Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Dixiemix Jazz Band A Symphony Of Soul.
Doggerel Dave said:

A fine paean presented in relishing detail and a riot of rhyme. I felt the energy through your words, Andy.
I would send it to them if I were you -They could frame it and send you a season ticket (or rather two). You deserve it.

June 26th, 2025 02:04

Jigsaw Of Life.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

June 25th, 2025 18:01

Jigsaw Of Life.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Andy.

June 25th, 2025 06:28

Jigsaw Of Life.
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely positive write, very enjoyable

June 25th, 2025 05:19

Jigsaw Of Life.
David Wakeling said:

I always worry if I might have a few pieces missing. A wonderful poem using the metaphor of a person\'s life as a puzzle being put together as they progress. Really enjoyed reading

June 25th, 2025 04:19

Jigsaw Of Life.
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely put Andy. Filling in those pieces makes for a beautiful or less so picture. The choice is ours. A great metaphor.

June 25th, 2025 03:35

Jigsaw Of Life.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. I did a \'musical jigsaw\' but all the pieces were blank. It was that 4\'33\" piece! LOL.

June 25th, 2025 02:39

Fine Croquet Day.
Doggerel Dave said:

After a game of YOUR croquet I always feel that there might be a time when all\'s well with the world, Andy.

June 24th, 2025 20:36

Fine Croquet Day.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Andy. Croquet is a loving game. Perfect for good conversation and banter.

June 24th, 2025 06:06

Fine Croquet Day.
David Wakeling said:

A great game,a great day and cake at the end.That\'s as good as it gets.Wonderful read.

June 24th, 2025 04:40

Fine Croquet Day.
sorenbarrett said:

Got it Gold win or loose one has wone when having fun with one\'s mates. Well done

June 24th, 2025 04:21

Fine Croquet Day.
Poetic Licence said:

Reminds me of when I used to play cricket, just a lovely team day out ending with a lovely tea, enjoyed the read

June 24th, 2025 02:51

Fine Croquet Day.
arqios said:

That’s so much fun, good exercise as well! 🙏🏻🕊️

June 24th, 2025 02:43

Fine Croquet Day.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

June 24th, 2025 02:03

The Village Ghost.
Poetic Licence said:

Really enjoyable read

June 23rd, 2025 06:17

The Village Ghost.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good one, Andy. I needed a laugh today.

June 23rd, 2025 05:45

The Village Ghost.
Teddy.15 said:

🤣

June 23rd, 2025 05:14

The Village Ghost.
David Wakeling said:

A fun ghost tale. Well constructed and enjoyable to read.Great piece

June 23rd, 2025 04:29

The Village Ghost.
sorenbarrett said:

Well written Andy this one was a lot of fun loved it

June 23rd, 2025 04:14

The Village Ghost.
arqios said:

A marvellous entry in your growing anthology—a piece that rustles with hearth-warmth and ends with a clever shiver. That final question delivers a delightfully eerie twist, very much in keeping with the fireside folklore and relatable texture of tone: the ordinary laced with myth. 🙏🏻🕊️

June 23rd, 2025 03:04

The Village Ghost.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

June 23rd, 2025 01:50

To Jail He Went.
Doggerel Dave said:

A😆wise😅decision😂mate🤣.

June 22nd, 2025 17:04

To Jail He Went.
Spencer Wilhelm said:

You had me, I was waiting for the solitary confinement, then I got the twist. Nicely done

June 22nd, 2025 16:38

To Jail He Went.
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

June 22nd, 2025 10:22

To Jail He Went.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Still laughing, Andy. I think I snorted some coffee.

June 22nd, 2025 06:31

To Jail He Went.
NafisaSB said:

I like the. Twist in the tale

June 22nd, 2025 06:12

To Jail He Went.
Poetic Licence said:

That had me worried at first, entertaining read

June 22nd, 2025 05:13

To Jail He Went.
David Wakeling said:

Wow made me smile mi amigo.A fun story of a criminal who did not get to pass go and collect $200.Good fun read

June 22nd, 2025 04:46

To Jail He Went.
Teddy.15 said:

LOL 🤣

June 22nd, 2025 03:38

To Jail He Went.
arqios said:

Pass Start and collect $200🕊️🙏🏻

June 22nd, 2025 03:30



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