Comments received on poems by Crow.
Reflection
Goldfinch60 said:
The person you see in the mirror is not as others see you. Good write.
March 3rd, 2017 14:03
Goldfinch60 said:
The person you see in the mirror is not as others see you. Good write.
March 3rd, 2017 14:03
Is it true?
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:
i can relate all to well to your poem, things will get better, just be you,unfortunately some of the most critical people we have are also the ones that are the closes....But to look past them and just be true to who you are. and not change for anyone or anything is the best thing.....
February 27th, 2017 11:08
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:
i can relate all to well to your poem, things will get better, just be you,unfortunately some of the most critical people we have are also the ones that are the closes....But to look past them and just be true to who you are. and not change for anyone or anything is the best thing.....
February 27th, 2017 11:08
Fly away
Goldfinch60 said:
One day your wings will grow back and you will be flying high once more.
February 25th, 2017 15:05
Goldfinch60 said:
One day your wings will grow back and you will be flying high once more.
February 25th, 2017 15:05
Fly away
Reivax Camlost said:
Incidentally, have you heard the Frank Sinatra song \"Come fly with me\"? It would prove a good counterpart to this poem, I think... If you haven\'t, try listening to it.
February 25th, 2017 13:37
Reivax Camlost said:
Incidentally, have you heard the Frank Sinatra song \"Come fly with me\"? It would prove a good counterpart to this poem, I think... If you haven\'t, try listening to it.
February 25th, 2017 13:37
Fly away
Reivax Camlost said:
This sort of stream-of-consciousness writing reminds me of journaling. I\'ve written something eerily similar to this, then proceeded to rip it out of my journal and tear it into little bits that I then scattered where the sun don\'t shine. That\'s because writing such as this is potent- one of the best ways to communicate raw emotion. Especially if it is read very fast, to simulate the feelings often held by the writer. It\'s the easiest and the hardest form of writing, in a couple ways. Hella interesting. Good job.
February 25th, 2017 13:34
Reivax Camlost said:
This sort of stream-of-consciousness writing reminds me of journaling. I\'ve written something eerily similar to this, then proceeded to rip it out of my journal and tear it into little bits that I then scattered where the sun don\'t shine. That\'s because writing such as this is potent- one of the best ways to communicate raw emotion. Especially if it is read very fast, to simulate the feelings often held by the writer. It\'s the easiest and the hardest form of writing, in a couple ways. Hella interesting. Good job.
February 25th, 2017 13:34
Who are you?
Jeff said:
I look forward to the follow-up. Nice write...great job
February 23rd, 2017 10:36
Jeff said:
I look forward to the follow-up. Nice write...great job
February 23rd, 2017 10:36
Who are you?
ervkosch said:
Good structure and it bring out your point. Will you have counter argument in another poem of why \'they\' should or shouldn\'t tell you how to think or feel?
February 23rd, 2017 09:19
ervkosch said:
Good structure and it bring out your point. Will you have counter argument in another poem of why \'they\' should or shouldn\'t tell you how to think or feel?
February 23rd, 2017 09:19
Who I am.
SorrowfullyHappy said:
nice poem and good don\'t be afraid to be you
February 22nd, 2017 13:03
SorrowfullyHappy said:
nice poem and good don\'t be afraid to be you
February 22nd, 2017 13:03
Be you
MendedFences27 said:
Nice write, great message. Let your true self shine. Keep on writing with this kind of joy. - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 10:05
MendedFences27 said:
Nice write, great message. Let your true self shine. Keep on writing with this kind of joy. - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 10:05
Painted face
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing KLOKAT (great pen name !) We all hide behind something ~ Ladies behind carefully chosen and applied \"make up\" and Men behind close cropped hair (No. 1\'s & 2\'s) dark glasses ~ beards and perfect teeth. We all wear masks to be ~ incognito ~ and hide the real inner person. Only by \"getting to know you\" and you \"getting to know me\" would I meet and know the real YOU and in turn YOU know the real ME. It takes time for the mask to be removed and the INNER PERSON ~ the REAL PERSON to be revealed. In my experience it is mostly worth the effort. what is your experience ? Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 19th, 2017 11:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing KLOKAT (great pen name !) We all hide behind something ~ Ladies behind carefully chosen and applied \"make up\" and Men behind close cropped hair (No. 1\'s & 2\'s) dark glasses ~ beards and perfect teeth. We all wear masks to be ~ incognito ~ and hide the real inner person. Only by \"getting to know you\" and you \"getting to know me\" would I meet and know the real YOU and in turn YOU know the real ME. It takes time for the mask to be removed and the INNER PERSON ~ the REAL PERSON to be revealed. In my experience it is mostly worth the effort. what is your experience ? Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 19th, 2017 11:56
I love youu
Laydii said:
:\'O so true and relatebale 😲 But as damaged soul said: patience :\') wonderful piece!! would love to hear about the words of true love in a piece some day 😜
February 19th, 2017 04:57
Laydii said:
:\'O so true and relatebale 😲 But as damaged soul said: patience :\') wonderful piece!! would love to hear about the words of true love in a piece some day 😜
February 19th, 2017 04:57
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