 5:6-7, John 16:33,
Romans 8:38-39,
2 Corinthians 1:3-4,
1 Peter 4:12-13, Psalm 37:23-24, and Isaiah 41:10
Don\'t give up. Keep occupied with your writing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 15:37
The girl within.
Fay Slimm. said:
It is sometimes a hard lesson to learn but self is all that is needed for validation - a well written set of reasons to pursue acceptance of this truth Isabel. Thanks for sharing.
June 7th, 2018 07:33
Fay Slimm. said:
It is sometimes a hard lesson to learn but self is all that is needed for validation - a well written set of reasons to pursue acceptance of this truth Isabel. Thanks for sharing.
June 7th, 2018 07:33
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Isabel Chelisia Villa said:
thank you so much tony36, poetry is where I can go to think about my feelings and able to figure them out
October 13th, 2017 15:18
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:
thank you so much tony36, poetry is where I can go to think about my feelings and able to figure them out
October 13th, 2017 15:18
change...
lasergraph said:
We are all a part of who raised us but we are also different. We are unique and as individual as a snowflake.
September 12th, 2017 12:48
lasergraph said:
We are all a part of who raised us but we are also different. We are unique and as individual as a snowflake.
September 12th, 2017 12:48
how could you leave us?
India Dreams said:
I love this poem! It almost made me cry. My father picked money over me. He left me when i was 6. And he would always call and say he\'s coming over to spend time with me, and I remember sitting by the window waiting for him. And he would never come. I recently found out he had a girlfriend since 2007, and she never even knew he had kids! Now I\'m being told that he\'s a doctor now, and has a new family. Yet he never calls or helps out. So I kinda understand how you feel.
May 12th, 2017 13:43
India Dreams said:
I love this poem! It almost made me cry. My father picked money over me. He left me when i was 6. And he would always call and say he\'s coming over to spend time with me, and I remember sitting by the window waiting for him. And he would never come. I recently found out he had a girlfriend since 2007, and she never even knew he had kids! Now I\'m being told that he\'s a doctor now, and has a new family. Yet he never calls or helps out. So I kinda understand how you feel.
May 12th, 2017 13:43
Free Write #1
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those teaching should be able to step away from their personal values and teach that which is in the course.
March 2nd, 2017 13:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those teaching should be able to step away from their personal values and teach that which is in the course.
March 2nd, 2017 13:47
Free Write #1
WG7 said:
YESSS!! I am the same! Although I have all Fs except in choir and gym. Class is so boring though it is easy. I just don\'t do my work because I literally can´t. I hate that you have learn the same things all the time even though you know everything you need to about it.
March 2nd, 2017 13:14
WG7 said:
YESSS!! I am the same! Although I have all Fs except in choir and gym. Class is so boring though it is easy. I just don\'t do my work because I literally can´t. I hate that you have learn the same things all the time even though you know everything you need to about it.
March 2nd, 2017 13:14
Fearful hope
MendedFences27 said:
You only get one Dad. So make the most of it, but do not stand for any mistreatment. Hope- fully you will mature and reach an understanding between you and he. Sorry to hear of your loss. Keep on writing and remain Hopeful. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:16
MendedFences27 said:
You only get one Dad. So make the most of it, but do not stand for any mistreatment. Hope- fully you will mature and reach an understanding between you and he. Sorry to hear of your loss. Keep on writing and remain Hopeful. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:16
Dreams
notapoet said:
Awesome write, \"I cannot see the world as I once did.
No luminous rainbow after the tornado.
Just the destruction after its fury.
The mess I alone have to pick up and assemble again.\" Love this verse, Brilliant!
February 23rd, 2017 09:09
notapoet said:
Awesome write, \"I cannot see the world as I once did.
No luminous rainbow after the tornado.
Just the destruction after its fury.
The mess I alone have to pick up and assemble again.\" Love this verse, Brilliant!
February 23rd, 2017 09:09
Dreams
MendedFences27 said:
Your life is no longer just your own. It is your\'s and his. You must go on and live as you think he would want. Your poetic tribute must now become a living tribute. Keep writing. Fulfill your dreams and he will be with you all the way. Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:28
MendedFences27 said:
Your life is no longer just your own. It is your\'s and his. You must go on and live as you think he would want. Your poetic tribute must now become a living tribute. Keep writing. Fulfill your dreams and he will be with you all the way. Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:28
Real world
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Is there a poet in you? For damn sure. I can tell by how you write. You add color, colorful images, beyond the ordinary. Your writing flows. Sure you\'re not perfect, but then who is? Keep writing, and writing, and writing. Do not be afraid to revise. Sorry about the tragic events in your life, but we\'ve all had a taste of that. The thing is to accept it and move on. There is no other life but the one you have, no escape from the hardships that come with it. There is only holding on, getting to a place where you can help others to cope, and youir writing has the power to do that. Work at it. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 11:51
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Is there a poet in you? For damn sure. I can tell by how you write. You add color, colorful images, beyond the ordinary. Your writing flows. Sure you\'re not perfect, but then who is? Keep writing, and writing, and writing. Do not be afraid to revise. Sorry about the tragic events in your life, but we\'ve all had a taste of that. The thing is to accept it and move on. There is no other life but the one you have, no escape from the hardships that come with it. There is only holding on, getting to a place where you can help others to cope, and youir writing has the power to do that. Work at it. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 11:51
faded out
WriteBeLight said:
You should not feel bad about crying in front of anyone. Well done in your poem, to bring that feeling out :)
February 15th, 2017 11:34
WriteBeLight said:
You should not feel bad about crying in front of anyone. Well done in your poem, to bring that feeling out :)
February 15th, 2017 11:34
30 days ago
WG7 said:
I am sorry for your lost. I know how it feels to lose the one you love so much whether it be family or friends. I\'ve lost much of my family, and every time I even think about them I bawl. My parents are always working so my 2 year old brother would stay home with all of the other 5 siblings. i was out running one day, and my brother was just \"watching\" him, and well my younger brother. He got out of the house, and so many thoughts came to mind. we found him, but my parents never trusted my older brother watch him again. i\'m here to talk because I\'ve lost so much family and friends. I know how difficult it is.
February 14th, 2017 12:26
WG7 said:
I am sorry for your lost. I know how it feels to lose the one you love so much whether it be family or friends. I\'ve lost much of my family, and every time I even think about them I bawl. My parents are always working so my 2 year old brother would stay home with all of the other 5 siblings. i was out running one day, and my brother was just \"watching\" him, and well my younger brother. He got out of the house, and so many thoughts came to mind. we found him, but my parents never trusted my older brother watch him again. i\'m here to talk because I\'ve lost so much family and friends. I know how difficult it is.
February 14th, 2017 12:26
30 days ago
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR VERY POIGNANT FIRST POEM. When i was 16 the death of anyone close to me was very painful to comprehend. BUT they were all over 50 ~ I don\'t think I could have coped with the \"passing away\" of a BABY ~ especially a BROTHER or a SISTER. In later life I have experienced baby deaths in my extended Family and it is always heart rending. Your experience has spawned a beautiful Poem ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thanks for caring and sharing your love & remorse for your Baby Brother ~ Blessings ~ thinking of you ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
February 14th, 2017 12:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR VERY POIGNANT FIRST POEM. When i was 16 the death of anyone close to me was very painful to comprehend. BUT they were all over 50 ~ I don\'t think I could have coped with the \"passing away\" of a BABY ~ especially a BROTHER or a SISTER. In later life I have experienced baby deaths in my extended Family and it is always heart rending. Your experience has spawned a beautiful Poem ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thanks for caring and sharing your love & remorse for your Baby Brother ~ Blessings ~ thinking of you ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
February 14th, 2017 12:20
30 days ago
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tragic and hits brutally hard. A most beautiful tribute and reminder that life is truly fragile and precious. Thank you for that reminder. Welcome to MPS and I look forward to more!
February 14th, 2017 12:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tragic and hits brutally hard. A most beautiful tribute and reminder that life is truly fragile and precious. Thank you for that reminder. Welcome to MPS and I look forward to more!
February 14th, 2017 12:18
