Comments received on poems by VictoriaOliviaGreene



Friends
Garry said:

Ouch indeed.
Good poem, enjoyed the twist in the tale.

March 26th, 2017 22:25

Friends
Augustus said:

Ouch! Got me with that last line.

March 26th, 2017 21:55

Feelings
Augustus said:

Nice word play with emotion.

March 7th, 2017 17:56

Feelings
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 7th, 2017 16:10

Feelings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 7th, 2017 12:42

SUICIDE
Augustus said:

It can come on suddenly as you say. Nicely done.

March 6th, 2017 18:46

SUICIDE
Tony36 said:

A short but very deep write

March 6th, 2017 15:09

SUICIDE
SorrowfullyHappy said:

I am also suicidal tho i cannot kill myself i wait for the day that death will claim my life

March 6th, 2017 13:30

Jingle Bells (Walk to Work Style)
Augustus said:

Walk to work with a jingle.

February 27th, 2017 21:42

Jingle Bells (Walk to Work Style)
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:

i love this....funny i too wish it was Christmas time again

February 27th, 2017 11:04

Jingle Bells (Walk to Work Style)
willyweed said:

OK now you\'ve done it? I wish it was Christmas time again so I could go into debt again, I just finished clearing up that mess ...so yeah thanks a lot for sharing this Gem.. oh yeah and Merry Christmas to you if you even celebrate Christmas at all which I am now starting to seriously doubt?
So Happy holidays instead to you yes from me good bye! ww

February 27th, 2017 10:10

Goodbye (a song)
Augustus said:

Often simple is good. Divorce is not easy to understand. Well done.

February 26th, 2017 15:19

Goodbye (a song)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very well told. Sorry about the divorce but hopefully you will be able to come to terms with it.

February 26th, 2017 13:16

Goodbye (a song)
WriteBeLight said:

So sorry for the divorce. But, you have expressed your feelings very well.

February 26th, 2017 09:40

Poison
Augustus said:

People wonder if they have enough love to give to many but love actually grows.

February 23rd, 2017 23:02

AUTUMN
Augustus said:

Don\'t mess with her either. Nice.

February 21st, 2017 14:53

AUTUMN
Augustus said:

Don\'t mess with her either. Nice.

February 21st, 2017 14:53

AUTUMN
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful lines so simply put.

February 21st, 2017 11:43

AUTUMN
MendedFences27 said:

Nature rules us all. Leaves are are her way of rewarding us. Truly a \"magical\" poem. - Phil A.

February 21st, 2017 10:51

How Does It Feel?
Augustus said:

Sounds like an abused person believing all the crap she was told. I\'ll bet there is real beauty there however. Hugs. Nicely done.

February 20th, 2017 17:47

How Does It Feel?
MendedFences27 said:

Sounds like depression. But then if you can write about it that may be helpful. Some have worked their way out it, others need help.Your poetic voice is crying, and your poem says help me. - Phil A.

February 20th, 2017 11:05

How Does It Feel?
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 20th, 2017 09:13

How Does It Feel?
WriteBeLight said:

Lot of questions that many can relate to. Good job.

February 20th, 2017 08:04

LIFE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME VICTORIA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ sort but very sweet and very true ! Just eight syllables in a 1~2~4~1 vertical pattern like an inverted cross ~ clever. I love a poem that has shape as well as sense ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

February 19th, 2017 17:54

LIFE
MendedFences27 said:

Well, that\'s certainly true. Nice expression of a longstanding concept. - Phil A.

February 19th, 2017 17:12