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Unstable love
willyweed said:
that\'s what I always say deny and except ? wonderful imagination plus some letters is just the thing foe a good poem and its all here! ww
February 28th, 2017 05:34
willyweed said:
that\'s what I always say deny and except ? wonderful imagination plus some letters is just the thing foe a good poem and its all here! ww
February 28th, 2017 05:34
The race
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Great write! I loved how it is set in a race and the usage of first, second and third place.
February 27th, 2017 13:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Great write! I loved how it is set in a race and the usage of first, second and third place.
February 27th, 2017 13:22
Impossible to get through
MendedFences27 said:
You have a poet\'s heart and a brilliant mind. We all spend many, many years in search of love, and most of us can\'t recognize it. Putting your thoughts on paper is a natural reaction for a writer. You are setting the stage, in your mind, for the real thing. May it be as wonderful as you imagine. Keep on writing, you have a gift. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 21:17
MendedFences27 said:
You have a poet\'s heart and a brilliant mind. We all spend many, many years in search of love, and most of us can\'t recognize it. Putting your thoughts on paper is a natural reaction for a writer. You are setting the stage, in your mind, for the real thing. May it be as wonderful as you imagine. Keep on writing, you have a gift. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 21:17
Alone ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic but hopefully the sorrow will be short lived.
February 25th, 2017 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic but hopefully the sorrow will be short lived.
February 25th, 2017 02:25
Snow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"POEMS\" for an awesome poem ! In JOB 38 v 2 God asks JOB a question \"JOB have you entered into the Treasures of the Snow ?\" well you obviously have. KIDS (and dogs) love SNOW ~ Seniors hate it slipping & sliding ~ But GOD (who likes DOG ~ think about it) and KIDS ~ still sends the snow for us to enjoy. If you look at snow flakes under the microscope each one is a different hexagonal jewel ~ another \"Treasure of the Snow\" for us all to enjoy ! Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
February 23rd, 2017 05:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"POEMS\" for an awesome poem ! In JOB 38 v 2 God asks JOB a question \"JOB have you entered into the Treasures of the Snow ?\" well you obviously have. KIDS (and dogs) love SNOW ~ Seniors hate it slipping & sliding ~ But GOD (who likes DOG ~ think about it) and KIDS ~ still sends the snow for us to enjoy. If you look at snow flakes under the microscope each one is a different hexagonal jewel ~ another \"Treasure of the Snow\" for us all to enjoy ! Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
February 23rd, 2017 05:43
What was the reason?
Augustus said:
I agree with mended fences. Nicely done.
February 22nd, 2017 17:33
Augustus said:
I agree with mended fences. Nicely done.
February 22nd, 2017 17:33
What was the reason?
MendedFences27 said:
True love never dies. It simply never was. True love is between two people. Love can exist for one, but that\'s not true love. Whether true or not the one in love is hurt when it ends. With time the wounds heal, we carry on, and if extremely lucky we find the one true love of our lives. Very good poem expressing how you felt and continue to feel. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:51
MendedFences27 said:
True love never dies. It simply never was. True love is between two people. Love can exist for one, but that\'s not true love. Whether true or not the one in love is hurt when it ends. With time the wounds heal, we carry on, and if extremely lucky we find the one true love of our lives. Very good poem expressing how you felt and continue to feel. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:51
What was the reason?
AtheistAngel- Daniel Mc\'leod said:
The pain jumps right off the screen. The road to everlasting love seems paved with broken hearts. I wish you peace.
February 22nd, 2017 14:08
AtheistAngel- Daniel Mc\'leod said:
The pain jumps right off the screen. The road to everlasting love seems paved with broken hearts. I wish you peace.
February 22nd, 2017 14:08
Questions?
Augustus said:
It never goes away. You live with it. Nicely done.
February 21st, 2017 19:02
Augustus said:
It never goes away. You live with it. Nicely done.
February 21st, 2017 19:02
Heaven or Hell?
willyweed said:
The answer is yes you will go to heaven for a free room BUT it is empty but for a sky of your choice of colored sky ? How do they know what color I chose? in Heaven they know all? BUT you have to believe in heaven to get there? How do You Know for sure you have to decide? FREE WILL ? But again you have to believe in it for it to work you take as long as you like But Only You can decide! the colored sky is a gift from the angels but until you decide you don\'t remember you have been here before many times but don\'t remember until you believe or never remember because you have doubt in your believe you can not fain believe for the benefits of true believer they know all! this is heaven if you believe in heaven prior to death then you arrive in you room with your pick color and favor of you choice another home coming gift from the creator/ GOD for believing and saving time and avoiding basic questions so you can now judge your life you just died in to get to this point you an you alone judge yourself and decide to create heaven or hell but only in your room and based on you judgement you will created your own heaven or hell with the think and blink it created the tool you will need to create you own little heaven or hell right in you room Now if you still can remember you own little of an easy boy chair and relax eternity is a long time now enjoy your own photo album of pass lives lived yes all of them, you are after all a created creator created in the image of the gratest creator to date? what date time is an Illusion? don\'t ket me started on that subject I don\'t have time right now ?
February 20th, 2017 03:10
willyweed said:
The answer is yes you will go to heaven for a free room BUT it is empty but for a sky of your choice of colored sky ? How do they know what color I chose? in Heaven they know all? BUT you have to believe in heaven to get there? How do You Know for sure you have to decide? FREE WILL ? But again you have to believe in it for it to work you take as long as you like But Only You can decide! the colored sky is a gift from the angels but until you decide you don\'t remember you have been here before many times but don\'t remember until you believe or never remember because you have doubt in your believe you can not fain believe for the benefits of true believer they know all! this is heaven if you believe in heaven prior to death then you arrive in you room with your pick color and favor of you choice another home coming gift from the creator/ GOD for believing and saving time and avoiding basic questions so you can now judge your life you just died in to get to this point you an you alone judge yourself and decide to create heaven or hell but only in your room and based on you judgement you will created your own heaven or hell with the think and blink it created the tool you will need to create you own little heaven or hell right in you room Now if you still can remember you own little of an easy boy chair and relax eternity is a long time now enjoy your own photo album of pass lives lived yes all of them, you are after all a created creator created in the image of the gratest creator to date? what date time is an Illusion? don\'t ket me started on that subject I don\'t have time right now ?
February 20th, 2017 03:10
Devil in Disguise
Augustus said:
I don\'t know how but you sneaked a peek at my biography. Heh, heh. Just teasing. Some people just are not what they want us to think. Well done.
February 19th, 2017 15:45
Augustus said:
I don\'t know how but you sneaked a peek at my biography. Heh, heh. Just teasing. Some people just are not what they want us to think. Well done.
February 19th, 2017 15:45
Devil in Disguise
MendedFences27 said:
All things, all people, are never what they seem at the first glance.In Nature it is camouflage, a defense mechanism, in people it is deceit. Drawing the parallel, people deceive to protect themselves, from hurt, from embarrassment, from emotion mainly.
Your poem shows the good and the evil we all fear, lurking in us all. Great comparisons. Great poem. - Phil A.
February 19th, 2017 12:33
MendedFences27 said:
All things, all people, are never what they seem at the first glance.In Nature it is camouflage, a defense mechanism, in people it is deceit. Drawing the parallel, people deceive to protect themselves, from hurt, from embarrassment, from emotion mainly.
Your poem shows the good and the evil we all fear, lurking in us all. Great comparisons. Great poem. - Phil A.
February 19th, 2017 12:33
Devil in Disguise
willyweed said:
This is about him isn\'t it You know who I mean don\'t you .
that wig sales man from NYC who has now picked up his 3 card Mondy con game lock stock and barrel and move to Wash DC capital of this once great nation to rub it in the face of all the stupid and blind with fury butt wipes who voted him in that the may have to live with there for at least the next three week when they are enough of the to admit a mistake has been made a big mistake so big this one would not even fit under the rug let alone move even if they attempted to sweep him away under if and then they would have impeachment hearing I am right, Right? that is the guy? right inant event please write on WW
February 19th, 2017 07:26
willyweed said:
This is about him isn\'t it You know who I mean don\'t you .
that wig sales man from NYC who has now picked up his 3 card Mondy con game lock stock and barrel and move to Wash DC capital of this once great nation to rub it in the face of all the stupid and blind with fury butt wipes who voted him in that the may have to live with there for at least the next three week when they are enough of the to admit a mistake has been made a big mistake so big this one would not even fit under the rug let alone move even if they attempted to sweep him away under if and then they would have impeachment hearing I am right, Right? that is the guy? right inant event please write on WW
February 19th, 2017 07:26
Emotions
Augustus said:
Some say depression is anger turned inside. Great description.
February 18th, 2017 16:20
Augustus said:
Some say depression is anger turned inside. Great description.
February 18th, 2017 16:20
Emotions
MendedFences27 said:
Great images. Try to slow down and let joy catch up.
Sadness, guilt, depression, and anger are all personified in your poem, but they are not living things. You create them. Find joy in the little things. Read, open your mind to the beauty of the world. Laugh as much as possible. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2017 11:13
MendedFences27 said:
Great images. Try to slow down and let joy catch up.
Sadness, guilt, depression, and anger are all personified in your poem, but they are not living things. You create them. Find joy in the little things. Read, open your mind to the beauty of the world. Laugh as much as possible. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2017 11:13
Night time
MendedFences27 said:
Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to something I\'ve not seen before. A word here or there will make all the difference. Just like you said \"red pools of blood,\" that\'s an image not normally seen.
You have a huge talent. I can tell you love playing with words. Be unusual. Describe things differently. You will have fun and so will your readers. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 16:53
MendedFences27 said:
Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to something I\'ve not seen before. A word here or there will make all the difference. Just like you said \"red pools of blood,\" that\'s an image not normally seen.
You have a huge talent. I can tell you love playing with words. Be unusual. Describe things differently. You will have fun and so will your readers. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 16:53
Night time
JohnThomas said:
Sometimes the darkness knows no end. Great imagery. You have a great way with words. Keep it up.
February 17th, 2017 02:11
JohnThomas said:
Sometimes the darkness knows no end. Great imagery. You have a great way with words. Keep it up.
February 17th, 2017 02:11
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