Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



In Harmony Together.
sorenbarrett said:

Green the symbol of new life. A great metaphor Andy. Clear with youth and harmony brown and muddy with life\'s age and cycles all so fast. Life passes so fast but it returns in its cycles always in harmony. If only we can see that harmony and stay with it. Beautiful

April 7th, 2024 04:06

In Harmony Together.
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful Andy. 🌹

April 7th, 2024 03:21

In Harmony Together.
David Wakeling said:

Wonderful you can turn a simple walk by the river into a major life experience.Well done.

April 7th, 2024 03:18

In Harmony Together.
Accidental Poet said:

Wonderful way to spend the day with Mary Andy. Hand in hand on a glorious day by the river. 😉👍

April 7th, 2024 03:00

In Harmony Together.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
I chose that piece of music to analyse, in a short course I did. Not that I\'m a musical analyst or whatever.

April 7th, 2024 01:27

The Village Ghost
Bella Shepard said:

What a wonderful tale told in superb verse. I read aloud to take in fully the flow of the rhyming pattern and add the inflections, such fun. I love a good ghost story and this was the best!

April 6th, 2024 13:29

The Village Ghost
Teddy.15 said:

Was it my paddy McGee? I told him to leave you be dear Andy. LoL

April 6th, 2024 09:18

The Village Ghost
2781 said:

I enjoyed that as much as a brown ale!

April 6th, 2024 08:02

The Village Ghost
Cassie58 said:

Spooky, but so well written. Lovely flow in your stanzas Andy. Have a great weekend.

April 6th, 2024 06:46

The Village Ghost
David Wakeling said:

Very well structured and good rhyme and cadence.Excellent

April 6th, 2024 06:10

The Village Ghost
sorenbarrett said:

I enjoyed this tale Gold and brought a smile to me with the end line. Nicely done my friend.

April 6th, 2024 04:42

The Village Ghost
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 6th, 2024 02:17

The Village Ghost
Nicholas Browning said:

This was a pleasure to read, Andy. Very glad to see you\'re still at it! The flow was well done, and the punctuation was on point. Also a very interesting topic. Well done! All the best, my friend.

April 6th, 2024 02:14

So All Is Fine.
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

April 5th, 2024 19:26

So All Is Fine.
2781 said:

There\'s a woman in town that pushes a shopping trolley around.
Has a few different signs, one says- I am still alive.
She always smiles
Her prospects seem low
But I admire her positive approach!

April 5th, 2024 09:39

So All Is Fine.
David Wakeling said:

Another day another opportunity.This is inspirational.Well done

April 5th, 2024 05:54

So All Is Fine.
sorenbarrett said:

Words that reminded me of my father who when asked how he was, always used to say, I\'m still on the green side of the grass. May you get up for many more years to come.

April 5th, 2024 04:56

So All Is Fine.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
My reply is: \'I saw KP again, so another bad day for me!\' lol.

April 5th, 2024 02:05

So All Is Fine.
Teddy.15 said:

Appreciating each precious moment mornings are always bright my friend. 🌹

April 5th, 2024 01:58

So All Is Fine.
Alan R said:

The last line, so real

April 5th, 2024 01:16

Strengthening Love Senryu.
Bella Shepard said:

Love has to be one of the most inexplicable things in our lives, it is the wonder of it, defying all odds. You have gold here my friend!

April 4th, 2024 13:24

Strengthening Love Senryu.
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

April 4th, 2024 10:46

Strengthening Love Senryu.
Accidental Poet said:

Love, life\'s best medicine. 🌹

April 4th, 2024 06:16

Strengthening Love Senryu.
David Wakeling said:

Inspirational.A love for all the ages

April 4th, 2024 05:25

Strengthening Love Senryu.
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful. 🌹

April 4th, 2024 04:14

Strengthening Love Senryu.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 4th, 2024 01:59

The New Season.
Cassie58 said:

I wish you many happy days playing. Nothing like getting out in the fresh air and gentle exercise at the same time. Have fun Andy. Have a good Wednesday.

April 3rd, 2024 10:59

The New Season.
Accidental Poet said:

A new Croquet Club? Wonderful Andy. I\'m certain you\'ll dazzle your new co-members with your skill and expertise in the game. And go easy on them at first Andy, they\'re not used to someone of your talents. 😉👍

April 3rd, 2024 08:30

The New Season.
Doggerel Dave said:

When I find that croquet club I\'m looking for, I won\'t need many lessons - I\'ll have absorbed most of it poetically through you, Andy.
PS: if i mention your name, will I get a discount???

April 3rd, 2024 07:05

The New Season.
sorenbarrett said:

Something historical always gives a little more weight to something. I felt the excitement in this poem Andy.

April 3rd, 2024 05:32



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