Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Light To Brightness.
arqios said:
Excellent choice Andy. Even before laying eyes on the first line, my initial thought was that of a dawning moment. As I child I used to dream and float off on this composition. It accompanies your poem well. The lengthening of the sun beams and its solidifying in intensity cuts through any greyness and mutedness. Thanks for this one, Sunday best for me!
December 22nd, 2024 04:07
arqios said:
Excellent choice Andy. Even before laying eyes on the first line, my initial thought was that of a dawning moment. As I child I used to dream and float off on this composition. It accompanies your poem well. The lengthening of the sun beams and its solidifying in intensity cuts through any greyness and mutedness. Thanks for this one, Sunday best for me!
December 22nd, 2024 04:07
Light To Brightness.
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful metaphor and a good write Gold
December 22nd, 2024 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful metaphor and a good write Gold
December 22nd, 2024 03:32
Light To Brightness.
orchidee said:
My day started very darkly. The first thing I saw on TV was KP in a quiz show. That\'s ruined my day now! lol.
December 22nd, 2024 03:24
orchidee said:
My day started very darkly. The first thing I saw on TV was KP in a quiz show. That\'s ruined my day now! lol.
December 22nd, 2024 03:24
Light To Brightness.
Poetic Licence said:
It must be a pleasure for your loved one to read these dedications you write for them, A lovely enjoyable read to start the day, Thank you
December 22nd, 2024 02:54
Poetic Licence said:
It must be a pleasure for your loved one to read these dedications you write for them, A lovely enjoyable read to start the day, Thank you
December 22nd, 2024 02:54
Light To Brightness.
David Wakeling said:
The light of Love and the light of day.Wonderful poem
December 22nd, 2024 02:53
David Wakeling said:
The light of Love and the light of day.Wonderful poem
December 22nd, 2024 02:53
Light To Brightness.
Neville said:
................................................... How lovely 💛👍
December 22nd, 2024 02:42
Neville said:
................................................... How lovely 💛👍
December 22nd, 2024 02:42
Longest Night Sonnet.
Cassie58 said:
The winter solstice and I watched the celebrations at Stonehenge. Our days will start to get fractionally lighter from now on. Always welcome and also with a hope that this turning point will bring in change for the better. An uplifting read Andy.
December 21st, 2024 21:37
Cassie58 said:
The winter solstice and I watched the celebrations at Stonehenge. Our days will start to get fractionally lighter from now on. Always welcome and also with a hope that this turning point will bring in change for the better. An uplifting read Andy.
December 21st, 2024 21:37
Longest Night Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - the Solstice and all the celebrations around it always made more sense to me in the Northern wintery hemisphere than it does in the South. (though I\'m not complaining...)
Rich write, Andy.
December 21st, 2024 19:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - the Solstice and all the celebrations around it always made more sense to me in the Northern wintery hemisphere than it does in the South. (though I\'m not complaining...)
Rich write, Andy.
December 21st, 2024 19:34
Longest Night Sonnet.
John Prophet said:
Wonderful insightful write Andy
John
December 21st, 2024 18:08
John Prophet said:
Wonderful insightful write Andy
John
December 21st, 2024 18:08
Longest Night Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:
Wow a beautiful story.Enjoable. The birth of Light
December 21st, 2024 14:54
David Wakeling said:
Wow a beautiful story.Enjoable. The birth of Light
December 21st, 2024 14:54
Longest Night Sonnet.
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderfully uplifting
Christmas Sonnet,
a superb write!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing
to read a delight!!! 😉
Best regards ✌️🧑🎄⛄🌲 Thad
December 21st, 2024 11:06
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderfully uplifting
Christmas Sonnet,
a superb write!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing
to read a delight!!! 😉
Best regards ✌️🧑🎄⛄🌲 Thad
December 21st, 2024 11:06
Longest Night Sonnet.
arqios said:
Hey Andy, this poem beautifully captures the essence of the solstice as a metaphor for hope and renewal. The imagery of transitioning from the longest night to the increasing light reflects the journey from darkness to brighter days, both literally and metaphorically. Quite uplifting and superbly enjoyable.
December 21st, 2024 06:01
arqios said:
Hey Andy, this poem beautifully captures the essence of the solstice as a metaphor for hope and renewal. The imagery of transitioning from the longest night to the increasing light reflects the journey from darkness to brighter days, both literally and metaphorically. Quite uplifting and superbly enjoyable.
December 21st, 2024 06:01
Longest Night Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet again but being on the under side it is the opposite
December 21st, 2024 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet again but being on the under side it is the opposite
December 21st, 2024 04:02
Longest Night Sonnet.
orchidee said:
Or is it tomorrow? Has the leap year moved it on a day? Or is tomorrow about 5 seconds lighter than today?!
December 21st, 2024 03:38
orchidee said:
Or is it tomorrow? Has the leap year moved it on a day? Or is tomorrow about 5 seconds lighter than today?!
December 21st, 2024 03:38
Longest Night Sonnet.
Poetic Licence said:
I am hoping this is an accurate prediction, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 02:31
Poetic Licence said:
I am hoping this is an accurate prediction, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 02:31
Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet.
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright! Now we\'ve both and each happily posted Bach\'s delightful coffee cantata, naturally in tribute to that irresistible brew, coffee. That aside, oh me! How exquisitely rendered and beautifully poignant with excellent imagery and spirit this charming e-card sonnet is!! Thank you very much for sharing, Sir!
December 20th, 2024 09:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright! Now we\'ve both and each happily posted Bach\'s delightful coffee cantata, naturally in tribute to that irresistible brew, coffee. That aside, oh me! How exquisitely rendered and beautifully poignant with excellent imagery and spirit this charming e-card sonnet is!! Thank you very much for sharing, Sir!
December 20th, 2024 09:26
The Day Music Died.
Cassie58 said:
A fine tribute and surely a very sad day. Such a loss of young talent. A huge tragedy for music. Well penned Andy.
December 20th, 2024 07:37
Cassie58 said:
A fine tribute and surely a very sad day. Such a loss of young talent. A huge tragedy for music. Well penned Andy.
December 20th, 2024 07:37
Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet.
arqios said:
It\'s awesome to have a regular or periodic watering hole!
December 20th, 2024 07:26
arqios said:
It\'s awesome to have a regular or periodic watering hole!
December 20th, 2024 07:26
Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet.
Cassie58 said:
A lovely warm Christmas message for the staff at the coffee bar Andy. They will be delighted. Have a happy Friday.
December 20th, 2024 06:36
Cassie58 said:
A lovely warm Christmas message for the staff at the coffee bar Andy. They will be delighted. Have a happy Friday.
December 20th, 2024 06:36
Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely way of showing your appreciation, enjoyable read.
December 20th, 2024 06:32
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely way of showing your appreciation, enjoyable read.
December 20th, 2024 06:32
Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Christmas Wish written in such nice form. Lovely Andy
December 20th, 2024 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Christmas Wish written in such nice form. Lovely Andy
December 20th, 2024 04:15
Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet.
orchidee said:
Cheers to that! But not with water? lol.
December 20th, 2024 03:48
orchidee said:
Cheers to that! But not with water? lol.
December 20th, 2024 03:48
Another Choice.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps none of those. It\'s very hard to choose when there are so many choices. Brilliant in its simplicity and unexpected twist at the ending
December 19th, 2024 11:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps none of those. It\'s very hard to choose when there are so many choices. Brilliant in its simplicity and unexpected twist at the ending
December 19th, 2024 11:42
The Day Music Died.
Thad Wilk said:
Awwww, a wonderful
Poem and dedication,
a sad time, definitely the
day the music died!! 🎵🎶🎶🎶 😢
Thank you for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 19th, 2024 10:00
Thad Wilk said:
Awwww, a wonderful
Poem and dedication,
a sad time, definitely the
day the music died!! 🎵🎶🎶🎶 😢
Thank you for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 19th, 2024 10:00
Pure Hearts.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too friend, me too! Well done, Andy! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 06:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too friend, me too! Well done, Andy! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 06:26
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