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My brain and my heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Experience cannot be taught we learn this as we go through our lives.
May 9th, 2017 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Experience cannot be taught we learn this as we go through our lives.
May 9th, 2017 00:44
Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, as I was laying in bed this morning I thought about time and writing poem about it.
March 19th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, as I was laying in bed this morning I thought about time and writing poem about it.
March 19th, 2017 01:24
Death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Death is the great leveller! It does not discriminate or show favor. Everyone will die, it\'s the one thing every human being, and all life, share in common! Love the twist at the end, how death turns to look at the reader! Great write!
March 18th, 2017 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Death is the great leveller! It does not discriminate or show favor. Everyone will die, it\'s the one thing every human being, and all life, share in common! Love the twist at the end, how death turns to look at the reader! Great write!
March 18th, 2017 20:03
Death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Death is the great leveller! It does not discriminate or show favor. Everyone will die, it\'s the one thing every human being, and all life, share in common! Love the twist at the end, how death turns to look at the reader! Great write!
March 18th, 2017 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Death is the great leveller! It does not discriminate or show favor. Everyone will die, it\'s the one thing every human being, and all life, share in common! Love the twist at the end, how death turns to look at the reader! Great write!
March 18th, 2017 20:03
Death
MendedFences27 said:
The Grim Reaper cometh, A collector of souls, and we are all ...next. Got to keep up with quotas. Nice refreshing take on the darkest subject of all.
- Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 19:30
MendedFences27 said:
The Grim Reaper cometh, A collector of souls, and we are all ...next. Got to keep up with quotas. Nice refreshing take on the darkest subject of all.
- Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 19:30
Death
Will Hiltz said:
Reading over this poem and your others, it impresses me that you write very well for your age, and you also express well the mixed bag of emotions so common at that age. I suspect both your writing and your adjustment to this life will both bring you happiness as you grow, and I encourage you to keep at them, and best of luck to you as you do.
March 18th, 2017 14:23
Will Hiltz said:
Reading over this poem and your others, it impresses me that you write very well for your age, and you also express well the mixed bag of emotions so common at that age. I suspect both your writing and your adjustment to this life will both bring you happiness as you grow, and I encourage you to keep at them, and best of luck to you as you do.
March 18th, 2017 14:23
Death
Jooles said:
Really liked this.....I write about death and things....its interesting (ok that sounds wierd)
March 18th, 2017 04:06
Jooles said:
Really liked this.....I write about death and things....its interesting (ok that sounds wierd)
March 18th, 2017 04:06
Artificial Joy
Hypothesis said:
Yeah I sense a strong vibe here with an echoing cry for help. I understand that feeling to play the referee amongst your friends or to keep sanity intact. After reading your poem reminds me of a late actor whom adored us with his thriving comedy. Robin Williams was a successful comedian and actor. However, he developed a deeper sickness being truly unhappy in which dwelled beanth his soul.
So as that being said. Do not try to be the third wheel always but at least the shining light to see the reflection you\'ve gave off to them.
Another emotional piece poet.
March 17th, 2017 01:33
Hypothesis said:
Yeah I sense a strong vibe here with an echoing cry for help. I understand that feeling to play the referee amongst your friends or to keep sanity intact. After reading your poem reminds me of a late actor whom adored us with his thriving comedy. Robin Williams was a successful comedian and actor. However, he developed a deeper sickness being truly unhappy in which dwelled beanth his soul.
So as that being said. Do not try to be the third wheel always but at least the shining light to see the reflection you\'ve gave off to them.
Another emotional piece poet.
March 17th, 2017 01:33
Do you ever...?
Goldfinch60 said:
May you life grow towards the perfection you seek, as it does in these words.
March 16th, 2017 03:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May you life grow towards the perfection you seek, as it does in these words.
March 16th, 2017 03:17
Do you ever...?
Michael Edwards said:
Sounds like your half empty cup is now half full and ever may it be thus - first I\'ve read this session and really enjoyed it.
March 16th, 2017 01:42
Michael Edwards said:
Sounds like your half empty cup is now half full and ever may it be thus - first I\'ve read this session and really enjoyed it.
March 16th, 2017 01:42
Ghost
Hypothesis said:
In all actuality I sense this could be a suicidal route from what I gathered. I know certain obstacles are heightened to a great extent. Just remember do not let life overwhelm you because of their despair. God never forsaken you nor will he ever mislead you.
You may be a ghost in they\'re eyes, but to us your the guidance to help others find the light each time we\'ve closed our eyes.
March 15th, 2017 05:30
Hypothesis said:
In all actuality I sense this could be a suicidal route from what I gathered. I know certain obstacles are heightened to a great extent. Just remember do not let life overwhelm you because of their despair. God never forsaken you nor will he ever mislead you.
You may be a ghost in they\'re eyes, but to us your the guidance to help others find the light each time we\'ve closed our eyes.
March 15th, 2017 05:30
What did I do?
Tony36 said:
I to have enjoyed everything you have written and look forward to reading more. Great write
March 14th, 2017 08:03
Tony36 said:
I to have enjoyed everything you have written and look forward to reading more. Great write
March 14th, 2017 08:03
What did I do?
orchidee said:
Good write. I thought it was a naughty poem with that title! Erm, not an original idea, but you could call them Poem 1, Poem 2, etc if can\'t think of anything else. I scan the whole poem for a title. it\'s usually the last thing I type in!
March 14th, 2017 03:54
orchidee said:
Good write. I thought it was a naughty poem with that title! Erm, not an original idea, but you could call them Poem 1, Poem 2, etc if can\'t think of anything else. I scan the whole poem for a title. it\'s usually the last thing I type in!
March 14th, 2017 03:54
Envy
willyweed said:
oh your good enough, just not right for him, when true love comes you\'ll know it! WW
March 13th, 2017 07:10
willyweed said:
oh your good enough, just not right for him, when true love comes you\'ll know it! WW
March 13th, 2017 07:10
You and me
MendedFences27 said:
The magic of the first kiss. The great moment of loves first blush. You have captured that moment beautifully. Loved the first bit about the rainbow, very original, storm and sun combining to form it. Great write. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:49
MendedFences27 said:
The magic of the first kiss. The great moment of loves first blush. You have captured that moment beautifully. Loved the first bit about the rainbow, very original, storm and sun combining to form it. Great write. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:49
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