Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Slithered Moon Haiku.
Doggerel Dave said:
Do slither away, you very new moon;
Claim to be cutting the sky with your light?
Just wait ‘til you’re older and get it right.
This a golden rule I’ll institute soon.......
I cannot find a clear definition provided by Prof. Google, so I’ve made the assumption that this is a new moon. Please clarify – answer required (you have been missing in action several times recently, Andy – Lifestyle too lavish, or just getting old? 🙂🙂)
November 29th, 2022 03:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Do slither away, you very new moon;
Claim to be cutting the sky with your light?
Just wait ‘til you’re older and get it right.
This a golden rule I’ll institute soon.......
I cannot find a clear definition provided by Prof. Google, so I’ve made the assumption that this is a new moon. Please clarify – answer required (you have been missing in action several times recently, Andy – Lifestyle too lavish, or just getting old? 🙂🙂)
November 29th, 2022 03:00
Slithered Moon Haiku.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Remember our greeting the astronauts on the moon in 1969?
November 29th, 2022 02:43
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Remember our greeting the astronauts on the moon in 1969?
November 29th, 2022 02:43
Full Life.
SureshG said:
Emotions expressed truly in gratitude of a full life.
November 28th, 2022 17:47
SureshG said:
Emotions expressed truly in gratitude of a full life.
November 28th, 2022 17:47
Full Life.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, as I read I see that the threads of all you love have been woven into a magnificent tapestry of life that you treasure. I celebrate your joy. This is beautiful verse at its best.
November 28th, 2022 12:41
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, as I read I see that the threads of all you love have been woven into a magnificent tapestry of life that you treasure. I celebrate your joy. This is beautiful verse at its best.
November 28th, 2022 12:41
Full Life.
L. B. Mek said:
why choose only one
when it takes a combination of all
to excavate the happiness, you justly deserve
a wonderful read, dear Poet
November 28th, 2022 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
why choose only one
when it takes a combination of all
to excavate the happiness, you justly deserve
a wonderful read, dear Poet
November 28th, 2022 06:07
Full Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
Congratulations should be granted here;
Time to write your biography, old son -
Your life cannot but fill me with good cheer,
I’m sure enjoyed now by everyone.
November 28th, 2022 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Congratulations should be granted here;
Time to write your biography, old son -
Your life cannot but fill me with good cheer,
I’m sure enjoyed now by everyone.
November 28th, 2022 05:42
Full Life.
arqios said:
To live a life full and varied is quite a thing to achieve. Something that isn\'t being passed on to the next generations where we have made such great advances in curbing infant mortality rates.
November 28th, 2022 04:20
arqios said:
To live a life full and varied is quite a thing to achieve. Something that isn\'t being passed on to the next generations where we have made such great advances in curbing infant mortality rates.
November 28th, 2022 04:20
Full Life.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Did we meet Cal, you and I, being very old?! lol.
November 28th, 2022 02:35
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Did we meet Cal, you and I, being very old?! lol.
November 28th, 2022 02:35
Protecting Moon.
mvvenkataraman said:
Moon is for poets a boon,
Your Moon poem is nice,
Moon is for night a gift,
For Sun a celestial chum!
November 27th, 2022 06:16
mvvenkataraman said:
Moon is for poets a boon,
Your Moon poem is nice,
Moon is for night a gift,
For Sun a celestial chum!
November 27th, 2022 06:16
Protecting Moon.
Crowns4Christ said:
Nice piece Andy, I always enjoy reading your work
November 27th, 2022 06:13
Crowns4Christ said:
Nice piece Andy, I always enjoy reading your work
November 27th, 2022 06:13
Protecting Moon.
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah! The moon, a dry piece of rock,
A base for space exploration
Neglects the world’s population:
With poverty it’s just a crock.
Let\'s get real, Andy...
November 27th, 2022 04:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah! The moon, a dry piece of rock,
A base for space exploration
Neglects the world’s population:
With poverty it’s just a crock.
Let\'s get real, Andy...
November 27th, 2022 04:25
Protecting Moon.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
We were on the moon, you and I, before 1969, to welcome the first astronauts there.
Did you leave me there on the way back to Earth with the astronauts? Did you all leave quick cos of my singing? lol.
November 27th, 2022 03:00
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
We were on the moon, you and I, before 1969, to welcome the first astronauts there.
Did you leave me there on the way back to Earth with the astronauts? Did you all leave quick cos of my singing? lol.
November 27th, 2022 03:00
Walking To School.
sorenbarrett said:
I like you grew up in those times walking and later riding a bicycle to school. This brought back those memories.
November 26th, 2022 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
I like you grew up in those times walking and later riding a bicycle to school. This brought back those memories.
November 26th, 2022 16:35
Walking To School.
arqios said:
Walking to school was one of the best things. At one stage we lived across the road from the back gate of the school and at times would plead with the guard to let me in through there instead of walking around the block to the main gate.
November 26th, 2022 08:03
arqios said:
Walking to school was one of the best things. At one stage we lived across the road from the back gate of the school and at times would plead with the guard to let me in through there instead of walking around the block to the main gate.
November 26th, 2022 08:03
Fulfilment of Life.
John Prophet said:
Nice words Andy. We all Iive on the same rock, don’t all live in the same world. Sounds like your world is a pleasant one.
November 26th, 2022 07:39
John Prophet said:
Nice words Andy. We all Iive on the same rock, don’t all live in the same world. Sounds like your world is a pleasant one.
November 26th, 2022 07:39
Walking To School.
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes - -- those were the best days when we walked in the streets and to school which for me was a mile away and with no fear - - the song you chose says it all Andy.
November 26th, 2022 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes - -- those were the best days when we walked in the streets and to school which for me was a mile away and with no fear - - the song you chose says it all Andy.
November 26th, 2022 03:53
Walking To School.
Doggerel Dave said:
With such nostalgia I can but agree.
And what, do you believe, has caused this change?
Is it the weather? Rain can sometimes pee
on people who produce more kids - how strange…..
November 26th, 2022 03:29
Doggerel Dave said:
With such nostalgia I can but agree.
And what, do you believe, has caused this change?
Is it the weather? Rain can sometimes pee
on people who produce more kids - how strange…..
November 26th, 2022 03:29
Creating Music.
SureshG said:
Only a smooth single malt could compliment the after rehearsal and the companionship of a lover, that you have so poetically penned here.
November 25th, 2022 18:20
SureshG said:
Only a smooth single malt could compliment the after rehearsal and the companionship of a lover, that you have so poetically penned here.
November 25th, 2022 18:20
Creating Music.
sorenbarrett said:
A nice setting well imaged and with the feeling of completion and present calm and fulfillment. Very peaceful and satisfying.
November 25th, 2022 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
A nice setting well imaged and with the feeling of completion and present calm and fulfillment. Very peaceful and satisfying.
November 25th, 2022 07:08
Creating Music.
L. B. Mek said:
and inking the ammunition
for other\'s to aspire, more
from life...
you at your succinct and matter of fact
best
such warmth, you choose to share
with this cold world Andy, thank you!
hope you have a great performance
November 25th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
and inking the ammunition
for other\'s to aspire, more
from life...
you at your succinct and matter of fact
best
such warmth, you choose to share
with this cold world Andy, thank you!
hope you have a great performance
November 25th, 2022 04:39
Creating Music.
Doggerel Dave said:
I’ve never heard of Auchentoschan
Much less spell it – syllable count is out.
Never mind; you just send a bottle, man:-
I’m no bogan – I’ll tell you wot it’s all about….
(Bogan – Aust. Inf. But that ain’t me….)
November 25th, 2022 04:08
Doggerel Dave said:
I’ve never heard of Auchentoschan
Much less spell it – syllable count is out.
Never mind; you just send a bottle, man:-
I’m no bogan – I’ll tell you wot it’s all about….
(Bogan – Aust. Inf. But that ain’t me….)
November 25th, 2022 04:08
Creating Music.
Neville said:
I rather enjoy choral music myself GF60 .. and consequently, send you all my very best wishes for the 3rd sir ........... Neville :)
November 25th, 2022 03:59
Neville said:
I rather enjoy choral music myself GF60 .. and consequently, send you all my very best wishes for the 3rd sir ........... Neville :)
November 25th, 2022 03:59
Creating Music.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
So Mary didn\'t invite me, with me water to add to your whisky, before ya got home?! lol.
I read of something where they DID add water to their tipple. Something in the 19th Century.
November 25th, 2022 03:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
So Mary didn\'t invite me, with me water to add to your whisky, before ya got home?! lol.
I read of something where they DID add water to their tipple. Something in the 19th Century.
November 25th, 2022 03:17
Creating Music.
arqios said:
Still at a quandary about not being able to be there on the 3rd. But vicariously join as I had been in the choir since I was 5. It\'s a whole experience creating music together.
November 25th, 2022 02:11
arqios said:
Still at a quandary about not being able to be there on the 3rd. But vicariously join as I had been in the choir since I was 5. It\'s a whole experience creating music together.
November 25th, 2022 02:11
Fulfilment of Life.
dusk arising said:
hERE HERE! Life\'s had a go at me recently but I like to see people being successful and enjoying life to the full, thats what its there for i think.
November 24th, 2022 10:22
dusk arising said:
hERE HERE! Life\'s had a go at me recently but I like to see people being successful and enjoying life to the full, thats what its there for i think.
November 24th, 2022 10:22
Fulfilment of Life.
Dr. Soma said:
Life is a journey of fulfilment, it\'s true. But this fulfilment comes after a span of struggles. I have been struggling for a long time. But still, I didn\'t reach my destination. Sometimes I feel tired or become puzzled about this journey. But I cannot quit this. I have no more choice but to accept it.
November 24th, 2022 08:43
Dr. Soma said:
Life is a journey of fulfilment, it\'s true. But this fulfilment comes after a span of struggles. I have been struggling for a long time. But still, I didn\'t reach my destination. Sometimes I feel tired or become puzzled about this journey. But I cannot quit this. I have no more choice but to accept it.
November 24th, 2022 08:43
« Return to the profile of Goldfinch60
