Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
Rocky Lagou said:

That last line is simple yet so impactful. β€œLet love be the new way.” Indeed, wars both internal and external act as roadblocks to our progress. So this poem speaks volumes in regard to its application, we should all embrace a loving spirit.

January 1st, 2024 03:23

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
Lorenz said:

This year will be worse than the last but much better than the next ...

January 1st, 2024 03:04

Let Love Be The Way Tanka.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Sometimes a bit like that tomorrow/yesterday/today thingy. Tomorrow is the yesterday...... oh, you knows it. lol.
Hope we feel the old year was good too, or else we\'re continually wishing it happy when a new year starts, then bidding it good riddance when it ends! Doh!
How have the past millions of years been for us two?

January 1st, 2024 02:54

Me? A Rugby Nut!
David Wakeling said:

What a wonderful thought.I don\'t think anyone would argue with that.Fun poem

December 31st, 2023 20:44

Me? A Rugby Nut!
Accidental Poet said:

And don\'t forget Croquet. πŸ˜‰

December 31st, 2023 10:40

Me? A Rugby Nut!
sorenbarrett said:

Yes and a world where Americans spoke proper English.

December 31st, 2023 05:04

Me? A Rugby Nut!
Neville said:



in the words of the late great Lou Reed, .. Oh\' what a perfect day ..

December 31st, 2023 04:32

Me? A Rugby Nut!
orchidee said:

Thanks Gold.
Yes, and they all run indoors in a cricket match, at the first drop of rain.
But there\'s a lot of standing about in that sport.

December 31st, 2023 03:23

Generous Life.
Dev Parth said:

The poem beautifully reflects on the passing year, expressing gratitude for its beauty and love. The imagery of darkness and the full moon symbolize hope,the light continuing into the next year, grateful for the generous life experienced and hopeful for many more years to come.

Well πŸ‘ written I enjoyed it πŸ˜€

December 30th, 2023 09:34

Generous Life.
Accidental Poet said:

As long as you may rise, may you also smile as the day is long. πŸ™‚

December 30th, 2023 05:01

To Eternity And Beyond.
Accidental Poet said:

My adoptive father and mother passed from Alzheimer\'s and now I believe my sister has it or Dementia. Its like ripping your heart out to watch your family go through this disease. But your love for each other is ever present. πŸ«‚

December 30th, 2023 04:53

To Eternity And Beyond.
Neville said:



a page filled with both sorrow and so much love ..

December 30th, 2023 04:01

To Eternity And Beyond.
orchidee said:

A poignant write Gold.
A now elderly friend is carer to his wife, a bit younger than him I think, but she has dementia sadly.

December 30th, 2023 03:35

Generous Life.
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed my friend for many many more.

December 29th, 2023 05:10

Generous Life.
Neville said:



you are indeed a lucky fella ..

December 29th, 2023 04:26

Generous Life.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

December 29th, 2023 02:51

Breakfast Music.
Neville said:



News to me tho\' .. but what a treat ..

December 28th, 2023 10:38

Breakfast Music.
Accidental Poet said:

I was sure I\'d not heard this piano piece before and was all set to make note of such, but then decided to listen to the video. And to my surprise I have heard this before, don\'t remember where. But a beautiful piece it is and I\'m happy I did listen to it and of course with the masterful writing that it accompanies. πŸ™‚πŸ‘

December 28th, 2023 09:13

Breakfast Music.
John Prophet said:

Here I sit 7:30 am coffee in hand listening to this beautiful piece.
Nice!
John


December 28th, 2023 07:33

Breakfast Music.
sorenbarrett said:

Funny how classics in any genre are unknown to younger generations. It makes me wonder what I have missed and I spend hours reviewing older as well as newer music. Good write Gold

December 28th, 2023 03:43

Breakfast Music.
orchidee said:

Cornflakes with Beethoven?!
Good write Gold.

December 28th, 2023 03:01

Dreaming On.
Accidental Poet said:

World peace is IS there, but we ALL have to want it. But all world leaders want is to control the world . Very well penned Andy.

December 27th, 2023 11:03

Dreaming On.
2781 said:

I believe if we want to change the world (and we can), all (big call) we have to do is change ourselves.

For if we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.

December 27th, 2023 08:01

Dreaming On.
Bobby O said:

You bring to the front such logic and it mirrors exactly the thought process I subscribe to. Throw in a song by the man in Black and how cool is that.
While there are many to quote my current mood squeezes this out β€œ I know that I fought tougher men but I really can’t remember when , he kicked like a mule and bit like a crocodile β€œ

December 27th, 2023 05:13

Dreaming On.
sorenbarrett said:

Imagine as John Lennon said. A wonderful message for all at this time of year and at any time of year.

December 27th, 2023 04:08

Dreaming On.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

December 27th, 2023 02:50

Our Boxing Day.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. The sweet science, on many levels.

December 26th, 2023 11:25

Our Boxing Day.
Cassie58 said:

A beautiful love poem. May your love grow from strength to strength. .

December 26th, 2023 05:14

Our Boxing Day.
orchidee said:

And - aww, I only just got me toy train set out of the box. Now today I gotta pack it away. Doh!

December 26th, 2023 02:57

Our Boxing Day.
orchidee said:

Ahh, a lovely write Gold.
In me younger days - a few million years ago then, for you and I - I always wondered where the boxing was on Boxing Day! Eh?
The sport, I mean, if two people bashing each other can be called sport? One of the daftest sports, I think.

December 26th, 2023 02:56



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